押上海卷第九大题英语写作题I 命题探究 I中/考/命/题/预/测上海中考英语作文考情概览上海中考书面表达题贴近学生实际生活，紧密联系热点话题，写作话题真实从而让考生有话可写书面表达情景实用性程度高，上海试题都符合同学们的认知水平和日常生活经历，题目设计关注学生成长，注意培养其良好的道德品质和健全的人格历年中考作文一览：2009一 I want to do sth for my school 记叙2010一 I am proud of myself记叙2011 I am a member o f.记叙+说明2012给焦虑学生的建议议论文2013 How to protect myself议论2014一This time next year记叙2015-I want to invent.记叙+说明2016一I am ready记叙2017一There5s always hope记叙+议论2018一My progress记叙2019 【承接阅读D 段展开】以貌取人,看待谎言2020-Everyone can be special记叙+议论2 0 2 1-请给教导处张老师写封信记叙+议论2 0 2 2-给校报张老师写封邮件记叙+议论2023 写一封邮件说明+理由+修改建议从以上的历年作文来看，上海的英语中考作文趋向于夹叙夹议的文体，所以记叙文和议论文，这两种文体在平时的训练中是要重点关注的。
11 真题 I中/考/真/题/回/顾一、英语写作题（2023年真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于6 0 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）假如你是一名初三学生李华，所在的社区计划在暑假期间组织一个关于“时间管理”（time management）的培训活动请给社区负责人Mr.Wang写一封邮件，要包含以下内容1.说说你是否参加，简要说明理由；2.请对表格中列出的一项内容，提出修改意见建议Training Plan对象13-17岁学生时间7 月每周六上午7：00-10：00地点社区广场内容阅读 总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，要求学生给社区负责人写一封邮件人称和时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“第一人称”为主提示：学生要把握好文章结构，先表明自己的观点，是否参加活动，其次给出二到三个理由，最后提出一个改进建议，切忌虎头蛇尾，遗漏内容写作步骤第一步，引出主题，提出写作目的2第二步，参加活动的理由第三步，提出一个改进建议参考范文01Dear Mr.Wang,Im very glad to hear that our community will hold a community activity about time management.As a middleschool student,Id like to take part in it.The reasons are as follows.Firstly,I will improve my ability of managingthe time properly through this activity so that I can balance my study and hobbies.Additionally,the methods that Iwill learn from this event will help me make full use of time and learn subjects efficiently,which can reduce mystress and make my learning more enjoyable.According to the training plan,I suggest that some excellent studentsshould be invited to share their valuable experience about time management with us.I believe I can benefit a lotfrom their useful tips.I really hope you can accept my advice and I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua 亮点词汇make full use o f 充分利用according to 根据look forward to 期盼 高分句型.so that I can balance my study and hobbies,（so that 结果状语从句）the methods that I will learn from this event will help me make full use of time and learn subjectsefficiently（that引导的定语从句）（3）1 suggest that some excellent students should be invited to share their valuable views about timemanagement.（suggest引导的宾语从句，从句中用被动语态）【参考范文021Dear Mr Wang,I am more than delighted to hear the news that our community will have an activity about time managemenfand I am eager to take part in it.开门点题，阐明观点。
Frankly speaking,my learning efficiency is far from satisfying at present and the time managemenf trainingcan provide me with valuable methods to make full use of time.原因之一，令人信服Besides,it will probably help me plan my daily work in a smarter way so that I can more or less reduce thestress of study.3原因之二，另辟蹊径My suggestion is that besides the form of reading5,you can also invite a professional expert to share hisinsightful opinions about time management5 and have a live interaction with the teenagers.巧妙建议，眼睛一亮。
It may probably be warmly welcomed by us.I will appreciate it a lot if my advice is adopted and I am definitely looking forward to your reply.附：学霸作文Dear Mr.Wang,As a Grade 9 student,Im eager to sign up for your training program,because I badly need some tips on timemanagement.But I have to get up at around 6:15 for breakfast and preparation.Im afraid thafs way too early.Forlack of sleep,we teenagers usually find it challenging to wake up before 7.Besides,there are seniors doingmorning exercise at that time on the square.We cant just drive them away,right?Why not start at 5 p.m.to avoidhot day time and call it a day before 6:30 to have dinner?I hope my suggestions are helpful.Yours,Li Hua二、英语写作题(2022年真题)Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)你校将增设一间学生活动室(student activity ro om),现有以下六种关于活动室用途的设想：读者之家(Reading comer)劳技工坊(Mini workshop)艺体天地(Arts and sports centre)义卖集市(Charity market)科创小屋(High-tech lab)心灵驿站(Heart-to-heart room)学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。
假设你是李华，请给校报张老师写封邮件，表明你最喜欢的：秋季福，并说明理由注意：1.邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分2.照抄阅读语篇不得分答案】Dear Mr Zhang,I am writing to you to share my ideas about the use of the student activity room.I prefer to make it aheart-to-heart room.For some students,they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life,especially thosewho are shy.They can turn to this place for help if there is one.Besides,students are likely to suffer from mental problems.If these problems arent solved well,they may bringbad results.The heart-to-heart room can offer help to these students in time.Thank you for reading my e-mail.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【详解】总体分析 题 材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
时 态：时态为“一般现在时”；提 示：首先选择其中你最喜欢的一种设想，发邮件给校报张老师，并说明理由写作步骤第一步，点明主题，介绍自己喜欢的设想；第二步，介绍喜欢的理由；第三步，表示感谢亮点词汇prefer to do更喜欢做某事turn to 求助于suffer from遭受 高分句型 they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life,especially those who are shy.（含有 when引导的时间状语和who引导的定语从句）They can turn to this place for help if there is one.（if 引导的条件状语从句）三、英语写作题（2021年真题）Write at least 60 words according to the given situ。