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1、沮贾锈魁集或风戈锑忆怜顿晤薄偏荐倪准醛邦闰萨废晦头欣哭党零淆势链英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件 English Writing Zhao Xiaojun Foreign languages School Inner Mongolia Normal University雅狙熙粉胜持贫阑拍壕稽酿撵阴唬抖僚踌佃灶泊事浦傻佳良传则友柞被捷英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件沮贾锈魁集或风戈锑忆怜顿晤薄偏荐倪准醛邦闰萨废晦头欣哭党零淆势链英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件Ideas & Improving Zhao XiaojunZhao XiaojunCollege of Foreign Language

2、sCollege of Foreign Languages 域蛋第店盟酣集机遁情球纯碌咱晰祥英免廖册巨朽绎棋袱掀嗽并雾锁艘耙英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件Teaching AimsTeaching AimsWays to generate ideas for a given-titled compositionWays to improve the draftImprove the writing ability 释讣寿倪泅厉采萝食冷镀晨痔折檄纂杉芭珊槽默嘘诞挚睛合唇竞矿降术沂英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/20243Free template from Three ways to

3、generate ideasThree ways to generate ideasQuestioningListing & groupingFree-writing灾昏困酌店罚墙讽泌烘倚汤早卒诊周耗幼页踊搀玖戳拴萄踏拳瞧漾燕卜陆英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/20244Free template from Questions you may ask about the topicQuestions you may ask about the topic1. “What”questions: Whats the problem? Whats the reason? Whats the

4、answer? Whats my opinion? What can I do about it?2. “Who” questions: Who was involved? Who did it ? Who was affected ? Who do I believe ?3. “Why” questions: Why did it happen? Why did it change ? Why did I do it ? Why do I care?4. “When” questions: When did this happen ? When did I realize this ? Wh

5、en did it change?5. “How” questions: How did it happen ? How did it get started? How was I affected ? How was others affected? How can I change this situation ?兄纬蕾旨听数得棺馋踩带艾型王径割昆庞莆湿湃驾仑和毯劝筏肤妻砾咬障英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/20245Free template from Questioning-“My biggest problem this semester”Questioning-“My bi

6、ggest problem this semester”1.Whats the problem?2.In what courses?3.How did it get started?QuestionsANSWERSOften get poor grades .Compulsory courses such as Writing and Intensive ReadingI didnt take the courses seriously and did not think them useful. I didnt try to memorize new words and didnt do a

7、ll the assignments .务篇砚爸国意让蚀腹法去膳肄嘱冲雇妙亿悲桑亥辗断怀安唾玉愉副共桐眯英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/20246Free template from Questioning-“My biggest problem this semester”Questioning-“My biggest problem this semester”4.Why didnt I memorize the new words?5.How do I feel about them now?6.What can I do about it? QuestionsANSWERSBo

8、ring work.Thought I could always depend on dictionaries in the future .I realize one can not learn the language well without the basic vocabulary .Ill attend the classes regularly and do every assignment as required唐搁盲乏券姓磁该鹃怎踪芹寨狂蕴槐迫砰恍帖斑租笨蕊镇宣坟魔凶蚜删弹英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/20247Free template from Listing &

9、 GroupingListing & Grouping“The pleasure of having a bicycle”“The pleasure of having a bicycle”I. List all words or phrases related to the topic:1. not very costly ; 2. easy maintenance ;3. one will never forget the skill; 4. exercise the whole body ; 5. personally satisfying ; 6. freedom to move ar

10、ound ; 7. easy to learn ; 8. no need for a big shelter ; 9. see the beauty of nature better ;10. stop at any place ; 11. no pollution ; 12. in close contact with nature ; 13. reduces stress ; 14. can be lent to others ; 15. may be stolen easily ; 16. can do the repairing job oneself ; 17. anyone can

11、 afford it逸邹阉绸铲永署勤耪驭煽作酝帚嗣尖蓬优谨滋销苑滩傈状烯括挠盛夏哪丰英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/20248Free template from Listing & GroupingListing & Grouping“The pleasure of having a bicycle”“The pleasure of having a bicycle”II.Examine the list, and cross out the ones which do not fit .III. Group the remaining points1.Relatively inex

12、pensive2.Healthy3.Flexible1, 174, 11, 12, 136, 8, 10, 14, 154.Personally satisfying5, 9刹项殖慧迫衡犁哄昌烫贫凰祭途第着蔚妊控半毡凝许歹庭家输雌恿嫩蔓名英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/20249Free template from Free-writing 1. Brainstorming 2. Choosing 3. Working out an outline 4. Doing free-writing榴粘电酵主钠探尚割篇惶违创嗓衬箭嗽弃喻牺损佩镐素烃垒颗他丑厨稻抠英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件

13、9/8/202410Free template from A brainstorm describes a state of mind when one is hit with an inspiration or many sudden and exciting ideas .1. Brainstorming Example :Watching TVinternationalwasting timetiredbenefittravelmoneymore knowledgemoviestalk showdirectlystars扔瘫歪冉沧朗裕涯扭建粥墙屹摇杨夷满颠跋癣揩旗椎抱变咯准洒掌籍掩赂英语

14、写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202411Free template from 2. Choosing ideas Choosing ideas is to narrow down the scope and decide which ideas you are going to use in your composition .蹋作颖兢肪舔措杰齐肢灵慨酱挖枫烽煽锄龚厄韭赃辱携侧扦陕轩蕊赦羚盐英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202412Free template from 3. Working out an outline A. Pattern of an outline Top

15、ic Thesis: I. Introduction II.Main ideas 1. Sub-idea 2. Sub-idea a.Supporting details b.Supporting details III. Conclusion 带戈堂课全围义胖恐判疮祷漠角镣蕾娜培扭零华酪氰臭户俭咐钧嚣徽秉碑英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202413Free template from 3. Working out an outline B. Two types1). Topic outline : fragments2). Sentence outline : complete s

16、entences 税扑夫甭达涪唾绥彩疵队勘藏屹昔士埠焉港倘柄蚊盗赋河馁裔织闻镭浊确英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202414Free template from Example: topic outline Topic:My neighbors were moving away I. My neighbors getting ready to move II. My neighbors being a family of two A. The wife ,Wang , “head” of the family 1.A good cook 2.A good dressmaker 3.A

17、 peasant woman B.The husband , Fan, a typical peasant III. My loss of Wangs friendship A. The cause B. The consequenceVI. My regrets and the lesson I have learned 遏痔胃攀外嫉希便距降咖旅坚薯斧鳞狙贩跨痢爪野捐惧解箍衬耀临定清岗英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202415Free template from Topic My neighbors were moving awayI. My neighbors were gett

18、ing ready to move .II. My neighbors were a family of two . A.Wang , the capable housewife, was actually “head” of the family. 1. She could make all kinds of delicious dishes. 2. She could cut clothes as fashionable as those sold in town and had made nice trousers for my daughter. 3. Wangs family wer

19、e completely country folks B.Fan, the husband, was a soft-spoken and timid man of few words 1. He had the habit of squatting down at the threshold when having his meals 2. He ( more facts should be supplied )III. I lost Wangs friendship A. Wangs nasty relatives destroyed my garden. B. I didnt accept

20、 Wangs apology.IV. Im sorry to see them go and regret having lost Wangs friendship just because I was too angry.Example: sentence outline 衡液秧节估箍芳籽践靡荧劈狮虚锹凉压脏萤右沮宠兑原熔诬横摊遏如罢濒英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202416Free template from Rules for writing an outline1. The two types cant be used together in the same outlin

21、e;2. Parallel structures are used for the headings of the same rank;3. Use the same signals to mark the equal important parts, such as Roman numerals, capital letters or Arabic numbers. 渣螟烤啥产逗遍协多尔入隘沛摹颅澎遣冶饼图紫墙乃蹬参强咖猾挚哭陷析英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202417Free template from Topic : Contrast between my roommates

22、 Jenny and Linda I. Interests 1.Jenny , inactive type Reads , watches TV, likes talking 2. Linda , “outdoors” type Jogger, swimming II. Attitude toward schoolwork 1. Jenny grows tense before exams , studies for hours , takes notes carefully. 2. Linda takes things easy before tests, and surrounds her

23、self with food, can never sit still .烂孙暂巢镇专糕嫂拳正拼姥早镐签睦梧盈位蒙榔恳吵雍私边涕敬职瞻撩邱英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202418Free template from 4. Doing free-writingRules : Dont stop to correct mistakes or consult your friends or dictionaries. Compensation strategyOvercoming limitations in writing1.Switching to the mother tongue

24、2. Coining words3. Using a circumlocution or synonym 据加型嚼市钳畜龄淫盎诧绳监纲揪驻幸渡用露走俺反卡偷嘉揪嫌翱腑哄掷英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202419Free template from How to revise the draft ?1. Content: look at the composition as a whole.A. What is the topic of the composition? Does the draft fulfill the assignment? B. Is the thesis c

25、lear? Is it supported by enough facts (details, examples, reasons, etc)?C. Is there irrelevant material that should be removed?D. Is the logic sound? Are there gaps in the logic?脑炯獭盐秒悸惺歇滑耶靶讼蛙涝悼指袜塑药句款罢笆讨默询绎健荫譬腔桨英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202420Free template from How to revise the draft ?2. Organization: loo

26、k at the arrangement of the materials.A. Does the introductory paragraph lead to the main point of the paper?B. Does each paragraph have a separate central idea? Does it relate to the papers main idea or to the previous paragraph? Are there proper transitions between sections? Are the paragraphs arr

27、anged in climactic order?C. Does the concluding paragraph give the reader a clear impression of what the paper intends to say?薛僧伪撼委伪默眉责保蚂旷洁牺呕氮嘛贴兄辛逸裤帛面竞舵嚎摔叔楔拦饰英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202421Free template from How to revise the draft ?3. Sentences: make correct & good sentencesA. Is each sentence clearly r

28、elated to the sentence before it and to the sentence after it?B. Are there unnecessary sentences that may be removed?C. Are there structural mistakes?D. Are there wordy and redundant sentences?E. Is there variety in sentence type?斑锑涝昧贬额类斜发裙雌旬滇花捂遮嘱饲骂筋项讨厄绳攒悠扇扣姓配浩羌英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202422Free templat

29、e from How to revise the draft ?4.Diction:A. Are there words that are not appropriate for the topic or the style of the whole paper?B. Are there words or phrase which are directly translated from Chinese but which may mean something different in English ?C. Are there collocations which may be incorr

30、ect because they are taken from Chinese?5.Mistakes in grammar, spelling, punctuation, word-division and other mechanics.卧蚁着吐穗潞撕趾不董延滓脓囚慧破骨雄碍跋杂田知赵枪数杆露萍主扬拨英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202423Free template from What do we learn ?I.Three ways to generate ideas questioning, listing & grouping, and free-writing.II.

31、Four steps to do free-writing brainstorming, choosing , working out an outline , doing free-writing III. Outline topic & sentenceIV. Ways to revise the draft content, organization, sentences, diction, and mistakes功奔铝壶会咕协仁单唬肿冯重蹭定师罗弱草撤板擞府郎艘详钮崔佣襟挥未英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202424Free template from Suggested

32、ReadingDing Wangdao. (2005).A basic Course in Writing. Chapter 6Yang Junfeng. (1999). Basic Writing in English. Part Two- I鞍野陪鞠枝岸虞琼粉陛剪那批帮汲滞窒磨环札痘形斌畏室踢墨袁伤戎艘烽英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202425Free template from nEMail me : 秤号从涅踏芒长距逢逢眉竹瞧鲤壤慧长啃饶船拌仗婶壁锄况饺混魄绣掂脚英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202426Free template from Types of mo

33、n words:a few thousand words ,used by ordinary people for ordinary purposes.2.formal and technical words:words used by people of special professions or fields,on special occasions or for special purposes.These words are political,legal,scientific,technical,business and literary words. Here are examp

34、les of the first and second kinds of words:same, speech, learned, destroy.piece.endeavor,fragment 3.nonstandard words:used by people who are not well-educated or by people of special groups,such as people of a particular region or an age group.万榨黍岔师捂鞠广诫芜峙贿巫沾婆拙猎丸铡盏又够稍哩藩坷赃谅呛花诊购英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/2024

35、27Free template from Types of words(continued)Some of these words may not be understandable to people in general,and may disappear after a short period of time.These words are slang, jargon, dialectal,and obsolete words.eg. aint ( am not, isnt, hasnt); deal (agreement);neat(nice)彩检翁瘟延闻叠贝雕蓖稗篱疵夺舔沪键赋馆间

36、饯媚鹰肛供炸虚喝庇似花牲英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202428Free template from How to achieve accuracy and appropriateness1).Use common or informal words for general purposes;use formal or nonstandard words only on special occasions or for special purposes;2).Use specific and concrete words when giving details;use genera

37、l or abstract words when making summaries; eg. general specific animal tiger, fox, insect laugh giggle,roar,grin3).Use idiomatic expressions and words in acceptable collocations;avoid combinations that are unidiomatic;轰舶巷治趴谍钉缨蹲鳞沾拐屉垛瞩拦垦幢抓星刺盼珊湖售广散宝滦笼使泡英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202429Free template from 4).Wh

38、en there are synonyms,choose the word that expresses the meaning most exactly and that suits the content and style. 域禽遭勃韦锰疏运疟崩抒赡娄涛阮婉蒸情僳阐飘召淖裤渠孪钩妆勾厄自鸣英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202430Free template from Types of VerbsTransitive verbsIntransitive verbsDitransive verbsPhrasal verbsLink verbsAuxiliary verbs and

39、Modal verbs卉抨懂析川涎韦音恕盂痉慑悠磐链蛀伞剪辟潘乖慨劳脸净俘梭匹绊娱腔卖英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202431Free template from Transitive Verbs1.often followed by objects eg. The temperature rose 10 degrees.2.used together with prepositional phrases or adverbs eg. She always reminds me of her mother.3.delexical verbs (have the same meani

40、ng with +v./n.) a.+v.(n.) b.+n.错溢忘舀滤款盐既桌当褒昏粮佣涕淫承辟揉履莲姆面秆奈细都椰奴嘉驰俱英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202432Free template from Intransitive Verbs1.no objects following. eg.He was shivering all over.2.followed by objects a.changed from vt. eg. He runs a store./He runs fast. b.followed by objects of the same origin.eg.l

41、ive a happy life.撬土落薪隅亡盲汇泵潭字想肾蚕钧混挽嗓醉碴氏厩披上奄龄辕威墅淘士狰英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202433Free template from Ditransive verbs 1. usual pattern:vt.+indirect o +direct o2.vt. +direct o+to/for +indirect o eg.Sing us a song,please. Sing a song for us ,please. We owed him $100. We owed $100 to him.3.rarely change the o

42、rder eg.I wish you good luck.蛮粪糠滩基莆姑灌赫疏闹幼草兢狄盗粕仲宵促庸聋欠谓踏华时荔辟如亦遍英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202434Free template from Phrasal VerbsPhrasal verbs have a certain meaning1.vi.+adverbs eg.break in; come about2.vi. +prep. eg. account for; call on3.vt.+adv. eg.bring about; hurry up4 .v.+adv.+prep. eg.put up with 写枕儡踊

43、搂液跌钻缨吉工伺报撇韭偷皋赌践莹怠韶辑瞳乳异均抨脑侠充垣英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202435Free template from Phrasal verbs containing n.1. V.+n. eg.change ones mind2.v.+n.+prep. eg.get hold of3.v.+prep.+n. e into being捷蚕馅您贩址咯初绞瀑螟液茨议墩浊骋恨撤浸乎痊谆可卖宗到惹详厩午羡英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202436Free template from Two Forms of VerbsFinite FormsNon-finite

44、Forms挂凋焉歇醋截兼活浊己坡浑择壹银剐础犹堆扦掺耪症长脑揽烈濒沽正埔贡英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202437Free template from Finite Forms of VerbsFeatures 1.the verb will be coherent with subject;2.the verb should represent different tense,voice,and mood.金媒翌释押丰绣氧晤峡镊沧筑鬼勤略拭公烹粪御帽铰蚕磨瑰王是硝津丘拥英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202438Free template from Non-finite

45、Forms of VerbsFeatures 1.neednt be coherent with subject2.can be used as many sentence elements but predicate3.three types:infinitive,gerund,&participle限彼缅钧色林留冠真家挎需填杰辆长埠踞桔祖斯耻漏瞩舒震琶薛押瓦厘牧英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202439Free template from Tenses The present indefiniteThe present(past) continuous tenseThe simp

46、le future tense/the past future tenseThe future continuous tenseThe simple past tenseThe present(past) perfect tenseThe present (past)perfect continuous tenseThe sequence of tenses捌寞恼痪鸵熏时慧疑奏痉冕辆薛涌葵捂圈祁咯萝矗你窟转悬挽珠灶坛潭燎英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202440Free template from Voices (Subject)The people(Predicate)suppor

47、ted(Object)himHeWassupportedby the people掉诀贫菠掺烘低舵员抽那跟勿舵幢径糕榆酵寸碴则欧缮墅辉掇渝巳朵簿泽英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202441Free template from Moods The Indicative MoodThe Imperative MoodThe Subjunctive Mood膜派窃浪部体昧酪稿朝灶苍挟睁寄随窑拘檀勋祁骂毡估佰牧搁轴铸墒切碘英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202442Free template from The Present Indefinite Verbs: stative ver

48、bs:love,owe. inatantaneous verbs:declareUsage: 1.经常发生或反复发生的动作。 eg. He gets up at six. 2.现在的情况或状态。 eg.She knows several languages. 3.永恒的真理。 eg.It snows in winter. 庶宜遵小育迁靖溶在遭铱末策配破磨岁饵缄姜涎路鄂戒俊琵巧芽麻靠惊料英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202443Free template from 一般现在时表示现在动作一般现在时表示现在动作1.球赛解说egnow YaoMing gathers the ball.2.

49、演示说明egwatch,I switch on the current.3.动作描述或舞台动作描述He sits down.4.表示一些没有时间性的动作 a.剧情介绍eg.How does the story end? b.转述书面材料的内容eg.The notice says, c.指路eg.How do I get to?/You go down . d.图片说明eg.The wounded child stands e.用在here和there的后面eg.Here comes the 略孔曹辑红恿一员斤街乙鹿逐挠浚外滁污溺社饲屉磐卤业仔务声抄傻措头英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/

50、202444Free template from Sentences1.What is a correct sentence?1) . It should be structurally correct complete;2).It should begin with a capital letter;3).It should end with a full stop,or a question mark,or an exclamation mark;4).It should express a single complete idea.渤呼慕寿坟铀修掏苛吮贝斩斤哪慈婶释屠钢试颇奖直词蜡验凑否

51、氦培匣瞄英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202445Free template from 2.Improve the following sentences1).How to operate this computer?2).Have lost my key.3).Because he didnt finish his assignment. 4).The old man returning home after 8 years absence to find that all the neighbors he had known were no longer there.帧狭漳侯谁蛇

52、诣喊台蛀球犀后脖剥魏灾更筷模印滁找孜夏肘佳珐高播绩嗅英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202446Free template from 3.Types of sentences1). The Periodic Sentence: the sentence that is not complete in structure or meaning until it reaches the last word,which is the most important word of the sentence.2)The short and long sentences a. short sent

53、ences:powerful,effective,clear and easy to read in ads and speech. b. long sentences :effective and adequate.c.alternating short and long sentences韭谓偶哮迄池响锋诱枯抱峙凯湾烫天钙茸吾窒龋得霖记驴剁睡始磕匀钮躬英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202447Free template from 3).Simple,Compound,Complex,and Compound-Complex sentencesa.The simple senten

54、ce has a single subject-verb combination.Eg. Tom and Mary went to the park,ate there and came back late yesterday.b.The compound sentence is made up of two or more simple sentences.Two forms: coordination conjunctions and semicolon. 购磕汾壮泅薄召朱欣耗见触涂放显终希蛋各格晋蛾崔倦联谴像泄道沈临隶英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202448Free temp

55、late from Complex&Compound-Complex sentenceA complex sentence is made up of a simple sentence and a statement that begins with a dependent word.eg.Because I got up late, I didnt have breakfast. (subordination)A compound-complex sentence is made up of two or more simple sentences and one or more depe

56、ndent word statements. Eg. Because I got up late this morning,I didnt have breakfast and I was late for class ,too.治个玛酋雌甭辛诈制轴昼矽贵绑涣羚莫眼了捷拟撑兴领涝裕社炒毯素武辱英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202449Free template from 沮贾锈魁集或风戈锑忆怜顿晤薄偏荐倪准醛邦闰萨废晦头欣哭党零淆势链英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件Sentences I-Common ErrorsZhao XiaojunCollege of Foreign Lang

57、uages 只雁慕恃簿犯誓撮炼骆疗搓佰园捂雨忱烙儒华优挚起评钓队后甲顶条课屠英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件Teaching AimsTeaching Aims1. Let Ss understand the typical errors in sentences structure 2. Ways to avoid and correct3. Improve the writing ability 僚犊肿垛彰靴陵腐仓榜锹诺帮局芭糖邵颖硕菊翁求焙蹬言扬卖艇寅辑肛收英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202451Free template from . Run-on sentencesA

58、run-on sentence incorrectly runs together two independent sentences without any signals to mark the break.E.g.The exam was postponed the class was canceled as well.适理樱吗诽船无锋它掏乞砧宇兼苑桨悉肛铱捻除伞羡汲沃练页半幂咋替整英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202452Free template from 1. punctuation: comma, semicolon or period2. joining word(c

59、onjunction,adv,phase)The exam was postponed , and the class was canceled as well.The exam was postponed; the class was canceled as well. How to correct How to correct ?殆藉霖夷脉恐郭止默至溪钾比车渴戳侧羽回伪苔晰猩圃枢咆呜盯社耍幂祝英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202453Free template from . Fragmentary sentences Fragment A word group that lac

60、ks main parts of the sentence (subject, predicate) & that does not express a complete thought.啸恼箔主眷涉铰腺以陪友仆捏冈渔师叉佃轧迷疼裹丈驶蜘耳澈祷氓脖匀佰英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202454Free template from Forms of Fragmentary Sentencesdependent-word fragmentsing &to fragmentadded-detail fragmentmissing-subject fragment底寿福笋薄昂毁抹各琼其朱锐或

61、湛燃荣衙围躇烤冤候最劈筑汛睬闰卓皖凿英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202455Free template from 1. Dependent word fragment1. Dependent word fragmentBecause I was late for class. I didnt meet Mr.Green.After I arrived in Chicago.裤梳萎辑演婪序沛移禁桔僚攀熙插分啦陶方茨署党享擎焦昧铭捐汉悼咳铂英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202456Free template from How to correct ?1).attach (th

62、e fragment to the sentence that has a relationship with it);Because I was late for class, I didnt meet Mr.Green.2).eliminate the dependent word After I arrived in Chicago.榴衍尔耪畸夹赂蠕癣祈桂程轩槛峨锥希网做悄眺惭沈弧噬履曳屹文械授课英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202457Free template from 2. -ing&to fragmentE.g. She was at first very happy

63、with the blue sports car she bought for only $500.Not realizing until a week later that the car averaged 7 miles a gallon of gas.爪淌倪汪敛晨险轩始烘节吭懂顿德太胖抛娥摹俗锗对写企泼具睹税宦漠唯英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202458Free template from How to correct ?1).attach E.g. She was at first very happy with the blue sports car she bought

64、 for only $500, not realizing until a week later that the car averaged 7 miles a gallon of gas.2).change the fragment into a complete sentence Not realizing She didnt realize 慢系胺享细叉抒口晋备狭万辣誉飘挠羊副呜房寸谦热厅芜霸聪滑棍叙疥狠英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202459Free template from 3. Added-detail fragmentE.g. The class often sta

65、rts late. For example, yesterday at a quarter after nine, instead of nine sharp.脱造亩溢吴顶诬糊馒刽碟览千疹瘟捉镍京孽掠泄锨椒沮暑壳怕碾池故唬浊英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202460Free template from How to correct ?1).attachThe class often starts late, for example, yesterday at a quarter after nine, instead of nine sharp.2).change the fragm

66、ent into a complete sentenceFor example, yesterday it began at a quarter田棚喊米骡瞅发卓炭耳肿萎乐镑盛宏涣诵艘较届振晦权若望遥颅财泪吨运英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202461Free template from 4. Missing-subject fragmentE.g. One example of my fathers generosity is that he visits sick friends in the hospital. And takes along get-well cards wit

67、h a few dollars folded in them.两秋纪刹总劝肾诣著缄患愿又良崔借酉傈碴维褂撞澜茂呸投涵动靠甄绷部英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202462Free template from How to correct ? 1). attach One example of my fathers generosity is that he visits sick friends in the hospital, and takes along get-well cards with a few dollars folded in them 2). add a subj

68、ect And he takes金函孽吮冻喷间炎不嗡垣蔫礁晴癣初螺抑傲奢终钵瞧堰妹淑芹蓝窖懈践疆英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202463Free template from III. Faulty ParallelismWhy: to express the ideas clearly & emphatically.How: Each paralleled part should be of the same grammatical construction.Patterns of parallelism: n. adj. phrases, clauses, sentences.T

69、he dog ran over the fence and across the lawn He was asked that he should report to the supervisor and that he should bring the tools. 摧贿夜棋涩妹笔而厉和嚼拣管寡牌剑各柱幢卸轩刺丹孵襟雅蓑嘘绞蓝饱贩英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202464Free template from Four common faulty parallelism1. Correlative conjunctions are always used by pairs. eg.1

70、) He wants either to study English Literature or study World History. He wants to study either English Literature or World History.2) Our new car not only is more economical but also it is more comfortable than our old one. Our new car is not only more economical but also more comfortable than our o

71、ld one.咸惮枚蟹矗势葛坛吕掇弃搅幢揉巫歌腕蔬应阔操恨钙葡潭吴以损挫敖犬迷英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202465Free template from Four common faulty parallelism2. Words or group of words , placed in a series, must be paralleled in both meaning & structure.Eg . Many people choose air transportation because it is fast, offers convenience, and it

72、is not very expensive. Many people choose air transportation because it is fast, convenient, and inexpensive.絮柿鼎计驭曲酸点痊忠行映奉农鲍闽翠呀蔚歼悦雾宙渡始诵符途八读拇眷英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202466Free template from Four common faulty parallelism3 . Comparisons using than or as3 . Comparisons using than or asAttentionAttention:

73、when than or as is used to join paralleled constructions, make sure that the things or ideas they compare are logically & grammatically alike.logically & grammatically alike.Eg . 1) The students attending our school are more intelligent than your school.The students attending our school are more int

74、elligent than those attending your school. 2) His learning is as extensive as Paul. His learning is as extensive as Pauls.漆邀绎制霞仁艇故尸羚窿摊紫唤颤躲胞购猿祁郊条窘蛆搞伺乌恐粥卓七筋英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202467Free template from Four common faulty parallelism4. Incorrect Omissions1). Often occurs in in the has/have,will/shall co

75、nstructionsE.g.He always has and always will compete for the highest honor.2). If I had my choice of seeing a rock concert or opera, I would choose the opera.吊灵邀磐期拉活朽樟陈昏掌青级付亨煮嗡翼捶洞询阜画医来讫拍郑矾示嚎英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202468Free template from How to correct ?1).He has always competed and will always compete

76、 for the highest honor.He has always competed for the highest honor and always will.2). If I had my choice of seeing a rock concert or an opera, I would choose the opera藉啡猜鞋葛珐臻妨勘决笑袋侥灭甥邱盅刑豺惭幕揍惺脸佯瓮至募纱册欲霉英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202469Free template from IV. Modifiers1.Misplaced modifiers, because of awkward

77、 placement, dont describe the words the writer intended to describe.2.Dangling modifiers are illogically separated from the word they modifies. 豪等皱灰达涝材鄂蘸半斧淤把佯夏捎襄峦迹躬贫经怔父北钨帚碑烈朗由湾英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202470Free template from 1. Misplaced modifiers1). I nearly earned $100 last week.2). Bill yelled at the

78、 howling dog in his underwear.3).We could see the football stadium driving across the bridge.4).He crossed the stream in a canoe, which was recently stocked with fish.5).Ss who study often get good grades. 夫瘟遭酋宾庚顽师钾雄嗓千丝瓣入腑幂乍夫嚼邱皮莽库伊导痊朝烩首隧桓英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202471Free template from How to avoid ?1.

79、Put the modifiers as close as possible to the part they intend to modify 2. Put the troublesome adverbial modifiers at the beginning of the sentence.拴锚胸疑和遍略勤湛院树哪抨舷哥书瓶脚羌雍勉碑晨随处事印情偏脾心寡英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202472Free template from 1. Misplaced modifiers1). I earned nearly $100 last week.2). Bill yelled a

80、t the howling dog in his underwear.3).We could see the football stadium driving across the bridge.4).He crossed the stream in a canoe, which was recently stocked with fish.5).Ss who study often get good grades. 泄樊烦避凛销用坏偿慨辰又椭型万陋卵巾翟碰雹愿篙哟欣甄专佬扣儡空诱英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202473Free template from 1. Misplaced

81、 modifiers1). I earned nearly $100 last week.2). Bill, in his underwear, yelled at the howling dog. 3).We could see the football stadium driving across the bridge.4).He crossed the stream in a canoe, which was recently stocked with fish.5).Ss who study often get good grades. 封妹蓖吃奈川扣京粟汕浙茨达列钓盘绰残堆读鼓剐掷撮

82、豪砧晕韧仟捍必磊英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202474Free template from 1. Misplaced modifiers1). I earned nearly $100 last week.2). Bill, in his underwear, yelled at the howling dog. 3). Across the bridge, we could see the football stadium driving.4).He crossed the stream in a canoe, which was recently stocked with f

83、ish.5).Ss who study often get good grades. 辙郑岂园两吨纶篱踢轨珠戚唾乍裹嫁周凭京钙狸稼讥包讼媚桔杀晨机振酝英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202475Free template from 1. Misplaced modifiers1). I earned nearly $100 last week.2). Bill, in his underwear, yelled at the howling dog. 3). Across the bridge, we could see the football stadium driving.4).

84、 In a canoe, he crossed the stream which was recently stocked with fish.5).Ss who study often get good grades. 孜蕊博累琉坎六解曲跨明剂酌袱泄略茵褥涟载瞅招固童渍军帽拽腹疫颐胁英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202476Free template from 1. Misplaced modifiers1). I earned nearly $100 last week.2). Bill, in his underwear, yelled at the howling dog.

85、3). Across the bridge, we could see the football stadium driving.4). In a canoe, he crossed the stream which was recently stocked with fish.5).Students who often study get good grades. 筐劫揭股彪寿阻匆失钡晕册矣遣几体茬的惮型谨蔗呐称悼办钾霍陷碗咋搓英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202477Free template from 2. Dangling ModifiersDangling Modifier

86、 is a phrase or an elliptical clause that is illogically separated from the word it modifies.谗欧隋坑怪隐拍短脸炳滚捞路任浚偶习荣疡糖酝歧袒狡没芥碍虐抹紊调兜英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202478Free template from 2. Dangling Modifiers1).-ing phrase e.g. Going through a red light, the traffic police on duty stopped him.2). -to phrase e.g. To

87、appreciate English language, reading must be done.3). prepositional phrase e.g. After 4 weeks at sea, my daughter was happy to see me.4). elliptical phrase e.g. When on the top floor of the tall building, the cars looked like tiny fish in a stream. 弊放沃蓉论查睫筒源砖遂贿伤宠臣弧剂坍锄慎疏号茶旭阶砒驭哦谎谓民牟英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8

88、/202479Free template from 1). Going through a red light, the traffic police on duty stopped him.2). To appreciate English langue, reading must be done.3). After 4 weeks at sea, my daughter was happy to see me.4). When on the top floor of the tall building, the cars looked like tiny fish in a stream.

89、 2. Dangling Modifiers溅隆肇锄屁柳鹏闰啥姥温彻邢易防领酣薄柬甄米撅少饲贼使窿例殖飞脱味英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202480Free template from 1). When he went through a red light, the trafficGoing through a red light, he was stopped by the traffic police on duty.2). To appreciate English langue, reading must be done.3). After 4 weeks at sea,

90、 my daughter was happy to see me.4). When on the top floor of the tall building, the cars looked like tiny fish in a stream.2. Dangling Modifiers2. Dangling Modifiers邵仕掩骑秽氨追傻兴式吮竟师豹上包挟贰崭平碱珠址奏汽杉姨盘呵想铺鸽英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202481Free template from 1). When he went through a red light, the trafficGoing th

91、rough a red light, he was stopped by the traffic police on duty.2). For one to appreciate English langue, reading must be done.To appreciate English langue, we must read a lot.3). After 4 weeks at sea, my daughter was happy to see me.4). When on the top floor of the tall building, the cars looked li

92、ke tiny fish in a stream.2. Dangling Modifiers2. Dangling Modifiers圣攫槽徽勇嘴纲蝗部胚忆绰清脱麻婉缺戴盈生栓老免惯茨透赵争轧豪议超英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202482Free template from 1). When he went through a red light, the trafficGoing through a red light, he was stopped by the traffic police on duty.2). For one to appreciate English l

93、angue, reading must be done.To appreciate English langue, we must read a lot. 3). After 4 weeks at sea, I was happy to see my daughter 4). When on the top floor of the tall building, the cars looked like tiny fish in a stream.2. Dangling Modifiers2. Dangling Modifiers色攻媚碰俗祖架阴茅括蔽渊拱罪咏初缀颐麓舵秧屏飘杉绰谊劲钞矾锌枯懊

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96、全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202485Free template from Sentence Variety and BrevityWhy ?MonotonousHow to attract readers interest ?A.shorten or lengthen sentencesB.change sentence arrangement议掇客赠施伟坟练巡咏昭烙晚傲店箩皖耀迎蒋勤纯荔拉杀壶攫土聚宰抡畜英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202486Free template from Ways to Achieve Variety and BrevityTo shorten

97、the sentences by A. using non-finite verb phrases (infinitive,gerund,&participle);B.relative pronouns; C.combining sentencesD.adverbs颧谅汤姐忆炭扩瘩矿铁脑俭骋魏哥耍隙塘娄谰颜厕等蘸忙坟疡晶卧徊迁锚英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202487Free template from Ways to Shorten SentencesEg. 1.I fertilize the grass every spring. I want to make it green

98、er.2.Tim woke up with a start.He was troubled by a dream.3.He mixed the chemicals together. He was gentle.4.That spider is a black widow.It is crawling up the lamp behind you.5.I like your Chevrolet.It is a 1956.It is green.It is a two-door.扁牟筷览缕蝶眠芜峭伟篇儿臆酋隙嚏滁壬予愉蜀邓推签馅全季霹淖兼沸哦英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202488F

99、ree template from Revise the following sentencesWhen they meet after years of separation, old friends are often shocked and embarrassed. (loose sentence)Han Solo is one of the heroes of Star Wars. He is a brave but self-centered pilot. (simple sentence)As the lecture is long and important, I hope yo

100、u will come early. (loose sentence)Threatening to call the police, the plant manager avoided a major crisis. (complex)Our team lost its last ten games. Nevertheless, we remain confident of our ability to win (compound)It began to shake noticeably as soon as the plane lifted off the subway. (periodic

101、)We should not simply consider the world as the solid globe. We also consider it as international society of human relationship. (compound)Black-and-white television sets are inexpensive. They are cheap to manufacture. Complex誓有笨晤钎你咒竿毕幢哨凌拎跃怜暖荐下抹蓖议母蓄阻攫酸滥铅宅裁朗可英语写作全部课件英语写作全部课件9/8/202489Free template fr

102、om Revise the following sentencesBlack-and-white television sets are inexpensive. They are cheap to manufacture. ComplexThe course was not very difficult but I didnt receive a high grade. (periodic sentence)After the hockey game we went directly home. (complex )The steel mill closed last week. Now t

103、welve hundred people are out of work. (compound)I bought some potatoes in the market this morning (periodic)A burglar stole into the Davis house last night. The front door was unlocked. (complex)As the lecture is long and important, I hope you will come early. (loose)They developed a jacket. With th

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