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1、读后续写1Look for the wedding ring,试题原文,Read for information,Step 1,Step 1.Main idea of the given passage,Elenas husband, a firefighter, was killed in a fire. After the fire was put out, Elena found the wedding ring on his ring finger was gone. Richard and several of his colleagues were going to help El
2、ena search for the ring.,Work out the outline,Step 2,what events would happen Paragraph 1 according to the given information?,The scene was very messy, with ashes here and there.,Event 1. Richard and colleagues would enter the dangerous building to search for the lost ring,Detailed descriptions,Whic
3、h specific place was it likely for them to look for the ring ? How would they look for the ring ? Which factors made the searching work extremely difficult ? Were they willing to leave the dangerious basement ?,To show how great they were !,1. How would Richard and his colleagues search for the ring
4、? Tracing Eddies footprints, Richard and his colleagues tried to figure out where the ring could possibly be.They first entered the basement where Eddies body was found, bent over , inched their way carefully, and dusted away still hot ashes with hands in gloves again and again. Although the smelly
5、hot air around was hard to breathe , all their clothes wet through, and dangers may occur anytime, no one was ready to give up.,They searched every corner of the basement, with beads of sweat dropping from their foreheads. They searched for the ring concentratedly with their eyes wide open, as if to
6、 seek a needle in the sea.,2. What would people do for safety purposes? After what seemed a long time, the smoke thickened around them and their supervisor ordered them to quit and leave the dangerious building immediately for safety purposes. To prevent people from being harmed in the dangerous bui
7、lding, Richards supervisor demanded them to leave immediately.,Paragraph 2 Just right before they came out, the youngest firefighter cried out, “Oh, my god! There it is.” Questions 1. How did the ring look like? 2. How would Elena feel and what would she do? 3. How would the colleagues feel?,1. How
8、did the ring look like? They saw the round golden ring shine perfectly under a burned pole. In his hand sat the dazzling wedding ring, with a beam of light falling on it. The shining wedding ring was lying under a brick, safe and sound.,2. How would Elena feel and what would she do? Taking the weddi
9、ng ring from Richard, Elena was shocked by their so terrible appearance that she couldnt recognize them for almost all of them were completely covered with black ashes, only leaving their eyes sparkling . Deeply touched , Elena bowed to them , a mixed feeling of happiness and excitement welling up i
10、nside her.,3. How would the colleagues feel? Richard cried out loud, unable to deal with blood dripping off his hand-he was injured while searching the ring, and he forgot the fatigue and tension of the last few days. With a satisfied look in his face, Richard couldnt hold back his tears for bringin
11、g a ray of happiness to the widow.,Writing学生优秀作文,Step 2,01. 从类似续写篇章中积累续写语言,Step3.续写资料累计,无处不学习,1. A thick burning smell filled the air 2. A thick cloud of smoke greeted him 3. As the smoke thickened around them 4. The thought of fear crossed his mind. 5. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot
12、6. Both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. 7. Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. 8. A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Janes mind.,从以前各单元词组听写中积累续写语言,02,(Book 6 Unit 5) 1. erupt into loud, desperate sobs 2.
13、a wave of joy swept over her 3. Beads of sweat ran down his face. 4. be consumed with/by anxiety 5. get into a panic 6. throw sb a big smile (Book 6 Unit 4) 7. be consumed with guilt/anger 8. Memories of my time in paris flooded back. 9. said in a mild voice,从阅读理解A篇中积累续写语言,03,1. He walked back to me
14、, a huge smile on his face and said. 2. the man reached into his pocket, pulled out a one-dollar bill and gave it to me saying. 3. The man looked directly into my eyes and said. 4. I heard a voice within me yelling. 5. I hesitantly stretched out my hand, saying. 6. Tears began to well up in the mans
15、 eyes. 7. He grabbed my hand with both of his, and said. 8. He flashed his big smile, let go of my hand and walked away.,从默写过的优秀作文中积累续写语言,04,1. Tears blurred her eyes as the unspeakable anguish wrung her heart. 2. Toms handsome face popped into her mind 3. However harsh the present was, there was always a gleam of hope! 4. His face cracked a smile as he saw Jane standing there, safe and sound. 5. They hugged tightly with tears streaming down their cheeks. 6.Tears of joy welled up their eyes as the brother and sister hugged tightly together.,
