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1、 本节课的学习任务: 写一篇描述人的外貌 (look) 、性格（characters）、爱 好 （hobbies）的文章 short 1. What does he / she look like? tall thin heavy/ fat What does he look like? short hairlong hair What does he look like? 2. Pair-work: A: What does xxx look like? B: He/ She is A: What is his / her character? B: He / She is A: What
2、does he/ she like? B: He/ She likes 描述外貌的单词： short , tall, thin ，of medium height ，strong, good-looking, nice, slim 苗条 描述穿着的短语：wear a T-shirt, wear a pair of glasses 描述性格的单词：lazy, quiet, friendly, shy, kind-hearted 善良的, polite 有礼貌的，strict 严 厉的, out-going 外向的 描述爱好的短语：like reading, like to help others
3、, like eating, like playing basketball 3. Word collection: 4. Write something about this boy. (3-5句话) 提示词： tall，thin，black hair; wear shorts and a T-shirt; polite(有礼貌的)，happy Name Ma Xiaotiao Age15 Looktall，thin，black hair, wear shorts and a T-shirt Favorite food hamburgers，fried chicken Favorite cl
4、assesscience, art, PE Things he likeslittle animals Things he likes to do play with his good friends, help others Character (性格 ) kind-hearted（善良的）, polite (有礼貌的) 5. Writing task: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描 述你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。 开头： Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He 6. 6. 写作步骤写作步骤 1)1)审题审题 2)2)列纲列纲 3)3)连句连句
5、 4)4)修饰句子修饰句子 组织文章组织文章 5)5)检查纠错检查纠错 （定体裁、人称、格式、时态）（定体裁、人称、格式、时态） （加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子）（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子） （适当运用承上启下的过渡词（适当运用承上启下的过渡词, ,使使 文章更完整更精炼）文章更完整更精炼） （字数、内容要点、主谓一致、（字数、内容要点、主谓一致、 习惯用法、单词拼写、大小写习惯用法、单词拼写、大小写 及标点符号）及标点符号） （用单词、短语列出内容要点）（用单词、短语列出内容要点） Name Ma Xiaotiao Age15 Looktall，thin，black hair,
6、wear shorts and a T-shirt Favorite food hamburgers，fried chicken Favorite classesscience, art, PE Things he likeslittle animals Things he likes to do play with his good friends, help others Character (性格 ) kind-hearted（善良的）, polite (有礼貌的) 7. Writing task: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描 述你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。
7、 开头： Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He 8. Lets share some compositions. 9. Pair-correction: Exchange your composition with your partner and correct the mistakes with your red pen. Name Ma Xiaotiao Age15 Looktall，thin，black hair, wear shorts and a T-shirt Favorite food hamburgers，fried chicken Favorite c
8、lassesscience, art, PE Things he likeslittle animals Things he likes to do play with his good friends, help others Character (性格 ) kind-hearted（善良的）, polite (有礼貌的) Writing task: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述 你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。 开头： Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He 10. 例文: Ma Xiaotiao is my pen pal. He is 15
9、 years old. He is tall and thin. He has black hair and he likes wearing shorts and T-shirts. He looks very cute. He likes hamburgers and fried chicken best. His favorite classes are science, art and P.E. He likes little animals. He often plays with his good friends at school and helps others. He is very polite and kind-hearted. He is a good boy. I like him very much. 11. Write your compositions again after the corrections. Later, hand in your compositions to me.
