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1、 1 写作园地 回复电子邮件 对应学生用书P016 感悟范文 假定你是中学生李华 在一位名叫TigerMom 的学生家长的博客上看到如下内容 请你根 据博客内容 写作要点和要求 给这位家长写一篇电子邮件 I m the mother of a fourteen year old girl I have a rule for my daughter be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another She has been doing very well in school but some friends of
2、mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her Am I wrong 写作要点 1 表明自己的看法 2 陈述自己的理由 可举例说明 3 提出至少两条建议 注意 词数不少于120 参考词汇 评价evaluate 精彩范文 Hi TigerMom What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so Although high grades play
3、an important part in evaluating students and their future university admission yet development in emotion health and life attitude should never be ignored There are many examples around us Some all A students in school have turned out not to be so successful in society as expected The reason is ofte
4、n that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities In addition punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically So I suggest that you take your friends advice More importantly let her live like a lovely girl let her have more fr
5、iends and social activities as we teenagers often do I hope you will change your mind and things will go smoothly Yours Li Hua 亮点分析 2 1 文中使用了that引导的表语从句 且从句中运用it作形式主语 2 文中使用了让步状语从句 而且短语play an important part in和词汇ignore的 使用也很恰当 3 so as结构的运用使得句子更加复杂得体 4 句式 The reason is that 阐明了讲述的现象的原因 5 连接副词in addi
6、tion和短语 by no means的使用使作者的理由更加有力 6 文中两个祈使句的使用更能触动TigerMom 技法讨论 本模块要求回复一封电子邮件 回复电子邮件是书信的一种格式 其目的是解答有关组 织或个人提出或出现的问题 其他像回帖 对于博客内容的回复 版主对于留言的回复 本 质上类似于回复电子邮件 高考也经常会考到 电子邮件的写作步骤 1 要有一个说明性的 合适的主题 其目的在于让收信者快速地了解电子邮件的主要内 容 如 Life in Britain Congratulations from Wang Hai等 2 电子邮件正文的开头部分必须呈现邮件的要点 然后再详细介绍一些辅助性
7、的内容 作者必须根据被说明对象的特征 有序地列出写作提纲 3 要用简练的语言 电子邮件的语言主要讲究简洁 真实 准确 如maybe possible most of 等不确定的表达方法是不宜多用的 但可用一些具体的数目作辅助说明 特别是在一 些商务性的电子邮件中 语言的正确性尤其重要 类文演练 假设你叫张明 你的美国网友Jane 想了解你对上网的看法 请根据下面提供的信息 用 英语给 Jane 发一封 100 词左右的电子邮件 1 能获得更多的信息 可上网学习 使联系更加方便 2 可以聊天 玩游戏 但很浪费时间 网上有有害的内容 3 建议要学会利用网络学习 时间应有限制 联想词汇 1 上网 答
8、案 on the Internet 2 最新信息 答案 the latest information 3 保持联系 答案 keep in touch 4 发送和接收电子邮件 答案 send and receive e mails 3 单句写作 1 通过网络他们能得大量新信息 They can get a great deal of 答案 the latest information through the Internet 2 跟朋友保持联系更加方便容易 easy and convenient 答案 It is to keep in touch with friends 3 一些学生花太多时间
9、上网聊天玩游戏 Some students have spent too much time and 答案 chatting playing games on the Internet 连句成章 精彩范文 Dear Jane I would like to give you my opinion about being on the Internet More and more middle school students here are starting using the Internet through which they can get a great deal of the la
10、test information They can enjoy lessons given by the best teachers of net schools at home And it is easy and convenient to keep in touch with friends by sending and receiving e mails On the other hand some students have spent too much time chatting and playing games on the Internet And there is some
11、thing harmful to the students So I suggest that students should make good use of the Internet for their studies and not be online for too long each time Yours Zhang Ming 课外拓展阅读 中国优秀传统文化专题练 阅读下面短文 在空白处填入1 个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式 Since childhood I 1 see action movies starring Bruce Lee and Jackie Chan 4 and
12、 I was always curious to learn the martial arts 武术 2 there is China there is kung fu Once I arrived in China my dream was 3 learn T ai Chi and kung fu and master the techniques of martial arts After my arrival on campus on the first day I went for a walk in the early morning I saw some older people
13、4 practise T ai Chislowly I stopped and watched their movements closely It attracted me and the very next day at registration time I rushed to the teacher s office to choose T ai Chi as my 5 option course The following week I was on the grounds early in the morning with my classmates The teacher tol
14、d us that T ai Chi 6 favor for its health benefits The movement of the body is related 7 the yin and yang forces The main 8 rule that the teacher taught us were attitude discipline 自 律 and balance I was taking every bit of the training 9 serious and trying to maintain my balance which was a difficult job However as the teacher puts 10 our attitude our willingness and our action will make the impossible possible And I will do 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 答案 1 have seen 2 Where 3 to learn 4 practising 5 optional 6 is favored 7 to 8 rules 9 seriously 10 it
