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1、专题六读后续写新高考命题探究以浙江卷3年高考为例项目卷别写作文体命题类型材料词数主题范围2018年6月故事类记叙文半开放类320人与自我父亲带儿子去体验农场生活2017年11月故事类记叙文半开放类338人与自我和父母一块去旅游的故事2017年6月故事类记叙文半开放类344人与自我和朋友一起骑车游玩，野外遇到狼的故事2016年10月故事类记叙文半开放类332人与自我野外游玩，女主人迷路在野外独自过夜的故事综合分析上表并结合最新考纲，我们可以大胆预测2020年新高考读后续写会有以下命题特征：1写作文体写作文体仍然会继续考查叙事类文体，所选材料一定具有更强的故事性、逻辑性的特点。2命题形式要求考生依
2、据所给材料内容、段落开头语和所标关键词进行续写(150词左右)，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。所给的段落提示句均是故事情节发展的过程句，对续写故事的发展有提示、引导和限制作用。明年续写部分的设置会更合理，这样才能更好地激发学生的想象力，学生都有话可说，有内容可写。3主题范围主题范围将仍然围绕人与自我、人与社会、人与自然三大主题，内容来自学生的实际生活或是学生关心的话题。续写话题将会更加彰显人性光辉，体现人与自然和谐相处的文章出现的可能性非常大，因为这样的文章更适合考查学生的逻辑思维、评判性思维和创新思维能力。A(2018年6月浙江高考)It was summer,
3、and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle_Paul,_my dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up
4、to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm_house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.
5、“The day starts at dawn on my farm，” he said.After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草)I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I
6、could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me.I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Dont be late for supper，” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so
7、that you dont get_lost！”“OK！” my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sightIt was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blan
8、ket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2：We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.【文章大意】父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家喂鸡牧羊，体验农场生活，
9、见父亲和叔叔骑马很是潇洒，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验【写作指导】第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的结果入手，可以写马受到惊吓狂奔而去，也可以写人的反应，无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。第二段首句We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱不要耽误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场来写。已给提示词汇：dad，Uncle Paul，farm house
10、，river，feed，sheep，late，track，get lost，sight话题激活词汇：情感：panic，relief，nervous，worried；动作：run，cry，think to oneself；环境：shower，mountain，forest，valley，tree，lake，sun【参考范文1】Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it.After a
11、while, we were completely lost in the forest.There was nothing left in our sight but the trees.“We may not be able to make it back to the farm_house in time for supper.” I thought to myself.After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired.Paragraph 2：We had no idea wh
12、ere we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest.And an unexpected shower added to our difficulty in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain.I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Dont worry, my son.I remember there i
13、s a river near the farm house.Find the river and we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it.Needless to say, we ate a late dinner.【参考范文2】Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the left to avoid the little ra
14、bbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall.Then my dad turned around and shouted, “Hold on！” All of a sudden the horse began to run.My dad tried to keep up behind us.For a few minutes my horse slowed down and then stopped beside a riverI looked around and realized that we were away off the trac
15、kParagraph 2：We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm_houseAfter what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance.My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep.As we got closer we saw Uncle_Paul
