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1、HowtoexpressemotionsandfeelingsinTask-writingWarmingup-Expressyourfeelings Malaysia Airline MH370 disappeared during the flight to Beijing. The plane with all the people on board cannot be found yet.“I feel terrible for the incident. I believe they are all good people and each and everyone of them h
2、as a family. Their families must be devastated.” -Hahfisar Nadazri, a 28-year-old teacher. ExpressingfeelingsinTask-writing(你读你读.之之后的感受、心情后的感受、心情)广州市调研考广州市调研考广州市调研考广州市调研考广州市模拟考广州市模拟考广州市模拟考广州市模拟考1111年广州市年广州市年广州市年广州市“ “一模一模一模一模”“”“二二二二模模模模” ”1212年广州市年广州市年广州市年广州市“ “一模一模一模一模” ”高考高考高考高考其他地市和学校的模拟考，其他地市和学
3、校的模拟考，其他地市和学校的模拟考，其他地市和学校的模拟考，联考均有出现联考均有出现联考均有出现联考均有出现1313届第四次六校联考届第四次六校联考届第四次六校联考届第四次六校联考1414届第三次六校联考届第三次六校联考届第三次六校联考届第三次六校联考1313年茂名年茂名年茂名年茂名“ “二模二模二模二模” ”08,09,1008,09,10年广州市调研考年广州市调研考年广州市调研考年广州市调研考07,08年高考年高考MothersconcernaboutMothersconcernaboutherson;herson;AstudentsfirstyearinAstudentsfirstyea
4、rincollege;college;AfarmergrowcornbyAfarmergrowcornbysharingseeds;sharingseeds;AdishoneststudentAdishoneststudentfailedineveryinterviewfailedineveryinterview; ;RelatedTopicsWritingrequirements1.1.你你你你读信后读信后读信后读信后的感受的感受的感受的感受; ;1.1.对对对对中学生活中学生活中学生活中学生活的感受；的感受；的感受；的感受；1.1.你对文中你对文中你对文中你对文中故事故事故事故事的看法及的
5、看法及的看法及的看法及感感感感受受受受; ;1.1.你你你你读文章后读文章后读文章后读文章后的感受的感受的感受的感受Casestudy-HowtoexpressemotionsandfeelingsinTask-writingStep1tochoosethetoneSampleOneAletterfromamother12年广州市一模年广州市一模Tips: 1. Read closely for emotions 2. Underline the key words for emotions which decide your toneWords and expressions of pers
6、onal emotionsWords and expressions of personal emotions钦佩，赞赏，羡慕钦佩，赞赏，羡慕钦佩，赞赏，羡慕钦佩，赞赏，羡慕对对对对 .感到满意感到满意感到满意感到满意对对对对 .感到高兴感到高兴感到高兴感到高兴为为为为 .感到自豪感到自豪感到自豪感到自豪感激感激感激感激被感动、被打动被感动、被打动被感动、被打动被感动、被打动深受启发深受启发深受启发深受启发受鼓舞，受鼓动受鼓舞，受鼓动受鼓舞，受鼓动受鼓舞，受鼓动热切，迫切热切，迫切热切，迫切热切，迫切同情同情同情同情能理解，感同身受能理解，感同身受能理解，感同身受能理解，感同身受尴尬尴尬尴尬尴
7、尬沮丧的，受打击的沮丧的，受打击的沮丧的，受打击的沮丧的，受打击的羞愧，无地自容羞愧，无地自容羞愧，无地自容羞愧，无地自容悲伤的悲伤的悲伤的悲伤的焦急的，忧虑的焦急的，忧虑的焦急的，忧虑的焦急的，忧虑的对对对对 .感到难过，遗憾感到难过，遗憾感到难过，遗憾感到难过，遗憾生气，愤怒生气，愤怒生气，愤怒生气，愤怒内疚内疚内疚内疚后悔（的）后悔（的）后悔（的）后悔（的）对对对对 .感到失望感到失望感到失望感到失望对对对对 .感到震惊感到震惊感到震惊感到震惊为为为为 .担忧、不安担忧、不安担忧、不安担忧、不安Words and expressions of personal emotionsWords
8、 and expressions of personal emotions钦佩，赞赏，羡慕钦佩，赞赏，羡慕钦佩，赞赏，羡慕钦佩，赞赏，羡慕对对对对 .感到满意感到满意感到满意感到满意对对对对 .感到高兴感到高兴感到高兴感到高兴为为为为 .感到自豪感到自豪感到自豪感到自豪感激感激感激感激被感动、被打动被感动、被打动被感动、被打动被感动、被打动深受启发深受启发深受启发深受启发受鼓舞，受鼓动受鼓舞，受鼓动受鼓舞，受鼓动受鼓舞，受鼓动热切，迫切热切，迫切热切，迫切热切，迫切同情同情同情同情能理解，感同身受能理解，感同身受能理解，感同身受能理解，感同身受l ladmire, appreciate, en
9、vyl lbe satisfied, content withl lbe delighted, pleased withl lbe proud ofl lbe grateful, thankful tol lbe touched, movedl lbe greatly inspiredl lbe encouraged, motivatedl lbe eager for / to dol lhave sympathy for be sympathetic to l lunderstand, appreciate your feelings尴尬尴尬糟糕的糟糕的沮丧的，受打击的沮丧的，受打击的羞愧，
10、无地自容羞愧，无地自容悲伤的悲伤的焦急的，忧虑的焦急的，忧虑的对对.感到难过，遗憾感到难过，遗憾生气，愤怒生气，愤怒内疚内疚后悔（的）后悔（的）对对.感到失望感到失望对对.感到震惊感到震惊为为.担忧、不安担忧、不安l lbe embarrassedl lbe terrible, awfull lbe upset, discouragedl lbe ashamedl lbe sorrowfull lbe anxious l lbe sorry forl lbe angry with / aboutl lbe guiltyl lregret / be regretful thatl lbe dis
11、appointed withl lbe shocked, astonishedl lbe concerned, worriedStep1tochoosethetoneSampleOneAletterfromamother12年广州市一模年广州市一模Tips: 1. Read closely for emotions 2. Underline the key words for emotions which decide your toneKeywordsintheletter:worriedabout;concerned;beg1.你读信后的感受；你读信后的感受；Iappreciatewhat
12、yousayandamsorrytohavecausedyousomuchworry.Imalsotouchedthatyouunderstandmyreasonsforbeingattractedtosuchactivities.Iamthankfultoyouforwhatyouhavesaidinyouremail.Iunderstandwhatyouareworriedabout.Iamverysorrytohavekeptyoubeingworriedaboutme.Fillingexercises1.读完读完我真的很我真的很感动感动,在这里在这里Iwasreallymoved/to
13、uchedwhenIfinishedreading,inwhich2.读了读了后，后，我相当我相当兴奋兴奋/高兴高兴/遗憾遗憾/惭愧惭愧/失望失望Ifeltveryexcited/happy/sorry/ashamed/disappointedafterIread3.阅读这篇演讲稿后阅读这篇演讲稿后,我为那个学生感到非常我为那个学生感到非常惋惜惋惜。Afterreadingthisspeech,Ifeelreallysorryforthestudent4.知道了关于知道了关于的故事后，我深深的故事后，我深深震惊震惊了。了。Havingknownaboutthestoryof,Iwasdeepl
14、yshocked.5.看完这个故事后，我对这个男孩感到看完这个故事后，我对这个男孩感到失望失望，他，他Havingreadthestory,Ifeeldisappointedwiththeboy,who6.读完那篇文章读完那篇文章/那个故事的那一刻那个故事的那一刻,我我陷入了沉思陷入了沉思。我。我确实相信确实相信ThemomentIfinishedreadingthepassage/story,Iwaslostinthought.Idobelievethat7.让我让我最受启发最受启发/让我印象最深刻让我印象最深刻的是的是Whatinspired/impressedmemostwasthat8
15、.在我看来，在我看来，给我留下了给我留下了良好的印象良好的印象/对我的生对我的生活有很大影响。活有很大影响。Asforme,havemadesostronganimpressiononme/havehadagreatinfluenceonmylife.uStep2tofurtherexplaintheemotionSampleSampletwotwoFeelingstoschoollifeFeelingstoschoollife0808年广东高考年广东高考年广东高考年广东高考SampleSampleThreeThreeOncooperationOncooperation1111年广州二模年广州
16、二模年广州二模年广州二模Tips: topic sentence + related commentsTips：topic sentence + proper descriptions1：对中学生活的：对中学生活的感受感受；08NMETofGuangdongAsforme,myhighschoollifeisreallystressful.WhatIdoeverydayistostudyhardtoenterafamousuniversity,whichisalwaystheexpectationofmyparentsandteachers.Sotravelingamongmyclassroo
17、m,dormitoryandcanteenistheroutinework.SeldomdoIhavethetimetotakepartinsomeextraactivitiesIlikeasaresultofbeingfullyoccupiedwithendlesshomework.Topicsentence+descriptionswithadj./adv.2 2然后以约然后以约然后以约然后以约120120个词就个词就个词就个词就“ “互助才能共赢互助才能共赢互助才能共赢互助才能共赢” ”的话题进行议论的话题进行议论的话题进行议论的话题进行议论（1 1）你对文中故事的看法及）你对文中故事的
18、看法及）你对文中故事的看法及）你对文中故事的看法及感受感受感受感受；In the passage, a farmer always grew award-winning corn by sharing his best seeds with his neighbors. It shows that we can benefit when we cooperate and share with others. (Summary)Itsareallyinstructivestory,whichinspiresmetothinkmore.Inourdailylife,wefaceallkindsof
19、difficulties.Ifwehelpeachother,wewillprobablyprogresstogether.Ifnot,wemaywellbothsuffer.Topicsentence+commentsuStep3topolishthelanguageSampleFourAletterfromafather07年广东高考年广东高考 I was deeply moved when I finished reading your letter, in which I had a better understanding of your excitement over my com
20、ing to the world and your sincere hope on my growing. To be honest, it was the first time that I had realized your deepest love for me, which accounts for my great appreciation.(1)读信后的感受读信后的感受(2007广东高考广东高考)Polishedlanguage FinishthewritingtaskFinishthewritingtask（sample5sample5）inthehandoutinthehand
21、out 你读后的感受你读后的感受你读后的感受你读后的感受 ( (20112011年广州高三年广州高三年广州高三年广州高三综综综综合合合合测试测试测试测试一一一一 ) )Topic sentence + Supporting ideasl l choose the correct tone (vocabulary)l l further explain the emotionsl l polish the languageGroupwork:peer-assessmentRead your own writing to your partner. Give comments to each ot
22、her.内容内容:1.有主有主题题句（情句（情绪绪）与支撑句（）与支撑句（论论据或例子）；据或例子）； 语语言言:2. 准确运用表达情准确运用表达情绪绪的的词汇词汇； 3. 能能够够恰当运用其它恰当运用其它动词动词、副、副词词、形容、形容词词描述描述经经 历历或者或者细节细节，表达相关情，表达相关情绪绪； 4. 准确运用准确运用时态时态描述描述经历经历或感想；或感想； 连贯连贯:5. 主主题题句（情句（情绪绪）与支撑句（）与支撑句（论论据或例子）据或例子）逻辑逻辑 严谨严谨。ToexpressyouremotionsintheTask-writing,weshould.u build up r
23、elated vocabularyu read the given material closely u develop the ideas logically (topic sentence + descriptions / comments .)u polish your sentencesPossible versionAfter reading the story, I feel very sorry for the student who ruined his promising future just for some short-term benefits. It is undi
24、sputable that honesty plays an important role in our life. Without the quality of honesty, like the student above , real success could never be attained.1.说说你读信后的感受。说说你读信后的感受。(John来信说他考上了来信说他考上了理想的大学，你给他回信理想的大学，你给他回信) _Assignment2.Finish the rest of the writing in Sample 5 . 1.说说你读信后的感受。说说你读信后的感受。(J
25、ohn来信说他考上了来信说他考上了理想的大学，你给他回信理想的大学，你给他回信) I was very excited after I finished reading your letter, in which I knew that you had been admitted into your ideal university. I do believe that it was your hard work that made your own dream come true. Whats more, you always took part in different extracurricular activities to broaden your horizons, which contributed to your success.Assignment
