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1、策略四句式变化根据历年高考英语评卷情况看,在高考英语写作中,考生大多使用结构单一、长度相当的简单句,文章平淡乏味。其实,一篇好的文章应含有多种句式,即简单句、并列句和复合句。它们各自虽具有不同的特点,但灵活使用,巧妙组合,就会使文章句式多变、逻辑连贯、表达流畅。这就要求考生要:1.掌握各类并列连词的用法。并列句是由两个或两个以上不分主次、相互独立的简单句构成的。并列句通过并列连词、并列副词或分号三种方式连接起来。依据并列句前后分句的逻辑关系,并列句可表示递进关系、转折关系、选择关系、因果关系、时间关系、对比关系等。这些关系都是通过并列连词来表现的。2.掌握各类复合句的用法。复合句由一个主句和若
2、干个从句构成,主句和从句都具有完整的主谓结构,主句是主体,从句是主句的一个句子成分,不能独立存在。从句对主句进行修饰,起补充说明作用。根据从句所起的词性作用,可分为:名词性从句(主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句、同位语从句)、定语从句和状语从句。各类从句连接词的使用是要掌握的重点。 典例(2015重庆高考)B是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式:一是自由分享(wild release),即把书放在指定地点,由其他参与者自由获取;二是定向分享(controlled release),即直接传递给另一位参与者。假设你是李华,请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括:表明写信目的选择
3、一种分享方式简述做出该选择的理由希望了解更多信息注意:1.词数不少于80;2.书信格式及开头已给出(不计入总词数)。 Dear Sir,I am quite interested in the activity to share books world-wide. Sincerely yours,Li Hua 【参考范文】Dear Sir,I am quite interested in the activity to share books worldwide.Id like to join in it.Now I am writing to apply for it for the sim
4、ple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.Youve introduced two ways to share books:wild release and controlled release.Of the two,the latter wins my favor.By the means of controlled release,I only need to deliver books to other participants,not only are books shared but it can
5、 build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.If you could provide more specific information,I would be more grateful.Looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours,Li Hua 【思路点拨】根据试题要点收集语言材料,合理安排文章结构,巧妙使用连词将要点串成符合逻辑的短文。1.表明写信目的。可用词汇及结构:be interested in,join in,apply
6、for;Im writing to tell you that.;My purpose of writing this letter to you is that.等。2.选择分享方式。可用词汇及结构:wild release,controlled release,favor;Between them,I would like to choose.;By comparison,I would pick the latter rather than the former等。3.简述选择理由。可用词汇及结构:deliver,participant,build up a bridge等。4.希望了解
7、更多信息。可用词汇及结构:If you could provide more.,Id be grateful;I would appreciate it if you would offer more information;Your detailed message will be much appreciated等。 (一)(2016福建四地六校联考)假定你们学校报社征集以“我最感激的人妈妈”为主题的英语作文,请你根据以下要点写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的妈妈。要点:1.简要介绍妈妈;2.感激妈妈的理由;3.如何感激。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头已为你写
8、好,不计入总词数。Everyone has a person he wants to say thank-you to in his deep heart.I owe my great gratitude to my mother. 【参考范文】Everyone has a person he wants to say thank-you to in his deep heart.I owe my great gratitude to my mother.My mother is a primary school teacher.She is a devoted mother as well
9、as a kind and patient teacher.I was attended considerately by her every day,especially this year when I am in Senior Three.She often cooks delicious dishes for me and helps me clean up my room.Whats more,she even accompanies me deep into the night every time I do my homework.Most important of all,wh
10、enever I get upset or lose heart,she will comfort me and encourage me until I cheer up.I appreciate her motto “Heaven will always leave a door open.As long as you work hard,you will definitely succeed.”So now I spare no efforts in studying and focus all my attention on my lessons in order to be admi
11、tted to a famous university next year,so that I can reward my mother. (二)当朋友提出一些不合理的请求时,我们常因为不会说“不” 而使自己陷入困境。现以“Dont hesitate to say No”为题,写一篇100词左右的短文。要求如下:1.记叙一件发生在你自己或身边的人身上的这样一件事;2.简要说明从中得到的启示。注意:文章的标题已给出(不计入词数)Dont hesitate to say “No” 【参考范文】Dont hesitate to say “No”We tend not to say “No” when
12、 our friends ask us for help,even when their requests are unreasonable.Before an English exam held last term,one of my close friends asked me if I could offer him the answers.Realizing that it was against the school regulations,I hesitated.Shortly afterwards,however,I promised I would,afraid that my
13、 refusal could possibly have a bad effect on our friendship.Unfortunately,when I attempted to “help” him in the exam,I was caught by the teacher.How ashamed and embarrassed I was at that moment!Of course,the false news that I cheated in the exam spread among other students later and consequently I w
14、as considered dishonest by my fellow students.From my own experience,I have learned there are circumstances under which we should never hesitate to say “No”,because sometimes the help asked is really beyond our ability.If we hesitate,we are actually placing unnecessary pressure upon ourselves and will eventually bring ourselves great losses.
