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1、1英语书面表达英语书面表达English Composition WritingSpeaking&WritingArgumentative writing (议论文议论文) 23FactorsthatinfluenceEnglishcompositionwriting1. 作文的卷面； -整洁的卷面 2. 文章的语言； -丰富的词汇 3. 行文的流畅； -流畅的结构 4. 文章的思想； -独到的见解4Handwriting poorpoorexcellentexcellent5 What makes a good composition?6AgoodcompositionContentstru

2、cturelanguage7Whatisagoodwriting？ Content:*everythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview.(内内容要完整容要完整)Structure:*Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾好的开头结尾)*Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理结构合理,行文流畅行文流畅)Language:*NoChinglish(避免中文式英文避免中文式英文)*NoGrammaticalmistakes(没有语法错误没有语法错误)*Withexactlyusedwordsan

3、drelativelychangedsentencepatterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)8Steps of writing(写作步骤)1. Examinethetopic(审题审题) MainideaStyle VerbtensePerson2.Seizethemajorpoints/keywords(抓要点抓要点)figureouttheoutline(提纲提纲)4.Ensurethefluency (添加过添加过渡，确保连贯）渡，确保连贯）Conjunctions/conjunctiveadverbs5. Errorcorrecting(查错改错

4、查错改错)3.Sentencesconnection(连句成文连句成文)Words/phrasesSentencespassage91)Useproperlinkingwords(使用使用恰当的恰当的连接接词）Howtowriteagoodcomposition？10Warnings Do not let our mother tongue affect our English writing. 不要让汉语影响我们的英语写作。Be careful and clear-sighted. 11Warnings Do not be eager for quick success and instan

5、t benefit. 不要急功近利。Be patient and hard-working. 1213AvoidChinglish!1)TrafficinShanghaiistoocrowded.2)TherehasahighwayconnectedwithBeijing.3)Thoughshesalmost40，butshestillplanstocompete.4)Iforgotmydictionaryathome.5)Itwillcostusmuchmoneytobuyone. heavy.leftistake14Adoptavarietyofsentencepatterns使用较丰富的

6、句式使用较丰富的句式1.Theyeventhrewrubbishintothelake.TheytotallyignoredthenoticeablesignNolitteringnearby.(使用使用V-ing形式形式)Theyeventhrewrubbishintothelake,_thenoticeablesignNolitteringnearby.(12福建福建)totallyignoring15Adoptavarietyofsentencepatterns使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式NotlongagoIwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishcontest_i

7、nourschool.(12山东山东)held2.NotlongagoIwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishcontest.Itwasheldinourschool.(使用过去分词使用过去分词)16评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式1.提出要评论的事物或观点提出要评论的事物或观点.2.分别陈述利与弊分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点或不同的观点)3.归纳得出作者的结论归纳得出作者的结论.4.a.有定论的有定论的,作者可明确表态作者可明确表态(赞成或反对赞成或反对)5.b.争议较大的或尚无定论的争议较大的或尚无定论的,可不明确表可不明确表态态,提出扬长避短的方

8、法提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利也可以平衡其利弊弊,提出某种期望和设想提出某种期望和设想.典型模板典型模板17Just as a coin has two sides, _ also has some side effects. However, _ has also a lot of problems. For one thing, _; For another, _. Finally, _._ has brought a number of benefits to us. is a beneficial activity, in which we can obtain many adv

9、antages. First of all, _. Also, _. Most importantly, _.We are all aware that everything has its two sides. _ is no exception.开头开头:优优点点：缺缺点点：18结尾结尾:1）In spite of these disadvantages, I think _ does more good than harm to people. And the disadvantages, since they have been pointed out clearly, will be

10、 dealt with effectively.2）Weighing the two sides, there is no denying the fact that _ has produced great effects on society.193）To conclude, I would say that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.4）In sum, _ does more good than harm to _. We must take a correct attitude towards _. We should take

11、 full advantage of it and avoid its disadvantages.20（2）利弊型的议论文 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)_作文题目_. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in _题目议题_. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, _优点一_.

12、 And secondly _优点二_. Just As a popular saying goes, every coin has two sides, _讨论议题_ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, _缺点一_. In addition, _缺点二_. To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of _讨论议题_ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages

13、to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the _讨论议题_. 212)巧用衔接词巧用衔接词1)表示平行或选择关系表示平行或选择关系aswellas,togetherwith,notonlybutalso.,ratherthan2)表示转折关系表示转折关系however,inspiteof,otherwise,while3)表示对比关系表示对比关系onthecontrary,insteadof,ononehandontheotherhand.4)表示因果关系表示

14、因果关系therefore,asaresult(of),owingto,dueto,thanksto225）表示时间、顺序关系）表示时间、顺序关系firstly,secondly,foronething.foranother,eventually6）表示递进、强调关系）表示递进、强调关系whatsmore,inaddition,worsestill,moreover,furthermore,aboveall7）表示解释、说明关系）表示解释、说明关系suchas,forexample,forinstance,inotherwords,andsoon8）表示结论）表示结论inshort,inbri

15、ef,inaword,ingeneral,onthewhole,inconclusion231)_educationisbeneficialtousstudents.不可否认，教育对我们学生是有不可否认，教育对我们学生是有益的。益的。2)_educationisveryimportanttous.全世界都知道，教育对我全世界都知道，教育对我们是非常重要的。们是非常重要的。3)_educationconcerningqualityleavessomethingtobedesired.毫无疑问，毫无疑问，我们有关素质的教育是令人不满意。我们有关素质的教育是令人不满意。3)优美句型优美句型There

16、isnodenyingthatItisuniversallyacknowledgedthatThereisnodoubtthat244)_usingthefrogstokillharmfulinsects_itwontcreateanypollution.使用青蛙捕捉害虫的优点是它不会制造任何使用青蛙捕捉害虫的优点是它不会制造任何污染。污染。5)_peoplefoundwhatenvironmentmeanttous.直到多直到多年之后人年之后人们才发现环境对我们来说意们才发现环境对我们来说意味着什么。味着什么。_peoplefindwhatenvironmentmeanttous.6)_we

17、cantaffordtowasteit.时间是如此珍贵，经不起浪费。时间是如此珍贵，经不起浪费。AnadvantageofisthatItwasnotuntilmanyyearslaterthatNotuntilmanyyearslaterdidSopreciousistimethat257)_alwaysstayhealthy.只有借着做运动，我们才会始终保持健康。只有借着做运动，我们才会始终保持健康。8)_,Imstillunabletofindasuitableplacetolivein.虽然我已经很努力虽然我已经很努力了，但是我依然找不到合适的居住地。了，但是我依然找不到合适的居住地。

18、9)_ignorethevalueofreading.我我们们绝对不能忽略读书的价值。绝对不能忽略读书的价值。10)_thattheauthoritiesconcerned_properstepstosolvetheenvironmentalproblems.该是有关该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决环境问题的时候了。当局采取适当的措施来解决环境问题的时候了。11)We_lay_muchemphasisoneducation.我们在怎么强调教育也不为过。我们在怎么强调教育也不为过。OnlybytakingexercisewillweHardworkingasIamOnnoaccountcanwe

19、Itistimetookcannevertoo2612)_goodinterpersonalrelationshipplaysanimportantroleinourlife.显然，良好的人际关系在我们的生活中扮演着重要显然，良好的人际关系在我们的生活中扮演着重要的作用。的作用。13)Weshould_protectourenvironment.我们应该不遗余力的去保护我我们应该不遗余力的去保护我们的环境。们的环境。14)Protectingfrogs_protectingourenvironment.保护青蛙与保护环境息息相关。保护青蛙与保护环境息息相关。15)_someeffectivem

20、easures,wecanfinallyprotecttheearth.因为一些有效的措施，因为一些有效的措施，我们最终才能保护地球。我们最终才能保护地球。ItisobviousthatsparenoeffortstoiscloselyrelatedtoThanksto2716)_weareadmittedtouniversities.过不了多久我们就会被大学录取。过不了多久我们就会被大学录取。17)_MoYanhaswontheNobelPrizeinliterature.我印象最深的就是莫言获得了诺贝尔文学奖。我印象最深的就是莫言获得了诺贝尔文学奖。18)_wehavetoprotectf

21、rogs_theyarefriendsofman.我们必须保护我们必须保护青蛙的原因是它们是人类的朋友。青蛙的原因是它们是人类的朋友。19)_effectiveactionswetake,_lifewewilllive.我们的措施越有效，我们的生活就会更好。我们的措施越有效，我们的生活就会更好。ItwillnotbelongbeforeWhatimpressesmemostisthatThereasonwhyisthatThemorethebetter28StepsContentsDescription(Para1)Analysis(Para2)Solution(Para3)“kiss”the

22、wall;iscaughtby;drinksomuch;cantstandnormallyagreatdanger;forbiddrinking;raiseawarenesstowardssafety;makestricterlawsspreadouttheapproaches;ourself-conscience;payenoughattentionto29Exchangeanddiscussyourpartnerscomposition,thengiveeachotherascoreaccordingtothefollowingcriteria.Criteria（标准）（标准）MarkCo

23、ntent（内容）（内容） （是否用（是否用5 5句话表达了全文要点）句话表达了全文要点）05分分Language（语言）（语言）（句子结构及用词是否得当）（句子结构及用词是否得当）08分分Coherence（连贯）连贯）（是否用了恰当的词语来衔接句子）（是否用了恰当的词语来衔接句子）02分分Pair work30考场作文考场作文TIPS取悦评卷人取悦评卷人润色文章原则润色文章原则有清晰的整体脉络有清晰的整体脉络有自然的段间衔接有自然的段间衔接经典的用词用句经典的用词用句有整齐美观的书写有整齐美观的书写用词用词“老辣老辣”用句经典用句经典:倒装、强调、虚倒装、强调、虚拟拟名人名言名人名言31题

24、型题型对比观点对比观点(2或或3选选1)说明利弊说明利弊图表作文图表作文解决方法解决方法阐述主题阐述主题应用文应用文32说明利弊说明利弊说明事物说明事物现状现状(一句带过）一句带过）Nowadays,thereisawidespreadconcernover(theissuethat)作文题目作文题目.Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesin题目议题题目议题.33说明利弊说明利弊事物本身事物本身的优缺点的优缺点展开展开ItsadvantagescanbeseenasfollowsGenerallyspeaking,itiswidelybel

25、ievedthereareseveralpositiveaspectsasfollowsThenegativeaspectsarealsoapparentFirstly,_优点一优点一_.Andsecondly_优点优点二二_.Tobeginwith,(缺点一缺点一).Inaddition,(缺缺点二点二).Tomakemattersworse34说明利弊说明利弊你对现状你对现状（或前景）的看（或前景）的看法法4.喊口号喊口号Throughaboveanalyses,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweigh(胜于胜于)thenegativeones.The

26、refore,Iwouldliketo.Fromthecomparisonbetween Weshoulddoitaccordingtothecircumstanceswearein.Onlythroughcanwehaveabrightfuture.35说明利弊说明利弊NowadaysmanypeoplepreferAbecauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First(的优点的优点之一之一).Besides,（的优点之二）（的优点之二）.Buteverycoinh

27、astwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat(的第一个缺点的第一个缺点)Tomakemattersworse,(的第二个缺点的第二个缺点)Throughaboveanalyses,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iwouldliketo(我的看法我的看法)(FromthecomparisonbetweenthesepositiveandnegativeeffectsofA,wesh

28、ouldtakeitreasonablyanddoitaccordingtothecircumstanceswearein.Onlybythisway,(对前景的预测对前景的预测)36漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点影响给分的因素之一：影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面作文的卷面37Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?1.The character of this gala is that it relates peoples lives2.The most striking feature of this gala is its trad

29、itionally close link with ordinary peoples lives.3.Young people dont want to watch TV ,so they pay attention to other forms of celebration. 4.Young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV._38影响给分的因素之二：影响给分的因素之二：文中所采用的语言材料文中所采用的语言材料人靠衣装，文靠词装A.

30、词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;39PracticeFind some similar words or phrases of the followings1. good2. think3.clever perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent in ones opinion/viewhold the view that it is widely shared that wise bright smart intelligent cute40改变句子结构改变句子结构,与

31、众不同与众不同1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。A strong/big earthquake happened in Tangshan in the 1980s.There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tang Shan in the 1980s.2.你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了.I received your letter which was written on A

32、ugust 15th this morning.Your letter of August 15th reached/got to me this morning.41改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化1.He got excited when he heard the news._ the news, he got excited.2.The girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty._, the girl went home.3.I studied Chinese, English and Physi

33、cs at school._include Chinese, English and Physics .4.It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers._, Mr. Smith was watering _. HearingHungry and thirstyThe main subjects I studied at schoolEarly in the morningin the garden42使用强势句式，增强语句表现力使用强势句式，增强语句表现力1.We were

34、glad to see crops and vegetables growing well._we were to see crops and vegetables growing well!2. Radio broadcasts didnt begin until 1920.It was_.3.He never speaks about his own family.Never_.4.A notice is saying ”Please Save Water” on the wall.On the wall_.5.Though he is a child, he knows a lot._.

35、How gladnot until 1920 that radio broadcasts begandoes he speak about his own familyis a notice saying ”Please Save Water”Child though/as he is, he knows a lot43影响给分的因素之三：影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅行文的流畅 上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词44and,then,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition,more than that.1.1.表

36、递进表递进. .表转折表转折. .表因果表因果. .表目的表目的. .表归纳表归纳but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand. because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of.in order that,so that,for the purpose of.in general,in brief,in short,in conc

37、lusion,in a word,on the whole.45如何将这几个如何将这几个讲讲述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来，显得述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来，显得更有文采，得到高分呢？更有文采，得到高分呢？Many houses and schools were destroyed. More than five million people are living a hard life now. The students there need help and schools should be built. Students can return to classes soon.46Wi

38、lliam Shakespeare (2008高考湖南卷书面表达高考湖南卷书面表达)Do you know Hamlet? Have you read The Merchant of Venice? These two great works are both written by William Shakespeare, my favorite English writer and the man of all ages! Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poe

39、ms that are read all over the world, I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life! Since “Li

40、fe is a stage”, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone had his own role to play. and I will try my best to play my role well._影响给分的因素之四：影响给分的因素之四：文章的思想47A)Simplesentence(简单句简单句):B)Hearingthenews,hewashappy.B)CompoundsentenceA（并列句）（并列句）:HegavemeabookbutIforgottobringitbackh

41、ome.C)CompoundsentenceB（复合句）（复合句）:What he is doinghasnothingtodowithme.“规范的英语句子规范的英语句子”就是我们经常就是我们经常讲的三种句子：讲的三种句子：1.学会使用规范的英语句子48Hereare3waystomakesentences:I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：1)借助名词短语做同位语借助名词短语做同位语如：如：李立，男，李立，男，19岁，岁，1991年生；籍贯：年生；籍贯：广东。广东。LiLi,aboyof19,wasborninGuangdongin1991.2)借助介词短

42、语做定语借助介词短语做定语如：如：李飞李飞,男，男，10岁，棕色短发，穿白色茄克。岁，棕色短发，穿白色茄克。LiFeiisaten-year-oldboywithshortbrownhairandinawhitejacket.49如：如：有了有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。了他们的村子。WiththehelpofTom,wesoonfoundtheirvillage.4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语如：如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。Theywerestandingunderthebig

43、tree,waitingforthepresident.Standingunderthebigtree,theywerewaitingforthePresident.3)借助介词短语做状语借助介词短语做状语50II. II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：如：如：他给我很多钱，我不要。他给我很多钱，我不要。IwasjustwalkingdownthestreetcornerwhenIsawyou.如：如：我刚走到拐角处，就见到你了。我刚走到拐角处，就见到你了。HegavemealotofmoneybutIrefused.51III. III. 用好从句和引导词写出

44、规范的复合句：用好从句和引导词写出规范的复合句：1)名词性从句名词性从句如：如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。老师生气。原因：王力迟到。ThatWangLicamelatetoschoolmadetheteacherveryangry.2)定语从句定语从句如：如：中国中国,地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。众多。China,whichliesintheeastofAsia,isagreatcountrywithalargeareaandpopulationaswellasrichnaturalresources.Iwasdeeplymovedbythis,b

45、ecauseIknowLeiFengisstilllivinginourhearts.3)状语从句状语从句如：如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。522、灵活运用九种句式有意识的将下列句式结构运用到作文中去，有意识的将下列句式结构运用到作文中去，可以迅速地让我们的作文靓起来。重要的是可以迅速地让我们的作文靓起来。重要的是我们要学会如何灵活的变通、巧妙地运用到我们要学会如何灵活的变通、巧妙地运用到考试作文中去。考试作文中去。531.PeoplegrowriceinthesouthofChina.RiceisgrowninthesouthofChina.2.They

46、haveprintedoneandahalfmillioncopiesofthedictionarysince1986.One and a half million copies of thedictionaryhavebeenprintedsince1986.一、主动句与被动句的互换。一、主动句与被动句的互换。54二、将陈述句改为倒装句。二、将陈述句改为倒装句。1.IcouldhardlyunderstandtheimportanceofEnglishatthattime.HardlycouldIunderstandtheimportanceofEnglishatthattime.2.Wed

47、idnotrealizeourmistakesuntilatthattime.Notuntilatthattimedidwerealizeourmistakes.55三、将简单句改为强调句三、将简单句改为强调句1.Smoking did great harm to his health. It was smoking that did great harm to his health. 2. Our money is earned through hard work by our parents. It is through hard work that our money is earned

48、 by our parents.3. He went there yesterday. He did go there yesterday.56四、将两个简单句合并为并列句四、将两个简单句合并为并列句1.You can do it. I can do it. One of us must do it. you I must do it.2.I want to buy this bike. I dont have enough money. I want to buy this bike, I dont have enough money.Eitherorbut57五、将两个简单句合并为复合句五

49、、将两个简单句合并为复合句1.同位语和同位语从句同位语和同位语从句1)LiuXiangisanexcellentathlete.HewonthefirstprizeinMens110HurdleRaceinthe2004OlympicGames._,_,wonthefirstprizeinMens110HurdleRaceinthe2004OlympicGames.2)Thewordistrue.Thepresidentwillgiveourschoolaspeech._istrue_thepresidentwillgiveourschoolaspeech.LiuXianganexcellen

50、tathleteItthat582.定语从句定语从句1)The2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijing,anditssloganisOneWorld,OneDream,The2008OlympicGames,_2)Inmyopinion,theGreatWallandtheSummerPalacearewellworthvisiting.Inmyopinion,theGreatWallandtheSummerPalace_3)Yesterday,wewenttotheEastGate,andweboughtalotofclothes.Yesterday,wewen

51、ttotheEastGate,_OneDream,willbeheldinBeijing.arethetwoplaceswhicharewellworthvisiting.whereweboughtaWhosesloganisOneWorld,lotofclothes.593.主语从句主语从句1)Hiswonderfulperformanceonthestageimpressedme.mostwashiswonderfulperformanceonthestage.2)Itsatisfiedme.Thedininghallprovidesuswithalargevarietyofkindsof

52、dishes.thedininghallprovidesuswithalargevarietyofkindsofdishes.3)Ilearnedfromthestorythataslongaswehavepatience,confidenceandperseverance,wecanrealizeourdreams.aslongaswehavepatience,confidenceandperseverance,wecanrealizeourdreams.WhatimpressedmeWhatsatisfiedmeisthatWhatIhavelearntfromthestoryisthat

53、60推荐句型推荐句型WhatsurprisesastonishedsatisfiedimpressedmeisthatWhatIwouldliketosuggestadviseputforwardisthatWhatmattersmostisthatWhatIlearnconcludefromthestoryisthat614.表语从句表语从句推荐句型：推荐句型：isnolongerwhatitusedtobe.1)我的家乡不再像以前那样了。我的家乡不再像以前那样了。Myhometownisnolongerwhatitusedtobe.2)他不再是以前那样了。他不再是以前那样了。Heisnol

54、ongerwhatheusedtobe.625.状语从句状语从句结果、程度结果、程度sothat;suchthat让步让步nomatterhowwhatwhenwhere.=whatever,however,whenever,wherever时间时间wasdoingwhen,assoonas,themoment,thenexttime,everytime631)不管前面有多少困难，我们都要学会独立的不管前面有多少困难，我们都要学会独立的克服他们。克服他们。_,weshouldlearntoovercomethemindependently.2)我正沿着马路走，突然我听到有人叫我。我正沿着马路走

55、，突然我听到有人叫我。I_alongtheroad_suddenlyIheardmynamecalled.Nomatterhowmanydifficultiestherewaswalkingwhenareaheadofus,64六、将两个简单句合并为一个由六、将两个简单句合并为一个由which引导的非限引导的非限制性定语从句制性定语从句1.Recentlymanystudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutit.Recentlymanystudentsspendtheir

56、moneyonunnecessarythings,aboutdifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.2.Manyboyslearntosmoke.Itdoesharmtotheirhealth.Manyboyslearntosmoke,_whichwhichdoesharmtotheirhealth.65七、七、it作形式主语或形式宾语句型作形式主语或形式宾语句型1.Youpretendtoknowwhatyoudontknow.Itsnogood.Itsnogoodpretendingtoknowwhatyoudontknow.2.Itiseasytoget

57、onwithPam.Ifind.IfinditeasytogetonwithPam.66八、分词结构代替状语从句八、分词结构代替状语从句1.Ifyouworkharder,youwilldobetterintheexamnexttime._,youwilldobetterintheexamnexttime.2.Becausemyfriendwasfrightenedoflosinghisjob,hesaidnothingtothepolice._,myfriendsaidnothingtothepolice.WorkinghardFrightenedoflosinghisjob67九、九、将状

58、语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成变成with引导的短语或者复合结构引导的短语或者复合结构。With+宾语宾语+adj./adv./介词短语介词短语/tododoingdone常用句型常用句型withapopulationof.withatotalareaofwithalonghistoryofyears681)这个地区占地这个地区占地2000平方千米，人口平方千米，人口10万。万。Thisareacoversanareaof2000squarekilometers,_2)我们学校周围种了很多花，吸引了大量的学我们学校周围种了很多花，吸引了大量的学生来参观。生

59、来参观。_,itattractsalargenumberofpeople.3)我们学校是一所有我们学校是一所有100多年历史的名校。多年历史的名校。Ourschoolisafamousone_withapopulationof100,000.Withmanyflowerssurroundingourschoolwithahistoryofover100years.694）没有做完作业，这个小孩不敢去上学。）没有做完作业，这个小孩不敢去上学。_,theboydarednotgotoschool.5)这两个男人早早就睡了，蜡烛烧了一晚上。这两个男人早早就睡了，蜡烛烧了一晚上。Thetwomenwe

60、nttobedearly,_.6)他睡觉的时候嘴巴张得大大的。他睡觉的时候嘴巴张得大大的。Hesleep_.withcandlesburninganightlongWithhomeworknotfinishedwithhismouthwideopen70表达个人观点的用语表达个人观点的用语I think/ I firmly believe that in my opinion, / in my view,.personally speaking,As far as I am concerned, In my point of view, .I agree with somebody/ some

61、thing.I agree thatI agree to do71常用句子常用句子NomatterhowdifficultEnglishmaybe,youshoulddoyourbesttolearnit.Nothing can prevent us from realizing the fourmodernizations.Asthesayinggoes,nothingintheworldisdifficultforonewhosetshismindtoit.Uponhearingtheunexpectednews,hewassosurprisedthathecouldntsayaword.

62、Thereisnodenying(thefact)thatthenewmanagementmethodhasgreatlyincreasedtheproduction. 72常用句子常用句子Itakeitforgrantedthattheywillsupportthisidea.Itistruethatwemustmakeourgreaterefforts;otherwise,wecannotcatchupwiththedevelopedcountries.Wewillbesuccessfulaslongasweinsistonworkinghard.Tobefrank,whetheryoul

63、ikeitornot,youhavenootherchoice.Asfarasweknow,ittookhimmorethanayeartowritethebook.Asweknow,itwasnotuntilrecentlythattheproblemwassolved. 73常用句子常用句子Asisknowntous,knowledgeispower.Totellthetruth,manymistakeswemadecouldhavebeenavoided.Thereisnodoubtthatyouwillbehelpedbyothersifyouhaveanydifficulties.I

64、tishardtoimaginehowEdisonmanagedtoworktwentyhourseachday.Itisacommonsayingthatwherethereisawill,thereisaway.Itmustbekeptinmindthatthereisnosecretofsuccessbuthardwork. 74常用句子常用句子Comparedwiththetraditionalcards,electroniccardsaremoreinterestingandlively. Groupthreehelpedtoraisemoneyinthestreetforthe“H

65、opeProject”,sothatmorechildreninpoorareascanaffordtheirschoolingApartfromstudentsfromGuangmingMiddleschool,theattendantsincludestudentsfromothermiddleschoolsorcolleges,evendoctorsandengineers.Inacertainsense,asuccessfulscientistisapersonwhoisneversatisfiedwithwhathehasachieved.75常用句子常用句子Itcanbeseenf

66、romthisthatthereisnodifficultyintheworldwecannotovercome.Thesevolunteersactivitiescanhelpustogainsomesocialexperienceandmakegoodsenseofourpersonalvaluesaswell.LastSunday,ourclassorganizedsomevolunteersactivities,inwhichallofustookanactivepart.76常用句子常用句子ItsreportedthatLiMingwonthegamelastweek.Itsnous

67、ecryingoverthespiltmilk.Thisisbynomeansthebestwaytosolvetheproblemofenergycrisis.Accordingtotheinformationgiveninthetable/graph,wecanfindthat.773.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(使用名词性从句使用名词性从句)4.Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(改被动语态改被动语态)_ thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.What su

68、rpriseshimisthat_theconferencebeputoff.Itissuggestedthat785.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型使用强调句型)6.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）用虚拟语气）_hehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper_heknewwhathadhappened._thephysicsexam_yourhelp.It was not untilIcouldnthavepa

69、ssed thatbutfor/without797.Iwontbelievewhathesays.(使用状语使用状语从句从句)8.Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(用定用定语从句从句)_hesays,Iwontbelieve.Thegirl_isspokenhighlyof. Nomatterwhat/Whateverwhosecompositionwaswellwritten809. Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（用并列句）（用并列句）10.Hehadnosoone

70、rcomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装使用倒装句句)_hecomebackfromBeijing_hewassentabroad._makerapidprogress.Study hard,and youllNosoonerhad Hardly/scarcely.when.than81ASSESSMENTstructureIstheessaydividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?contentAreallthedetailsstated?Iseverythingtothepoint(切

71、切题)?LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高（高级词汇）?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）（句式）?Standardofagoodcomposition82A good essay is usually made up ofa topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.Topic paragraph Supporti

72、ng Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3Concluding paragraph83To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.generalstatementgeneralstatementtopicstatementtopicstatementTopicparagraph(Introductionparagraph)Generalstatem

73、entTopicstatement84SupportingParagraphs(Body)ParagraphsTSSSSSSSSSFirstly,.Secondly,.Moreover,.Finally,.However,.Inaddition,Furthermore,.85ConclusionPersonally,inconclusion,inbrief,Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthat.Insummary,itiswiser.86TheparagraphWhatmakesagoodparagraph?87Ago

74、odparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Therearedifferentkindsofbee.Someliveinlargegroupslikethehoneybee,andmaketheirnestsintreesorholesintherocks.Otherspeciesmaketheirnestsinholesintheground.Therearealsovarietiesthatdonotliveingroupsatalltopicsentence88Whereveryougoinours

75、chool,youseegreenlawnsandtreesandbeautifulflowers.Dottedamongthesetreesandflowersaremanybuildingsofdifferentstyles.Astreamrunsthroughourschoolandyoualwaysseeeverythingreflectedinthewater.Topicsentence:_justlikeagarden.Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.Ourschoolisjustlikeagarden.Ourschoolis89Agoodparagraphi

76、sonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.IbelieveEnglishismoreimportantthanotherforeignlanguagesformanyreasons.Firstofall,Englishisspokenbyalargenumberofpeople,andthesepeoplearethemostwidelyspreadacrosstheworldinagreatmanycountries.Secondly,Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageontheinternet.Ithasbecomeanon-l

77、inelanguage.Thirdly,the2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinourcountryandEnglishwillbeveryuseful.Lastly,90正确使用有关连接词时间先后：时间先后：first,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen,afterawhile转折关系：转折关系：but,however,onthecontrary,nevertheless因果关系：因果关系：because,since,as,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof,forthereasonthat让步关系：让

78、步关系：though,although,evenif,eventhough,inspiteofthefactthat递进关系：递进关系：whatsmore,inaddition,furthermoreontheonehandontheotherhand,条件关系：条件关系：if,unless,aslongas,onconditionthat表表列列举：举：forexample/instance,takeforexample,thatstosay,inotherwords,asfollows表表总总结：结： inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,onthewh

79、ole,ashasbeenstated91Agoodparagraphisonewithvariedsentencepatterns.92丰富的句式：丰富的句式：( (常用到的句型结构）常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。e.g.Whatakindboyheis!Howdisappointedhewas!感叹句感叹句强调句强调句e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.93e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.There

80、 comesthepolicecar.Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhen theymettheyoungman.e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.倒装句倒装句省略句省略句with短语短语94e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.Letscome

81、tothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.定语从句定语从句e.g.ThatswhatIshoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent.各种名词性从句各种名词性从句95e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Themomentwereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.Solongasweworkharderatourlessons,wellcatchupsoonerorlater.各

82、种状语从句各种状语从句96Summary:A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.Agoodparagraphisonethatconsistsofatopicsentenceandsupportingsentences.Agoodparagraphisonethatcontainsproperlinkingwords.Agoodparagraphisonewithadvancedvocabularyandvarieds

83、entencepatterns.97ASSESSMENTstructureIstheessaydividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?contentAreallthedetailsstated?Iseverythingtothepoint(切切题)?LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高（高级词汇）?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）（句式）?Letsimprov

84、eit:981.Agoodbeginningmakesagoodending.2.Yourcompositionshouldbedividedintoparagraphs.3.Youdbetterusesomelinkingwords.4.Handwritingisofgreatimportance.Suggestions:99第一段：第一段：1.Some people agree to NO. One, because they usually think that .In the meantime , . In addition.2.Some people think that A is

85、right because .3.Some people suggest / say that . At the same time they point out the fact that.Whats more.4.Some people prefer NO. One. In their opinion A . In addition .100第二段：第二段：1.On the other hand, some people hold that B is right. They think .2.But many more people dont agree with them. They p

86、refer B. They say that.The reason is that.3.On the contrary, some people hold that .4.Some people think that B is better. It is clear that. Whats more, .Also. 在在第第一一段段和和第第二二段段中中一一定定要要用用原原因因或或列列举举等等方方式式展开段落。展开段落。101第三段：提出自己的见解并且加以论证第三段：提出自己的见解并且加以论证1.In my opinion B is better than A. There is no doub

87、t that .2.I support A. The reason goes as follows.3.As far as I am concerned, I agree to the latter. First.Second. Finally.4.It is likely that people will go on arguing over these questions. I think that everything has both its positive and negative sides. We should keep an open mind. 1025.People wi

88、ll continue to argue over the questions, I think wed better keep an open mind because everything has two sides. It all relies on.6.Of these two ways of .I prefer.First of all,. Second,.103Shouldwegivemoreattentiontostudentshealthorgrades?TheMinistryofEducationofChinahasurgedallthestudentstoparticipa

89、teinthewinterlong-distancerunningactivity.Itissuggestedthatprimaryschoolstudentsshouldrun1,000metersaday,juniorschoolstudents,1,500andseniorschoolstudents,2,000.Differentpeoplealwaysoffervariousviews. Somepeoplesayyestothisactivity.Theythink,foronething,itcanmakepeoplepaymoreattentiontophysicaleduca

90、tion;foranother,runningcanimprovestudentshealthandhelpthemstudyefficientlysotheycanhavegoodgrades.However,othersholdoppositeopinionsabouttheactivity.Theybelievethatlearningisthemostimportanttaskforstudentsandtheirfuturedependsontheirgradesintheirsubjects.Meanwhile,manycantmeetthehighrequirements.Wha

91、tsworse,somewillsuffercoldandinjuries.Inmyopinion,itsallrightforschoolstocareaboutstudentshealthandcarryouttheactivitystepbystep.Rememberagoodbodyhelpsmakehighefficiency.104Whatdoyouthinkabouttheconcludingparagraph?Isitagoodone?Ifnot,howcanyouimproveit?Inmyopinion,itsallrightforschoolstopaymoreatten

92、tiontostudentshealthandcarryouttheactivitystepbystep.Rememberagoodbodyhelpsmakehighefficiency.105Inmyopinion,itsbetterforschoolstopaymoreattentiontostudentshealthandcarryouttheactivitystepbystep,becauseagoodbodyhelpsmakehighefficiency.Whatsmore,itnotnolyhelpsstudentsgetrelaxed,butalsowillbenefitthem

93、intheirfuturelife.106Advantageshelpusinmanyaspects.benefitalot./bebeneficialtokeepsb.informedof;haveaccessto;beaccessibletoexposesb.tosth.,helpcomparehaveabetterunderstandingofpromotethesalesof,sellwelleducatesb.todo /teachsb.todo 107However,thereexistalotofdisadvantages.misleadsb./cheatsb.into/take

94、in.interruptsb./bothersb.doharmto./beharmfulto,increasethecostof/wastedoingDisadvantages108Yourattitude/opinion:1.As far as I am concerned, outweigh2.Even thoughI still consider it3.With all itswe must acknowledge4.I believe we canas long as109Part1:Part2:Part3:Learn to organizeintroductiontoyourtop

95、icadvantages/disadvantagesyouropinion110A good compositionOrganizationContentLanguage111Reading As science and technology develops , we can see advertisements almost everywhere. Advertisements help people get much information about new products. Company can sell more products than before. And some a

96、dvertisements educate the public. Advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life. It wastes a lot of natural resources ,which increases the cost of products. They mislead or even cheat consumers. They make us upset. I think advertising is useful. If we have enough facts from ads, we can easi

97、ly make a much better choice. (Introduction)(Advantages) (Disadvantages)( My opinion)(86words)112Learn to polish As science and technology develops , we can see advertisements almost everywhere 增分策略一增分策略一 使用高级词汇使用高级词汇people are constantly exposed to adsPeople have access to /are accessible to adsAdv

98、ertising finds its way into / floods into our daily life.With science and technology developing With the development of science and technology , 替换为：替换为：替换为：替换为：1131.Itwastesalotofnaturalresources,which increasesthecostofproducts.1) increasing the cost of products.增分策略增分策略 二二 使用非谓语形式使用非谓语形式2 ) causi

99、ng / leading to / resulting in/ contributing to / bringing about2. If we have enough facts from ads, we can easily make a much better choice. the higher prices of products.enough facts from ads, we can .Havingenough facts from Armed with / Equipped with1141.Para.2isaboutadvantagesofadvertisements.Pa

100、ra3:Advertisementshavesomebadeffectsonourdailylife.However, advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life. 增分策略三增分策略三 巧用过渡连接表达巧用过渡连接表达2. It wastes a lot of natural resources, which increases the cost of products. They mislead or even cheat consumers. They also make us upset.In the first pla

101、ce, it wastes . In the second place , they mislead.Furthermore, they make us upset.(段内句子之间衔接段内句子之间衔接)(段际过渡段际过渡)115增分策略四增分策略四 加强一义多形加强一义多形How to express ones opinion or suggestion 1. As far as I am concerned/ As to me/From my point of view we should attach more importance to 2. As for my own idea abo

102、utI believe/think / propose / suggest 3. Personally/ But for me, I would rather / prefer to .4. Even thoughI still consider it5. With all itswe must acknowledge116Advertisementshelppeoplegetmuchinformationaboutnewproducts.1) It is ads that help people get./ It is with the help of ads that people can

103、 .增分策略五增分策略五 句式变换句式变换2) It is believed that ads help inform people of new products. 3) If it were not for ads, people wouldnt get 4) How helpful ads are in providing information for people.117Withthehelpofads,peoplecangetmuchinformationaboutnewproducts.Makinguseofads,companiescanpromotethesalesofpro

104、ducts.Someadvertisementseducatethepublic1.Advertisements benefit us in many ways. 增分策略六增分策略六 注重主题句注重主题句2.Ads bring a lot of benefits to us. 3.Advertisements are beneficial to us in many aspects. 4.Ads are playing an important part / role in our daily life. 118 Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnolog

105、y,peopleareconstantlyexposedtoads.Adsbenefitusinmanyways.Itisbelievedthatadscaninformpeopleofnewproducts.Making useofads,companiescanpromotethesalesofproducts.Advertisementseducatethepublic.However,thereexistsomebadeffectsonourdailylife.Inthefirstplace,itisawasteofnaturalresources,increasingthecosto

106、fproducts.Inthesecondplace,notonlydoadsmisleadorevencheatconsumersbutalsomakeusupsetanddisturbed.AsfarasIamconcerned,advertisingisofuse.Ifwearearmedwithenoughfactsfromads,itiseasyforustomakeamuchbetterchoiceofgoods.Appreciating the polished work (123 words)119Summary Tobecomplete.Tobeaccurate.Tobevaried.Tobecoherent.三性一复杂三性一复杂内容的内容的完整性完整性 用词的用词的准确性准确性篇章的篇章的连贯性连贯性 句子的句子的复杂复杂度度