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1、Welcome,Writing,高考英语评分原则： 1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3.词数少于80和多于150的，从总分中减去2分。 4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。,NMET书面表达第五档要求,1. 覆盖所有的语言要点。 内容要点可用不同 方式表达。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 2. 应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性。值得注意的是 语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误, 但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致; 具
2、有较强的语言运用能力。,高考英语评分原则： 5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英，美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。 7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。 8. 鼓励写出高级词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。,范例 高三学生学习紧张，考试压力大，因此，做一些户外运动时很有必 要的。请你以“Health and Sports”为题完成一篇短文。 可以围绕主题适当展开，词数100120 Health and Sports Some students say that taking sports is just a wa
3、ste of time. At school, there are so many subjects to learn and so much homework to do that time is precious to them. To us senior three students, every minute counts. As a consequence, there is no time available, especially for students to take outside sports.,However, I should utter a sonorous voi
4、ce that sports are essential to us. As an old saying goes, “All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.” Concentrating on study for all day long without any relaxation is not effective and do harm to our health. Taking some exercises after class can relive the pressure of taking examinations. Of cour
5、se, it is improper for students to overdo sports. As a whole, we should make a balance between sports and study.,专家点评：,本文是仿照十句作文法而写的一篇优秀考场作文。文章围绕“Health and Sports”这一主题展开，两种观点陈述清楚。文中运用大量的词组和短语，语句变化多样，过渡自然，结尾表明自己的观点，也显得落落大方。,1 汉语式英语 2 句式单一 平铺直叙 3 无过渡语,Common mistakes in writing,1,如何在写作中避免句式单一,Rewrite
6、 the sentences,1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard.,方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.,Arriving at the school, they felt
7、 the happy atmosphere.,If I am given another chance, I will succeed.,Given another chance, I will succeed.,In order to improve his English, he studies hard.,方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非谓语动词) 听到这个消息,他们变的很激动. _the news, they got excited. 2. 尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错. _many
8、times, he still repeated the mistake. 3.除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默. Unless _to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.,Hearing,Having been told,invited,Translate the following sentences by using non-predicate (非谓语动词),1,面对困难时，他从不放弃。 2，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。 3，做完作业后，他回家了。,Faced with/Facing difficulties, he nev
9、er gives up.,Introduced to the market, the product made a great success.,Having finished his homework, he returned home.,方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,he returned home did he realize his foolishness.,by changing the way we live can we save the earth.,Clever he is, he does not work hard.,stands the clock tower
10、.,方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences(倒装句) 1. 他从不说关于他家庭的事. 2. 只有我们每个人都意识到水的重要性, 我们才能生活得更好. 3.只有用这种方式, 我们才能有足够的精力好好学习.,Never did he speak about his own family.,Only when each of us realizes the importance of water, can we live a better life.,Only in this way can we
11、 have enough energy to study better.,方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,4. Describe the character by using Inverted Sentence(倒装句),Poor as/though he was, he was happy.,方法二. 巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力,5. 他是个孩子，却知道很多。 6. 墙上有个通知，上面写着“请节约用水”.,Child as/though he is, he knows a lot.,On the wall is a notice saying “Please Save Water”
12、.,Use different ways to describe the picture,方法三. 尝试多样化表达方式,一就受到欢迎,As soon as Chairman Xi and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed . On arriving/On his arrival at the airport , and his wife and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport. No s
13、ooner had and his wife arrived at the airport than they were Hardly had and his wife arrived at the airport when they were ,方法三. 尝试多样化表达方式,In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast. All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful. _ which_ With the development of _ _ _ _so
14、 _ that_ _,In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, makes peoples lives convenient, pleasant,Beijing, peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient, pleasant and colorful.,Nowadays, Beijing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient, pleasant and colorful.,我校是一所
15、省重点中学， 位于徐州东郊。校园很美,绿树成荫。,East of XuZhou lies our school, which is a key school of JiangSu province. It is beautiful, surrounded with many trees/with many trees.,Translate the sentences:,句式多样 文章增“靓”,一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,二. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力,三. 尝试多样化表达方式,书面表达: 假如你是我校晨曦报的记者,请你根据下面要点提示写一篇新闻报道. 要点提示:,要求:1. 100词左右。 2. 内容适当发挥, 注意 行文连贯 3. 适当使用所讲方法. 4.开头语已给好。,On October 20th our school celebrated its fiftieth birthday,Assign
