主主题句句):总的来的来说,我我们对食堂感到食堂感到满意意 In general, we are content with the canteen.无无论何何时进入食堂，我入食堂，我们总能看到大能看到大厅干干净整整洁 Whenever we entre it, we can find the hall is clean and tidy. 菜肴看上去菜肴看上去诱人人，，尝起来起来也也美味 The dishes look inviting and taste dilicious as well.而且，而且，工人工人们对待我待我们象朋友一象朋友一样，，这一一点使得我点使得我们感到开心感到开心 What’s more, the workers treat us as their friends, which makes us feel very happy. (主主题句句)：然而，：然而，在我看来在我看来,有一些方有一些方面面需要改需要改进However, As far as I am concerned, there are some ways that need improving.首先，首先，我我们感感觉饭菜的价格菜的价格有点有点贵。
First of all, we feel the price of the meals is a little high. 而且而且，我，我们只能吃只能吃有限种有限种类的菜肴的菜肴，，每周每周几乎没有几乎没有变化化 Besides, we can only have a limited variety of dishes with little change every week.而且，食物品种如此少而且，食物品种如此少结果果，我，我们厌倦倦于于日复一日吃同一道菜日复一日吃同一道菜 Besides, there are so few kinds of food. As a result, we are tired of eating the same dish day after day. 而且而且，我，我们经常不得不站常不得不站队很久很久才才买到到饭菜 In addition, we often have to stand in line for a long time before we get the meal.而且，而且，为了了买到到饭菜，我菜，我们经常不得不在常不得不在队伍里久等。
伍里久等 In addition, in order to get the meal, we have to wait in the queue for quite a long time.亲爱的校的校长，你要知道，你要知道时间对于我于我们学生而言是何等的珍学生而言是何等的珍贵 Dear Mr. Principle, you know how precious time is to us student. 因此因此，，我可否建我可否建议采取措施解决采取措施解决这些些问题以便以便我我们大家都能在大家都能在校享受每一校享受每一顿饭菜 Therefore, may I suggest that measures should be taken to solve these problems so that all of us can enjoy our meals at school?你你认为有必要采取措施解决有必要采取措施解决这些些问题吗？？Do you think it is necessary to take some measures to solve these problems? 谢谢你予于考你予于考虑。
Thanks for your consideration.如蒙考如蒙考虑,不不胜感激感激.I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions. 参考范文参考范文: Dear Principle, I am a senior student of our school. I’d like to say something the canteen service in our school. In general, we are content with the canteen. Whenever we entre it, we can find the hall is clean and tidy. The dishes look inviting and taste dilicious as well. What’s more, the workers treat us as their friends, which makes us feel very happy. However, As far as I am concerned, there are some ways that need improving. First of all, we feel the price of the meals is a little high. Besides, there are so few kinds of food. As a result, we are tired of eating the same dish day after day. In addition, in order to get the meal, we have to wait in the queue for quite a long time. Dear Mr. Principle, you know how precious time is to us student. Therefore, may I suggest that measures should be taken to solve these problems so that all of us can enjoy our meals at school? Thanks for your consideration. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 。