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1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其并在其下面写出该加的词。下面写出该加的词。删除删除:把多余的词用斜线把多余的词用斜线()划掉。划掉。修改修改:在错的词下画一横线在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写并在该词下面写出修改后的词。出修改后的词。注意注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词每
2、处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改只允许修改10处处,多者多者(从第从第11处起处起)不计分。不计分。(一)(一)OnedayLiMingcaughtalittlebird.Hetieditwiththepieceofthreadandplayedithappily.Atthattime,heseesalittlegirlcryingbytheroadsides.Apolicemansawher,cameoverandaskedherhowshewascryingandwhereherhomewas.Whenhelearnedaboutthatthegirlhadgotlostandhe
3、waslookingforhermother,hedecidedtoleadthegirlbackhome.SeethisLiMingthoughtthelittlebirdalsohaditsmotherandheshouldsetthelittlebirdfreelysothatitcouldbewithitsmotheragain.ThenLiMinguntiedthethreadbutthelittlebirdflewtothebluesky.(二)(二)OneeveningafterworkJohndroveawayhissecretaryhomebecauseshefailstos
4、tarthercar.Notwanttobotherhiswife,Maureen,hedecidednottomentionittoher.Laterthatnight,JohnandMaureenwasdrivingouttoeatwhenJohnspottedahighheeledshoehidunderthepassengerhighheeledshoehidunderthepassengerseat.Pointingtoanythingoutofthepassengerwindowtodistracthiswife,hepickeduptheshoeandtosseditoutofh
5、erwindow.Theyarrivedintherestaurantashorttimelater.Whentheywereabouttogetoutofcar,Maureenenquired,“John,haveyouseenmyothershoes?”(三)(三)IbringRosehomefiveyearsago.MyneighborMrs.Blackfellinlovewithherimmediateshesawher.Shewassuchlovelydog,afterall.RosealsoseemedtolikeMrs.Black.Twoyearsago,however,Mrs.
6、Blackgotcancer.Havingbeentreatinginhospital,shedecidedtoreceivetreatmentathome.SincemyhusbandandIwerebusyinourwork,weseldomwenttoseeher.Threemonthsago,Mrs.Blackdied.Tooursurprised,herhusbandcametothanktousforkeepingRoseoneday.Hesaidinthepastseveralmonths,Rosewenttoaccompanyhiswifeeverydaybeforemyhus
7、bandandIwenttowork.Withshearound,hiswifefeltsowarmandwasntinsomuchpain.Ineverknewthat.ThatRosedidwasreallyheartwarming.that.ThatRosedidwasreallyheartwarming.(四)(四)Longlongago,therelivedthemanwhowassolazythatnojobwasfitofhim.Inordertomakealivingheonedaywenttoaneighborofhimforhelp.Theneighboradvisedhi
8、mworkasacemeterycaretakerasitwasthemosteasiestjobonecouldfindintheworld.Thelazymanisdelightedandsoonbecameacemeterycaretaker.Buttoeverybodyssurprisingheresignedhisjobthreedaysbeforehegotit.“Itsunfair.”Hesaidtotheneighborangry.InthecemeteryalltheothersarelyingstillwhileIamtheonlyonewhohadtostand.(五)(
9、五)MygrandfatherandIenjoyfishing.OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake.Wetookoursfishingpolesandheadedforthelake.Assoonaswearrived,sowedroppedthelinesintothewater.Beforewaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently.Iwantedtogiveup,andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittlelonger.Finally,therewereasud
10、denpullatthepoleandfishwascaught.Withinthenextfewminute,mygrandfatheralsocaughtafish.Felthungry,webuiltafirebythelakeandbarbecuedthefish.Itwasdelicious.(六)(六)DearMing,Itwasverynicetohearfromyouforalongtime.ImgladtolearnthatyouvebeensettleddowninBostonandaregettingusedtothelocalwaysoflife.Asyouknow,I
11、mstillburiedwithbooksatschoolyouaresofamiliarwith.WhatmaysurpriseyouarethatImgoingtotheUSthisJulyinasummercamp!SurelyImexpectinglotsofsightseeingtours,partiesandanotherexcitingthings.WemustdefinitelymeetwhenImover.Asisplanning,ImcomingtoBostonaroundthe15th,andIwonderifyoullfreethensowecouldchatabout
12、thegoodolddays.Hopetoseeyousoon.Yours,XiaoLei(七)(七)Thisisastorytoldbymyfather:WhenIwasboy,themostexcitingthingwaswhentocelebratetheSpringFestival.Mygrandmawasthebestcookerintheworldbutcouldmakethemostdeliciousdishes.Once,IjustcouldntwaitfortheSpringFestivaldinner.AsIwasabouttakeapiecefromacookedduck
13、,IsawGrandmainthekitchenlookingme.Shakeherhead,shesaid,“Itisntagoodtimetodothat,dear.”Iapologizeandcontrolledmeatthebesttillthedinnerstarted.Youknow,thatwasadinnerwehadwaitedforseveralmonth.(八)(八)MyfriendDickwassevenyearsold,andhersisterKatherinewasfive.Onedaytheirmothertakethemtotheirauntstoplaywhi
14、leshewenttothecitybuysomenewclothes.Theyplayedforahour,andthentheiraunttookDickintothekitchen.Shegavehimanicelycakeandaknifeandsaid,“Dick,cutthiscakeinhalf,andgiveoneofthepiecetoyoursister.Butrememberingtodoitlikeagentleman.”“Howdogentlemendoit?”Dickasked.“Theyalwaysgivethebiggeronepiecetotheotherpe
15、rson,”answeredhisaunt.Dickthoughtupthisforafewseconds.Thenhetookthecaketohissisterbutsaidtoher,“Cutthiscakeinhalf,Katherine.”(九)(九)RecentlyIreadanarticleinamagazine.Itwasofamotherwhowasworriedabouthissonjustbecauseofhealwayskepthishairlong.Themotherthoughtthatwasnotright,butthesonfelttherewasnothing
16、unusuallyaboutit.Differentgenerationshavedifferentopinionsonthesamething.Thatiswhatismeaningby“thegenerationgap”Wecanseetheminourdailylives.Mostofourparentslikelisteningtooldsongwhileyoungpeoplepreferpopsongs.Everytimemyfatherfindsmelistentorockmusic,healwaysshouted,“Shutitoff.Itsawful!”Howcanwedeal
17、thegenerationgap?(十)(十)Mysparetimeisfullofinterestedactivities.IreadallkindsofbooksinthereadingroomwheneverIamfree.Ilearnmuchinthelibrarythaninclassinthisway.Meanwhile,Iparticipatedinmanysportsactivities,ofthatmyfavoriteisvolleyball.Ioftenplayvolleyballaftertheschool.Sportsandgameskeepmehealthyandenergeticenoughtogetacrossavarietyofdifficulties.SometimeIgoinforsocialpracticewithmyclassmatesoutsideschool.Thus,Icangainmuchsocialexperiences.Out-of-classactivitiesarequitenecessaryforourstudents.Throughtheseactivitieswecanlearnmanythingscannotbelearnedinclass.