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1、Topic RevisionUnit 2 Ill help clean up the city park 单单元话题复习写作课元话题复习写作课volunteersCheer up sick childrenClean up the city parksWork in an old peoples homeGive out some old booksHelp kids with homeworkId like to cheer up sick kids in the hospitalsing and dance,tell stories,cook some delicious food,I w
2、ould like tobecause Im strong inId like to visitvisit old people at the old peoples home old people at the old peoples homeclean their roomsread newspaperchat with old peopleI could volunteer my time toBecause caring for old people is our Chinese tradition.Id like to help clean up the city parkspick
3、 up the rubbishsweep the roadsI could helpthen the world will be better and better.Id like to help students in the schoolhelping students with their schoolworkI love , I want to put this love to good use bypainting volunteering in an after-school study programCan you write?Task:如果你有机会成为一名志愿者去贡献爱心，你愿
4、意帮助别如果你有机会成为一名志愿者去贡献爱心，你愿意帮助别人吗？你会选择做什么工作？为什么？怎么做？写一篇短文人吗？你会选择做什么工作？为什么？怎么做？写一篇短文, 80个词左右。个词左右。(审审)中考中考第一档（第一档（13-15分）分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（第二档（10-12分）分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思达。达。第三档（第三档（7-9分）分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，
5、语言错误较多，但句子基本读。读。 第四档（第四档（4-6分）分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子读。读。 第五档（第五档（1-3分）分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。 List the key points（列文章要点）（列文章要点）Opening: （开头）（开头）tell the main ideaI would like to cheer up sick kids in the hospital.Body: （主体）（主体） how to do i
6、tI would like to sing for kids.I would like to help them with their homework.I will set up a volunteer project.Ending: （结尾）（结尾）sum upI will be a great volunteer.Good model: The old saying “Many hands make light work” reminds us that we can try to help others in need. I like helping people. If I have
7、 a chance to be a volunteer, I would like to go to hospital and cheer up the sick kids. First of all, I like singing, I want to put this love to good use by singing. Whats more, I would like to help them with their homework. Because I am good at teaching. Finally, I could volunteer my time to set up
8、 a volunteer project to help them. I will hand out some ads to call more people to join me. If everyone can share a little love, the world will be better and better! Judge by yourself第一档（第一档（13-1513-15分）分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（第二档（10-1210-12分）分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响
9、意思表信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。达。第三档（第三档（7-97-9分）分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（第四档（4-64-6分）分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（第五档（1-31-3分）分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。 We learn: 1. How to offer help. 2. How to help people in need. If everyone share a little love , the world will be better!1.Review the whole lesson2.Write a composition:How to be a great volunteer?Thank you Goodbye !
