查补能力漏洞提升练】专题1 1书面表达(原卷版)挑战中考题直能力漏洞-H(2023辽宁鞍山中考真题)眼睛是心灵的窗户假如你是李平,你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件,说明他近视的原因并提出建议要求:(1)不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息2)根据中文和英文提示,可以适当发挥3)内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐4)词数:80100词开头已给出,不计入总词数近视原因长时间使用电子产品;读书时间过长建议控制使用电子产品时间;养成好习惯(如饮食、做眼保健操)希望.参考词汇:视 力 eyesight;近 视 myopia;电子产品electronic deviceDear Mike,How is it going with you?Yours,Li Ping二 突 破 题 型补能力漏洞_ _-_ _ _ P一、解题策略1.审主题审写作主题,内容和要求2.审人称确定本文的主要人称3.审时态确定本文主要用到的时态,做到有的放矢4.列提纲:三段式以下题为例:假设你是张明你的好朋友李磊上周给你写了一封信,信中和你分享了他上周科学课后对于人工智能AI(artificial intelligence)的一些观点,并表述了他对于人工智能即将代替人类的担忧。
请以此为背景,根据写作提示写一封回信写作提示:1.建议李磊不要过分忧虑;2.在信中阐述人工智能的优点(参考下表):3.在信尾总结你对人工智能的看法人工智能的优点可以代替人类从事危险工作,从而保证人类安全可以代替人类进行单调重复的工作,从而从繁重工作中解放(free v.)自己,有时间去做一些感兴趣的事情在我国科技领域扮演着重要角色,这就是政府更加关注的原因.写作要求:1.要点齐全,不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;语句通顺,书写规范;2.100词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3.文中不得出现考生真实姓名和校名写作思路:一、审题1.审写作主题,内容和要求写作主题:建议李磊不要过分担忧写作内容:根据提示列举人工智能的优点,并发表在自己的看法2.审人称你的观点以第一人称为主3.审时态观点类、看法类的表达一般都是以一般现在时态为主,所以你的观点和建议是以一般现在时态为主二、列提纲:三段式1、第一段:在已给的开头后,将回信的目的提出来,然后引出第二段的内容Im glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss artificial intelligence with you.I dont think youneed to be too worried about it.AI will never completely take the place of human beings(根据已给的背景内容,提出回信的目的).Instead,it has more advantages than disadvantages.The following is my point of viewregarding A I.(引出第二段的内容)2、第二段:根据提示,列举人工智能的优点First of all,AI can be used to do dangerous jobs and keep workers safe.If people dont want to repeat the sameboring and tiring work day after day,they can use AI to help them as well.As a result,people can free themselvesfrom over-work and spend more time on what they are interested in.AI can also help a lot in scientific development.AI plays an important role in the fields of science and technology in China.Thafs why the government is payingmore attention to it.3、第 三 段:自己的看法In my opinion,AI is a double-edged sword.Instead of worrying about its negative effects,you should learnmore about how to use it properly.Do you agree?Im looking forward to you reply.(套路)注意:Every coin has two sides=AI is a double-edged sword;熟 记 模 板补能力漏洞中考英语书面表达常考体裁模板大全0 1邀请信【篇首句】介绍自己,简要说明活动,并邀请对方。
1.Tm Wang Ming from YuWen School,the president of the Student Union.我是来自育文学校的王明,学生会主席2.An English speaking contest of our school will be held on August 6.我彳门学校有场英语演讲比赛 各在 8 月 6号举行3.There will be a party in my garden on Sunday.周日,在我的花园里会举行一场聚会4.I 5d like to invite you to judge it,我想邀请你做它的裁判5.Tm writing to invite you to.我写信是邀请你.6.I wonder if you can come to.我 想 知 道 你 是 否 能 来.7.We sincerely hope you can attend i t.我们真诚希望你能够参力口8.Ifs my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to.我 很 荣 幸 的 邀 请 你.9.Its a pity that you have to go back to America soon.So a farewell party for you will be held in the Sun Club thisSaturday evening.Could you come at 6:00 pm?很遗憾你不久就要回美国了。
所以,这周六,在阳光俱乐部我们会为你举行一个欢送会下午六点你能来吗?【篇中句】介绍活动具体内容,并说明受邀人参加理由1.It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours,during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver theirspeeches.它将于下午两点钟开始,四点钟结束,在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲2.We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.我们将会在上午八点出发,九点到达那里3.During the afternoon,weUl.together.下午,我们会一起.4.Remember to take water and lunch with you.记得带上水和午餐5.By the way,you may take Bus No.322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club.顺便说一下,你可以乘坐你家公寓前的322路公交车,它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
6.I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher,and I,on behalf of our school,sincerelyinvite you to be part of the contest.我知道你的母语是英语,还是一个英语老师我,代表我们学校,真诚的邀请你来比赛现场7.Since you are so eager to improve your English,it will prove to be a great chance.既然你如此渴望提高英语,这会是一个很好的机会8.Im sure that you will enjoy yourself there.我保证你在那里会过得很愉快篇尾句】期待对方接受邀请,并期待对方尽快回复1.Will you be available during that time?Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience,那期间你有空吗?请方便时尽快给我打12345672.Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请好吗?3.We will feel much honored if you could com e.如果你能来,我们会非常荣幸。
4.We are looking forward to your coming.我们期待着你的到来5.I am longing to see you soon.我期待着尽早见到你0 2 建议信【篇首句】说明写信目的1.Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school.Such problems are quite normal.Perhapsthe following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难这样的问题是很正常的可能下面的建议会有一些帮助2.I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month.Perhaps he followingsuggestions are helpful to you.我已经收到了你的来信信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的3.Im writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients(顾客).我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法,以吸引更多顾客。
4.You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese,and I will try to make some suggestionshere.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议,那么我就在这里给出一些建议5.Im very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life.Here are a fewsuggestions.很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活下面是我的一些建议6.Im very glad to have received your e-mail.Now Im writin。