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1、单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,二级,三级,四级,五级,2024/11/7,#,2025,届高考英语读后续写指导,+,练习,Tip 1,：解题必备思维,-,每句话在干什么,聪明人的解题,-,好词句，有样学样,人物塑造：,Mary,妈妈单亲、生活拮据、乐于助人,善行带来幸运！,邻里之间互帮互助、有求必应,人物塑造：为了省钱选择离家近的大学,非限定从作补充,形容词作状语,无灵主语,核心物件：,Mary,上学需要电脑但家里负担不起,物件来源：母女上网求助，获得善良网友的一台新笔记本电脑。,Mary,每天背着它上学。,核心事件：路遇小男孩闯入马路，,Mary,跳下自行车拦下后，连笔
2、记本电脑一起摔倒在地。,非谓语作状语,周围人都过来扶起,Mary,一个电脑维修店的老板恰巧站在附近,圈四要素(who/when/where/what):,Mary,Mary妈妈,老板,路人/街头/,上学途中贫困女孩为救人摔坏笔记本电脑,圈解冲突:有危险-,-,一(明)靠老板一(暗)靠善意重获笔记本电脑,The people around came running to help Mary up from the ground._,1必要的动作线:Mary赶紧查看小男孩,确认他是否安然无恙。,6调配演员来互动:小男孩的妈妈跑过来,连声感谢。,7动作情感不分家:这时她突然看到装着笔记本的包还躺在地
3、上,她的心一沉。,8情节串联:捡起书包,打开笔记本检查。,2反向文字接龙:Mary因为电脑坏掉了而难过。/想到当初得之不易,眼泪就止不住流了出来。,An owner of a computer repair shop happened to be standing nearby.,_,3必要的动作线:看到难过的Mary,走近并说:别难过,我可以帮你修好。,9人物互动:Mary很感激,但表示没有钱支付修理费用。,10人物互动:店主表示:你的善举就足以支付费用。,4结局:Mary惊喜地收到一台新的笔记本。,5升华:善有善报。/善行果真会带来幸运。,1,）Mary赶紧查看小男孩，确认他是否安然无恙。
4、,She quickly checked on the little bo,y,to make sure he was unharmed.,Her body ached,and her clothes were dirty,but she quickly checked the boy to make sure hewas unharmed.,She quickly checked the little boy,relieved to find him unharmed.,分隔线,She brushed off her clothes,grateful the little boy was s
5、afe.,6）小男孩的妈妈跑过来,连声感谢。,The boys mother ran over,thanking Mary over and over again.The boys mother rushed over,thanking Mary repeatedly for her bravery.The boys mother hurried over,hugging her son tightly while repeatedly thanking Mary.,分隔线,The boys mother hurried over,expressing her gratitude with t
6、eary eyes.,1/6Mary站起来,(注意到她装着笔记本的包掉落一旁。,As she stood on her feet,she noticed her bag had fallen nearby her laptop slipping out ontshe noticed her bag lying a few feet away.,But Marys attention was soon drawn to her laptop bag lying on the pavement.,However,Marys mind quickly shifted to her fallen la
7、ptop bag.,分隔线,But Marys joy quickly turned to worry when she noticed her laptop bag lying on the ground.the pavement regained her balance,.,8）Mary捡起书包,打开笔记本检查。(坏掉了。),突出结果,She quickly picked it up,opened it and found it was broken.,She quickl retrieved it and opened it,but,the scree,n,was cracked.,Pi
8、cking it up,she nervously opened the laptop,only to find,the,screen completely,c,racked.,突出过程,She picked it up her hands trembling as she opened it.,She pressed the power button,but it wouldnt turn on.,The screen was shattered,and it wouldnt turn on no matter how hard she tried.,After a few failed a
9、ttempts to turn it on,she knew it was broken.,7）当.的时候,她的心一沉。,Her heart sank when she saw the cracked screen.,s,he noticed the device was damaged.,s,he saw her laptop lying on the pavement with a deep crack in the screen.,s,he saw her laptop lying on the pavement,t,he scree,n,visibly tracked.,Her hea
10、rt skipped a beat,and she hurried to pick it up.,The laptop inside had fallen out and lay on theground,its screen shattered.,With her heart pounding,she picked it up and opened the laptop,only to find the screen shattered.,2）Mary因为电脑坏掉了而难过。/想到当初得之不易,眼泪就止不住流了出来。,难过,Mary felt a wave of sadness wash ov
11、er her,Her eyes filled with tears,Tears,f,illed her eyes,/Tears welled up in her eyes,Sadness welled up inside her,原因,as she thought of how difficult it had been to get the laptop in the first place.knowing how precious the laptop was to her.,/she and her mother couldnt afford a new one.,she knew ho
12、w much the laptop had meant to her and her mother.,分隔线,Mary bit her lip,her eyes filled with tears as she glanced at the broken laptop.,看到难过的Mary,走近并说别难过,我可以帮你修好。,He,w,alked over and gently said,Dont be sad.,Let me fix it for you.He walked over with a kind smile,.,Let me take a look,he said gently.,
13、He approached her,saying,I can help you fix that.“,He approached her with a warm smile.,Dont worry.I can fix that for you,he said.,Seeing her distress,he walked over and said,Dont worry,I can fix that for you.“,Seeing the damage,he walked over and offered to fix it.,Having witnessed the scene,he ste
14、pped forward.,I can help you with that,he offere kindly.,He saw Marys distress and approached her.,Dont be sad,he said gently.,I can fix this for you.He saw what happened and approached her.,I can repair that for you,he said kindly.,He had witnessed the accident and stepped forward.,Dont worry,he sa
15、id,I can repair that for you.,9）Mary很感激,但表示没有钱支付修理费用。,Mary thanked him but explained she couldnt afford it.,Mary was moved but worried.,I cant afford to pay for repairs,she said softly.,Mary shook her head.“I dont have money for repairs,”she said softly explaining she didnt have the money for the re
16、pairs.,Mary was touched but hesitant.I dont have money to pay for the repairs,she confessed,.,Mary hesitated,explaining she couldnt pay for the repairs.,分隔线,Mary explained,embarrassed,that she had no money to pay for a repair.,Mary looked up,surprised but grateful,and explained that she couldnt pay for the repairs.,10）店主表示:你的善举就足以支付费用。,The man/shop owner smiled and said/replied,The man/shop owner smiled kindly/warmly/gently,The man reassured her,The man chuckled softly,saying,Your good deed is p
