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1、Part 4 Writing 写作技巧 点拨 书面表达 训练 写作技巧 点拨 作文实例 假如你是李燕 下面是你的笔友Jenny给你发的一封邮件 Hi Li Yan From a web I ve learned that public servants are asked to stop smoking in your country Is that true Please tell me why Best wishes Jenny 请根据邮件内容给她回复 要点如下 1 吸烟在中国很普遍 2 人们逐渐意识到其危害 3 顺势呼吁公务员率先戒烟 注意 可适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 题目研读 一般来
2、说写回复主要根据所收到邮件的具体内容进行清楚 明了 的答复 并附带简单的问候 语言要简洁 态度要诚恳 格式要正确 正文可分三段 第一段 收到邮件的心情 时间等 第二段 答复邮件所提的问题 第三段 总结并问候 人称以第三人称为主 回复内容要点以现在时态为主 要点信息 1 收到某人来信 hear from sb receive one s letter one s letter reaches sb 2 戒烟 stop smoking give up smoking 3 对 有害 do harm to be harmful to be bad for 4 被动吸烟 second hand smok
3、ing 5 污染环境 pollute the environment 连词成句 1 要求公务员戒烟 Public servants are asked to stop 2 他们周围的人遭受被动吸烟 People around them suffer from second hand smoking smoking 一句多译 我刚做完作业就收到了你的信 1 I received your letter as soon as I finished my homework 2 Your letter reached me shortly after I had finished my homewor
4、k 3 On finishing my homework I received your letter 4 No sooner had I finished my homework than I heard from you 5 Hardly had I finished my homework when I heard from you 思考 你认为哪种表达形式最好 你的表达形式 连句成篇 Dear Jenny Your letter reached me shortly after I had finished my homework It s very nice of you to th
5、ink of me In your letter you asked me why public servants in our country are asked to stop smoking In China many people smoke which pollutes the environment and does harm to their health What s worse people around them suffer from second hand smoking and sometimes it even causes fire As time goes on
6、 people have come to realize the harm of smoking So first of all public servants are asked to give up smoking As long as people live in the environment without smoking they can live a healthier and happier life Best wishes Li Yan 范文点评 文章要点齐全 逻辑性强 有条不紊 文章中使用了很多复杂的句式 和高级词汇 给文章增加了亮点 使用which 引导的非限制性定语从句
7、 巧妙使用过渡词 使用高级句型 使用主从复合句 假定你是李华 在一个英文网络论坛上 你看到一个名叫Tim的中学 生发帖寻求帮助 请根据帖子内容 写作要点和要求回帖 书面表达 训练 Tim Post at 4 9 2017 20 10 1 Hi everyone I m a seventeen year old middle school student David my best friend began to smoke last year I advised him to give up smoking but he turned a deaf ear He says smoking is
8、 cool What should I do to help him stop smoking TOP Last Topic Next Topic Reply New As a student of your age I understand your situation I know that you really want to help your friend give up smoking Here are some suggestions 写作要点 1 谈谈吸烟的危害 2 给Tim提出解决问题的具体建议 要求 内容充实 结构完整 语意连贯 Hi Tim Yours Li Hua On
9、e possible version Hi Tim As a student of your age I understand your situation I know that you really want to help your friend give up smoking Here are some suggestions First tell your friend smoking is a bad habit It can cause a lot of diseases And it is a waste of money Besides it is not only bad
10、for smokers themselves but also bad for the people around them Second tell your friend it s not impossible to stop smoking When he wants to smoke you should stop him and advise him to do other things instead You can help your friend go in for some healthy hobbies such as playing basketball listening to music and collecting stamps etc I hope your friend will follow your advice and give up smoking Yours Li Hua
