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1、下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to 而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches wereimplemented by the service industry like that. Thus， its competitive edge willbe sharpened effectively.2.
2、善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that - 299 -3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad ,many, thing, think,people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable 代替prop
3、er, approaches 代替ways, implement 代替carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge 代替enhanceones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)下面举一篇例子，给各位钻石班会员共勉！Computer and I By SimmyI never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me acomputer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on m
4、e sothat i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i hadexpected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless,feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 verythrilling 替换 excitingsth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be intereste
5、d in sth.google 替换 searchan army of 替换 a lot ofThe dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring intothe current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is noexaggeration to
6、say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popularCoincident with 非常地道的词汇，表达“与一致”的意思，替换 With Advancement 替换 developmentPour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into- 300 -Current ( cu
7、rrently )替换 nowAppeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替换 more and more peopleIt is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Littleby little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be great
8、lybroadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playinggames, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin withWe can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatlybroadened. 用了非常精彩的被动Additionally 替换 In addition / BesidesDeli
9、ver 替换 sendThere is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disserviceof human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,*, porn pictures,AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can func
10、tion in the disserviceof human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that 这个句型，还有however 作为插入语， function in the disservice of 替换 do harm toEmerging 代替 appearing ( fading 代替 disappearing )Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play apositive role
11、in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorableimpacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the oppositefacet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides- 301 -Computers do play ，do 强调Positive 替换 important / good 等A slice of 替换 a part ofUnfavorable
12、替换 badImpacts 替换 effects / influencesWe should, therefore, take advantage of 使用插入语Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects替换 disadvantage )Facet 替换 aspect各位，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！以下是我当年总结的30 个最经典的替换词，请各位一定要把下面的我总结的这些背下来！1.individuals,characters, folks 代替(people ,persons
13、)2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding 代替good3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad如果bad 做表语，可以有be less impressive 代替eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoyingromance with girls/boys or killing time
14、 passively in their dorms. When itapproaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are lessimpressive.4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)代替many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many 后一定要有词。- 302 -Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea
15、that.同理 用most, if notall ,代替most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several 代替some6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,hold the view that, it is widely shared that,it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因为是书面语，所以要加that)7:affair ,business ,matter 代替thing8: shared 代 common9.reap huge fruits 代替get much benefit )10:for my part ,from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion11:Increasing(ly),growing 代替more and more( 注意没有growingly 这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement
