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1、高考英语作文专题训练议论文王玲一、议论文模板学习一、议论文模板学习1.正反观点式议论文模板正反观点式议论文模板导入：导入：第第1段：段：Recently weve had a discussion about whether we should. （导入话题）（导入话题）Our opinions are divided on this topic.（观点有分歧）（观点有分歧）正文：正文：第第2段：段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点）（正方观点）Here are the reasons. First. Second. Finally.
2、(列出列出23个赞成的个赞成的理由理由)第第3段：段：However, the others are strongly against it. （反方观点）（反方观点）Their reasons are as follows. In the first place. Whats more. In addition.(列出列出23个反对的理由个反对的理由)结论：结论：第第4段：段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more good than harm, so I
3、support it.（个人观点）（个人观点）2.“A或者或者B”类议论文模板：类议论文模板：导入：导入：第第1段：段： Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.正文：正文：第第2段：段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The mai
4、n reason is that . Another reason is that.(赞同赞同A的原因的原因)第第3段段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent. (列出列出12个个B的优势的优势)结论：结论：第第4段段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that .(得出结论得出结论) 3.观点论
5、述类议论文模板：观点论述类议论文模板：导入：导入：第第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. （亮明（亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对）自己的观点是赞成还是反对）The reasons for this may be listed as follows. （过渡句，承（过渡句，承上启下）上启下）正文：正文：第第2段：段：First of all. Secondly. Besides.(列出列出23个赞成或个赞成或反对的理由反对的理由)结论：结论：第
6、第3段：段：In conclusion, I believe that. （照应第（照应第1段，构成段，构成总总分分总总结构）结构） 4.How to类议论文模板：类议论文模板：导入：导入：第第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题正文：正文：第第2段：段： Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all. Another way to solve the problem is . Final
7、ly.(列出列出23个解决此类问题的办法个解决此类问题的办法)结论：结论：第第3段：段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to.(强调解决此类强调解决此类问题的根本方法问题的根本方法) 二、范文解析二、范文解析1、提供话题、关键词，引导学生明确作文结构、提供话题、关键词，引导学生明确作文结构2、学生作品的点评、学生作品的点评3、佳作欣赏、佳作欣赏 某某中中学学生生英英语语报报社社正正开开展展一
8、一场场题题为为“Young Young teachers teachers or or elderly teacherselderly teachers，which do you prefer?which do you prefer?”请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。老年教师老年教师青年教师青年教师教学耐心讲解细致经验丰富教学耐心讲解细致经验丰富精力充沛教学活泼勇于创新精力充沛教学活泼勇于创新你的观点你的观点?注注意意：1 1词词数数100100左左右右，开开头头语语已已为为你你写写好好，不不计计入入总总数数；2 2短
9、短文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯1.关键词语关键词语教学耐心教学耐心讲解细致讲解细致经验丰富经验丰富精力充沛精力充沛教学活泼教学活泼学习有效果学习有效果浪费时间浪费时间投入学习投入学习勇于创新勇于创新have patience in teachingbe careful with explanationshave more teaching experience be energetic and enthusiasticmake their classes lively and interesting stu
10、dy more effectivelya waste of time pay attention to studydare to bring in the new ideas2.作文结构作文结构1Different people have different ideas.2. Some students may like elderly teachers teaching .such as(举例).（原因）.3. Others may prefer to young teachers .(原因）.4.In my opinion, I would rather学生作品学生作品1：Comparew
11、ithyoungteachers,Ipreferelderlyteachers.Therearesomereasonsbelow.Foronething,mostofelderlyteachersarepatientinteaching.Theynotonlysparenoefforttoteachthestudents,butalsogiveclassescarefully.Theywilldoalltheycantomakethestudentsunderstandtheteachingcontent.Whatgoodteachers!Foranotherthing,elderlyteac
12、hersarefullofteachingexperience.Thisisalsothemostimportant,especiallyforusseniorstudents.Thisisonlymyopinion.Ithinkyoungteachersarealsogood.学生作品学生作品1：Comparewithyoungteachers,Ipreferelderlyteachers.Therearesomereasonsbelow.Foronething,mostofelderlyteachersarepatientinteaching.Theynotonlysparenoeffor
13、ttoteachthestudents,butalsogiveclassescarefully.Theywilldoalltheycantomakethestudentsunderstandtheteachingcontent.Whatgoodteachers!Foranotherthing,elderlyteachersarefullofteachingexperience.Thisisalsothemostimportant,especiallyforusseniorstudents.Thisisonlymyopinion.Ithinkyoungteachersarealsogood.点评
14、：亮点：1、观点鲜明，词汇句型的运用比较灵活2、过渡词及连词的使用使文章结构紧凑连贯、条理清楚。2、审题不全面，忽略了对青年教师这部分信息的处理。这一点是比较大的失误。1)2)3)1)Compared2)more3)trytomaketheclasseslivelyandinteresting不足之处：1、个别地方的表达需要改进。学生作品学生作品2: Opinions are divided on this question. Some students who like the elderlyteachers more than the young ones think thatthe el
15、derly ones are more patient in teaching, more careful in explaining and also have a lot of experience. However, the others have a differentopinion. They think the teachers who areyoung are full of energy. Besides, theirteaching is lively and they dare to bring inthe new ideas. Well, in my opinion, I
16、 like both the elderlyteachers and the young ones because fromthem we both can learn a lot.学生作品学生作品2: Opinions are divided on this question. Some students who like the elderlyteachers more than the young ones think thatthe elderly ones are more patient in teaching, more careful in explaining and als
17、o have a lot of experience. However, the others have a differentopinion. They think the teachers who areyoung are full of energy. Besides, theirteaching is lively and they dare to bring inthe new ideas. Well, in my opinion, I like both the elderlyteachers and the young ones because fromthem we both
18、can learn a lot.点评：点评：亮点：亮点：1、段落清楚，要点齐、段落清楚，要点齐全，句式表达比较灵全，句式表达比较灵活，能适当运用复句。活，能适当运用复句。2、过渡词运用也比较、过渡词运用也比较熟练。熟练。需要改进的地方：需要改进的地方：1）2)3)4)1) prefer the elderly teachers to the young ones2) with explanations3) the 去掉去掉4) The young teachersOne possible version:Opinions are divided on this question. Some s
19、tudents may like elderly teachers teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience and that they tend to be patient and careful with explanations. However, I prefer to be taught by young teachers. Firstly, we students have much in common with them. So they are our friends a
20、s well as our teachers. Secondly, they are more energetic and enthusiastic. Usually they can make their classes lively and interesting. Besides, they are more ready to accept or create new ideas, including teaching. Thirdly, most young teachers devote themselves to their work, making them teach crea
21、tively and effectively. In a word, I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers.三、三、Homework：人们对于网上交友持不同的意见：人们对于网上交友持不同的意见请用英语写一篇学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并请用英语写一篇学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的观点表达自己的观点赞成的理由赞成的理由反对的理由反对的理由你的看法你的看法广交朋友广交朋友可自由表达思想可自由表达思想利于外语学习利于外语学习浪费时间浪费时间影响学习影响学习可能上当受骗可能上当受骗关键词：关键词：make friends ,express feeling freely ,foreign studies, a waste of time, get cheated online. 关键句子：关键句子：Students should place their study ,health ,and safety before other things .
