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1、2007年湖南省高考作文： 假设你叫王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。 要点：1. 简要描述李华在你心目中的印象 2. 用一到两个相关事例进行具体描述； 3. 对李华表示美好的祝福写作指导：第一：与2006年相比，题型变化不大，依然是介于提纲式作文和开放式作文中间的一种题型，主要内容给出，但是还必须考生发挥具体事例，这与我们M5U1project的第二篇文章相符；第二：内容变化不大，去年是写老师Mr. Moore，今年写的是同窗好友；第三：考试形式依然是上课时强调的应用文留言，留言其实和书信，便条差不多。评分标准：要点全面，且详略得当；结构清晰(总分总);文
2、章连贯； Dear LihuaOf all my classmates, you, the most considerate and warm-hearted girl, are always ready to give your hand to everyone who needs help.(文章第一段写第一个要点，即文章中心)I clearly remember that last year our classmates Xiaomei suffered from acute appendix(急性阑尾炎) at night. It is you who took her to the
3、hospital in midnight as quickly as possible. In order not to disturb others you even didnt call up other classmates to accompany you. Until the next morning other classmates in our dormitory got to know the fact. And we knew that you didnt sleep all the night to attend to Xiaomei. Moreover in our da
4、ily life, you always comfort the one who are in depression because of bad score or classmates relationship. So we would like to call you the sweet sister.(第二段举出你能够想出的最简单的事例，作文的关键不是你的事例有多新颖，而是你写的句子是否能够显示出你的水平，比如说难词，比如说难句，比如说你是否用了联接词，如in order to, until, moreover, so等)All in all, you are the fantastic
5、 girl who deserves all the beautiful prospects, such as studying in Beijing University. Finally wish you success and realize your dream! Yours sincerelyWang Ping (第三段总结并给出你的祝福)Dear Li Hua,I often think that Im lucky that I have you as my best friend. You always lend me a hand when I am in trouble.I
6、remember it clearly that I did badly in one important exam. My parents as well as my teachers thought I wasnt hard enough. And I was laughed at by some classmates, which made me really sad. But youre the only one who understood me. You said many words to cheer me up. Thank you for giving me so much
7、encouragement.Besides, when I have done something wrong, you point it out. Whats more, youre very honest and can always keep your word. We share the same interests such as reading and drawing. Without you, I wont be so happy.We will go to different schools soon, but our friendship will be forever. I
8、 believe that you will be better in the future.Best wishes to you!Yours,Wang Ping一、一、举例常用的开例常用的开头语：Last year/last week/last weekend/one day/last Sunday afternoon /onceI will never forget the day when.I remember I clearly thatDo you still remember thatAlthough it happened two years ago, I will never
9、forgetIll never forget the memorable day二、有关友二、有关友谊的表达：的表达：make friends with sb/get to know sb/ know sb very well/trust each other/keep in touch with sb/close friend/precious/ understanding/ friendly/ intimate/ generous/ thoughtful / good tempered / graceful/ turn to my friend for help/ have sth in
10、common/ be willing to offer help/ get along well with each other/ be tolerant to学生习作一：学生习作一：Dear Lulu: How are you? I often think that Im really lucky to have you as my best friend since a faithful friend is hard to find. You are always ready to lend me a hand when I am in trouble. I still remember
11、the thing happened in last year, when the new term began, everybody in the class except me had taken the summer extra lesson, you knew that I was so worried that time, because I was afraid I couldnt keep pace with the class. Fortunately, you lent me your notes and encouraged me not to give up. I was
12、 deeply impressed. Besides, you are kind, mercy, honest and out-going. We have a lot to talk with each other and we have almost the same interests. In a word, I feel happy and relaxed when we spent time together. Last, I hope we can both treasure this friendship and I believe our friendship will las
13、t forever.学生习作二： Dear Julia: I havent heard from you for weeks. Is everything ok? Recently, I learnt a lot more about friendship, which reminded me of youmy junior school classmate and my best friend. A faithful friend is hard to find, but Im really fortunate to have you as my best friend. You are a
14、lways willing to help me when I face challenge. I cant forget the days when we were in grade 3. You sat by my side. Sometimes, you were like my teacher, almost all my academic questions were solved by you. I was hopeless before that time, but with the help of you, gone were all my bad feelings. Then
15、, I did a good job in the textgraduation examination. I felt grateful for your great help with my low grades, and the feeling lasts till now. words fail to express my heart-felt thanks to you. I think our friendship will last forever because Ill treasure our friendshipone of the most great and loyal emotions.
