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1、.,.,rear-ending 追尾,run off the road,crash into tree,crash into house,turn over,Traffic accidents are dangerous.,.,Reasons:,Speeding Tired driving Drunk driving Careless driving Using cell phones while driving .,?,.,Topic: Using cell phones while driving,1. Its a dangerous distraction to drivers.,2.
2、It should be forbidden.,Para 2: Argument (论点) 1,Para 3: Argument (论点) 2,Para 4:,Suggestion,Para 5:,Conclusion,Tip1: Structure is a guide to find the main points,Para 1: Viewpoint (观点),.,Para1 Cell phones are used everywhere, but on the road they are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be f
3、orbidden.,a fact,a viewpoint,Para 1: Viewpoint,Tip2: The viewpoint of an argumentative writing （议论文）should be included in a summary.,.,Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.,Main points of the summary,.,1. Cell phones used on the road are
4、a dangerous distraction to drivers.,Para 2: Argument (论据) 1,using a,not using a,on the phone,on the road,unpredictable,careful,Its dangerous.,Its safe.,Drivers using a phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using.,Drivers,Attention,Driving,Result,(Support),.,Point1：Cell ph
5、ones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.,Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone.,Main points of the summary,.,Para 3: Argument (论据)2,2. Cell phones used on the road should be forbidden.,
6、at least 1,000 deaths per year,against the law and strictly enforced,laws are need to forbid the use of cell phones in cars,An example：,phones used by drivers,drunk driving,Similarly,（Support),.,Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.,Point
7、2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone.,Main points of the summary,Point3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.,.,Q1：Before using a cell phone, what question should drivers ask themsel
8、ves?,Para 4: Suggestion,Suggestion1：,Suggestion2：,Is this call really that important?,Yes.,No.,Drivers need to be more responsible when using cell phones.,Use a phone wisely,Not use a phone,（Support),.,Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden
9、.,Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone.,Main points of the summary,Point3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.,Point4：Drivers at least need to be more responsible when using ce
10、ll phones.,.,Para5 Cell phones can be a very important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. As professional racer John Andretti says, “Driving safely is your first responsibility.” The best road to safety is to just hang up and drive.,Para 5: Conclusion,a quote (引语),Tip3: A quot
11、e is usually used to support an idea and should be not included in a summary.,.,Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.,Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone.,Main points
12、 of the summary,Point3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.,Point4：Drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones.,Point5：Cell phones can be a very important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. The best r
13、oad to safety is to just hang up and drive.,.,1. Cell phones used on the road dangerously distract the drivers and should be banned.,Skills: 1. 词性转换法 2. 近义替换法 3. 正话反说法 4. 语态互换法 5. 句式变化法,Skills of restatement(重述): “Point1” as an example,Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction
14、to drivers and should be forbidden.,2. Using cell phones while driving dangerously draw away drivers attention and should not be allowed.,3. We should forbid using cell phones on the road for their harmful distraction to drivers.,4. Drivers should be prevented from using cellphones while driving bec
15、ause they can be dangerously distracted.,并列句,复合句,简单句,6. 主语变身法,.,Have a try: work in groups of 4 to create a good summary,Point1：Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.,Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident
16、than those not using a phone.,Point3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.,Point4：Drivers at least need to be more responsible when using cell phones.,Point5：Cell phones can be a very important link in emergencies, but drivers need to use them wisely. The best road to safety is to just hang up and drive.,.,2. No details in 4080 words,1. Cover the main points using your own words,4. No grammatical
