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1、大学英语四级作文 评分原则与标准 及得分范文 1 据统计 评卷老师在给个作文上花的时间大约为十几秒 2 评分标准 总体评分法 兼顾内容和语言 订档给分 2 5 8 11 14 分为这样五个档次 2分 条理不清楚 思路紊乱 语言支离破碎或大部分句 子有错 而且多数为严重错误 5分 基本切题 表达思想不清楚 连贯性差 有较多的 严重语言错误 8分 基本切题 有些地方思想表达不过清楚 文字勉强 连贯 语言错误较多 其中有少量的严重错误 11分 切题 表达思想清楚 文字连贯 但有少量语言错 误 14分 切题 表达思想清楚 文字通顺 连贯性好 基本 无语言错误 仅有个别小错 写作范例得分标准举例 An
2、Eye Witness Account of Traffic Accident 假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车 祸 就此写一份见证书 见证书须 包括以下几点 1 车祸发生的时间及地点 2 你所见到的车祸情况 3 你对车祸原因的分析 It was the Traffic Accident in Tianjin Road The Traffic Accident has been at the morning May 1 Two children by bike went to school A car is so fast the streel And the car touched two c
3、hildren by bike and the Traffic Accident has happened One is touched so far way and the other os put sown Mary people come here and they sent to two chidren who go to Hospiton Wait a time The ploiemen arrived in the Accident place My opiopmtoin The car driver is so fast by car and He didn t attendat
4、ion to the children by bike aside the road Two children by bike didn t heared the car come All of above I think the car driver must be serier the Traffic Accident 2 points 条理不清 思路紊乱 语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误 且多数为严重错误 It was 8 00 this morning I went on my way to school When I just at the school gate I saw the
5、 terrible traffic accident happened A student ride a bike in a high speed and just when he arrived the school gate a large truck traveled out of the gate and hit him down He flied over 3m before his bike hit him on the ground Surely the poor boy was hurt very bad I think there are two reasons for th
6、e accident First it was just the time we began our first class The bike rider perhaps did not want to be late the ride his bike so fast even didn t low down his speed at the gate Second the truck is too large and at that time there were too many walk through the gate so the bike driver have no other
7、 way to chose but to ride in the middle of the road 5 points 基本切题 表达思想不清楚 连贯性差 有较多的严重语言错误 The trafic accident was taken place at the junction of two highways when I was driving my car home at about 4 o clock The yellow car involved in the accident was running at a high speed along the right hand whe
8、n it happened Hardly it reached the junction when it cracked with a truck running from another direction There was no time for the drivers to change the directions I think the accident mostly attributed to such reasons Firstly and the foremost it was the carelessness of both of the drivers that most
9、ly made the accidents happen It was not too careful for them when running a car Secondly the weather also should be responsible for it The fog made the vision of drivers vague Last but not the least the constructure of the roads was unreasonable The trafic lights are needed at any junctions 8 points
10、 基本切题 有些地方表达思想不够清楚 文字勉强连贯 语言错误 相当多 其中有一些是严重的语言错误 It was last Friday morning The accident happened when I was on my way to school It was so terrible that I would never forget it I was walking along the road and there are not so many cars on the road Then with a big sound the accident happened The red
11、 car stoped suddenly on the road so that the driver of following car couldn t respond immiditely The back of the red car was badly damaged but fortunately there was no people injured in the accident I think the main reasons are as follows First of all the red car shouldn t stop suddenly without any
12、signals Secondly the following car should keep a certain distance from the front car so that the driver could have enough time to take measures when any any badly situation Finally these two drivers were careless If they had paid more attention to driving this accident wouldn t have happened 11 poin
13、ts 切题 表达思想清楚 文字连贯 但有少量语言错误 It was the morning of April 6th 2003 At about 7 30 I went to school by bike as usual It was a rainy day and the road was slippery On the way I noticed a boy riding in front of me talking loudly with his friends He didn t wear a raincoat instead he held an umbrella in one h
14、and and rode with another hand As he turned left to Guangming Road he failed to see a car coming from behind a truck parked on the corner Suddenly I heard a big noise and saw an umbrella thrown away The boy was knocked down by the car I was completely shocked I think the boy s absent mindedness acco
15、unted much for the accident He was talking all the time and dangerously used an umbrella while riding a bike The weather also played a role in the tragedy The third cause was the unproperly parked truck which was big enough to make the road conditions invisible to the students who were going to make
16、 a turn All these contributed to this accident 14 points 切题 表达思想清楚 文字通畅 连贯性好 基本无语言错误 仅 有个别小错 近几年了我校同学经典错误摘录 1 I very like the cinema 2 When saw the teacher he stood up 3 There is an old sentence says practice makes perfect There are many people who think that There is a general belief that There is a famous film entitled 4 把someone 误用作some people Somebody someone 作 有人 讲时 不是指 有些人 或有的人 而是指 某个人 有人 一般为 单数意义 Someone is knocking at the door Someone put forward the question at the meeting yesterday 而在四
