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1、昨天已经过去，明天还没到来。只有今天是一份礼物。,Yesterdayis history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift.,Welcome to our class,Unit2 Healthy eating,Basic Writing,Round1（第一轮）竞赛规则 全班分四组：奔奔队，跑跑队，家家队，族族队 选择明星队长，并完成队长布置任务，即可获得相应分数，分数高的将在本轮获胜。 注意：组内每人限答一题！,Competition！,Competition！,Choose your captain! 选队长吧！,1. 健康(1分) n.
2、 _ adj. _,health,healthy,2.再好不过了。（2分） _,Nothing could be better.,3. 我不会允许你再次迟到却逃脱惩罚。(3分) (can/could/will not have sb doing, get away with) _ _,I wont have you getting away with getting late again.,1. 平衡膳食(1分) _,balanced diet,2. 强项和缺点(2分) _,3. He did not look forward to being in debt. His restaurant
3、was no longer popular. (合成一句话，tips：because引导原因状语从句) (3分) _,He did not look forward to being in debt because his restaurant was no longer popular.,strengths and weaknesses,1. 减肥(1分) _,2. 劳(study)逸(exercise)结合(2分) _,lose weight,combine study with exercise,3. 我们很有必要学会应对压力。 (3分) (Its adj. for sb. to do
4、sth.) _ _,Its necessary/essential for us to learn how to deal with stress.,1. 应当，应该(1分) _,2. 权衡利弊(2分) _,ought to,balance the advantages against the disadvantages,3. 这部电影那么有趣，我们大多数人都已看过两遍。(3分) (sothat ) _,The film is so interesting that most of us have seen it twice.,An article consists of many _, an
5、d a sentence is made of _.,各位童鞋，你们词汇量有多少啊？句式灵活度呢？,Running Lan,sentences,words,1.短文改错 10分 2.书面表达 25分,高考写作：,Round2（第二轮）竞赛规则 本轮有三道问答题，最先举手回答的小组获得回 答机会，回答正确获得相应分数。,Competition！,Task 1,回忆基础写作的评分标准，针对哪三方面？ （说出一点得1分，共3分）,【评分标准】 句子结构 ，信息内容 ，篇章结构 。,correctness 正确性,completeness,完整性,coherence,连贯性,准确,完整,连贯,Task
6、 2,如何做到句式灵活，可以用什么结构或句式？（说一点得1分）,1. 并列句 2. 复合句 (定语从句, 状语从句,名词 性从句等) 3. 非谓语动词 4. 强调句型 5. with复合结构等 其他句型及结构,简单句基本句型 主语+系动词+表语（SVP） 主语+动词（SV） 主语+动词+宾语（SVO） 主语+动词+间接宾语+直接宾语（SVOO） 主语+动词+宾语+宾语补足语（SVOC）,Task 3,回忆基础写作的写作步骤主要包括哪六步？ （说出一点得1分，共6分）,1.【审题】 2.【整合信息】 3.【确定短语句型】 4.【连词成句】 5.【连句成篇】 6.【检查修改】,最近我们班进行了一次
7、关于“健康”的讨论。请根据下表内容介绍这次讨论的情况。,【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部内容。,一、审题 文体：议论文 人称： 时态：,第一人称,一般过去时和一般现在时,二、整合信息（5句话）,【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部内容。,信息整合后为： （1）上周五下午，我们全班同学在教室里进行了一次关于“健康”的讨论。 （2）健康是由于有强壮的身体，也就是说，多运动。 （3）关注健康饮食。 （4）保持心理上的健康，身心健康才是真正的健康； （5）有积极乐观的态度，学会应对压力和适时进行自我放松。,三、确定短语,have a discussion about,that is to say,pay
8、attention to,mentally and physically healthy,deal with stress,relax oneself,attitude(towards),due to,四连词成句,1. 上周五下午，我们全班同学在教室里进行了一次关于“健康”的讨论。,_afternoon, our class _health in the classroom.,had a discussion about,Last Friday,2.健康是由于有强壮的身体，也就是说，多运动。,Health is _ strong body, _, much exercise.,due to,t
9、hat is to say,3.关注健康饮食。 （Its suggested that）,We should _ having a healthy diet.,谁关注？缺主语,Its suggested that _.,pay attention to,we should pay attention to having a healthy diet,4.保持心理上的健康（也是很重要的），身心健康才是真正的健康 。,_is also very important, _being healthy in mind and body is true health.,多少句话？关系？,Being men
10、tally healthy,because,5.(我们要)有积极乐观的态度，知道如何学会应对压力和进行自我放松。 （Its adj. for us to do）,We must have_, know how to deal with stress and relax ourselves.,Its _to have a positive attitude, know how to deal with stress and relax ourselves.,a positive attitude,essential for us,necessary,Last Friday afternoon,
11、our class had a discussion about health in the classroom. Health is due to strong body, that is to say, much exercise. Its suggested that we should pay attention to having a healthy diet. Being mentally healthy is also very important, because being healthy in mind and body is true health. Its essent
12、ial for us to have a positive attitude, know how to deal with stress and relax ourselves.,Is it a good paragraph?,Task 4,请问如何使文章具有连贯性？（1分）,恰当使用连接词,A、表并列： B、表转折： C、表原因： D、表结果： E、表列举等：,如何使文章连贯,and, also, besides=in addition(而且)= Whats more, or(或者/否则).,but, however, yet,because, because of, due to,so,
13、therefore, as a result,such as, for example, like,Last Friday afternoon, our class had a discussion about health in the classroom. health is due to strong body, that is to say, much exercise. 1._（此外）, its suggested that we should pay attention to having a healthy diet. 2._（还有）, being mentally health
14、y is also very important, because being healthy in mind and body is true health. 3._(因此), its essential for us to have a positive attitude, know how to deal with stress and relax ourselves.,如何使文章连贯？,According to some students,Besides,Whats more,Therefore,五、连句成篇,四人一组，完成写作任务，每人扮演重要角色如下：Role 1：Leader(领导者，分配任务) Role 2: Grammarian(语法大师，检查句法) Role 3: Coherence Master（流畅大师，连句成篇） Role 4: Presenter（展示者将展示作品） 用时：10分
