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1、2013. 12,CET-4 Writing 写作,CET-4的新变化,改变1(Listening Part) 原复合式听写题目中的句子听写换成听写单词与词组。 优势:学生不需要听长句,正确率上升 缺点:数量增多,需要听写共10个单词/词组。 改变2(Reading Part) 快速阅读原选择/填空题变为段落信息匹配题,加重对 考生理解能力的考察。 改变3(Translation Part) 完型填空取消;句子翻译改为段落翻译,分值上升15分。 段落翻译除了考察学生的基本翻译能力外,着重考察学 生的全篇掌握能力,尤其是对上下文逻辑关系的理解。,四级写作部分简介,1.四级考试写作的评分原则,1作
2、文采用总体评分法(Global Scoring),就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores),而不是按语言点错误数目扣分。 2从内容和语言两方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应该表达题目所规定的内容,而内容要通过语言来表达。既要考虑作文是否切题,是否用英语清楚而明确地表达了主题思想,也要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。 3. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分,包括满分,该给低分的给低分,包括0分,一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。,具体评分标准如下:,0分 白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而思想无法表达。 2分条理不清,思路紊乱
3、,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多为严重错误。 5分基本切题。表达思想不够清楚,连贯性差,有较多的严重语言错误。 8分基本切题。表达思想比较清楚,文章尚连贯,但语言错误比较多,其中有一些是严重错误。 11分切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。 14分切题。表达思想清楚,内容丰富,文字通顺,连贯性好。基本上无语言错误。 另外,字数不足,也酌情扣分,如累计字数为110119扣1分,100109扣2分,9099扣3分,7079扣5分,5059扣7分,少于49扣9分。累计字数不包括题目中给出的主题句、起始句和结尾句中的字数。 如果字数不少,但段落数不够,也酌情扣分。比如在要求写三段的
4、作文中只写了一段,只能得04分;只写两段,只能得09分。,四级写作部分简介,2.时间与字数要求,1时间要求:30分钟 时间安排:3m 审题并构思结构和主要内容 20-25m 写 2m 检查 2. 字数要求:120-150字,考 试 题 型,议论文 (Argument),书信类 (Letter),看图说话,图表类 (Chart),议论文(Argument),话题: 1)校园生活类话题: E.g 2009.12:Creating a Green Campus 2)社会热点类话题: E.g 2010.12: How Should Parents Help Children to Be Indepen
5、dent? 如何写好一篇议论文? A Good Outline Outline Composition(提纲作文),General Outline of Arguments,1.一篇议论文基本可以分为3大部分 1).引入话题(通过一个日常现象,最好不要照抄题目,可以进行同义词替换) 2).议论部分(阐述不同的论点,注意题目中给出的中文提纲) 3).总结(再次点题;再次强调自己的立场) 2.段落数:2+N 一般为4段,例题,2000年6月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on
6、 the topic Is A Test of Spoken English Necessary? The first sentence has already be written for you. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是 2也有人持不同意见, 3我的看法和打算,如何引入? 一个现象,A Test of Spoken English Necessary?,With the
7、 development of English education in China, nowadays, many attentions have been paid to spoken English skills. The question, wether students can actually use English as a communication tool after years of study, has caused hot debate. As a result, test of spoken English is becoming increasingly comm
8、on in English education. But does it really necessary to set such a test?,如何议论?根据提纲,各个击破,1很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是 2也有人持不同意见, 3我的看法和打算 (结论),议论段落基本结构: Topic Sentences + Supportive Details/Examples,如何结尾?你的看法和打算,我的看法和打算 (结论),基本结构: Your thought + The meaning of your choice 例:我认为应该举办英语口试 + 这么做的意义何在,In my opi
9、nion, a test of spoken English will do more good than harm. Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society. Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to
10、practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study.,模板1,People hold different views about X./_ or _, which is better? Different people have diverse opinions upon this question(issue)./ Peoples opinions are divided upon this issue. Some people think (believe, argue, recognize,) that 观点1
11、. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1. More importantly, 论据2. Most important of all, 论据3. In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.,模板2
12、(3段论),There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点). Some people are of the view that 观点1, while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious. First of all, 论据1. Furth
13、ermore, 论据2. Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3. From the above discussion, we can come to the conclusion that 总结观点. (可加谚语做结尾),高分策略:注重结构的逻辑性,关联词: 一. Addition 此外 in addition, and,similarly,besides,furthermore,also,moreover, not only . but, 二. Sequence 顺序 In the
14、first place, initially,to begin with, in the second place, moreover in the third place, at last,finally 三. Consequence 结果 as a result, thus,therefore,consequently,it follows that,thereby,eventually,to that case,admittedly,高分策略:注重结构的逻辑性,七. Summary 总结 in conclusion, in summary,to sum up,to conclude,to
15、 recapitulate,in short ,all in all 八. Example举例 for example,for instance,just as,in particular,such as,namely 九. Reason原因 since,as, so, because (of),due to,owing to,the reason why,in other words, leads to,cause,高分策略:注重结构的逻辑性,四. Contrast对比 (转折) however, on the other hand,despite,in spite of,though,al
16、though,but,on the contrary ,otherwise, yet,instead of,rather,whereas, nonetheless compared with,in contrast 五. Certainty 确定 obviously, certainly,plainly,of course,undoubtedly 六. Condition 条件 if, unless,whether,provided that,so that,whether,depending on ,In case that,图表类(Chart),解题思路: 1)审题:认真阅读写作提示 2)作文提纲: 第一段:转述文章题目,仔细描述图表内容,并阐述数据显 示出的问题/现象/趋势 第二段:分析这种问题/现象/趋势出现的原因 第三段:做出评价,这种问题/现象/趋势可能引发的结果与 对策。,例题,Directions: For this par