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1、2014初一英语复习初一英语复习专题专题 Unit4theimportanceoftreesUnit 1 a person you love Unit 1 a person you love Unit 2 about travellingUnit 2 about travellingUnit 3 pets dogs Unit 3 pets dogs Unit 4 plant trees Unit 4 plant trees 年龄，外貌特点，职业高矮肥瘦、头发、衣着性格特征和兴趣爱好quietactiveshyoutgoingCleversmarthoneststrict兴趣：唱歌、跳舞、画画、
2、听音乐、看电影爱好：运动、旅游、交友、电脑游戏、阅读你对他（她）的评价1hardworkinglovely2friendlynicesuccessfulUnit1apersonIlove写你熟悉的一个人 My father I love my father. He is tall and strong. He has short and black hair. His eyes are very big and bright.My father is a kind and brave man. He likes telling jokes. He is kind to others and o
3、ften helps others. My father is a policeman. He is good at catching thieves. He goes to work early everyday. He sometimes works all day and all night. My father My father is strict about my studies. He takes care of my family and he often takes us to parks in his free time. He is a good father. I lo
4、ve my father very much. My mother My mother is 43 years old. She is short and a little fat. She has long hair and wears a pair of glasses. My mother is a Chinese teacher. She loves her students , but she is strict with them. she goes to work early everyday. she sometimes works all day and all night.
5、 She is a good teacher. My mother is hardworking . I love her. 地点：北京位于中国北部，是一座历史悠久的城市。名胜古迹：特色美食BeijingRoastduck北京烤鸭ForbiddenCity(紫禁城）TheGreatWall(长城）TheSummerPalace(颐和园)感想12Unit2travelling写关于旅游的作文 Beijing is callingBeijing is the capital of China. It is a beautiful city with a long history.There are
6、 a lot of famous places of interest in Beijing. You can go to visitthe ForbiddenCity,itisbigandbeautiful.Youwillloveit.Ifyoulikedoingsport,youcangotoclimbTheGreatWall.YoucanalsoenjoythesightseeingintheSummerPalace. Beijing is calling There are a lot of delicious food in Beijing. Such as the Roast Du
7、ck. It is very famous. Beijing is calling you, you will enjoy your trip. Why not come to visit Beijing? Pets:Dogs人们喜欢养宠物，例如人们对狗的看法狗能为人类做很多事例如：帮警察抓坏人；看家和看护孩子；陪伴老人等1养宠物不容易，要花费大量的时间和金钱；2狗是人类的朋友，我们不能遗弃它们；感想我们应该对狗关怀和爱护，把它们看出家庭的一员。Unit3animals写关于动物的作文 Dogs are our friendsMany people like keeping pets, suc
8、h as cats, dogs and so on.It is not easy for us to keep pets. We need to spend a lot of time and money taking care of pets. Pets are our friends. We cant give them up.Dogs are helpful to us. For example, some dogs can help policemen catch bad men, dogs can make us happy, dogs can care about kids and
9、 make old people not feel lonely. We should be friendly to our pets. And see them as our family members.Planttrees树木的重要性树木在很多方面帮助了人类；树木为人类提供了什么1净化空气2吸收有毒气体释放氧气3对抗空气污染感想我们应该采取什么措施去保护树木Unit4trees写关于植物的作文内容要点内容要点第一：树木的作用第一：树木的作用第二：树木给我们提供了什么第二：树木给我们提供了什么第三：我们应该如何保护树木第三：我们应该如何保护树木 词汇巩固词汇巩固Keep+adj take
10、in producefight against make+adj Come from getfromA lot of furnitureis made of wood How do trees help us?Trees help us in many ways.1. Trees keep the air cool and clean.2. Trees take in harmful gas.3. Trees produce oxygen for us to breathe4. Trees fight against air pollution.What can we get from tre
11、es?Trees make our lives more convenient.1. We can get paper and pencils from tree.2. We can get fruit and oil from trees.3. Tea comes from the leaves of trees.4. A lot of the furniture is made of wood.What we should do to protect trees? it is important for us to protect trees.1. We should stop cutti
12、ng down trees.2. We should plant more new trees. Trees are very important in our lives. Trees help us in many ways. First, they keep the air cool and clean; second, they take in harmful gas and produce oxygen for us to breathe; third, they fight against air pollution. So, trees make our environment
13、more beautiful. Trees also make our lives more convenient. We can get paper and pencils from trees; we can get fruit and oil from trees. Tea comes from the leavesof trees. A lot of the furniture is made of Trees. so, it is important for us to protect Trees. We should stop cutting down trees,We shoul
14、d plant more new trees, and our environment will become more and morebeautiful.The Useful Sentence Treeshelpusinmanyways.TreestakeinandproduceWecangetfromtrees.Alotoffurnitureismadeofwood.Itisimportantforustoprotecttrees.Treesmakeourlivesmoreconvenient.fightagainstairpollution Trees are really impor
15、tant to people.They are helpful to us in many differentways. First, trees can make the environment more beautiful. When we see all the green trees around us, wellbe happier. Trees can also take in harmful gases and make the air fresh. Fresh airis good for our health. Second, we can usewood to make a
16、 lot of things. For example,A lot of furniture is made of wood. Third,trees can give us different food. Do you know many kinds of fruits come from trees? Trees help us a lot, so it is important for us to protect them. If we cut down trees, we should plant more new ones. 答题技巧1、仔细审题，吃透要求。对题目所提供的信息，一定要
17、认真分析，审题中要确定（1）有几个要点有几个要点(全部要点写齐）全部要点写齐）（2）要用哪些短语，习语和句型来表达要用哪些短语，习语和句型来表达（3）时态和人称）时态和人称（4）过渡词用什么过渡词用什么。例如 and, but, soFirst, second, third, finally, at last还有:弄清楚该题目究竟要表达什么，把提供的汉语提示多读几遍，理解透它的要求。2、明确内容，把握要点。书面表达有一个特点，即要求考生表达的内容，在提示中都已交待清楚，我们在做题时必须明确这些内容，把握住全部要点、理清脉络，既不能无中生有，写与主题无关的内容，更不能漏掉要点。考试时时间紧迫，但
18、至少也要打个草稿，做到细心、细致，确保得分。3、组织语言，连句成篇。这是整个写作过程的关键环节。要围绕审题时确定的要点，按一定的顺序扩写。此时，应遵循以下几个原则：（1）尽量运用已学过的最基础的英语词汇。由于这些词汇是熟悉的而且是常用的，不易出错。2）尽量多用简单句，少用复合句；多用短句，少用长句。语言要准确，符合英语习惯，避免汉语式的英语。尽量套用基本句型，要写自己最熟悉最有把握的句子，减少时态和语言方面的错误。（3）不要硬译不要硬译。 书面表达不同于汉译英，它有较大的灵活性，一个要点的表达方式并非是唯一的，只要你的意思表达明确，用词正确，都可得分。也就是说遇到自己不熟悉的词、词语时，要学会
19、变通，变难为易，一句话正说不行，反过来说，如果还不行，再换一种方式。如：我花了100元钱买了一件衬衫，可以用take或pay或spend或cost等四个动词来表达。（4）注意上下文的衔接。上下文过渡，句子之间要加上必要的过渡句或连词，才能使结构紧凑。（5）符合要求。要控制字数，字迹工整，卷面整洁，段落分明，一气呵成。4、全面检查，认真修改。 许多学生认为文章写完后，就万事大吉了。殊不知，往往正是由于忽略这一步，将会失去即将到手的分数。在初稿完成后，应通读全文，进行细心的检查：（1）信息点是否齐全？（2）单词是否有拼写错误？（3）时态、主谓一致，名词单复数，词组搭配是否有误？（4）字数是否符合要求？（5）标点符号是否规范，清晰等。以上步骤归纳为写作四步法:1审2写3连4改书面表达做得好与坏，主要靠平时功夫，靠基本功。但若能掌握一定的方法，定能充分发挥自己的水平，取得较好的成绩。评分标准内容分6分所有信息点齐全，没有遗漏准确分6分没有语法或拼写错误流畅分3分有分段和运用连词Dogs你对狗的评价12Unit3Dogs写关于动物的作文Homework:1.Finishthepaperandwritealettertomeontheexercisebook.2.ReviewtheusagesofVerbanddotherelatedexercise
