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1、河南省鹤壁市综合高中2013年高考英语作文复习专题9对比类写作一般有两种方式：一是集中比较或对比（集中说明一个对象的诸种特征）；二是逐点比较或对比（一条一条地说明两者的异同）。对比类写作可以大致分为以下几种：一、今昔对比在作今昔对比时，要注意时态的变化。谈到过去的情况要用过去时态（主要是一般过去时），谈到现在的情况要用现在时态（主要是一般现在时）。矚慫润厲钐瘗睞枥庑赖。今昔对比的写作格式是：开头（提出什么事情发生了变化）对具体事例作对比结论。写作方式既可采用集中比较，也可采用逐点比较。在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章：聞創沟燴鐺險爱氇谴净。1. 开头常用句型(1) Great chang
2、es have taken place. 发生了巨大变化。 Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five years.残骛楼諍锩瀨濟溆塹籟。 Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China.酽锕极額閉镇桧猪訣锥。Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.彈贸摄尔霁毙攬砖卤庑。(2) Things have beg
3、un to improve since 自从以来，事情有了好转/改善。謀荞抟箧飆鐸怼类蒋薔。 Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.厦礴恳蹒骈時盡继價骚。2. 对比常用句型(1) used to, but now 过去常，但是现在(2) in the past, but now 在过去，但是现在(3) once, but now 曾经.，但是现在(4) Things are different now. 情况已大不同了。(5) But now, everything h
4、as changed. 但是现在全变了。Where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library.茕桢广鳓鯡选块网羈泪。I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time.鹅娅尽損鹌惨歷茏鴛賴。My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in
5、the past, but now we call long distance at home. 籟丛妈羥为贍偾蛏练淨。Once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but now we watch the news and other programs on TV.預頌圣鉉儐歲龈讶骅籴。When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but n
6、ow we have moved into a big new three-room apartment.渗釤呛俨匀谔鱉调硯錦。在作对比时，为避免句型重复，可适当变换一些句式，比如：(1) Another change is 再有一个变化是Another big change is in the housing conditions.(2) Whats more, 还有Whats more, I can go to bed earlier than in the past. 铙誅卧泻噦圣骋贶頂廡。3. 结尾常用句型In short, changes in our life in the pas
7、t twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.擁締凤袜备訊顎轮烂蔷。2004年北京春季高考题范文Changes In Our LifeOver the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life(主题句). Take my family for example(过渡句). My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we ca
8、ll long distance at home(对比一). And once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but now we watch the news and other programs on TV(对比二). Another big change is in the housing conditions(过渡句). When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowd
9、ed with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment(对比三). In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience(总结句).贓熱俣阃歲匱阊邺镓騷。在写这类文章时，首先要写好主题句。同学们在审题时要把握全局，把全文要说明的主题在第一句交待清楚。然后根据所给材料，展开今昔对比。对比时不要单调地使用同一句型，要稍有变化，并中间要有恰当的过渡句。最后写好总结句，即
10、你对这种现象做出自己的理解或判断。坛摶乡囂忏蒌鍥铃氈淚。Passage 21云南省祥云一中2010届高三第二次月考）假如你是李华，目睹了近年来你所在城市的变化。你写了一篇有关城市变化及所带来的思考的短文寄给某英语报社。短文包括城市的变化，并表达你的感受和建议：在建设和发展的同时，还应加强文物和古迹保护，以传承文化。蜡變黲癟報伥铉锚鈰赘。几年前满街小商铺，小卖摊点，拥挤，垃圾现在街道宽敞，沿街种植了绿树和鲜花，新建了公园和高楼注意：1. 词数：100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3. 参考词汇：摊点：stalls 历史文物historical relics练后总结：3) 典型错句：
11、4) 相关词汇： 5) 参考范文：Our city has changed greatly over the last few years. Streets used to be narrow, with old buildings and stalls crowded together, and litter everywhere. Nowadays the streets are wider, cleaner and there are trees and flowers growing along the sidewalks. However, in creating a more mo
12、dern city some tradition has been lost. Some of the historical buildings have been torn down and high rise buildings and parks have been built in their place. The ancient culture has disappeared, and our city has become the same as all other cities: modern, clean but without its own special characte
13、r. Are all changes good changes? I think we should do something to protect our historical relics at the same time.買鲷鴯譖昙膚遙闫撷凄。Passage 22009年江西师大附中、鹰潭一中、宜春中学、临川一中、南昌三中五校联考)以下是某英文报联合你校对你市（Kangming City）1998年到2008年家庭消费变化的图表，请据此写一篇短文，做一文字说明。文章的开头已经给出。词数110左右。綾镝鯛駕櫬鹕踪韦辚糴。图 表 1 图 表 2The average family incom
14、e in our KangmingCity increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008.驅踬髏彦浃绥譎饴憂锦。练后总结：1 典型错句： 2 相关词汇： 3 参考范文：The average family income in our KangmingCity increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too. These graphs show the change clearly.猫虿驢绘燈鮒诛髅貺庑。The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink
