《浙江高考英语新题型“概要写作”培训资料》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《浙江高考英语新题型“概要写作”培训资料（33页珍藏版）》请在金锄头文库上搜索。
1、浙江高考英语新题型“概要写作”普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）词数词数少于少于4040的和的和多余多余8080的，的，从从总分中减去总分中减去2 2分分评分原则1 1、本题总分为、本题总分为2525分，按分，按5 5个档次给分。个档次给分。2 2、评评分分时时，先先根根据据所所写写概概要要的的内内容容和和语语言言初初步步确确定定其其所所属属档档次次，然然后后以以该该档档次次的的要要求求来来衡衡量量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。确定或调整档次，最后给分。3 3、词数少于、词数少于4040的
2、和多于的和多于8080的，从总分中减去的，从总分中减去2 2分。分。 评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑： (1)(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；(2)(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；(3)(3)上下文的连贯性；上下文的连贯性；(4)(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况；对各要点表达的独立性情况；Narration （记叙文）（记叙文）Exposition Exposition （说明文）（说明文）（说明文）（说明文）Forms of LiteratureArgumentation (议论文）议论文）Argu
3、mentation (议论文）议论文）TopicSupporting ideasConclusion概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 (Para 1 )Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However,there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. (Para2)Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockout
4、disease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryI
5、V,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.(Para3)Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirti
6、sgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?(Para4)At
7、titudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist(免疫学家),encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatterpositionisgainingso
8、meground.There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirtStep 1: Readtopic sentence: structureFind out the topic sentence of each paragraphthink, believe, consider, regard, argue, support, be convinced that, in ones opinion, from ones point of viewYou may need to pay attention to some words like: Para
9、2:Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.Thusbega
10、nalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.ExamplesofsomeEuropeancountries(Para3)Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,di
11、rthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;clothe
12、sneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar? (Para4)Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunol
13、ogist(免疫学家),encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.Step 2: Make an outline Topic:Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirtsuppor-tingIdeas(Para2)(Para3)nowadays(Para4)Inthe16thcenturysince18thcenturyPeoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanst
14、oblockoutdiseasehasnolongerbeenregardedascleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealthencourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem Step 3: Rewrite the sentences in other ways There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.different, mixed, various反义转换opinions, views, ideas同义词替换同义词替换 Peoples attitu
15、des to dirt vary in different times. towards句型转换句型转换 People hold different opinions towards dirt over time. The attitudes to dirt is not always the same. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease. Have a try! In the early 16th century, people th
16、ought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease. think: believe, hold, consider, insist, argue, are convinced that.同义词替换同义词替换block out disease: prevent/protect/keep away from illness; One possible version: In the 16th century, people believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.
17、 . dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health.wash off, get rid ofbenefit, is beneficial to, do good to, contribute toOne possible version: People began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 yea
18、rs ago. People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy. Nowadays, encourages people to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. One possible version:Nowadays, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.People are encouraged to语
19、态转换语态转换be exposed to.believe, support, agree, approve. People hold mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. In the 16th century, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill. People began to change their attitudes to dirt more than 200 years
20、 ago. They have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy. Nowadays, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.However,Nevertheless/But/However people Add two linking words to make the passage coherentStep 4: Make the summary coherent nowadays,
21、Step 5: Revise( 67 words)People hold mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. In the 16th century, people of some European countries believed that dirt protected people from getting ill. However, people began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. They have been told that washing dir
22、t off our body can keep us healthy. But nowadays, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.Step 6: Clearly copy your draft to the paperHow to write a summary(argumentation)1.Read 2.Make an outline 3.Rewrite4. Make it coherent5. Revise6. neatly copy-Topic , struct
23、ure, key supporting sentencesHomework Finish the summary writing of the following Passage阅读短文，根据其内容写一篇阅读短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。词左右的内容概要。Getting up early has been regarded as a good habitsinceancienttimes.Manyyearsago,peoplethoughtthatifwewenttobedearlyandgetupearly,wewouldbeenergetic(充充满满活活力力的的) the
24、whole day. So, getting upearlyisofgreatimportancetousall.In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In themorning,theairisthefreshestandpeopleareusuallyinthe best conditions(条条件件). Many of us may have theexperiencesthatwememorizesomethingsmorequicklyandaccuratelyinthemorningthananyothertimeoftheday
25、.Ifwedosomemorningexerciseoronlytakeashortwalk in the morning, we can build our bodies andbecomemuchhealthier.Alsowewillhaveenoughtimetomakeaplanandgetreadyforourworkorstudyofthedayifwegetupearly.However,ifwegetuplate,we will probably have to do everything in a greathurry.Letusremembergettingupearly
26、isagoodhabitandtryourbesttokeepit.Ifwesticktogettingupearlyeveryday,wewillcertainlybenefit(受益受益)alotfromit.Getting up early in the morning is a good habit and very important, because in the morning we can have a better memory, healthier bodies and better preparation for the day. In addition, morning
27、 exercise can help us keep healthy. So, it is beneficial to us.参考范文参考范文It is important to get up early for people.In the morning, people can exercise their bodies through walking to keep healthy. Also, peoples memory will improve. Besides, people can make a good preparation/plan for themselves, so t
28、hey will have enough time to do everything. In a word, getting up early is beneficial to us.参考范文参考范文 Getting up early is a good habit. And we attach great importance to getting up early because morning is the most valuable time of a day, so we can have physical training to keep healthy. Besides, get
29、ting up early can let us have enough time to program and prepare to finish doing our work or study of the day. In a word, we will benefit a lot from getting up early.参考范文参考范文Peopleattachgreatimportancetogettingupearly.(要要点点1) It enables them to have a better memory,healthierbodiesandbetterpreparatio
30、nfortheday.(要要点点2) If not, people will be busy doing everything. Soinsistongettingupearlywhichisofgreatbenefittoallpeople.(要点要点3)参考范文参考范文PPT模板下载： 行业PPT模板： 节日PPT模板： PPT素材下载： PPT图表下载： 优秀PPT下载： PPT教程： Word教程： Excel教程： 资料下载： PPT课件下载： 范文下载： 试卷下载： 教案下载： 此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢
