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1、求助信基本结构1 1. .自自我介绍，我介绍，2.2.点点明目的；明目的；3.3.叙叙述现状，告知问题述现状，告知问题4.4.寻寻求帮助求帮助, , 5.5.期期盼回复。盼回复。注意事项：注意事项：1.1.通常情况下，使用一般现在时通常情况下，使用一般现在时2.2.阐述要清晰，用词要恰当，言语要礼貌阐述要清晰，用词要恰当，言语要礼貌。可适当使用过渡词：可适当使用过渡词：first / to begin with; oreover / first / to begin with; oreover / besides/whatbesides/whats more / in addition ; i
2、nthe s more / in addition ; inthe meanwhile; alsomeanwhile; also使文章脉络清晰，条理清楚，有较强的使文章脉络清晰，条理清楚，有较强的层次感。层次感。 可适当使用委婉句型：可适当使用委婉句型：would you like to, beg sb. to would you like to, beg sb. to do sth., would like sb. to do sth., do sth., would like sb. to do sth., I Im m suresure来体来体现出作者的谦虚客气，诚恳朴实现出作者的谦虚客
3、气，诚恳朴实 表达方式运用多样化：如表达方式运用多样化：如 定语从句、目的状语从句、宾定语从句、目的状语从句、宾语从句的运用可增强文章的表达效果，提高了文章的表达语从句的运用可增强文章的表达效果，提高了文章的表达档次档次 自我介绍自我介绍 I Im m / my name is / my name is 点明目的点明目的 I Im writing to you for some help .m writing to you for some help .I Im writing a letter to you to get some helpm writing a letter to you
4、to get some help. .I I am sorry to bother you, but i really need am sorry to bother you, but i really need your help with your help with 叙述现状叙述现状 I I often feel blue and depressed. often feel blue and depressed.学习句型 告知问题告知问题 I I have some difficulty / trouble in doing have some difficulty / trouble
5、in doing something because of my poor something because of my poor I I find it difficult for me to do sth.find it difficult for me to do sth.I I am now confronted with the following am now confronted with the following difficultiesdifficulties. . T The reason why he reason why I I write this letter
6、is that write this letter is that I I have trouble when have trouble when I I .寻求帮助寻求帮助 C Could you please give us some advice ?ould you please give us some advice ?I I really donreally dont know what to do and expect you t know what to do and expect you to give me your advice / suggestions. to give
7、 me your advice / suggestions. I I have no idea what i should do and long for have no idea what i should do and long for your advice. your advice. I I would like to turn to you for would like to turn to you for help. help. F Faced with so much difficulty, i have to aced with so much difficulty, i ha
8、ve to ask you for some help. ask you for some help. F Facing so much difficulty, i have to ask acing so much difficulty, i have to ask you for some help. you for some help. I Im in desperate need of your help m in desperate need of your help your help is urgently needed.your help is urgently needed.
9、I I would appreciate anything you can do to would appreciate anything you can do to help me with this matter. help me with this matter. I I would be grateful if you can give me some would be grateful if you can give me some suggestions on how to do sth.suggestions on how to do sth.期盼回复期盼回复 L Looking
10、 forward to your reply and ooking forward to your reply and I Ill be ll be grateful for your help. grateful for your help. I Im sure m sure I I can make great progress with can make great progress with your help your help I Im waiting for your early reply.m waiting for your early reply. 黄金模板 D Dear
11、_, my name is _. ear _, my name is _. I Im writing to m writing to you to _. you to _. I I_(your _(your current situation). (give information to show the current situation). (give information to show the adviser why you need help) first,_ adviser why you need help) first,_ besides,_. whatbesides,_.
12、whats s more_. more_. F Faced with so much aced with so much difficulty, difficulty, I I have to ask you for some help. have to ask you for some help. W Would ould you like to introduce to us some good ways to you like to introduce to us some good ways to _.L.Looking forward to your ooking forward t
13、o your reply and reply and I Ill be grateful for your help.ll be grateful for your help. yours sincerely,_yours sincerely,_ 练一练国内某家英文报纸设有一个求助信箱（letters to dr helper）。请根据下列学生现状调查分析表中列出的信息，以高二学生王勇的名义，用英语给dr helper写一封短信。学生现状 负担过重的原因每日在校时间 9小时 考试压力大作业多家长期望高每日作业时间 34小时 每日课外活动时间 几乎没有,每日睡眠时间不足。Sample：Dear
14、Dr helper, I am a senior 2 student. I am now in great need of your help because i can hardly stand the great pressure. Everyday I have to stay at school for nine hours to have lesson.Besides, I spend at least three hours doing my homework at home. There is no denying that we teenagers are eager to p
15、lay and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have any time to do what we want. whats worse, we even dont have enough sleep. There seems to be three causes about the overload: the pressure of examination, too much homework and the high expectations from the parents. We are often warned that if we dont do our best, we wont have the chance to go to university. The reason why I write this letter is that i wish i could have someone to talk to. would you like to give me some advice. I am looking forward to your reply. your sincerely, wang yongThank you!
