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1、Writing Lesson 写作训练写作训练 楚雄紫溪中学楚雄紫溪中学 苏丽华苏丽华 2013年年3月月 20132013年中考年中考专题复习专题复习 中考英语书面表达中考英语书面表达 书面表达是中考题的重要题型，分值较高，占总分的书面表达是中考题的重要题型，分值较高，占总分的10%。根据。根据英语新课程标准英语新课程标准的要求，初中阶段英语的要求，初中阶段英语书面表达主要是综合考查考生书面表达主要是综合考查考生的以下的以下两方面内容：两方面内容：1.知识方面知识方面： 在写作过程中熟练运用以下基础知识：在写作过程中熟练运用以下基础知识：（1）常用）常用时态时态 （2）主要）主要句型句型 （
2、3）固定短语固定短语（4）主要）主要从句从句 （5）常用）常用连词连词 2. 能力方面能力方面：（1）观察观察能力（能力（2）思维能力（思维能力（3）运用运用语言知识的能力语言知识的能力 （4）用英语）用英语组词造句、连句成篇组词造句、连句成篇的能力（的能力（5）书写书写能力能力2010-2012年中考英语书面表达题分析年中考英语书面表达题分析年份年份 题题 目目 体体 裁裁 内内 容容 主体时态主体时态2010楚雄楚雄州中州中考考Share My Happiness /Sadness with Others记叙文记叙文 个人经历个人经历（写一件你（写一件你经经历过的事历过的事） 一般过去时一
3、般过去时2011八地八地联考联考 I Am Not a Child Any More2012八地八地联考联考The Best Moment in My Memory表达情感表达情感记事记事一般过去时一般过去时近几年中考作文发展趋向及答题要求近几年中考作文发展趋向及答题要求1.作文词数增加作文词数增加,要求要求80100个词，即个词，即10-15句句话，切忌画蛇添足；话，切忌画蛇添足；2.近几年只局限于命题作文近几年只局限于命题作文, 而且是通过记叙某而且是通过记叙某一件事来表达真实情感，感悟人生的哲理；一件事来表达真实情感，感悟人生的哲理；3. 文章的表达不局限于一种时态；文章的表达不局限于一
4、种时态；4.句子结构的难度增加句子结构的难度增加, 要求会使用一定比例的要求会使用一定比例的复合句和适当的过渡词复合句和适当的过渡词, 使段落层次分明，使段落层次分明，从而提高文章的档次；从而提高文章的档次；5.对卷面整洁和书写规范有一定的要求。对卷面整洁和书写规范有一定的要求。楚楚雄雄市市统统测测八八年年级级满满分分作作文文2012年年I Love 一一 档档 ( 8 - 10 分分)内容内容切题切题、层次清楚层次清楚、语言语言流畅、流畅、 基本基本无语言无语言错误错误；二二 档档（6 - 7分）内容切题、层次比较清分）内容切题、层次比较清楚、语言比较流畅、语言表达错误较少；楚、语言比较流畅
5、、语言表达错误较少；三三 档档（4 - 5分）内容基本切题、层次不分）内容基本切题、层次不够分明、语言表达较多错误；够分明、语言表达较多错误；四四 档档 ( 1 - 3 分分)有有一定内容、但语言表一定内容、但语言表达错误较多。达错误较多。 (注意：抄袭卷中阅读材料的，抄袭部分不给分。)中考满分作文的评分标准中考满分作文的评分标准第三节书面表达(满分l5分)I Am Not a Child Any More 提示：在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮!但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么?是关心、帮助同学?是体贴、理解父母?是感恩、回报亲朋师长?还是成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以I Am Not a
6、Child Any More”为题记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已不再是一个小孩。20112011年八地联考书面表达真题展示年八地联考书面表达真题展示I Am Not a Child Any More I am a 16-year-old girl now. I have changed a lot. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am stronger and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to understand a
7、nd care about others. It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didnt know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. After supper, I found they were too tired,
8、I got hot water for them. When my mother put her feet into the water, with tears in her eyes, she said: “Dear, you have grown up.” It was the first time that I cared about my parents. I realized I was not a child any more.中考满分范文展示中考满分范文展示范文范文 “骨架骨架” 常用常用句型等句型等第一句：I am now. I have changed a lot. 第二句：
9、I used to be . But now, I am .第三句：The most important thing is that I have 第四句：It was a . When I So I . 第五句：I didnt know until 第六句：They both said, although it. 第七句：After supper, I found, I. 第八句：When , with, she said: “.”第九句：It was the first time that I. 第十句：I realized I was .解密中考满分作文高分技巧解密中考满分作文高分技巧中
10、考英语书面表达中考英语书面表达“五步曲五步曲”看看（Look）想想（Think）列列（Rank）连连（Link）美美（Beautify）审题抓点审题抓点确定体裁确定体裁 把握时态把握时态构思文路构思文路提炼要点提炼要点草拟提纲草拟提纲 斟酌词句斟酌词句连句成文连句成文长短交替长短交替亮点润色亮点润色规范誊写规范誊写留好印象留好印象从句适量从句适量高分有望高分有望3、一般将来时、一般将来时表达想法和愿望表达想法和愿望1、一般过去时、一般过去时记叙已发生的事情记叙已发生的事情技巧一：用准三种时态技巧一：用准三种时态2、一般现在时、一般现在时描写人或事物描写人或事物I still remember,
11、 when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn well.How time flies! But I will never forget one thing that impressed me very much.In my life, there are so many wonderful memories that make me unforgettable.I grow up day by day.中考英语书面表达高分技巧中考英语书面表达高分技巧五个五个“三三”技巧二：确定关键词句技巧二：确定关键词句 用
12、对用对三种句型三种句型（表示人或事物的身份、特征、（表示人或事物的身份、特征、形状等）形状等）句型句型3：主语：主语+动词动词+宾语宾语句型句型2 2：主主+系系(am/ is /are)+表表(n./ adj. /num.)句型句型1 1：主主+谓谓It is the most unforgettable thing.Teachers smile was like a spring wind.She had a heart-to-heart with me.I always remember this thing . I grow up.技巧三：列出提纲技巧三：列出提纲 用上三个从句用上三个
13、从句1、状语从句状语从句2、定语从句定语从句3、宾宾语从句语从句I will try my best to help others when they are in trouble. But I will never forget one thing that impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn well.I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. 技巧四技
14、巧四：用好三类连词将用好三类连词将“三段式三段式” 作文连作文连段成文段成文1、表转折的连词、表转折的连词: but , although , however2、表因果的连词、表因果的连词: because, so3、表顺序的连词、表顺序的连词: at first , to begin with , then , later , at lastBeginning （23句话）句话）“凤头凤头”Body （68句话）句话）“猪肚猪肚”Ending （23句话）句话） “豹尾豹尾”A. “三段式三段式” A. 三类连词三类连词 技巧五：技巧五：凸显三处亮点凸显三处亮点 美化文章美化文章 1、The
15、re + be + 物物 + 地地 / + 事事 + 时时2、tooto/ sothat3、Its + adj.+ for Sb.+ to do Sth. /I find it +adj. to do sth.In my life, there are so many wonderful memories that make me unforgettable. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn well. Teachers smile was like a spr
16、ing wind, so gentle that I was deeply moved. 提示：人生中会有很多提示：人生中会有很多令人令人难难忘的忘的人和事人和事，给给你留下了很多你留下了很多挥挥之不去的之不去的回回忆忆，让让你咀嚼，你咀嚼，让让你回味。或你回味。或许许是是同学、朋友同学、朋友间间的互助和支持的互助和支持, ,父母的关父母的关心和照心和照顾顾, ,老老师师的鼓励与帮助的鼓励与帮助, ,又或是又或是你我你我身身边边的的一次次一次次感感动动这这一切都一切都会令我会令我们记忆们记忆犹新，犹新，难难以忘以忘怀怀。请请以以“An Unforgettable ThingAn Unforge
17、ttable Thing”为话为话题题，用英，用英语语写一篇不少于写一篇不少于8080词词的短文，的短文，记记叙一件叙一件值值得你回得你回忆忆的的事事，镌镌刻刻这这美美好的瞬好的瞬间间。An Unforgettable Thing备备考考演演练练看看（Look）想想（Think）列列（Rank）连连（Link）美美（Beautify）审题抓点审题抓点确定体裁确定体裁 把握时态把握时态构思文路构思文路提炼要点提炼要点草拟提纲草拟提纲 斟酌词句斟酌词句连句成文连句成文长短交替长短交替亮点润色亮点润色规范誊写规范誊写留好印象留好印象从句适量从句适量高分有望高分有望请用请用“五步曲、三段式五步曲、三段
18、式”完成写作完成写作记叙文记叙文一般过去时态一般过去时态 wordssentencesparagrapharticle记记叙一件叙一件值值得你回得你回忆忆的的事事或或许许是是同学、朋友同学、朋友间间的互助和支持的互助和支持, ,父母的父母的关心和照关心和照顾顾, ,老老师师的鼓的鼓励与帮助励与帮助, ,又或是你我又或是你我身身边边的的一次次一次次感感动动rememberhave a heart-to-heart talkhappinessgentlegrow upsmileshare withunforgettableluckyencouragewonderfulmakeimpressforg
19、etmemoriesbe eager to do (渴望做)discusswrite shareAn Unforgettable thinglearn frombecome interested intry my best to be full ofWhats the topic? 5 5人一组进行讨论，迅速完成以下任务：人一组进行讨论，迅速完成以下任务：Step 1 (1) 各自在小卡纸上写出你认为最好的开头句和结句；各自在小卡纸上写出你认为最好的开头句和结句；(2) 组内或组间交互；组内或组间交互；(3) 各组代表在黑板上展示本组收集的精彩首、尾句。各组代表在黑板上展示本组收集的精彩首、尾
20、句。Step 2 (1) 组内讨论，选定一个事件，简要写出关键词或句；组内讨论，选定一个事件，简要写出关键词或句；(2) 写出正文初稿，修改完善，工整誊写在大卡纸上；写出正文初稿，修改完善，工整誊写在大卡纸上；(3) 各组发言人交流发言。各组发言人交流发言。Wonderful sentencesBeginning 开头句开头句 1. How time flies,I grow up day by day . 2. In our lives , there are so many wonderful memories that make us unforgettable. 1.For me, i
21、ts the most unforgettable thing. 2.I always remember the thing in my heart.Ending 结尾句结尾句Body 中间句中间句 An Unforgettable ThingHow time flies! I grow up day by day. In my life, there are so many wonderful memories that make me unforgettable. But I will never forget one thing that impressed me very much.
22、I am eager to share my unforgettable thing with you.主题句重复关键词重复关键词One possible version :Beginning (首段首段) I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn well. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldnt do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teac
23、her found my problem, with a gentle smile, she had a heart-to-heart talk with me about how to learn English well. Teachers smile was like a spring wind, so gentle that I was deeply moved. At that moment, happiness was from the bottom of heart. Every time I wanted to give up , she encouraged me with
24、the brightest smile. 连接词连接词Body （正文）（正文）It made me try my best again. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I become interested in English and good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. Also, Ive learned a lot from her. I will try my best to help others when th
25、ey are in trouble. For me, It is the most unforgettable thing. I always remember the thing in my heart. Whenever I remember this thing, my heart is full of happiness and courage. Ending （尾段）（尾段）再次点题再次点题并抒发情感并抒发情感An Unforgettable Thing How time flies! I grow up day by day. In my life, there are so ma
26、ny wonderful memories that make me unforgettable. But I will never forget one thing that impressed me very much. I am eager to share my unforgettable thing with you. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn well. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldnt d
27、o well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, with a gentle smile, she had a heart-to-heart talk with me about how to learn English well. Teachers smile was like a spring wind, so gentle that I was deeply moved. At that moment, happiness was from the bottom of h
28、eart. Every time I wanted to give up , she encouraged me with the brightest smile. It made me try my best again. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I become interested in English and good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. Also, Ive learned a lot from her. I will try my best to help others when they are in trouble. For me, its the most unforgettable thing. I always remember the thing in my heart. Whenever I remember this thing, my heart is full of happiness and courage. 范文展示范文展示 Thank you !Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. 心之所愿，无事不成。
