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1、XX托福写作优秀范文赏析 导语：从的优秀作文当中，赏析出别人的写作技巧，从而提高自己的写作水平是学习的一大好方法。下面是收集的托福写作优秀范文，欢迎赏析! If I had enough money to buy either a house or a business, Id buy a house. A business may sueed or fail. Its also possible I might change my mind about what I wanted to do in business. However, a home is a lifetime gift to
2、 myself. Right now Im in small apartment, with barely enough room for everything. All my furniture and things Ive aumulated since I left college barely fit. I have almost no closet space left. This means my clothes are always wrinkled because theyre crushed together. I dont have any place to put my
3、cleaning supplies, nor room for more than one set of sheets and towels. A new house would mean a lot more room for all these things. I love having plants around. Its very healthy for the air inside and its cheerful to have living things growing in a room. Id like to have a garden instead. That way I
4、 could grow a lot of different kinds of plants and flowers, and I could have a vegetable garden in the summer. Besides having a garden, Id like to have a backyard with lots of trees and a small fountain in the corner. I love watching birds and listening to them sing. On the windowsill of my apartmen
5、t, I put out bird seed every morning. In the hot weather, I put out a shallow tin plate with water in it for birds. The trees and the fountain in my backyard would gibe me pleasure, but theyd really be for the birds. The trees would give them a place to nest, and the fountain would be a source of fr
6、esh water when its hot. Can you picture my dream house? A business would only give me money. A house would give me someplace special to be myself. _s should definitely spend more money on improving all forms of public transportation. These include buses, subways and trains. This is the best way to p
7、reserve natural resources and reduce pollution. As a pla, were dealing with a finite amount of natural resources. Once theyre gone, they cant be replaced. They cant fill our need for oil and gasoline forever. But we seem to forget that and consume them at an incredible rate. In wealthier counties, s
8、ome families have two or three cars. As soon as teenagers get their drivers licenses, theyre given cars so their parents wont have to drive them places. Public transportation hasnt been sufficiently developed. Because of this, suburban areas surrounding cities have been allowed to sprawl more and mo
9、re widely. This means that people cant even go to the store without having to hop into the car. Everything is too far away from where they live. If there were better and more frequent public transportation, people would be able to give up their cars for local driving. As a result of all the cars bei
10、ng driven, were dealing with terrible pollution problems. In big cities, there are days during the summer when the elderly and people with respiratory problems are advised not to leave the house. Ten years ago this was unheard of! Now its the norm. Public transportation would cut down considerably o
11、n air pollution. Public transportation also encourages a sense of munity. People who travel to work together all the time get to know each other. Car isolate us from neighbors. However, people feel they need to drive because they cant depend on public transportation to fit their schedules. If more m
12、oney were available, buses, subways and trains could run 24 hours a day. Then they would be available all the time to the people who need them. I always try to take public transportation whenever possible, and I encourage friends and neighbors to try it too. I think we must support public transporta
13、tion in order to create a better world. Study habits are a very individual thing. Some people like to study alone, while others like to study with a group. Personally, I would rather study alone, but I can see advantages to both ways. It can be very helpful to study with other students. For one thin
14、g, you can exchange information about the topic. Not everyone is going to hear everything the teacher says in class. Comparing notes is a good way to be sure you get what you missed. You can also discuss various aspects of the topic. Other students can bring a different perspective to the discussion
15、. They can point out things you may not have thought of , and help you make your arguments clearer. Studying with other students can also help keep you focused on studying. If youre in a study group, you have to be at a particular place to study at a particular time. This is good discipline. The group reviews all the material available and then begins studying. Theres not a lot of wasted time, if things work the way they should. Of course, it doesnt help if youre in a study group that doesnt take studying seriously. Then youd be much better of studying by yourself. If you
