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1、2020;2020届高考英语考前冲刺精选专题资料汇编书面表达（一）一 发言稿/通知 (2020;2020年福建卷)假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对“良好饮食习惯”这一话题进行讨论。请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。内容要点应包括：部分同学的饮食习惯良好的饮食习惯个人看法不吃早餐爱吃零食偏食饮食过量饮食多样化饮食定时定量重要性：有助于身体健康注意：1.发言稿必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2.发言稿开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数;3.词数：100左右.4.参考词汇:偏食be particular about food 零食 snackDear friends,As we all kn
2、ow, we are what we eat. Therefore, its very important for us to form healthy eating habits. _Thats all. Thank you!【思路点拨】由题目要求可以确定写作的话题和目的是“讨论同学们的饮食习惯，准备发言稿”。从表格内容中可以获得表达的要点：1）部分同学的饮食习惯：不吃早餐；爱吃零食；偏食；饮食过量等， (不难看出，该部分为不良习惯，是要否定和反对的) ；可以参考如下表达方式：to like to have snacks; be particular about food; go to sc
3、hool without breakfast; to eat or drink too much; All these are bad habits which will surely do harm to our health.等。2）养成良好的饮食习惯：饮食多样化；饮食定时定量等，提供健康饮食样例；（该部分是要提倡的良好行为）；可以参考如下表达方式：we should have various healthy diets; include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food; wed be
4、tter have meals regularly.等。3）个人看法：健康饮食很重要，有助于身体健康与生长等。要养成良好的饮食习惯。可以参考如下表达方式： to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body; Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.另外，提示的内容很好的揭示了文章的主题，也为考生继续写作提供了很好的开端和参考，考生要顺着提示的内容，搞好衔接或过度。最后，还要注意参考词汇，这也一般是文章必定要包括的内容。【范文和评析】Dear frie
5、nds,As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, its a very important for us to from healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us like to have snacks, and some others are particular about food. Some even often go to school without breakfast
6、while some eat or drink too much. All these are bad habits which will surely do harm to our health.To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, wed better have meals regularly.In my opinion,
7、we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.Thats all. Thank you!文章根据表格提示内容，完全完成了试题规定的写作任务；将有效信息很好的传达给了读者，完全达到了预期的写作目的。1）覆盖所有内容要点：介绍了部分同学的（不良）饮食习惯；列举了良好的饮食习惯，发表了个人观点和看法，并提供了合理的建议；2）应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，如：文中以短句子为主，如：Som
8、e of us like to have snacks, and some others are particular about food.等，突出演讲稿的特点；间或使用长句，如：Some even often go to school without breakfast while some eat or drink too much.等，显示作者的逻辑思维。3) 语法结构或词汇方面没有错误，且尽力使用了较复杂结构或较高级词汇，如：定语从句To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include p
9、roper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food.和倒装句Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.等，表明作者具备较强的语言运用能力。4）有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，如表达中运用了However，even；To keep fit；In my opinion,等词语和表达方式，使得行文连贯，过度自然，全文结构紧凑。总之，范文能写明全部要点；语言基本无误；表达清楚。可以定为第七档作文（优秀），批卷给分是24分（满分25分）。【写作建议
10、】一、表格类写作审题建议与指导。表格类文章写作一般通过表格以简单明确的方式提出表达的主要内容，审题内容较为简单，要注意将要点归纳成相关的几部分，注意各部分之间的关系。值得注意的是在对于表格内容的筛选：有时候需要将所有的要点客观的介绍出来，有时需要选择自己认为正确的观点并加以论证与比较，这些要根据题目的要求来确定。二、发言稿和通知的语言表达要求。发言稿和通知类文章属于应用性很强的文体。实用性成为该类表达的最大特点，也是该类文章写作的最基本的要求。由此，该类文章的篇章结构和语言表达显得尤为重要，它们除了能显示作者的语言基础知识外，还要能很好的体现作者的逻辑思维和表达能力。为了便于口头表达，该类文章
11、的语句不要过于复杂，要尽量使用口语化的语言，这样读起来顺口，听起来也容易理解。二调查报告/海报 (2020;2020年湖北卷)受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇100左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种。调查范围：湖北省的10所中学调查对象：高中生调查人数：1000调查方式：访谈调查结果：（见下图）Reading Interests of Senior Middle School StudentsRecently a survey has been done t
12、o find out the reading interests of senior middle school students. _【思路点拨】该题目要求为报纸写一份调查报告，报告的内容是“学生喜欢阅读哪类文章”，表达的内容可以通过两方面的审题获得：1、文字提示：调查内容（已经给出）、调查范围、方式和人数等，可以参考如下词语和句式：One thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hubei Province were interviewed; They were asked which they liked re
13、ading most among the four categories of English articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.等；2、分析图表及图表内的文字提示，说明调查结论：选择新闻类的最多（more than half of the students like to read news most）；其次是故事类（Twenty-six percent of the students say that English stories are their
14、favorite）；再次是科普文章；最少的是学习方法类（Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods），等等。当然，调查报告少不了简单的比较，如：the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles about learning methods.；如果有必要，还可以在文章
15、的结尾处做简单的总结。【范文和评析】Reading Interests of Senior Middle School StudentsRecently a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students. In this survey, one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hubei Province were interviewed. They were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about l
