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1、高考英语书面表达的训练策略 书面表达如何写 五个步骤 1 审题 题材 人称 时态 要点 2 以词及点 用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点 3 联词成句 用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子 4联句成文 注意 主语和谓语 背景 适当增加时间 地点条件等 逻辑关系 开头与结尾 语篇衔接 5 检查修改 规范抄写 练习 根据下列图画中Tom骑自行车的经历 用英语写一篇短文 短文要写得连贯 完整 字数100字左右 审题 字词文 参考答案 审题 1 体裁 叙述Tom骑自行车的经历 为记叙文体 2 主要时态 一般过去时 叙述描绘一起交通事故 3 人称 第三人称Tom 4 要点 记叙描绘文体 抓住四
2、个要点 时间 地点 人物 事件的前后经过 字词文 词 torideabike tohithisbikeandfalloff 句 Tomwasridingabikealongthestreet Thecarhithisbikeandhefelloffit 文 Theotherday Tomwasridingalongthestreet Suddenly acarwasrunningtowardshimfastandhithisbike thenhefelloffit 参考答案 Tomwasaluckydog heading Theotherday Tomwasridingalongthestre
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4、des apasser byhappenedtoseewhathadhappenedandrememberedthenumberofthecar whichhereportedtothepolice Nowthedriverhasbeencaughtandwillbepunishedforhiswrongdeed Anyhow Tomwillrememberthisexperienceforever Ibelieve 改写语句 标点 时态1 DearMr Green Ireceivedthebook HarryPotter yougivemetheotherday DearMr Green I
5、receivedthebook HarryPotter yougavemetheotherday 完善语句 句子结构 2 Tomwasridingalongthestreet Suddenly acarwasrunningtowardshimfast Tomwasridingalongthestreetwhenacarrantowardshimfast 完善语句 句子结构 3 SoonhewentawayandleftTomhelplessonthespot Hewassoonoutofsight leavingTomhelplessonthespot 完善语句 关联词语 4 Tomwasno
6、thurtbadly Apasser byhappenedtoseewhathadhappenedandrememberedthenumberofthecar Fortunately Tomwasnothurtbadly Besides Apasser byhappenedtoseewhathadhappenedandrememberedthenumberofthecar 给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象 整体三部分 Heading点题 一两个句子 概括性 暗示性2 Body中心记述部分 层次分明3 Ending小结 呼应主题 怎样写开头 第一段 请你给 中国日报 写一篇稿件 谈谈农村儿童失学的主要
7、原因及你的看法 原因 1 家庭贫穷 供不起儿童上学 他们不得不在家赚钱2 部分家长认为女孩上学无用 不愿让她们上学 3 部分儿童对功课不感兴趣 不愿上学 看法 1 每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会 2 全社会都应重视儿童教育 他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用 怎样写开头 第一段 Whichisthebest Nowinthecountryareas therearemanychildrenoutofschool Therearedifferentkindsofreasonswhycountrychildrencan tgotoschool Asisknowntoall manychildre
8、ninthecountryareoutofschooltoday Nowadays moreandmoreattentionispaidtothecountrychildrenoutofschool 5 Inthecountry manychildrencan tgotoschooltoday 怎样写记事部分 body 逻辑清晰层次分明尽可能的使用较复杂的语句 如定语从句 各种状语从句等 尽可能的使语句多样化 如倒装句 强调句 感叹句 分词及短语等 尽可能的长短句搭配 Theotherday Tomwasridingalongthestreetwhenacarrantowardshimfast
9、 Hewassofrightenedthathequicklyturnedtotheleftside Butitwastoolate Thecarhithisbikeandhefelloff Themomentthedriverrealizedthathehadcausedanaccident hegotsuchafrightthathetookflightwithhiscar Hewassoonoutofsight leavingTomhelplessonthespot FortunatelyTomwasnothurtbadly Besides apasser byhappenedtosee
10、whathadhappenedandrememberedthenumberofthecar whichhereportedtothepolice Nowthedriverhasbeencaughtandwillbepunishedforhiswrongdeed 词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少 也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志 运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少 从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 使用恰当连接词 对写一篇有 英语味 的文章很重要 能使文章上下衔接自然 紧凑 增强书面表达效果的技巧 1 Becausetheweatherwasgood ourjourneywascomfortable 2 We
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