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1、河北中考英语作文写作讲解7. 话题7 经历及感受命题探索命题探索教材链接教材链接三阶攻关三阶攻关写作练兵写作练兵分析河北近分析河北近 10年中考真题的书面表达可年中考真题的书面表达可知,针对知,针对“经历及感受经历及感受”这一话题,主要考查这一话题,主要考查1次:考查次:考查“介绍他人的故事、对故事的感受介绍他人的故事、对故事的感受以及从故事中学到什么”。再结合全国近年真题可知,此话题也是针对自己或者他人的经历题可知,此话题也是针对自己或者他人的经历及感受进行考查。命题探索人教课本中涉及人教课本中涉及“经历及感受经历及感受”这个话这个话题的单元有:题的单元有:教材链接河北) 假如你看到或听到下
2、面这则消息,请以李华的名义,给你的英国笔友 Davy发一封电子邮件,告诉他这个感人的故事及你的感受。提示:(1)Tell him the true story (2)Talk about how you feel about it.(3)Say something about what you can learn from it要点1:告诉Davy关于李宝元的事;人称:第三人称;时态:一般过去时要点2:自己的感受;人称:第一人称;时态:一般现在时要点3:自己能学到什么;人称:第一人称;时态:一般现在时要求:(1)文稿须包括所有提示内容 , 可适当发挥。(2)电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出 , 不计
3、入总词数。(3)词数:6080个。参考词汇:money order (汇款单), go on, be moved(感动),be full of love【教材好句范例】教材好句范例】1. Mickey was like a common man, but healways tried to face any danger. 八八(上上)Unit 5P372. In his early films, Mickey was unlucky andhad many problems such as losing his houseorgirlfriend. However , he wasalway
4、sreadyto tryhis best. 八(上)Unit 5 P37经历经历3. I was so scared that I could hardly think clearly after that.八(下)Unit 5 P384. Although Peter lost the game, he still went to soccer practice with courage rather than fear in his heart the next day.九(全)Unit 11 P86【句子仿写】1.他意志如此坚强以至于他不害怕面对所有困难。_2. 他发现他什么都听不见,但
5、他没有放弃希望。He is so strongminded that he is not afraid to face all the difficulties.He found he couldnt hear anything, but he didnt give up his hope.3.我们计划去爬山,但是因为下大雨,我们取消了。4. 她坚持了自己的梦想而不是仅仅因为那些不理解她的人的想法而放弃。5.他说得如此快以至于我跟不上他。We planned to climb the mountain. However, we canceled it for it was raining he
6、avily.She holds on to her dream rather than giving up just because of opinions from those who dont understand her.He spoke so quickly that I couldnt follow him.【好句范例】1. Mydaughterwas moreunderstanding,although she also felt sad to part with certaintoys.toys.八(下)Unit 10P752.He missedhis parents somuc
7、h and heoften feltlonely andunhappy.unhappy.九(全)Unit 4 P303. From our teammates,I have learned that it isimportant to work together.感受感受1.他帮助了我。我对他很感激。_2. 虽然我没有考入我们市里最好的高中 , 但我仍然为自己感到骄傲。He helped me and I was very thankful to him.Although I wasnt admitted into the best high school in our city, I was
8、 still proud of myself.【好句范例】3. 从她那里,我了解到合理利用时间是很重要的。_From her, I have learned that it is important to use time properly.Hi Davy,Id like to tellyoua true story.Li Baoyuan,astudent of Hebei Agricultural University camefrom a poor family. Unluckily, he becameill anddied in 1996. However, all his 26 cl
9、assmatesdecidedto help Baoyuans parents.In the pastfifteen years,theyve sent15 moneyorders and 56letters to his parents. And their true love isstill going on. Imtotally moved. As astudent, I should learn from them and try tohelpothers.If everyonewould like to do that,the whole world will befull of l
10、ove!What do you think of it?Pleasewrite soon!Li_Hua(2020原创)假如你是李华,为了帮助洪灾地区的小朋友渡过难关,你们学校上周组织了以“友爱、互助”为主题的献爱心捐赠活动。请你根据所给提示和要求,用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿。提示:(1)What did you donate?(2)Why did you donatethe things?(3)How do you feel?写作练兵要求:(1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。(2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。(3)词数80个左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)参考词汇:do
11、nate(捐赠), book, schoolbag, clothes, toy, help, proud写作练兵At my school, we made donations to children in the flooded areas last week. _写作练兵Someofmyclassmatesdonated theirtoys. I donated some books,schoolbagsand clothes, becauseI hope theycan still study after the flood and live a happylife. I think when they have any difficulty,Ishould try my best to help them solve theproblems. After doing this, I felt very proud. Ican do something I could to help the childrenin need.It really makesmehappy.谢谢