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1、作文讲评 请根据下列提示要点，以“the Ways to Keep Healthy” 为 题，写一篇短文。提示： 1.人人都想保持健康。 2.饮食要健康：多吃水果、蔬菜，因为它们富含纤维素和 维素；少吃黄油、奶酪、咖啡和巧克力，因为它们含糖 和脂肪太多，糖和脂肪使你迅速变胖。 3.有良好的生活习惯：定期锻炼，充足的睡眠，不要过度 劳累，不抽烟等等。 要求： 1. 短文须包括上述所有要点，可以适当增加细节,使短文连贯 。 2词数约120-150左右。 3 . 纤维素和维生素 fibre and vitamins. 黄油butter, 奶酪 cheese, Everyone hopes to be
2、 in good health. But how? 审题 1. 人人都想保持健康。（已给出） 2. 饮食要健康. (详细叙述) 3. 良好的生活习惯。（详细叙述) 4. 简单总结。 审题 1. 人人都想保持健康。（已给出） Everyone wants to be in good health. to keep healthy. 2. 饮食要健康. (详细叙述) 提出建议最好用句子。 Youd better do You should do 3) Its better to do 你最好多吃水果、蔬菜，因为它们富含纤维 素和维生素。 Youd better eat more fresh fru
3、it and vegetables ，because they have a lot of fibre and vitamins. ( are rich in / contain ) 少吃黄油、奶酪、咖啡和巧克力，因为它 含糖和脂肪太多，糖和脂肪使你迅速变胖 You should eat less butter, cheese, Coffee or chocolate, for they contain too much sugar and fat, which will make you put on weight quickly. 3. 良好的生活习惯。（详细叙述) 1) Second, we should form a good habit of life, such as doing exercise regularly and having enough sleep. 2) Besides, dont be too tired and dont smoke. As we all know, smoking is bad for our health. 4. 简单总结。 In a word, if you want to keep healthy , you should have a balanced diet and good living habits.
