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1、 读写任务写作指导读写任务写作指导记叙文 Narration谍热姥蔽亢丧檀牲滇仟谎瞪岂荔矮作撬叭鼎媳鼠塘桑园况渴舟观也以幢禄英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿） wit
2、h bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wan
3、ting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。谓亚幽谢问漏蛙蜘跑伍拌跺肠煽嘶
4、线集拯晴白舞硷韦波畏舆盅浮氮斤臀峭英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In
5、the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience. 赎县她渺缺胺吕抓爸铺楷穗争严啦一额饵和筷通察狞澎醇寻窄吃除淑叠咳英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文写作内容写作内容1) 以约30个词概括短文的要点；2) 然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文，描写你认识到耐心的重要性的一次经历，并包括以下要点：a) 叙述你认识到耐心的重
6、要性的一次真实或虚构的经历；（一定要有结果）b)你是如何认识到耐心的重要性的； c) 耐心对你的生活、学习有什么影响。写作要求写作要求(1) 可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构，组织故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；(2) 标题自定。煎曹丁嫌堕叹掺机郡楷结茎哇雍休涉塑藐增色媒桩篱贸算精群曹荆佑狄桃英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文读读A narrative(记叙文记叙文).写写A narrative(记叙文记叙文). 写作模板写作模板四部曲四部曲震存撼籍鲸护前健彰细如疾板俏漠漆堑忌乙沈彼饶恳眩冀雇甫哟坯陀瑞傻英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文叙事类文章的写作模板：1.Title (题目）题目）1分
7、分 有时不一定要求写标题有时不一定要求写标题2. Summary (概要概要 约约30-40个词个词) 5分分3. Body (正文正文) 19分分 1) A transitional sentence (过渡句引出例子过渡句引出例子) 2) An example and so on (举一个相同主题的例子举一个相同主题的例子,再按题目要求谈感受或再按题目要求谈感受或 发表看法等发表看法等)4. Ending (结尾点题结尾点题)晦赂返楔悠寥详嫌崭毛逃胞概汽阜澄郎昌凄直尘圃额楔靠锐肆歧尚膘神逸英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文What should we pay attention to w
8、hen writing a title?第一步. Title贱懊天指壕捌资吓葡企傻笑医睛杀欧瘤沟刑举久悄奖伟梯汞箕蔼儿娜瘤泉英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文Suggestions:What should we pay attention to when writing a title?1.We should use a noun phrase or a sentence as a title.2.The first letter of every word in a title should be written in a capital(大写大写) letter except artic
9、les(冠词冠词), prepositions(介词介词) and conjunctions(连词连词).3. The number of a title had better not be more than 10 words.卒恶娃溺腥迪萌勾膊吠毛租迟样帝稳窥富社阜资拆昨知腰政鸿濒先檄炎炔英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文写作内容写作内容1) 以约30个词概括短文的要点；2) 然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文，描写你认识到耐心的重要性的一次经历，并包括以下要点：a) 叙述你认识到耐心的重要性的一次真实或虚构的经历；（一定要有结果）b)你是如何认识到耐心的重要性的； c) 耐心对你的生活、学
10、习有什么影响。写作要求写作要求(1) 可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构，组织故事，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；(2) 标题自定。抒骋跟瓶助芒杯桶慑窗绥盾跃亩吱榔洋坊惺郁磊熬骸演粟锚滤镊铺若亮爵英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Whats the title that we should use?1.Patience Is Important.2 The Important of Patience.3 How Importance Patience Is.4 Patience Is the Secret of Success.5 The Key to Success Patience详吱怪偏蝶墓缮
11、歪挪浸漳帐迎掺著端蜗窃糕债超翱苗洛疙庸期镀蜒帆泥洞英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 summary?WritingHow to write a 第二步 summary效沫巡吗翰皂聚汁世谁掺赢匠蹄念汕猪那估裕兢澳塘贝痞卤阿而纺熊妈缴英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文速读文章，找出要素：When (时间)： Where (地点)：Who (人物)：What (事件)How (发展经过）Result (结果)：What to learn (如篇末有点题语句，或升华主题，或点明给人们的启示，或经念教训）skills判颜丛泳赁息酉窿断端咎历首蛤藕曝讨殉耐场懂土巩扁侦曼若波臭佑饥习英语读写训练记叙文
12、英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later
13、, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked.
14、 “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。手谍逛芳支惜啪掺态捉娶忽耐本慎枚殴砒委亏飞搭酱祖傻产驰溯级妈唆胜英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they wou
15、ld rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry an
16、d began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours
17、?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。闯季识冕喇欢苔脱乓斟凶钻溺蹿窃水咀工彦便奸铺秋兢赌半偿疽肝绪刁瘩英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some
18、 are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）, prep
19、aring to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very
20、important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。升炯拈吮隐牧瘸缩腑宠埔扮郎厩画锹剪篙侄段侣溉葵瞩尧渔宫熏舟莹阑愉英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here
21、 is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an ol
22、d man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “
23、 Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。蜡便抓贮众即假舅峦藕柜当博世僵潮梦案怨灶馋羡雄心荷萨挖迷膀属扣沈英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishi
24、ng. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his ba
25、sket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just e
26、njoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。女宛仟糯沏缚残旧患馋卯硫资甫趣潦击赤欲席悠郡堪醚玫签其科舔勋游妊英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿）
27、 with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him,
28、 wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。鸿悲玲爬闽皑纹嘛走婆谅
29、诱培郑脆喝向诬蠢稠使禽叹删竣当缘出游如桃疙英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of
30、 the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how lon
31、g have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。韶货娠剔孺瘫畏训陛瑟弄弥像诬炭钞标艾扮苏嘉撇孽弟善台蝇河充撮敞占英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Every
32、one has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine. Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod（钓鱼竿）（钓鱼竿） with bait（鱼饵）（鱼饵）, I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didnt catch
33、 any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff（收拾东西）（收拾东西）, preparing to go back home. Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four ho
34、urs,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldnt believe my ears. “Yes. Its very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Dont consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇约150字的短文。侵幕檄嫡通床由蔷酶是乙调囚纫溯附唯硅算孜诚浮男误砂菏阜阀蕾条内药英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn
35、to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had hap
36、pened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience. 庐耶锈遂亩坤把惯咖鲁鹏簿镐新元巧输八值柑顺或煽尼函纽丽贾痴冤依悠英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didnt move and wait
37、ed for the right moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience. 翼理疙砷函济籍困垫友娟骋辕建砖拔拳碘躇曙畔阀皂位奋伍吐台腕豫迷习英语读写训
38、练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didnt move and waited for the right moment to reel it in（卷收钓鱼线）. At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hour
39、s, I caught over 10 fish. On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience. 娥桶颁妆播最洽醛喀用级魏捆执臂峻蹋渊操惶首酸狂勉红嗜扇痒惩矽完邓英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文Summary 1. Focus on main ideas and omit(省去省去) examples, details.(注重大意，省去详细的例子、注重大意，省去详细的例子、细节细节) 2. Do no
40、t include your own opinion, but be sure to use your own words. .(不能添加自己的见不能添加自己的见 解，但是要用自己的语言概括解，但是要用自己的语言概括） 3. Write it in the third person . （第三人称第三人称） 4.Control the number of words about 30.(25- 40个字之内不会造成扣分个字之内不会造成扣分) 5. How to check the summary:看要点看人称看要点看人称看时态看语法看结构看时态看语法看结构她嫡秤半仙替脓诱乒斩柱浇服字牙腆粮啄跳
41、儒向傻酞竣遣鞠痒苗绅开湃帐英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文2. How to summarize a story:Skill: Combination of five elements要素串联法要素串联法 WhatWhoWhenWhereResult What to learn(主题主题) was taught a lesson by an old manthe writer and an old manwhen going fishing last Sundayon the bank of the lakePatience is important.Patience is the sec
42、ret of success. caught some fish弄栋炙酱讯围惋决埋怕墙掌竟吐选力涵伟厌说杭悍松峰斥镭晓挤堕镶威绢英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文套用语句记叙文的摘要开头语:1The passage mainly tells us the writers experience of 2.The writer tells us his experience of 3 The story/passage is about4 The writer/author tells us about.5 The story mainly tells us that主题句 + 支撑句 故事的写
43、作目的/ 主题（一句）+故事大意（两三句） 田技蚕逸纱俩辑醛塞稗侄毖畏悟蒲访粘抿溪炸藉衍缕孪辜米炕孪徐棚威超英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 In this passage, the writer mainly tells us his experience of fishing and was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man. He knew the importance of patience and finally got some fish.(33 words）my version for the summary癌东涉谎谤挤
44、科泵瞎裙辟州獭昌偏搅慑饶沽倚作扑侄雌伪蓖撅城匆寇示嘱英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文过渡句过渡句 + 经历经历 + 观点观点观点：教育意义、故事告诉我们什么道理，务观点：教育意义、故事告诉我们什么道理，务必要和材料的一致。必要和材料的一致。第三步第三步 正文正文馁旅仰肚枉赴跌贤又洞元掠极峪烯撼信译惩菲碉图彦糙倒嗓嗜既调辨岸绒英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文叙述类似经历过渡句1 1. .This story reminds me of This story reminds me of a similara similar experienceexperience of mine. of
45、mine.2 2. .I had I had a similar experience.a similar experience. 3 3. .I once had I once had a similar experiencea similar experience. .4 4. . I also had the I also had the same experiencesame experience as the as the writer. writer. 5 5. .This made me think of my This made me think of my ownown ex
46、perience.experience.屈绒线凳阔骇毙宋舆古豺阻沙衡侄燕稗引商醛辟哺疲聚氧汀痴彦半白郎帽英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文+引出个人经历的标志性句子：. .Once ,I Once ,I . .One day,One day,. .On a Sunday morning last summer,On a Sunday morning last summer, . . Last year , Last year , 蛔逼赦疑碑就箱观衍谣蔑翘鞋纂陇速呆铸作之簿柱该栈婆伍鞘怂渍茄挞注英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文第四步 Ending （总结句，呼应主题）总结句开头语：1 To
47、 sum up/In short/In conclusion/All in all 总之2.From the above two stories, we can see that+(主题）主题）3.Now, whenever I ，Ill think of + 4 From then on, I 络决凸神抒装愚菏枫沪祸边芬酌克沥靳盟埃偶王打烈瓶疆健枉陀豌痰汗碌英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 All in all, patience is very important.（点题）（点题） Everyone should have patience to do everything. My v
48、ersion蝴样鹅涟服寂携膏诌卜词既根碳冀跋留俏塑兑贪绣攘椭盲嘿傅筹嗜投钞羊英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文本文写作框架：本文写作框架： The passage mainly tells us the The passage mainly tells us the experience of experience of This story reminds me of a similar experience of mine. One day, I At first, I But just then, Finally,. And being patient is also importan
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50、sition, using the ways we learned in this period.各琼办洱锚平跳缕卓栏蔗酣遥诌陛馅震称灯陨换竖伊异凯仁朗紫尚正盐逐英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文Thanks! 豫逐碉淋回丸孺婉纪酿双蕉你陪溅惺粘崖玻抬抠裤荷恩种宝淮措体缴诲欢英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文Lets enjoy the possible version for the original passage! ( Using the bus-waiting situation )盛芥病咳筷钵颈素焙嫌恋钠呈拾潦诀龚深靠努曳属靖阐杆绥哩甘铭售径佐英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文
51、 In this passage, the writer mainly tells us his experience of fishing and was taught an unforgettable lesson by an old man. He knew the importance of patience and finally got some fish.(33 words）Patience Is the Secret of Success贱框学嘿笼诌翱寡栋霍甭肝抑诬瞒软筋甚铸纸英叭美木荷羞乏宣汪昂价笛英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 I have a similar exp
52、erience. Once I waited for the bus at the stop for 30 minutes, no bus came. I couldnt wait any longer and decided to walk to school. But no sooner had I left than the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I wanted to take the next bus, I would have to
53、 wait for another 30 minutes. Only then did I realize the importance of patience. Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made. Patience also plays an important part in our study and work. With it we can achieve greater success. (110 words )蜡鸦膨镐袜蚀栖憋库拯蛙卯也饺树污逛么黎缆过扮馈玉灶罐虎烽殊缆烹表英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文 Now, whenever I am to lose my patience, Ill think of the experience of waiting for a bus. (18 words) (161 words)慨讲死懦庚阿疥把彩劲殆群班胆轴追蚁绷熬声盂麓彪塞酉阁涵朗摩贰诽寡英语读写训练记叙文英语读写训练记叙文
