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1、出差出差表达自己的思想表达自己的思想饭后游泳饭后游泳推迟推迟穿上;上演;穿上;上演;增加体重增加体重熄灭熄灭收好,放好收好,放好把把.放整齐放整齐我明白了我明白了. .从从.掉下来掉下来经历经历低声地低声地 on business on business express oneself express oneself swim swim onon a full stomach a full stomach put off put off put on put on put on weight put on weight put out the fire put out the fire put
2、 away put away put sth put sth in order in order I got it. I got it. fall off fall off go through go through in in a low voice a low voice 1. 1.你认为什么事使老师生气你认为什么事使老师生气? ?2. 2. 他从不吃早饭他从不吃早饭, ,是吗是吗? ?What do you think madeWhat do you think made the teacher the teacher angryangry? ?He never has breakfas
3、t, He never has breakfast, does does he?he?3. 3. 天气这么热天气这么热, ,鱼肉会变质的。鱼肉会变质的。It is so hot that the fish will It is so hot that the fish will go badgo bad. .4.阅览室不准吸烟。We donWe dont allow smokingt allow smoking in the reading in the reading room.room.5.5.会议被推迟到下星期五了。会议被推迟到下星期五了。6.6.快点!只剩下五分钟了。快点!只剩下五分钟
4、了。The meeting The meeting has been put offhas been put off tilltill next Friday. next Friday.Hurry up! Hurry up! There are only five minutesThere are only five minutes left.left.7.7.虽然他已经失败了三次,但他还要再试一次。虽然他已经失败了三次,但他还要再试一次。Though he failed there times, he wanted to Though he failed there times, he wa
5、nted to try try a fourth timea fourth time. .to goto go 请以the Beijing Olympics 为题,参考下面信息,写一篇意思连贯、语句通顺的100字左右的短文, 可适当扩展。1.奥运会在北京的召开使每个中国人都很激动,中国人多年的梦想得以实现。2.北京奥运会的成功举办显示了中国的能力和实力,得到了世界的高度评价。同时也让世界了解中国,让中国更了解世界。3. 奥运会上各国运动员奋力拼搏的精神鼓舞了我们每个人。4. 希望奥运精神体现在我们平常的学习生活中。生词:举办 host 运动员 athlete内容内容语法语法思想思想框架框架-组
6、织结构组织结构要点全,拓展有度,有效要点全,拓展有度,有效连接词,作文结构紧连接词,作文结构紧凑;凑;流畅流畅准确,复杂语法结构,准确,复杂语法结构,高级词汇,多种句型高级词汇,多种句型能引起读者的共鸣;能引起读者的共鸣;灵魂灵魂1. 1.时态语态问题时态语态问题 Beijing will host the 29Beijing will host the 29thth Olympic Games. Olympic Games. Beijing Beijing hosted hosted the 29th Olympic Games.the 29th Olympic Games. The dre
7、am has been come true. The dream has been come true. The dream The dream has come truehas come true. . We have We have realizedrealized our dream. our dream.2. 2. 主谓一致问题主谓一致问题 Everyone were exciting.Everyone were exciting. EveryoneEveryone was excitedwas excited. .3. 3. 逐字翻译问题逐字翻译问题 The athletes tri
8、ed their best encouraged us.The athletes tried their best encouraged us.The athletes tried their best,The athletes tried their best, which encouragedwhich encouraged usus. .4. 4. 词性混淆问题词性混淆问题The Olympics were hosted successful.The Olympics were hosted successful.The Olympics were The Olympics were s
9、uccessfullysuccessfully hosted. hosted.5. 5. 介词短语的运用问题介词短语的运用问题 I Im proud of China is strong.m proud of China is strong. I Im proud m proud that that China is strong. China is strong. We have looked forward to host the Olympics.We have looked forward to host the Olympics.We have looked forwardWe ha
10、ve looked forward to hostingto hosting the Olympics.the Olympics.1. 审题审题2. 列提纲列提纲/要点要点3.连词成句连词成句4.连句成篇连句成篇5. 润色修正润色修正6. 定稿定稿体裁体裁时态时态 结构结构要求要求字数内容信息信息2信息信息3开头开头正文正文结尾结尾体裁体裁时态时态 要求要求结构结构字数字数内容内容一般过去时一般过去时Para.1Para.1Para.2Para.2Para.3Para.3抓要点抓要点,凑字数凑字数信息信息1信息信息4奥运会在北京召开 每个中国人都很激动 多年的梦想得以实现 各国运动员奋力拼搏
11、精神鼓舞了我们每个人受到了世界的高度评价显示了中国的能力和实力 使世界了解中国的历史和文化也让中国更了解世界 hosted hosted excited excited came true came true tried their best tried their best encouraged encouraged showed showedspoke/thought highly ofspoke/thought highly oflearned more aboutlearned more abouthad a chance to get closer tohad a chance to
12、 get closer tomade every efforts/spared no effortsmade every efforts/spared no effortshad a better understanding ofhad a better understanding of hosted hosted excited excited came true came true tried their best tried their best encouraged encouraged showed showedspoke/thought highly ofspoke/thought
13、 highly of learned more about learned more abouthad a chance to get closer tohad a chance to get closer tomade every efforts/spared no effortsmade every efforts/spared no effortshad a better understanding ofhad a better understanding ofBeijingBeijingthe 29the 29thth Olympic Games. Olympic Games.It I
14、tevery Chinese.every Chinese.The dreamThe dream. .AthletesAthletes. .This spiritsThis spiritsevery one of us.every one of us.This successThis successChinaChinas power.s power.PeoplePeopleit.it.ForeignersForeigners Chinese Chinese history and culture.history and culture.ChinaChina the the world. worl
15、d. Beijing Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games. It hosted the 29th Olympic Games. It excited every Chinese. The dream came true . excited every Chinese. The dream came true . Athletes made every efforts. This spirits Athletes made every efforts. This spirits encouraged every one of us. The success
16、 encouraged every one of us. The success showed Chinashowed Chinas power. People spoke highly s power. People spoke highly of it. Foreigners had a better understanding of of it. Foreigners had a better understanding of Chinese history and culture. China had a Chinese history and culture. China had a
17、 chance to get closer to the world.chance to get closer to the world. Beijing Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games. It hosted the 29th Olympic Games. It excited every Chinese. The dream came true . excited every Chinese. The dream came true . Beijing Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games, hosted th
18、e 29th Olympic Games, whichwhich excited every Chinese, excited every Chinese, becausebecause the dream the dream that that Chinese had dreamt for many yearsChinese had dreamt for many years came true . came true . Athletes made every efforts. This spirits Athletes made every efforts. This spirits e
19、ncouraged every one of us. The success encouraged every one of us. The success showed Chinashowed Chinas power. People spoke highly s power. People spoke highly of it. Foreigners had a better understanding of of it. Foreigners had a better understanding of Chinese history and culture. China had a Ch
20、inese history and culture. China had a chance to get closer to the world.chance to get closer to the world. The Beijing Olympic games were a success . The Beijing Olympic games were a success . People all over the world spoke highly of it. People all over the world spoke highly of it. Athletes from
21、different countries made every Athletes from different countries made every efforts to compete in the eventsefforts to compete in the events, which, which encouraged encouraged every one of us every one of us not to give up in face of difficultynot to give up in face of difficulty. . WhatWhats mores
22、 more, the successful Olympics showed to , the successful Olympics showed to the world the world how powerful China ishow powerful China is, , thus makingthus making foreigners have a better understanding of Chinese foreigners have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture. history and c
23、ulture. At the same timeAt the same time , China had a , China had a chance to get closer to the world.chance to get closer to the world. Beijing Beijing hosted the 29th Olympic Games, hosted the 29th Olympic Games, whichwhich excited every Chinese, excited every Chinese, becausebecause the dream th
24、e dream that that Chinese had dreamt for many yearsChinese had dreamt for many years came true . came true . The Beijing Olympic games were a success . The Beijing Olympic games were a success . People all over the world People all over the world spoke highly ofspoke highly of it. it. Athletes from
25、different countries Athletes from different countries made every made every efforts toefforts to compete in the events compete in the events, which , which encouraged encouraged every one of us every one of us not to give up in face of difficultynot to give up in face of difficulty. . WhatWhats more
26、s more, the successful Olympics showed to , the successful Olympics showed to the world the world how powerful China ishow powerful China is, , thus makingthus making foreigners foreigners have a better understanding ofhave a better understanding of Chinese Chinese history and culture. At the same t
27、ime , China had a history and culture. At the same time , China had a chance to chance to get closer toget closer to the world. the world. The Beijing Olympics The Beijing Olympics I believe all the Chinese must be excited because of I believe all the Chinese must be excited because of the Beijing O
28、lympics Games. Our dream for years the Beijing Olympics Games. Our dream for years finally finally came true.came true. We saw the athletes from different countries try We saw the athletes from different countries try their best to win.Ittheir best to win.It not onlynot only encouraged everybody, en
29、couraged everybody, but alsobut also made us realise made us realise that that “higher, faster and higher, faster and strongerstronger” is the spirit of the Olympic Games. is the spirit of the Olympic Games. As the games was hosted successfully, we proved As the games was hosted successfully, we pro
30、ved that China was developing and becoming stronger. that China was developing and becoming stronger. WhatWhats mores more, we show special culture and long , we show special culture and long history of China to foreigner. And at the same time, history of China to foreigner. And at the same time, we
31、 also know more about the world.we also know more about the world. In a word,In a word, the Beijing Olympics is a big celebration the Beijing Olympics is a big celebration of friendship and culture that of friendship and culture that aims to bring people aims to bring people all over the world together.all over the world together.