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1、书书 面面 表表 达达 与与 短短 文文 改改 错错 书书 面面 表表 达达 -Approaches to pros & cons 10 月段考书面表达月段考书面表达下面是对中学生对志愿工作的看法的调查表，请根据下面所给下面是对中学生对志愿工作的看法的调查表，请根据下面所给的词汇和短语写一篇英语小短文。的词汇和短语写一篇英语小短文。70%的学生赞成参加志愿工作为社会作贡献，帮助别人是一件的学生赞成参加志愿工作为社会作贡献，帮助别人是一件很有意义的工作，带来很多个人利益，为日后的工作获得宝贵很有意义的工作，带来很多个人利益，为日后的工作获得宝贵的技能和经验，为自己创造机遇，增强信心、自觉意识、良
2、好的技能和经验，为自己创造机遇，增强信心、自觉意识、良好的交际能力和领导才能。的交际能力和领导才能。25%的学生不愿意从事志愿工作无报酬，浪费时间，耽误学习。的学生不愿意从事志愿工作无报酬，浪费时间，耽误学习。5%的学生无明确态度漠不关心。的学生无明确态度漠不关心。我对志愿工作的看法。我对志愿工作的看法。对立观点展开议论写作对立观点展开议论写作这这种种题题型型一一般般会会给给出出两两个个或或两两个个以以上上的的对对立立的的观观点点，要要求求考考生生发表自己的看法或见解。发表自己的看法或见解。这类题型的基本模式可分四段：这类题型的基本模式可分四段：1. 1. 对一个讨论的主题，仁者见仁智者见智对
3、一个讨论的主题，仁者见仁智者见智2 2、有人认为、有人认为3 3、有人认为、有人认为4 4、我的看法是、我的看法是 参考模板参考模板 总总-分分原则原则 We have had a heated discussion about/on . Opinions are divided on the matter. / Different students have different attitudes towards the matter. Some students think / believe/hold the view that However, others argue that As
4、 far as I am concerned, I The reasons are as follows. First, Secondly, In conclusion / In a word ,文章框架结构文章框架结构Different students have different attitudes toward voluntary work.70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. 25% of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. The rest of the
5、 students dont have a clear attitude toward it , nor do they care about it.I hold the view that doing voluntary work is of benefit to us. 一些关键词的处理志愿工作志愿工作 voluntary work对社会做贡献对社会做贡献 make a contribution to the society一件有意义的工作一件有意义的工作 a worthwhile /meaningful job个人利益个人利益 personal benefits创造机遇创造机遇 open
6、 up opportunities增强信心增强信心 build up ones confidence无报酬无报酬 without payment/ for nothingDifferent students have different attitudes toward voluntary work.70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. They consider that it can make a contribution to society and it is a worthwhile job to help othe
7、rs. It can also bring personal benefits and will contribute to their future because they can gain valuable experience and skills for their future career. Voluntary work often opens up opportunities for them, build up their confidence, raise their self-awareness, and improve good communication skills
8、 and leadership ability.25% of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. They think the work is done without payment and it is a waste of time. The rest of the students dont have clear attitude toward it , nor do they care about it.I think I hold the view that doing voluntary work is of benef
9、it to us. No matter how small it is, it will help make a difference. Despite no payment, we can acquire valuable experience. Possible VersionDifferent students have different attitudes toward voluntary work.70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. They consider that it can make a contrib
10、ution to society and it is a worthwhile job to help others. It can also bring personal benefits and will contribute to their future because they can gain valuable experience and skills for their future career. Voluntary work often opens up opportunities for them, build up their confidence, raise the
11、ir self-awareness, and improve good communication skills and leadership ability. Read out the composition25% of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. They think the work is done without payment and it is a waste of time. The rest of the students dont have a clear attitude toward it , nor
12、do they care about it.I think I hold the view that doing voluntary work is of benefit to us. No matter how small it is, it will help make a difference. Despite no payment, we can acquire valuable experience. 杨洋杨洋 There is a heated discussion on vloluntary work these days. Statistics show that 70% of
13、 the students are willing to take part in voluntary work. They think being volunteers can make contributions to the society. It is a meaning job for high school students to help others. What s more, doing voluntary work is an effective way to obtain valuable skills and experiences. It can help peopl
14、e grasp opportunities and build up their confidence. Those students also consider leadership and abilities to communicate with others to be important, and these can be acquired from voluntary work. However,25% of the students have the opposite opinions. They say students will waste a lot of time, wh
15、ich is bad for their health. Anyway, you cant get any reward from these voluntary work. Besides, 5% of the students dont care about the voluntary work. They havent formed any clear opinions so far. As far as Im concerned, voluntary work can help us a lot. Firstly, we can easily make any new friends.
16、 Secondly, students will be able to achieve courage , faithfulness and other wonderful personalities from voluntary work. Thus, I think it is great for students to take part in voluntary work. 储备一些固定句型结构储备一些固定句型结构如何多样化表达不同看法如何多样化表达不同看法 1）People _doing voluntary work 2）People _ doing voluntary work 3
17、）People _doing voluntary work 4）_ doing voluntary work is worthwhile_ doing voluntary work is a waste of time .5) _ doing voluntary work.6)Every coin has two sides.have（take，adopt，assume ) different attitudes towardshave different opinions ontake different views of（on）Some people believe thatOthers
18、argue thatOpinions are divided on 如何表示如何表示赞成赞成?70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work.70% of the students _ doing voluntary work.70% of the students _ doing voluntary work.70% of the students _voluntary work_.70% of the students _doing voluntary work. are in favor of are forthink ofposi
19、tively support如何表示如何表示反对反对25% of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work.25% of the students _ doing voluntary work.25% of the students _ doing voluntary work.25% of the students _ doing voluntary work.25% of the students _ doing voluntary work.25% of the students _ doing voluntary work _. a
20、re againstobject toopposethink of negativelyare opposed to 如何表达个人看法如何表达个人看法I think each of us should make a contribution to society._, each of us should make a contribution to society._, each of us should make a contribution to society._, each of us should make a contribution to society._each of us
21、should make a contribution to society.In my opinionSo far as I am concerned PersonallyI hold the view that 在在写写作作中中除除了了使使用用以以上上谈谈到到的的重重点点句句型型外外，还还应应该该注注意意文文章章的的逻逻辑辑结结构构和和五五种种过过渡渡词词的的使用。例如：使用。例如： 1.表示举例时使用：表示举例时使用： for example, such as, take .for example, another example of, here are a few examples,
22、namely等。等。 2.表示列举时使用表示列举时使用： first, second, third.finally; to begin with, for one thing, for another等。等。 3.表示归纳总结时使用表示归纳总结时使用： in a word, in all, to sum up, in brief, in short等。等。 4.要加强句与句之间的连贯时使用要加强句与句之间的连贯时使用：in addition ,whats more ,furthermore, on top of that, besides, moreover等。等。 5.表示转折时使用：表示转
23、折时使用： however, while, on the contrary等。等。May 25, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. The salesgirl treated me coldly. She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop. She said that I made it dirty. She gave various excuses to refuse my request. I got an
24、gry.I quarreled with her. The manager turned up. He asked what was the matter. He knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized（批评）批评）the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.HoweverAt the beginning,In a wordso thatJust then/Just at t
25、hat momentAfterAt last (In the end ),SoAnd thenMay 25, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. _ ，the salesgirl treated me coldly. _，she didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop. _，She said that I made it dirty. _，She gave various excuses to refuse my re
26、quest. _I quarreled with her. _, the manager turned up. He asked what was the matter. _he knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized (批评批评) the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.However At the beginningAnd then In a wordI got so
27、 angry thatAs soon as/ The momentJust at that moment 1） 表列举表列举： for example、such as 、namely，etc 2) 表补充表补充： besides、in addition、moreover，whats more ,etc 3) 表对比表对比： in spite of，on the contrary, despite , etc 4) 表原因表原因：because of、thanks to、due to、 owing to，as a result of ,etc 5) 表结果表结果：therefore、thus、a
28、s a result、so，etc 6) 表结论表结论： on the whole、in a word、in brief、 to sum up，generally speaking, etc 7) 表转折表转折： however、nevertheless、yet，etc Different students assume different attitudes towards voluntary work according to the survey.We are glad to see that 70% of the students approve of doing voluntary
29、work. In their opinion, making a contribution to society and lending a helping hand to others is a worthwhile job. At the same time, it brings a lot of personal benefits. They can gain valuable experience and skills for future career. Whats more, voluntary work opens up vast quantities of opportunit
30、ies for them to build up confidence, raise self awareness, and improve good communication skills and leadership.However, 25 of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. They consider that working without payment is a waste of time.5% of the students choose to be neutral. In other words , they
31、 dont care about it at all.In my opinion, wed better take the chance to participate in voluntary work, no matter how small it is.Different students assume different attitudes towards voluntary work according to the survey.We are glad to see that 70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. I
32、n their opinion, making a contribution to society and lending a helping hand to others is a worthwhile job. At the same time, it brings a lot of personal benefits. They can gain valuable experience and skills for future career. Whats more, voluntary work opens up vast quantities of opportunities for
33、 them to build confidence, raise self awareness, and improve good communication skills and leadership.However, 25 of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. They consider that working without payment is a waste of time.5% of the students choose to be neutral. In other words , they dont care
34、 about it at all.In my opinion, wed better take the chance to participate in voluntary work, no matter how small it is.The survey shows the opinions of high school students on voluntary work.70% of the students are in favor of voluntary work. By doing the work , we can make contributions to the soci
35、ety. And there is much point in helping others. It can bring us lots of personal benefits. We can also gain precious skills and experience which we can make use of in the future. Whats more, taking part in voluntary work is a way to open up opportunities. Furthermore, it helps to build up our confid
36、ence and raise self-consciousness. Our ability of communication and leadership will also be developed by doing voluntary work.However,25% of the students dont approve of voluntary work. They consider voluntary work as a waste of time because they work without payment.The rest of the students dont ha
37、ve a clear attitude towards voluntary work.In my opinion, as we are members of the society, all of us should spare no effort to make it better and better.The survey shows the opinions of high school students on voluntary work.70% of the students are in favor of voluntary work. By doing the work , we
38、 can make contributions to the society. And there is much point in helping others. It can bring us lots of personal benefits. We can also gain precious skills and experience which we can make use of in the future. Whats more, taking part in voluntary work is a way to open up opportunities. Furthermo
39、re,it helps to raise our confidence and build up self-consciousness. Our ability of communication and leadership will also be developed by doing voluntary work.However,25% of the students dont approve of voluntary work. They consider voluntary work as a waste of time because they work without paymen
40、t.The rest of the students dont have a clear attitude towards voluntary work.In my opinion, as we are members of the society, all of us should spare no effort to make it better and better.典型错误典型错误1.70% of the students are in favor of joining in voluntary works.2. 70% of the students are in favor of
41、joining in voluntary work.3. work works 4. work job 2. 70% of the students approve that devote themselves to the society is a meaningful work.70% of the students approve that devoting themselves to the society is a meaningful job. 3. However, we have to leave time studying and finishing our homework
42、. However, we have to leave time to study and finish our homework. 4.There are also 5% of the students have no clear idea about it.5.5% of the students have no clear idea about it.6.There are also 5% of the students having no clear idea about it.7.There are also 5% of the students who have no clear
43、idea about it.8.There are also 5% of the students with no clear idea about it.5. The reasons for they dont want to join the voluntary work are as follow.The reasons why they dont want to join in the voluntary work are as follows.高考链接高考链接002年普通高等学校招生全国英语统一考试书面表达试题年普通高等学校招生全国英语统一考试书面表达试题 最近，你校同学正在参加某英
44、文报组织的一场讨论。讨论最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票。请你根据下表所提供的信的主题是：公园要不要收门票。请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。60%的同学认为：的同学认为：1、不应收门票、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙、会影响城市形象、如收票，需建大门、围墙、会影响城市形象40%的同学认为的同学认为1、应收门票，但票价不宜高、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木、购新花木Im writing to
45、 tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged.门票门票 an entrance fee免费免费 free of charge城市形象城市形象
46、the appearance/ image of a city园林工人园林工人 gardenerIm writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free o
47、f charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged
48、 because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. However, they suggest that fees should be charged low. Practice 现在正是春暖花开春游时节。你校学生会以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”为题，向高三学生作调查。请你根据下表所提供的调查结果，以“Whether or not should Senior 3 students go Whether or not should Senior 3 stude
49、nts go spring outing?spring outing?”为题，写一篇短文，上交学生会。65%65%的学生认为的学生认为35%35%的学生认为的学生认为1 1、应该春游、应该春游1 1、不应该春游、不应该春游2 2、接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，、接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利于健康。有利于健康。2 2、高考临近，没有心情玩。、高考临近，没有心情玩。3 3、活动使精神放松，大脑休息，、活动使精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习。有利于学习。3 3、春游耽误学习。、春游耽误学习。注意：1、短文标题已给出，不计入总词数。2、词数：词数150左右。3、参考词汇：高考：collegeentranc
50、eexamination.Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion on whether Senior 3 students should go spring outing. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students,about 65%, are for the idea that S
51、enior 3 students should go spring On the other hand , about 35% students are against the idea. 春游春游 spring outing接触自然接触自然 be close to nature呼吸新鲜空气呼吸新鲜空气 breathe in fresh air 放松放松 relax oneself / feel relaxed 高考高考 the college entrance examination 临近临近 be drawing near / be approachingWhether or not sh
52、ould Senior 3 students go spring outing?Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion on whether Senior 3 students should go spring outing. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students,about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spr
53、ing outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their studies. On the other hand , about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.
