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1、一、语法错误一句子构造错误1 主从句叠置1) There are more and more students like to use the computer.2) There are still many problems should be noted and resolved.2 简单句叠置I like chatting on line very much, I go to the net bar almost every weekend.3 从句叠置As is known to all that computers play an important role in many fie
2、lds of our life.4 句子成分缺失If work hard, we will surely be successful.5 语序错误1) Why college students spend more and more time on the computer?2) I often wonder where have they got their money.二动词错误1时态错误Many people thought that the Internet will be more useful in the future.2语态错误1) I have excited several
3、 days at the news that you will come here.2) Most of the students satisfy with the service in the dining hall.3单复数错误1) Wise man seek opportunities rather than wait for them.2) Someone are afraid that computer may control men in the future.4非谓语动词错误1) Let me to represent everyone to say “hello to you.
4、2) Do exercise in the morning is good for ones health.3) Having studied in our school for 3 years, the canteen service has changed a lot.三代词错误1) We can use computers in doing everything you like.2) A college student should be able to do their washing on their own.四冠词错误1) Horse is an useful animal.2)
5、 The exam will be held in the December, 2019.五词性错误1) I wish you can consider my suggests.2) If a person wants to success, he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks.二、用词错误1) Students must know how to apply a computer.2) People can touch many new things on the Internet.3) The purpose of this let
6、ter is to react some opinions on the service in the dining hall.三、表达习惯错误1) Why generated so large a change?2) Now 6000 yuan can buy a P4 computer.3) A room often lives 6-8 students.写作的七项根本原那么:本文来自作文地带一, 长 短 句原那么 任务还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用.而且假设我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以提示主题:As a creature
7、, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉 牢记! 剧烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在论述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群方式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾普通用一长一短就
8、可以了二, 主 题 句原那么 国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主.否那么会给人呵斥群龙无首之感!置信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果呵斥我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事! 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的! To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect
9、to answer all the questions correctly.三, 一 二 三原那么 指点讲话总是第一部分,第一点,第二点,第三点,第二部分,第一点 如此罗嗦.可毕竟还是条理清楚.考官们看文章也必然要经过这些关键性的标签来断定他的文章能否构造清楚,条理自然.破解方法很简单,只需把下面任何一组的词汇参与到他的几个要点前就清楚了. 1)first, second, third, last(不引荐,缘由:俗) 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不引荐,缘由:俗) 3)the first, the second, the third, the l
10、ast(不引荐,缘由:俗) 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不引荐,缘由:俗) 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(剧烈引荐)6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(剧烈引荐) 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(剧烈引荐) 8)most important of all, moreover, finally 9)on the
11、 one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况) 10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)建议:不仅仅在写作中留意,平常说话的时候也应该条理清楚!四, 短语优先原那么 写作时,尤其是在考试时,假设运用短语,有两个益处:其一,用短语会使文章添加亮点,假设教师们看到他的文章太简单,看不到一个本人不认识的短语,必然会看他低一等.相反,假设发现亮点精彩的短语,那么他的文章定会得高分了.其二,关键时辰思想短路,只需凑字数,怎样办 用短语是一个方法!比如: I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达:I cannot p
12、ut up with it. I want it. 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it. 五, 多实少虚原那么 缘由很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实践的东西,不要空话连篇.这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词.我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词.比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该运用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的笼统词.再比如: 走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room 但是小偷走
13、出房间应该说:slip out of the room 小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room 所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!六, 多变句式原那么 1)加法(串联) 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎样办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系.比如说: I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar. 假
14、设是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式: Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短语可以用: besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover六, 多变句式原那么 2)转机(拐弯抹角) 批判某人缺陷的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺陷,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受.所以呢,我们说话的时候,只需在要点之前先来点废话,留意二者之间用个专这次就够了. The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent cond
15、ition. The coat was thin, but it was warm. 更多的短语: despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding六, 多变句式原那么 3)因果(so, so, so) 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我自动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了.其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系! The snow began to fall, so we we
16、nt home.更多短语: then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that六, 多变句式原那么 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) 有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可假设真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引他人的留意力.文章中假设出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到他的句子与众不同.其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形. 举例:This is what I can do. Whether he can go with us o
17、r not is not sure. 同样主语,宾语,表语可以改成如下的复杂成分: When to go, Why he goes away六, 多变句式原那么 5)附加(多此一举) 假设有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当他再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,假设把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语. The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. I dont enjoy that book you are reading. Mr liu, our oral English t
18、eacher, is easy-going. 其实很简单,同位语-要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必需求紧跟在先行词之前.六, 多变句式原那么 6)排比(排山倒海句) 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,假设非要让他的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望他援用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simpl
19、e, there is plenty in London for you. Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides. We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏) 七, 挑战极限原那么 既然是挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀! 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只需花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊方式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格那么不然.比如: The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China. 假设您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
