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1、中考复习专题之- Writing,评分原则,1本题满分为15分，按5个档次给分。2评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3词数少于70或多于120的，从总分中减去1分。4评分时，应注意：内容要点全面，词汇和语法应用正确，字数符合要求，语篇上下文的连贯性好。短文与所给信息应融为一体。5拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。7文中出现真实校名及姓名的扣1分。,各档次的给分范围和要求：,书面表达评分时分为五个等级： 1.
2、（13-15分）要点齐全，语句通顺完整，语法、拼写无 误，书写工整。 2（10-12分）能写出大部分要点，语句较通顺完整，有个别语法、拼写错误，但不影响句意理解，书写工整。3（7-9分）能写出部分要点，语句基本通顺完整，有少量语法、拼写错误，但尚能达意，书写较工整。4（4-6分）能写出个别要点，语句不够通顺完整，语法、拼写错误较多，只有个别句子可读，书写不够工整。 5（0-3分）未能写出基本要点，语法、拼写错误多，不知所云，书写潦草。,写作建议：,、审题 定体裁，定主题，定人称、时态。 (Read the directions carefully, look through all the w
3、ords or pictures given to you in order to find the main idea. Pay attention to the tense, person and style.),确定体裁之后，就要确定人称、时态。人称、时态错都是写作的硬伤，整体时态错误和整体人称错误扣分比较重。,假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2007年2月8日清晨，你目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。请根据下列图画写出报告。,注意：1、目击者应该准确报告事实； 2、词数100左右； 3、结尾已为你写好。,The main idea？,A traffic acciden
4、t,Person?,Tense?,Style?,2、列要点，物色中心词 （Read the directions again，list the key points and try to use one or two words to express the key points.） 漏点是硬伤，差一个要点，大概也要扣2-分，在审题时，要列出或圈出提示中的要点。,看图作文首先要审视画面，看图作文的成败关键在审图。审图过程要领会画面，弄清每幅大意，把握每幅图的要点，快速确定合适的可以覆盖要点的关键词，有时还要把所给要点重新整合，使文章更清楚。,Picture 1: 7:15, be on a v
5、isit to/go/walk, come out /cross,Picture 2: see/find, drive, turn right,Picture 3: hit, fall down,Picture 4: go away/stop, drive off, notice,The end: stop/call, send/take to hospital.,其次，图画或图表前的文字说明也往往包含着很多信息，一定不能遗漏。,假如你叫白雪，在网上看到北京招聘2008 奥运会志愿者（a volunteer for the 2008 Olympics）的广告。请你写封简短的应聘邮件，介绍自己的
6、情况（见下表），并表示愿意为奥运会做一些工作，请组委会考虑并尽早予以答复。,明天是Daniel 第一天去社区学校的课外学习班担任志愿者，他想向孩子们谈谈他曾经在英语学习过程中遇到的一些问题和困难，他认为英语学习不是一件容易的事，所以希望他的方法能对孩子们的学习有所帮助。假如你是Daniel, 请你根据所给的情景和信息以及下面图表中的英文提示，写一篇发言稿。）,3、组句子 把中心词或词组扩展成句子 (Extend the words and phrases to sentences.),先写出简单句子，注意多使用词组。,用词多样化就是多使用同义词、派生词或不同词性的词。,学英语要注意说你听过的句
7、子，写你读过的句子，千万不要硬造。,句型二、主语+及物动词+宾语,句型三、主语+系动词+表语,基本句型归纳 句型一、主语+不及物动词,句型四、主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语,句型五、主语+及物动词+宾语+宾补,There be 结构,There be + sb. +doing sth.,=There be +sb. Sb. +be doing sth.,There are two boys playing on the beach.,There are two boys on the beach. They are playing.,、合并句子，梳理成文 把句子编排成一个段落，在必要的地方
8、加入一些连接词或句子。 (Arrange these sentences in order, getting in some linking words where necessary.),Unit 8 How was your school trip?,First, Then After that, After lunch, At the end of the day,使用较高级别词汇，语法结构，较复杂句式是中考中脱颖而出，夺得高分的有力武器,注意：（）避免句子片断独立出现。,（）在可能的情况下穿插使用一下常见的复合句形式。中考作文应该以单句为主，适当运用二、三个有把握的复合句即可。,（）不
9、可片面追求长句子以致弄巧成拙。如： I found a book which was on the desk and it was very funny, I think.,becausethoughwhennot onlybut alsosothatin order to / in order thatwith the teachers help,在适当和可能的情况下多用长句子。如题： My best friend,1. He used to have short hair, but now he has long hair.,2. He used to have short hair, b
10、ut now he has long hair in order to be attractive. In his opinion, he should be allowed to choose his own haircut because it can match his round face.,2. He used to be shy and he was afraid of speaking in front of the class, but now he is becoming more and more outgoing with his parents help, so he
11、has a lot of friends.,1. He used to be shy , but now he is outgoing.,2. She used to play volleyball and basketball on weekends, but now she always complains she is too busy to do these kinds of activities. Because she often feels too tired, even if she has the time, she would rather stay at home tha
12、n go outside.,1. She used to play volleyball and basketball, but now she stays at home.,2. She didnt use to be good at English although she was hardworking, but now she has changed her ways of learning, and learns from her friend named Mary who is the top student in her class. So now she is becoming
13、 more and more interested in English.,1. She didnt use to be good at English, but now she is good at it.,5、润色 加入连接、过渡的词和句子，有效使用语句间的连接成份，结构紧凑、行文流畅。,It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2007. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an old man came out of the Park on the other side of
14、the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didnt stop but drove off at a great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate
15、 number was AC864. Two minutes later, I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.,I used to make mistakes in grammar, but now I am not afraid of grammar rules. I study grammar by taking notes. I study it by asking my teacher for help. I study grammar by reading grammar book
16、s. I think I become interested in English now.,简单句堆砌起来的作文,I used to make mistakes in grammar, but now I am not afraid of grammar rules. First of all, I think taking notes is the most important way to learn grammar. Secondly, it is easy to ask teachers for help when Im in trouble. If I have time, I often study grammar by reading grammar books. In a word, I think I become more and more interested in English.,篇章结构 各种体裁的文章的写作格式: 1、记叙与描写的文章 （1）活动（过去式） 主题句（什么时间，谁去什么地方做什么） 具体内容（
