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1、四川彭州市2016高考英语【二轮】写作品析（7）基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） 请阅读下面有个龋齿的相关信息： 数据资料我国约有40%60%的人患有龋齿病，儿童患龋齿率更高达70%以上。发病原因龋齿病发生的原因是多方面的，但饮食和饮食习惯是其中最主要的原因。预防措施1. 注意均衡饮食, 少吃糖，多吃富含纤维的蔬菜、水果及牛奶等；2. 做到早晚刷牙，饭后漱口，尤其是睡前刷牙；3. 定期进行口腔检查，发现龋齿，及时治疗。【参考词汇】龋齿病 tooth decay纤维 fiber【写作内容】1. 龋齿的发病率；2. 诱发龋齿的原因；3. 预防措施。【写作要求】1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容；
2、2. 将这5句话组成连贯的短文。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【参考范文】基础写作： One possible version: Statistics reveal that about 40% to 60% of the citizens in our country suffer from tooth decay while more children are stricken by such a disease with a ratio of 70%. Many factors are responsible for this disease, but food an
3、d dietary habits may be the most important factors. Therefore, we are supposed to balance our food, eating more vegetables rich in fibers, fruit, milk and so on, instead of sugar. Next, brush teeth both in the morning and after meals, especially before going to bed. In addition, we should take regul
4、ar medical tooth check so that we can cure the disease in time once we are found carrying bad teeth in our mouth. 【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学三模试题】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文 A nation without a dream is a nation without hope. We have a China Dream. It includes the strong will of the Chinese pe
5、ople for the renewal (复兴) of the Chinese nation and a better life. The China Dream is the peoples dream. To make it come true, the government should always be service-oriented. People will only act responsibly for the country and help to achieve tile national dream when their dreams are realized, to
6、o. You cannot ask individuals to make sacrifices for the nation if they receive nothing in return. Moreover, the government have to know what people want and what they need. As said in his first public speech after the 18th Party Congress, the Chinese people want better education, stable jobs, highe
7、r incomes, greater social security, better medical and healthcare, improved housing conditions and better environmental quality. However we still have a long way to go to achieve the China Dream. Chinese people used to think that economic growth would solve all the problems, but now we realize that
8、the renewal of our nation will require much more than just money.【写作内容】1以约30个词概括以上文章的主要内容。2然后以约120个词，就“梦想”发表你的看法，包括如下要点： (1)梦想在我们成长的道路上所起的作用； (2)列举一个为实现梦想而奋斗的事例； (3)为了实现“中国梦”，你能做些什么？【写作要求】1在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】读写任务：One po
9、ssible version: The passage tells us what the China Dream includes and in order to achieve it, the government should be service-oriented and find out what people want and need, which requires constant efforts. Dreams play quite an important role in our life, providing us with guidance and motivating
10、 us to overcome all kinds of difficulty. A dream is to a person what the sun is to the world. We students may be faced with many challenges, such as endless homework, failures in exams and pressure from parents. While these drown us in sadness, dreams do cheer us up. Only when one has a dream and pu
11、rsue it regardless of any obstacle can one achieve success in the end. In reality, I am deeply impressed by the story of Jia Zuosheng, who pursued his dream with great determination. Although he never finished high school, his college ambition never stopped. He became a security guard at Qinghua Uni
12、versity. However, by taking advantage of the academic resources at Qinghua, he finally made his way to Shandong Normal University last year. Jias success tells us if we find a dream, we have to fight for it and never give it up. As for me, to achieve the China Dream, firstly I have to study hard and
13、 reach the goal of entering a renowned university. Then I can learn some professional knowledge, find a good job and lead a good life, which is part of the China Dream. From my perspective, every bit of effort counts in the process of realizing the China Dream.书面表达（满分25分）就学生该不该带手机的问题有许多不同的看法。现在许多学生用手机，他们认为使用手机是一种时尚；另外用手机和家人、朋友联系方便；但是一些学生违反学校规则把手机带到班里，在班里就能听到手机铃声。一些学生甚至在班里发短信。最后请谈谈你的看法。根据上面的汉语提示写一篇120词左右的短文。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
