如何提升中考英语作文

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1、命题人是怎么想的？命题人是怎么想的？试题的设置一般都提供一定的情景内容，内容多与学生日常生活实际相联系。提供情景内容的形式有材料、提纲、图表或图画等。试题也注重考查考生表达个人思想、再现生活经历、描述周边任务以及发表相关观点的能力。见初中毕业生学业考试复习用书P76准备准备中考英语作文（中考英语作文（24个个热点话题）热点话题）uMy dreamuLow-carbon lifeuMy feelings when leaving schooluHappinessuSchool safetyuHow to behave welluMy teacher / my friends / parents/

2、familyuMy school day / lifeuMy hobbyuMy favourite animal准备准备中考英语作文热点话题中考英语作文热点话题 uMy childhooduMy herouA holiday journey in the pastuMy school life / My dream schooluHow to keep healthyuThe Spring FestivaluMy hometownuHow to learn EnglishuWriting about animals in dangeru How to protect our environme

3、ntu Save wateru Mobile phonesu Homework / study /pressureu Communication准备准备中考英语作文热点话题中考英语作文热点话题 阅卷人是怎么想的？阅卷人是怎么想的？谁是阅卷人？谁是阅卷人？他们工作时心情如何？他们工作时心情如何？一半高中老师，一半初中老师。一半高中老师，一半初中老师。不太好！不太好！评分依据是什么？评分依据是什么？第五档：（第五档：（18-20分）内容完整，表达清楚；语言分）内容完整，表达清楚；语言基本无误；行文连贯，能使用基本无误；行文连贯，能使用修饰词修饰词或表示顺序、或表示顺序、逻辑关系的逻辑关系的连接词连

4、接词。鼓励使用。鼓励使用高级词汇与丰富的高级词汇与丰富的句子结构句子结构。第四档：（第四档：（14-17分）内容较完整，表达较清晰；分）内容较完整，表达较清晰；行文基本连贯；语言有少量错误。行文基本连贯；语言有少量错误。第三档：（第三档：（10-13分）内容基本完整，表达基本清分）内容基本完整，表达基本清晰；语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。晰；语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。第二档：（第二档：（6-9分）语言错误多，影响意思表达；分）语言错误多，影响意思表达；错误百出，不知所云。错误百出，不知所云。第一档：（第一档：（0-5分）白卷或文不对题，只抄写了提分）白卷或文不对题，只抄写了提示词。示词。评分标

5、准：评分标准：好文章的明显特征（好文章的明显特征（解读评分标准）解读评分标准）2、分段，条理清晰、分段，条理清晰3、有过渡词，过渡句、有过渡词，过渡句5、开头要点题，结尾要归题。、开头要点题，结尾要归题。1、书写工整、优美、书写工整、优美4、有高级词汇、优美句子如：谚语、倒装、有高级词汇、优美句子如：谚语、倒装句、感叹句、后置定语从句、复合句、强句、感叹句、后置定语从句、复合句、强调句、比喻等修辞方式，富有文采。调句、比喻等修辞方式，富有文采。怎么提升？怎么提升？有高级词汇、优美句子如：谚语、有高级词汇、优美句子如：谚语、倒装句、感叹句、后置定语从句、倒装句、感叹句、后置定语从句、复合句、强调

6、句、比喻等修辞方复合句、强调句、比喻等修辞方式，富有文采。式，富有文采。不同表达：钟爱不同表达：钟爱/ /热爱热爱/ /着迷着迷/ /普通词汇普通词汇优美词汇优美词汇like / love / enjoyprefertobe a fan ofbe interested infall in love with care for go for be fond of be crazy about be mad about be fascinated about have a passion for be keen on如何提升词汇？如何提升词汇？ 例如：喜欢例如：喜欢1.When I talk wi

7、th my classmates after class, I feel happy.第三档第三档lWhenever I talk with my classmatesafter class, I feel relaxed and pleased.From 普通句式普通句式to优美句式优美句式lHow pleased I am when I talk with my classmates after class!第四档第四档第五档第五档如何提升句子？如何提升句子？2.When I get a good mark in my exam, I feel happy.When getting a g

8、ood mark in my exam, I feel cheerful and proud.Getting a good mark in my exam, I feel cheerful and proud.To my joy, I usually get good marks in the exams.3.When I have a lot of homework, I feel bored. uI have so much homework to do that I feel bored.uI have so much homework to do, which makes me bor

9、ed. 4. When I do badly in the exam, I feel bored. To my sadness, I sometimes do badly in the exam. Because of my poor study, I feelsad and bored. Doing badly in the exam makes me bored. 一句多译，彰显扎实的语言功底一句多译，彰显扎实的语言功底nMike is fond of /is interested in reading.nMike shows great interest in reading.nRead

10、ing is his favorite/ Mikes hobby.nReading plays an important part in Mikes life.nMike is a fan of reading.nMike is crazy about/is keen on reading.nMike is addicted to reading.nMike feels like/ enjoys/ loves reading. 1. 迈克喜欢阅读。迈克喜欢阅读。nIts great fun for Mike to read different kinds of books.nMike cant

11、 help reading if he is free.nMike spends a lot of time reading in his free time.nIt takes Mike a lot of time to read when he is free.nNothing is more important than reading for Mike .nMike fell in love with reading when he was young.1. 迈克喜欢阅读。迈克喜欢阅读。方法一：旧文重写方法一：旧文重写Hi, Li Li! Im Lucy. I think Englis

12、h is easy and fun. Here is my advice on how to improve your English. Firstly, you should always speak English in class and after class. Secondly, read some English books and read English newspapers like 21st Century Teens and The Times. Thirdly, do more listening practice if you are free. Last but n

13、ot least, in your spare time, What about making some foreign pen friends and writing email messages in English to each other. Well, if you do these every day, I think your English will be better .How to learn English(无错误但非高分作文）无错误但非高分作文）如何对句子进行修饰与提升：如何对句子进行修饰与提升：1.Firstly, you should always speak En

14、glish in class and after class，Just as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.”2.Secondly, read some English books and read English newspapers like 21st Century Teens and The Times.It can not only improve your reading skill but also help you widen your sights.The more you read, the better your rea

15、ding skill will be.3.Thirdly, do more listening practice if you are free.Nothing is difficult, if you put your heart into it. Hi, Li Li! Im Lucy. I think English is easy and fun. Here is my advice on how to improve your English. Firstly, you should always speak English in class and after class. Just

16、 as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.”Secondly, read some English books and read English newspapers like 21st Century Teens and The Times. It can not only improve your reading skills but also help you widen your sights. Thirdly, do more listening practice if you are free. Nothing is difficul

17、t, if you put your heart into it. Last but not least, in your spare time, What about making some foreign pen friends and writing emails in English to each other. Well, if you do these every day, I think your English will be better . 经修改提升的好文章经修改提升的好文章如：描写人物外貌、性格特征的词汇如：描写人物外貌、性格特征的词汇 kind, helpful, o

18、utgoing, humorous, easy-going, hardworking, brave, clever, bright, polite, honest, friendly, smart, naughty, warm- hearted be popular with, be kind to, be interested in,be fond of, with the help of, be proud of, takepride in neither tall nor short ,short dark hair ,small eyes, strong, thin, short fa

19、ir hair，a pair of glasses方法二：帮助学生整理并扩充词汇方法二：帮助学生整理并扩充词汇如：描写人物可用的一些句型如：描写人物可用的一些句型1.not only but alsoHe is not only strong, but also very tall.He is not only my best teacher, but also my best friend.He not only makes his class lively and interesting, but also gives us his deep love.Li Hua is not only

20、 an excellent student but also a helpful and kind person. 方法三：帮助学生整理并扩充句子方法三：帮助学生整理并扩充句子2. so thatShe is so humorous and knowledgeable that we are all her fans.She is so kind that she is always ready to help others.Im so lucky that I have such a good mother.My English teacher helps me so much that I

21、 make much progress in my study.Im so thankful to Miss Wang that I will study harder and repay her. 3.感叹句感叹句.How lucky I am to be your friend!What a kind and helpful girl she is!What a great mother she is!How moved I feel to know what she has done for me! 4. 定语从句定语从句In my life, therere lots of peopl

22、e I want to thank, but the person who I want to thank most is my mother. She is the most hardworking girl that I have ever seen.He is willing to help others who are in trouble.Im outgoing and easygoing, which helps me to make a few friends. 5. 同位语同位语My sister, a lovely girl, works very hard and ofte

23、n smiles at others.Lao She, a great writer, is famous for his play Teahouse.My maths teacher, a middle-aged man, is full of humor and energy.Mike, my best friend, dreams of being a scientist when he grows up. 6. 强调句强调句 It was Miss Wang who gave me a hand in time.It was you who taught me patiently.It

24、 was in the park that I met my deskmate in the primary school last Sunday. 7. 其它句子其它句子lYou will be in my heart forever.lShe always share her happiness and sadness with me.lWe get along well with each other in our life.lI really thank her for what she did for me.l She gave me much help in many ways.

25、lKnowing what I thought, my mother encouraged me to have a try.lI want to thank my mum from the bottom of my heart.l I have many kinds of hobbies, such as reading English novels, playing basketball, travelling and making friends.l Reading English novels is one of my hobbies. 方法四：范文品读方法四：范文品读写作训练（写作训

26、练（1）-描写人物描写人物 试题：试题： 在即将过去的初中三年里，那些 陪你共同经历成长的挫折与成功， 与你分享欢乐与忧愁的正是你的同 班同学。请你通过一件事的记述， 让我们认识一下你的某位同学吧！范文品读范文品读My classmate Mary is my classmate, she is a really kind girl who never fails to make others happy. She often helps us with our lessons. At first, I wasnt very happy to be her classmate because

27、she was so excellent. However, something changed my opinion and we became close friends. It was a cold winter morning, and I had a bad cold. Nobody but Mary noticed that I was sick and she ran to the school clinic and bought some medicine for me. Then she gave me some fruit and poured hot water for

28、me. Watching her doing these things, I was moved. Thanks to her help, I spent the terrible day happily. That is my classmate. She gave me help and warmth. I feel lucky that I have such a good classmate. She is the sunshine of my world. 写作训练（2）-描写人物 假如你的笔友（来自美国的假如你的笔友（来自美国的Mike) 下个月下个月将到你校学习，请你把他的情况提

29、前介绍给将到你校学习，请你把他的情况提前介绍给同学们。内容包括：同学们。内容包括：1.Mike的家庭情况。的家庭情况。 2. Mike的性格特点和兴趣爱好。的性格特点和兴趣爱好。 3. Mike的父母和同学对他的评价。的父母和同学对他的评价。 4. Mike来中国的原因。来中国的原因。 字数：字数：80-100词。文中不得出现你的真实词。文中不得出现你的真实姓名校名和地名。姓名校名和地名。范文品读范文品读 Friendly and humorous, Mike is my pen friend.He will visit China. Let me introduce him to you.

30、Mike, a lively boy, is 14 years old. He is my best pen friend. Football and basketball play an important part in his life. He is such a brave and clever boy that his parents take pride in him a lot. He is not only an excellent student but also a good friend. You can make friends with him because he

31、is very easy-going. To learn from each other and know more about Chinese culture. Mike will come to our school next month. Lets give him a warm welcome. 写作训练（写作训练（3）-学校生活学校生活 假如你是李红，下学期你的一位新加假如你是李红，下学期你的一位新加坡笔友坡笔友Anna想来中国上学。请你给她写想来中国上学。请你给她写封信，邀请她到你们学校来就读。封信，邀请她到你们学校来就读。 信的内容包括信的内容包括1. 学校概况。学校概况。 2.

32、 学校生活具体内容。学校生活具体内容。 3. 谈谈你本人三年来在学谈谈你本人三年来在学 校学习和生活的感受。校学习和生活的感受。Dear Anna, Ill be so glad if you choose our school as your new place to study. Im sure youll gain not only knowledge but also friendship and joy from it. Our school has a wonderful campus. Seeing the trees and flowers waving gently in t

33、he wind, you will feel happy and satisfied. Furthermore, though there are some strict rules, yet we are given enough freedom. Instead of studying all the day, we can play and take exercise totake a break. Moreover, our school is famous for its experienced teachers and friendly students as well. Youl

34、l soon find it is a small society filled with love. I bet itll be easy for you to get on well with others, and you can experience an unforgettable time with us all. Excitedly and happily, Im waiting for your coming. Your friend, Li Hong.Dear Anna, I hear that youre going to China to study. My school

35、 must be your first choice. The school, old but beautiful, has three buildings, a playground and ,of course, lots of trees. Whenever you wander in the school, youll be attracted by the green trees and vivid flowers. Just think! How exciting it is to read a book in the sea of trees and flowers. Anywa

36、y, the school is just like a big park. Talking of my study in school, I would say its really busy but exciting .Every month we have five tests-thats the worst thing in the world. But we also have some time to have a rest, talk with others and enjoy our teachers classes .As for me, the science class

37、is the best of all. Join us! Youll fall in love with it soon! 你班新转入一位来自澳大利亚的同学，你班新转入一位来自澳大利亚的同学，名字叫名字叫Sophia，请根据表格提供的信，请根据表格提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍息，写一篇短文，介绍Sophia及班级及班级情况，并对情况，并对Sophia的到来表示欢迎。的到来表示欢迎。2015金华市中考英语作文题金华市中考英语作文题方法五：订正错误方法五：订正错误My school lifeDear Anna, Im glad to hear you want to studyin China.

38、Let me introduce my school for you. My school is beautiful that Im sure you will fall in love with it. Walk in the school, You will attracted by green trees and bright flower. Besides, my teachers are friendly to every student, but they always strict with our work, tobeflowersarewalkingsoinwith thei

39、r help, we have made many progress. My school life is full of happiness. My classmates and I always play together happily. When study, we always face difficulties together, I enjoyed all the time in the school because it can bring us a lot of things I never get at home. Such is my school life, wonde

40、rful and fantastic, Im really hope you can study with me.muchstudyingIenjoy方法六：教审题方法六：教审题书面表达书面表达1大明在校园网英语留言板中留言说他在大明在校园网英语留言板中留言说他在英英语学习中遇到了许多困难语学习中遇到了许多困难。请你以请你以Sally的名的名义用英语义用英语回复他的问题回复他的问题。词数。词数80100。文中。文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。提示：不得出现真实的人名和地名。提示：（1）告诉他学好英语并不难，但学习方法很）告诉他学好英语并不难，但学习方法很重要；重要；（2）根据你自己的体会给他提几

41、条建议（不）根据你自己的体会给他提几条建议（不少于少于3条）；条）；（3）激励他坚持下去，并祝愿他取得进步。）激励他坚持下去，并祝愿他取得进步。 同一话题，不同角度，学会审题同一话题，不同角度，学会审题2总结是有效学习的重要组成部分，每个同学都应总结是有效学习的重要组成部分，每个同学都应重视和培养这方面的能力。今天的英语考试已经接重视和培养这方面的能力。今天的英语考试已经接近尾声了，经过近两个小时的答题体验，近尾声了，经过近两个小时的答题体验，请总结一请总结一下自己在英语学习中取得的进步和存在的不足，下自己在英语学习中取得的进步和存在的不足，并并对今后的英语学习拟定一些计划。对今后的英语学习拟

42、定一些计划。下面的提示句可下面的提示句可以帮助你更好地完成写作。以帮助你更好地完成写作。(2011甘肃兰州卷甘肃兰州卷)要求：要求：1. 紧扣主题，观点正确，行文连贯、流畅；紧扣主题，观点正确，行文连贯、流畅； 2. 提示句需在文中出现；提示句需在文中出现； 3. 字数字数80100左右。左右。I have just had a very time in his English examination. I found I have made great progress in But there is still to learn further. In the future, I will

43、 try my best in 同一话题，不同角度，学会审题同一话题，不同角度，学会审题3.假设你是晓斌。到了八年级，你发现部分同学对假设你是晓斌。到了八年级，你发现部分同学对于英语学习有较大的压力。请你给于英语学习有较大的压力。请你给中学生中学生英语英语信箱写一封信，信箱写一封信，提出你对英语学习的建议提出你对英语学习的建议。信的内信的内容必须包括以下几点：容必须包括以下几点：1.你写信的目的；你写信的目的；2.谈论自己在英语学习中曾遇到的问题；谈论自己在英语学习中曾遇到的问题；3.提供英语学习的建议。提供英语学习的建议。注意事项：注意事项：1.不可在文中出现表明自己身份的信息；不可在文中出

44、现表明自己身份的信息；2.词数词数80左右，不含已给出部分。左右，不含已给出部分。Dear Editor,Now many students find it difficult to learn English well. 同一话题，不同角度，学会审题同一话题，不同角度，学会审题4. 高效的课堂学习往往可以让我们事半高效的课堂学习往往可以让我们事半功倍，那么我们功倍，那么我们在英语课堂上该怎样做在英语课堂上该怎样做呢？请你以呢？请你以What Should We Do in English Class为题为题，写一篇英语短文，写一篇英语短文，80-100词。词。参考词汇：参考词汇：take n

45、otes, work in groups with , not be afraid of , listen to the teacher, take part in activities, be confident in ourselves.同一话题，不同角度，学会审题同一话题，不同角度，学会审题5.回想起三年的英语学习历程，你一定对英语回想起三年的英语学习历程，你一定对英语学习方法有了一些自己的理解或感悟，学习方法有了一些自己的理解或感悟，请你请你给低年级的学弟学妹们提几点学习英语的建给低年级的学弟学妹们提几点学习英语的建议议。例：例：1. Reading English newspaper

46、.2. Remember eight or ten words a day.3. Speak more English in class.4. See English films._同一话题，不同角度，学会审题同一话题，不同角度，学会审题6.本周，你本周，你们们班来了位外籍教班来了位外籍教师师Margaret. 假假如你是李明，如你是李明，请请用英用英语给语给Margaret 写一封信，写一封信，描述你描述你们们班英班英语语学学习习的的现现状状并并表达你的愿望表达你的愿望。(2012金金华华中考中考题题)Present situation Your hope a lot of written

47、work too much Chinese too much grammarmore activities practise speaking English learn English songs注意：（注意：（1）表）表格中的内容格中的内容仅仅供参考，允供参考，允许许自由自由发挥发挥； （2）信的格式及首尾已）信的格式及首尾已给给出，不出，不计计入入总词总词数；数； （3）词词数数80-100。同一话题，不同角度，学会审题同一话题，不同角度，学会审题方法七：方法七：个性化辅导，避免雷同作文个性化辅导，避免雷同作文无招胜有招无招胜有招重在平时有意识地重在平时有意识地渗透渗透欢迎到婺城中学指导欢迎到婺城中学指导