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1、? 北京天梯志鸿教育科技有限责任公司 2017 届高三二轮复习英语精品资料届高三二轮复习英语精品资料【练案】【练案】 专题专题 9 短文改错短文改错 2015 全国卷 第四部分写作（共两节满分 35 分） 第一节 短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共 有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1
2、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the en
3、vironment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,well live to reg
4、ret it . 【答案】 76. think thought 77. countryside 前加 the 78. orand 79. onwith 80. been 去掉 81. seriouslyserious 82. airsair 83. muchmany 2 84. foundfind 85. yourour 2015 全国卷 第四部分写作（共两节，满分 35 分） 第二节短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共 有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删
5、除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（） ，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词作斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked
6、 into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. 3 Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I wer
7、e terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again. 【答案】 71. parent 改为 parents 72. on 改为 in 73. very 去掉 74. looks 改为 looking 75. where 改为 that 或者去掉 where 76. begun 改为 began 77. telling 改为 told 78. a 改为 the 79. saw 后加 his 80. terrible 改为 terribly 75. where 改为 that 或者去掉 where f
8、ound 后面的宾语从句是陈述句，故 where 改为 that 或者去掉 where。 【2014 新课标】 Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted Some cherry 4 tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants
9、are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully
10、tomatoes at no cost! 【解析】 试题分析： 本文叙述了五年前， 在父亲的帮助下， 作者和姐姐在后花园里种植了一些圣女果， 这些年以来，它的种子我们没有管过，在院子里随处疯长，结果院子里到处都是圣女果，于 是我们就把它们分给邻居吃。感觉心里很高兴。 5 【2014 新课标】 My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon .We didnt need to do so many hom
11、ework .Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities .For example , we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day . My dream school look like a big garden .There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings .We can lie on the g
12、rass for a rest , or sat by the lake listening music .The teachers here are kind and helpfully .They are not only our teachers but also our friends . 【答案】 6 listening 后加 to。考查固定短语。or sat by the lake listening music。Listen 是不及物动词，后 7 面不能跟宾语，固定短语 listen to 意思是“听” ，所以在 listening 后加 to。 helpfully helpfu
13、l 考查形容词和副词。The teachers here are kind and helpfully .涉及知识：系 动词后要跟形容词做表语，所以把 helpfully 改为 helpful。 【2013 新课标】 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfat
14、her very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do home
15、work with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. 8 【2013 新课标】 The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 oclock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit Bri
