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1、专题26 短文改错1.【2019全国I】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon wher
2、e I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyones surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loud
3、ly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.【答案】interestinginterestedwherewhenfootball前面加上abutandhardlyhardsurprisingsurpriseplayerplayerssaysayingnowthen去掉my【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。由于一次偶然的经历，“我”喜欢上了踢足球，后来经过自己努力，我成了一名
4、优秀球员。1. interesting改为interested 考查形容词用法。“interest（使感兴趣；使关注）”的形容词有interesting（使人感兴趣的）常修饰物；与interested（表现出兴趣的）常修饰人。本句的意思为：多亏一个偶然的事件，我对踢足球产生了兴趣。主语是I，故将interesting改为interested。2. where改为when考查定语从句。先行词one afternoon表示时间在定语从句中作状语，所以关系词使用when。故将where改为when。3. 在football前加a。考查冠词。名词football为可数名词，前边需要有限定词。这里foo
5、tball第一次出现，故在football前加a。4. but改为and 考查连词。句意：突然一个足球落在我前边并且差点打到我。“足球落下来”与“打到我”两个动作是顺承关系，不是转折关系。故将but改为and。5. hardly改为hard 考查副词。hard（努力地；费力地）与hardly（几乎不；几乎没有）都为副词，但是词义不同。文中表示我挡住足球，并使劲地将它踢回操场，故将hardly改为hard。6. surprising改为surprise考查固定搭配。“to ones + 名词”意为“令某人”，此处为to ones surprise意为“让某人惊讶的是”。故将surprising改
6、为surprise。7. player改为players。考查名词的数。player（运动员）为可数名词，此时all（所有的）后需要用player的复数形式。故将player改为players。8. say改为saying。考查非谓语动词。句中谓语动词为cheered，say在这里作伴随状语。与主语players是主动关系，故将say改为saying。9. now改为then考查上下文逻辑。结合语境可知，文中指从那时开始，我放学后跟同学一起踢足球。表示“从那时起”需用from then on，故将now改为then。10. 将my去掉 考查固定搭配。踢足球的英语表达“play football
7、”，中间不能加冠词或者代词。故将my去掉。2.【2019全国II】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Since I was a kid, Ive considered different job I would like to do. Firs
8、t, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One w
9、as that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.【答案】jobjobscoollycoolfivefifthtoovery/sochemistry后面加上in/atorandTheyThereamazingamazed去掉moreiswas【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了“我”随着年龄的变化对未来职业选择的变化。71. job改为
10、jobs 考查名词。本句中的different表示“不同的”，后面的名词job应该使用复数形式，故job改为jobs。72. coolly改为cool考查形容词。looked是系动词，表示“看起来”，后面使用形容词作表语，故coolly改为cool。 73.five改为fifth考查序数词。“在五年级”有两种表达方式。in the+序数词+grade，或者使用in Grade 5的形式。故five改为fifth。74. too改为very/so考查副词。too much表示“太多”，而very/so much表示“非常”，故改为very或so。75.在high前面加at/in考查介词。在高中，
11、短语为at/in high school。故在high前面加at/in。76. or改为and考查连词。本句中的reconsidered和decided这两个谓语动作是递进关系，故or改为and。 77.They改为There考查副词。考查存在句，应该是there be句型，故将They改为There。78.amazing改为amazed考查非谓语动词。根据前面的主语I可知，后面应该使用amazed表示“感到惊奇”。 79.去掉more考查形容词比较级。本句中better本身已经是比较级，前面只需要much来修饰，改变程度，more是多余的。故删除more。80. is改为was考查时态。综合
12、分析全文，从开始的第一句话就知道作者描述自己过去的事情，因此将is改为was。3.【2019全国III】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Ive had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream i
13、s to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like Tang Dynasty. In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is
14、 created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.【答案】Ive had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it requ
15、ired open requiresa lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a ordinary tospecial theme such as like Tang Dynasty. In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment themselves what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many that/ whic
