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1、启东中学高二英语任务型写作指导Part 1: How to write a summary1. 写概括时的注意点：(1) 概括内容要点要：精，准，全：（技巧：阅读文章，确定主题，对故事类的文章理清因果；如何精简字数而保留主要意思；避免提炼不精、啰嗦重复、细节堆砌或概括不全）矚慫润厲钐瘗睞枥庑赖賃軔朧碍鳝绢懣硯涛镕頃赎巯驂雞虯从躜鞯烧。(2) 不得直接引用原文中的句子（同义词组替换法；正话反说法；语态变换；复合句变简单句）；(3) 字数：约30词 （小于20词或大于40词，扣2分）(4) 一般以第三人称来表述(5) 与原文时态一致（正文和结尾除外）2. 记叙文概括的方法- 串联要素法第一步：先通
2、读全文，找出几个要素who 谁what 何事when 何时where 何地 why 原因as a result/consequence/finally 结果第二步：用自己的话串联起来The passage mainly tells us that sb. (who) did sth. (at some place at some time ) because of / as a result of /due to , which led to /resulted in sb. doing / finally (eventually) 聞創沟燴鐺險爱氇谴净祸測樅锯鳗鲮詣鋃陉蛮苎覺藍驳驂签拋敘睑绑
3、。开头套用句式：The story/passage is aboutThe writer/author tells us about.The story mainly tells us thatThe passage describes .From the article(passage) we know thatPractice 1:Right after the Second World War, Germany was in ruins. Almost all the houses, factories and schools were destroyed. Plenty of peop
4、le were homeless as well as jobless. Worse still, the supply of water and electricity was often cut off in the city. Two American journalists interviewed a German family living in the basement. The husband was disabled from the war and the wife was just dismissed from a clothing company. Worse still
5、, there were bills for them to payfour children to care for and food to buy. Life was hard for them at that time.残骛楼諍锩瀨濟溆塹籟婭骒東戇鳖納们怿碩洒強缦骟飴顢歡窃緞駔蚂。After the interview, the journalists chatted with each other on the way back to the company.酽锕极額閉镇桧猪訣锥顧荭钯詢鳕驄粪讳鱸况閫硯浈颡閿审詔頃緯贾。“Do you think the Germans could r
6、ebuild their homeland?”彈贸摄尔霁毙攬砖卤庑诒尔肤亿鳔简闷鼋缔鋃耧泞蹤頓鍥義锥柽鳗铟。“Absolutely.”“But I cant see any hope for the country at all. How can you be so certain about that?”謀荞抟箧飆鐸怼类蒋薔點鉍杂篓鳐驱數硯侖葒屜懣勻雏鉚預齒贡缢颔。“Have you noticed what they put on the table in the basement? There was a vase of flowers. A nation, suffering at s
7、uch moment, hasnt forgotten about flowers. It shows that hopes are not lost. They are still able to dream. A nation with hope can create miracles. They are sure to be able to rebuild their homeland.”厦礴恳蹒骈時盡继價骚卺癩龔长鳏檷譴鋃蠻櫓鑷圣绋閼遞钆悵囅为鹬。【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；2. 以约120个词就梦想改变命运的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：(1) 你赞同文中的观点吗
8、？(2) 举例证明你赞同或不赞同的原因；(3) 谈谈你对梦想的看法。【写作要求】1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。第一步：请找出这篇短文的几个要素：who (1) _ (2)_what (1)_(2)_茕桢广鳓鯡选块网羈泪镀齐鈞摟鳎饗则怿唤倀缀倉長闱踐識着純榮詠。when _where _why _as a result _鹅娅尽損鹌惨歷茏鴛賴縈诘聾諦鳍皑绲讳谧铖處騮戔鏡謾维覦門剛慘。第二步：用自己的话串联起来Practice 2A poo
9、r boy had one penny left. He was so hungry that he decided to beg for a meal at the next house. A lovely young woman opened the door. She thought he looked hungry and brought him a large glass of milk. He drank it slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you？” “You dont owe me anything，” she repli
10、ed. “Mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” As Howard Kelly left that house, he felt stronger physically and mentally.籟丛妈羥为贍偾蛏练淨槠挞曉养鳌顿顾鼋徹脸鋪闳讧锷詔濾铩择觎測。Years later the young woman became critically ill and was sent to a big hospital. Dr Howard Kelly, now famous, was called in for the
11、 consultation (咨询). He recognized her at once and he was determined to do his best to save her life.預頌圣鉉儐歲龈讶骅籴買闥龅绌鳆現檳硯遙枨纾釕鴨鋃蠟总鴯询喽箋。After a long struggle, the battle was won. Dr Kelly requested the business office to pass the final bill to him for approval. He looked at it and then wrote something on
12、 it. The bill was sent to her room. She opened it, and the note on the side of the bill caught her attention: “Paid in full with a glass of milk.”渗釤呛俨匀谔鱉调硯錦鋇絨钞陉鳅陸蹕銻桢龕嚌谮爺铰苧芻鞏東誶葦。写作内容1. 以约30词概括上文的主要内容。2. 以约120词谈谈你阅读了该故事后的感受，内容包括：(1)你从这个故事领悟到什么道理？(2)举一个例子说明，当你遇到困难时，你的朋友是怎么做的？(3)你是如何报答你朋友的帮助的？写作要求 1. 在作
13、文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。第一步：请找出这篇短文的几个要素;who _when _铙誅卧泻噦圣骋贶頂廡缝勵罴楓鳄烛员怿镀鈍缽蘚邹鈹繽駭玺礙層談。what _where _擁締凤袜备訊顎轮烂蔷報赢无貽鳃闳职讳犢繒笃绨噜钯組铷蟻鋨赞釓。why _as a result _贓熱俣阃歲匱阊邺镓騷鯛汉鼉匮鲻潰馒鼋餳攪單瓔纈釷祕譖钭弯惬閻。第二步：用自己的话串联起来Practice 3: A boy found an eagles egg and he pu
14、t it in the nest of a hen. The eagle was hatched and thought he was a chicken. He grew up doing what chickens do-scratching for food and flying short distances. It was a dull life. Gradually the eagle grew older and bitter. One day he and his chicken friends saw a beautiful bird soaring on the currents of air, high above the mountains.坛摶乡囂忏蒌鍥铃氈淚跻馱釣缋鲸鎦潿硯级鹉鄴椟项邬瑣脐鯪裣鄧鯛。“Oh, I wish I could fly like that!” said the eagle. The chicken replied, “ Dont give it another thought. Tha
