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1、2012年同等学力申硕英语考试复习-翻译、写作部分Introduction(accordingtothe5thedition)PartItranslationEN-CH(10points)CH-EN(10points)20points;30msPartITranslationi.EN-CH:5singlesentences/paragraph/5underlinedsentencesfromaparagraph-80-100wordse.g.Overtheyears,wetendtothinkthatnucleartechnologiesandthenecessaryknowhowtoensu

2、renuclearsafetyhavebeendevelopedtoalevelthatpossibilitiesforanymajornuclearaccidentsarealmostnonexistentandifitdoeshappen,itwillbecontrolledinthecapablehandsofnuclearengineers.However,realityh a sprovedagainthaty o ujustcantb etoocarefultohandlenuclearenergy.WedontknowforsureyetwhatwillbeleftbehindJ

3、apansnuclearcrisis,butitwillb ecertainthatitistimet oreexamineournuclearpracticesandmanymoreeffortsneedtobemadetoensurenuclearsafetyinthefuture.(year11)PartITranslationSomeissuesabouttranslationWhattranslationis?Translation-abilingualandbi-culturalart.Whatarethecriteriaforadequateandacceptabletransl

4、ation?Faithfulness?Smoothness?Elegance?Literaltranslation?Freetranslation?PartITranslationHowtotranslate?-theprocessofTranslationUnderstandingPresentationCheckingstructurewordswordingPartITranslationHowtotranslate?-theprocessoftranslationI.Linguisticproblems:Analysisofstructure“Itisratherforustobehe

5、rededicatedtothegreattaskremainingbeforeus-thatfromthesehonoreddeadwetakeincreaseddevotiontothatcauseforwhichtheygavethelastfullmeasureofdevotion-thatweherehighlyresolvethatthesedeadshallnothavediedinvain-thatthisnation,underGod,shallhaveanewbirthoffreedom-andthatgovernmentofthepeople,bythepeople,fo

6、rthepeople,shallnotperishfromtheearth.”-TheGettysburgAddressPartITranslationHowtotranslate?-theprocessoftranslationI.Linguisticproblems:AnalysisofstructureFivebasicsentencestructures:1. S+VE.g.Therainstopped.2. S+V+SCE.g.Mysisterisanurse.3. S+V+OE.g.wearelearningEnglish.4. S+V+IO+DOE.g.Hermotherboug

7、htheraskirt.5. S+V+O+OCE.g.WeelectedLiYangourmonitor.PartITranslationHowtotranslate?-theprocessoftranslationI.Linguisticproblems:AnalysisofstructureSome other issues:Parts of speech: e.g. The workers can fish.-Chinese version ?Relation between words: e.g. The workers went on strike. .-Chineseversion

8、? - were, on strike is a state. PartITranslationSkillsfortranslation:a.Analysisofstructure-figure out the main body of the sentence and clauses!subjectclause-what/whatever/whoeverE.g.1)What he saw and heard on his tripgavehimaverydeepimpression.他此行所见所闻都给他留下深刻的印象。2)Itdoesntmakedifferencewhether he at

9、tends the meeting or not.他参不参加会议没有多大关系。3.Itisstrangethat she should have failed to see her own shortcomings.真奇怪,她竟然没有看出自己的缺点。PartITranslationSkillsfortranslation:a.Analysisofstructure-figure out the main body of the sentence and clauses!Object/predicativeclause-that/what/howE.g.1)Itoldhim that becau

10、se of the last condition, Id have to turn it down.我告诉他,由于那最后一个条件,我只得谢绝。2)Itakeitforgrantedthat you will come and talk the matter over with him.我想你会来跟他谈这件事的。3.What he emphasized over and over again was that, no matter how difficult it might be, they should never give up.他再三强调的就是,不管多么困难,他们绝不应该后退。PartI

11、TranslationSkillsfortranslation:a.Analysisofstructure-figure out the main body of the sentence and clauses!Appositiveclause-thatE.g.1)Heexpressedthehopethat he would come to visit China again.他(表示)希望再次来中国访问(不提前)。2)Itdoesnotalterthefactthat he is the man responsible for the delay.延迟应由他负责,这是改变不了的事实(提前

12、)。3.Butconsideredrealistically,wehadtofacethefact that our prospects were less than good.但是现实地考虑一下,我们不得不正视这样的事实:我们的前景不妙(可用破折号或增加“即”)。PartITranslationSkillsfortranslation:a.Analysisofstructure-figure out the main body of the sentence and clauses!Attributiveclause-that/which/who/(除了what)E.g.1)Thepeopl

13、ewho worked for himlivedinmortalfearofhim.在他手下工作的人对他怕得要死(定语前置)。2)Hemanagedtoraiseacropof200miracletomatoesthat weighed up to two pounds each.他居然种出了200个奇迹般的西红柿,每个重达2磅。(后置)3).Therewerethemeninthatcrowdwho had stood there every day for a month.在那群人中,有些人每天站在那里,站了一个月(溶合)。PartITranslationSkillsfortranslat

14、ion:a.Analysisofstructure-figure out the main body of the sentence and clauses!Attributiveclause-that/which/who/(除了what)6)Thesun,which had hidden all day,nowcameoutinallitssplendor.那个整天躲在云层里的太阳,现在又光芒四射的路面了(非限制性定语前置)。7)Tomturnedpale,andaskedJacktoshutthedoor,who asked Green, who asked Nick, who prete

15、nded not to hear.汤姆脸色变得苍白,要杰克把门关上,杰克叫格林关,格林又叫尼克关,而尼克装着没听见。(后置)8).Themenhadsuddenlyawakenedtothefactthat there were beauty and significance in these trifles,flowers)which they had so long trodden carelessly beneath their feet.这些花以前一直被这些人漫不经心地踩在脚下,现在他们突然意思到这些小玩意的美丽和意义了。PartITranslationSkillsfortransla

16、tion:a.Analysisofstructure-figure out the main body of the sentence and clauses!Longsentences:If she had long lost the blue-eyed, flower-like charm, the cool slim purity of face and form, the apple-blossom coloringwhich had so swiftly and oddly affected Julia twenty-six years ago,she was still at fo

17、rty-three a comely and faithful companion,whose cheeks were faintly mottled,and whose grey-blue eyes had acquired a certain fullness .分析:主句一个;状从一个;定从三个; 假设状语从句中含定语从句。意思如下几层:1.她早已失去了那蔚蓝色眼睛的、花儿般的魅力,也是掉了她脸儿和身段的冰清玉洁、苗条多姿的气质和苹果花似的颜色;2.26年这种花容月貌曾那样迅速而奇妙地影响过茱莉亚;3. 在43岁的今天,她依旧是个好看而忠实的伴侣;4.不过两颊淡淡的有了点斑驳;5.灰蓝色

18、的眼睛也有些饱满了。中文逻辑与原文一致-可按原顺序译。PartITranslationSkillsfortranslation:a.Analysisofstructure-figure out the main body of the sentence and clauses!Longsentences:If she had long lost the blue-eyed, flower-like charm, the cool slim purity of face and form, the apple-blossom coloringwhich had so swiftly and od

19、dly affected Julia twenty-six years ago,she was still at forty-three a comely and faithful companion,whose cheeks were faintly mottled,and whose grey-blue eyes had acquired a certain fullness .Suggested translation: 如果说她早已失去那种玉洁冰清、苗条多姿的气质和那苹果花似的颜色-26年这种花容月貌曾那样迅速而奇妙地影响过茱莉亚-那么在43岁的今天,她依旧是个好看而忠实的伴侣,不过两

20、颊淡淡的有了点斑驳,而灰蓝色的眼睛也有些饱满了。PartITranslationSkillsfortranslation:a.Analysisofstructure-figure out the main body of the sentence and clauses!Thestandardizededucationalorpsychologicaltestthatarewidelyusedtoaidinselecting,classifying,assigning,orpromotingstudents,employees,andmilitarypersonnelhavebeentheta

21、rgetofrecentattacksinbooks,magazines,thedailypress,andevenincongress.PartITranslationSkillsfortranslation:a.Analysisofstructure-figure out the main body of the sentence and clauses!Thetargetiswrong,forinattackingthetests,criticsdivertattentionfromthefaultthatlieswithill-informedorincompetentusers.Th

22、eteststhemselvesaremerelytools,withcharacteristicsthatcanbemeasuredwithreasonableprecisionunderspecifiedconditions.Whethertheresultswillbevaluable,meaningless,orevenmisleadingdependspartlyuponthetoolitselfbutlargelyupontheuser.(year07-4)PartITranslationSkillsfortranslation:a.Analysisofstructure-figu

23、re out the main body of the sentence and clauses!EngineersaredevelopinganewtypeofInternetconnectionthatcouldcarrysomuchdatasoquicklyitmightsurpriseevenNetsurfers.Thistechnologywouldopenuparoutethroughwhichdatacanbesentatspeedsthousandsoftimesfasterthanwhatspossiblenow.PartITranslationSkillsfortransl

24、ation:a.Analysisofstructure-figure out the main body of the sentence and clauses!Ifallgoestoplan,thevastdataspeedsmaysoonbeavailabletoall.ThatmighthelpsolvetheproblemofhowtohandletheenormousgrowthinInternettraffic.ThetechnologywouldrequiresomenewsoftwareandfiberopticlinkstothePC,butotherwisenochange

25、inbasicfacilities.(year08-5sentences)PartITranslationSkillsfortranslation:a.Analysisofstructure-figure out the main body of the sentence and clauses!Overtheyears,wetendtothinkthatnucleartechnologiesandthenecessaryknowhowtoensurenuclearsafetyhavebeendevelopedtoalevelthatpossibilitiesforanymajornuclea

26、raccidentsarealmostnonexistentandifitdoeshappen,itwillbecontrolledinthecapablehandsofnuclearengineers.PartITranslationSkillsfortranslation:a.Analysisofstructure-figure out the main body of the sentence and clauses!However,realityhasprovedagainthatyoujustcantbetoocarefultohandlenuclearenergy.Wedontkn

27、owforsureyetwhatwillbeleftbehindJapansnuclearcrisis,butitwillbecertainthatitistimetoreexamineournuclearpracticesandmanymoreeffortsneedtobemadetoensurenuclearsafetyinthefuture.(year11-3sentences)PartITranslationTranslationpracticeThirdhandsmokeistobaccosmokecontaminationthatlingersincarpets,clothesan

28、dothermaterialshoursorevendaysafteracigaretteisputout.Accordingtoastudy,alargenumberofpeople,particularlysmokers,havenoideathatthirdhandsmokeisahealthhazardforpeople.ofthe1,500smokersandnonsmokerssurveyed,thevastmajorityagreedthatSecondhandsmokeisdangerous.Butwhenaskedwhethertheyagreedwiththestateme

29、nt,“Breathingairinaroomtodaywherepeoplesmokedyesterdaycanharmyourhealth,”only65%ofnonsmokersand43%ofsmokersanswered“yes.”(Year09)PartITranslationTranslationpracticeAnecosystemisagroupofanimalsandplantslivinginaspecificregionandinteractingwithoneanotherandwiththeirphysicalenvironment.Ecosystemsinclud

30、ephysicalandchemicalcomponents,suchassoils,water,andnutrientsthatsupporttheorganismslivingthere.Theseorganismsmayrangeformlargeanimalstomicroscopicbacteria.Ecosystemalsocanbethoughtofastheinteractionsamongallorganismsinagivenarea;forinstance,onespeciesmayserveasfoodforanother.Peoplearepartoftheecosy

31、stemswheretheyliveandwork.Humanactivitiescanharmordestroylocalecosystemsunlessactionssuchaslanddevelopmentforhousingorbusinessesarecarefullyplannedtoconserveandsustaintheecologyofthearea.(year10)PartITranslationSkillsfortranslationa.AnalysisofstructureStructure analysis in translation: orderHe had f

32、lown in just the day before from Beihai where he had spent his vacation basking in the sun after the completion of the construction job he had been engaged in in Harbin.1232PartITranslationSkillsfortranslationa.AnalysisofstructureStructure analysis in translationChinese version:他本来在哈尔滨从事一项建筑工程,任务完成后

33、,他就到北海去度他本来在哈尔滨从事一项建筑工程,任务完成后,他就到北海去度假,享受阳光,昨天才坐飞机回来。假,享受阳光,昨天才坐飞机回来。 1232PartITranslationSkillsfortranslationUnderstandingofwordsE.g.LastTry to translate the following sentences1.Heisthe lastmantocome2.Heisthelastmantodoit.3.Heisthelastmanforsuchajob.4.Heshouldbethelastmantoblame.5.Heisthelast mant

34、odiscuss.6.ThisisthelastplacewhereIexpectedtomeetyou.PartITranslationTranslatefromChinesetoEnglishStrategiesi.Find the root of the sentenceii.Convert into the ones that you are farmilar withiii.Wording by readingPartITranslationTranslatefromChinesetoEnglishi.Find the root of the sentence最近一项调查表明,中国大

35、部分的建筑无论是办公楼还是居民楼,消耗的电资源或水资源比发达国家的同类建筑都要多,例如,北京的居民平均消耗气候类似的德国北部家庭的三倍。中国是资源短缺的国家,我们必须节约资源,才能保证我国经济持续发展。(year07)AsurveymaderecentlyindicatesthatmostofbuildingsinChina,nomatterforofficeorresidentialpurpose,allconsumemoreelectricityandwaterresourcescomparedtothatofforeigncountries.Forinstance,energyconsu

36、mptionforBeijingresidentsisthreetimesasmuchasthatofthefamiliesinnorthGermanunderthesimilarwhetherconditions.AsChinaisanenergyshortagecountry,thereforeweChineseshouldsave(economize)resourcessoastoensurethesustainabledevelopmentforChineseeconomy.PartITranslationTranslatefromChinesetoEnglishi.Find the

37、root of the sentence当前我国经济发展迅速,能源供应的压力较大,这跟我国当前经济和社会发展所处的阶段不无关系。但是,不管我们处于哪个发展阶段,如果消耗能源过多,就会因此受到惩罚,面临能源匮乏,环境污染和生态破坏等困境。(year08)CurrentlywiththerapiddevelopmentofeconomyinChina,thepressureofenergysupplyiscomparativelyheavy,whichislargelyrelatedtothephaseofsocialandeconomicdevelopment.However,nomatterw

38、hatstagewebelongto,overconsumingenergywillputusintothedilemmaofenergyshortage,environmentpollutionandecologicaldisruptionandwewillbeinevitablypunished.PartITranslationTranslatefromChinesetoEnglishi.Find the root of the sentence有朝一日我身为人母,我会带孩子们去野营。我会让他们体验在篝火(campfire)上烧烤食物的乐趣。我会告诉他们,在草地上睡觉并不脏。我会让他们知道

39、,天上的星星不止是童话故事的素材,还有实际的用途,例如可以为迷路的人指引方向。这样的户外活动也是一种教育。(year09)IfeverIbecomeaparent,Iwillbringmychildrencamping.Iwillletthemenjoythefunofbarbecuingoveracampfire.Iwillteachthemthatthereisnothingdirtyaboutsleepingonthegrass.Iwillletthemknowthatstarsintheskyarenotonlystuffinfairytales,butalsoofpracticalu

40、se,suchasguidingthosewhogetlost.Suchoutdooractivityisalsoakindofeducation.PartITranslationTranslatefromChinesetoEnglishi.Find the root of the sentence全球化作为一种新的经济和社会发展趋势,给中国带来了机遇,也带来了挑战。一方面,中国正成为世界制造业中心并在国际舞台上发挥着日益重要的作用;另一方面,我们也面临着如何在全球化进程中既要发展经济,又能传承优秀文化传统的问题。(year10)Asaneweconomicandsocialtreads,gl

41、obalizationhasbroughtChinaopportunitiesandchallengesaswell.Ontheonehand,Chinaisontheroadtobecometheworldsmanufacturingcenterandplayinganincreasinglysignificantroleintheinternationalarena;ontheotherhand,wearefacedwiththeproblemthathownotonlyshouldtheeconomyisbeingdeveloped,butalsotheoutstandingcultur

42、altraditionscanbepassedonintheprocessofglobalization.PartITranslationTranslatefromChinesetoEnglishi.Find the root of the sentence中国有着5000年的文化传统,历经劫波而生生不息,我们一定要充分发扬祖国的文化传统。同时我们也懂得,要学习和借鉴世界先进的文明。只有这样,才能使祖国的文化得到进一步发展,也就是我常说的,只有开放包容,才能使祖国强大。(year11)Chinahas5000yearsofculturaltradition.Havingundergonevar

43、ioushardships,thecountrystillmaintainsitsvitalitygenerationaftergeneration.Itisimperativeforustofullyadvanceourmotherlandsculturalheritageaswellastolearnfromcivilizationsoftheworld.Onlyinthiswaycanourmotherlandmakefurtherdevelopment.Inotherwords,preservingourtraditionalcultureswhilebeingopenandtoler

44、antwillmakeourcountrymoreprosperous.PartIIWriting(2011.11.12)Introduction15points,Timelimitation:within30minutesRequirement:atleast150wordsTypes:outline,chart,picture,commentsafterreading.Notes:paperI:65%,paperII:35%;试卷二得分低于;试卷二得分低于18分者,无论试卷一得分多分者,无论试卷一得分多少,均为不及格。少,均为不及格。PartIIWritingHowtowrite?ABCD

45、FKLTAgreementBriefCoherenceDevelopmentUnityKeyLogicalThemeFiguresWritingStrategiesNeat,cleanwritingSentencepatterns-bothpositiveandnegativeKeepingtothepoint,topicSimplicityorcomplexityWordsChecking3paragraph15sentencesKeysentences-eachparagraphDevelop.Learntoconclude1对立观点式A有人认为X是好事,赞成X,为什么?B有人认为X是坏事

46、,反对X,为什么?C我的看法。SomepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofdoingX.Theypointoutthefactthat支持X的第一个原因。Theyalsoarguethat支持X的另一个原因。However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.TheyconsideritharmfultodoX.Theyfirmlypointoutthat反对X的第一个理由。Anexamplecangivethedetailsofthisargument:一个例子。Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIthi

47、nktheadvantagesofXoverweighthedisadvantages.Inadditiontotheabove-mentionednegativeeffectsitmightbringabout,XalsomayX的有一个坏处。Modelone提纲式作文提纲式作文2批驳观点式A一个错误观点。B我不同意。Manypeoplearguethat错误观点。Bysayingthat,theymean对这个观点的进一步解释。Anexampletheyhavepresentedisthat一个例子。(AccordingtoasurveyperformedbyXonagroupofY,al

48、most80%ofthem赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。Theremightbesomeelementoftruthinthesepeoplesbelief.Butifweconsideritindepth,wewillfeelnoreservationtoconcludethat与错误观点相反的观点。Thereareanumberofreasonsbehindmybelief.(以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。Modelone提纲式作文提纲式作文3社会问题(现象)式A一个社会问题或者现象。B产生的原因C对社会和我们生活的影响D如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话)E前景的预测。Nowad

49、ays,thereexistsanincreasinglyserioussocial/economic/environmentalproblem.(Xhasincreasinglybecomeacommonconcernofthepublic).Accordingtoasurvey,调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。Thereareacoupleofreasonsboomingthisproblem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文的写法。Xhascausedsubstantialimpactonthesocietyandourdailylife,whichhasbee

50、narticulated(表达)inthefollowingaspects.参照辩论式议论文的写法。AdozenofmeasuresaresupposedtotaketopreventXfrombringingusmoreharm.参照辩论式议论文的写法。Basedontheabovediscussions,Icaneasilyforecastthatmoreandmorepeoplewill.Modelone提纲式作文提纲式作文Itisobviousinthegraph/tablethattherate/number/amountofYhasundergonedramaticchanges.

51、Ithasgoneup/grown/fallen/droppedconsiderablyinrecentyears(asXvaries).Atthepointof(接近)X1,Yreachesitspeakvalueof(多少).Whatisthereasonforthischange?Mainlythereare(多少)reasonsbehindthesituationreflectedinthegraphic/table.Firstofall,(第一个原因).Moreimportantly,(第二个原因).Mostimportantofall,(第三个原因).Fromtheabovedis

52、cussions,wehaveenoughreasontopredictwhatwillhappeninthenearfuture.Thetrenddescribedinthegraph/tablewillcontinueforquitealongtime(ifnecessarymeasuresarenottaken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).Modeltwo图表式作文图表式作文模版1Somepeoplebelieve(argue,recognize,think)that观点1.Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlybelievetha

53、t观点2.Asforme,Iagreetotheformer/latteridea.Thereareadozenofreasonsbehindmybelief.Firstofall,论据1.Moreimportantly,论据2.Mostimportantofall,论据3.Insummary,总结观点.Asacollegestudent,Iamsupposedto表决心.或Fromabove,wecanpredictthat预测.Modeltwo辩论式议论文辩论式议论文模版2PeopleholddifferentviewsaboutX.Somepeopleareoftheopiniontha

54、t观点1,whileotherspointoutthat观点2.AsfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latteropinionholdsmoreweight.Foronething,论据1.Foranother,论据2.Lastbutnottheleast,论据3.Toconclude,总结观点.Asacollegestudent,Iamsupposedto表决心.或Fromabove,wecanpredictthat预测.Modeltwo辩论式议论文辩论式议论文模版3Thereisnoconsensusknsenss一致ofopinionsamongpeopleabo

55、utX(争论的焦点)。Somepeopleareoftheviewthat观点1,whileotherstakeanoppositeside,firmlybelievingthat观点2。AsfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latternotion(观念)ispreferableinmanysenses.Thereasonsareobvious.Firstofall,论据1。Furthermore,论据2。Amongallofthesupportingevidences,oneisthestrongest.Thatis,论据3。Anaturalconclusionfro

56、mtheabovediscussionisthat总结观点。Asacollegestudent,Iamsupposedto表决心.或Fromabove,wecanpredictthat预测Modeltwo辩论式议论文辩论式议论文SampleanalysisMyViewonDonatingBloodPeoplesideasaboutdonatingbloodvaryfrompersontoperson.Somepeoplethinkthatitisglorioustodonateblood,Theyholdthisopinionbecausethosewhoareinurgentneedofbl

57、oodcanbesaved.However,othersholdthatitisfoolishforpeopletodonateblood.Intheiropinion,bloodisverypreciousandlosing200mlormoremaydoharmtotheirhealthAstomeIaminfavorofthefirstidea.Thefollowingarethereasonsformychoice.First,whileitistruethatthelossoftoomuchbloodisdangeroustooneshealth,itdoesnotmeanthatd

58、onatingalittlebloodisalsoharmful.Onthecontrary,doctorssaythatdonatingalittlebloodcanpromotemetabolism.Second,therearemanypeoplewhoneedourhelp.Ifmylittledonationofbloodcanpullbacksomebodyonthewaytodeath,willtherebeanythingthatcanmakemehappier?Inaword,donatingbloodisgloriousSampleanalysisMyViewonDonat

59、ingBloodsummary:MyView/Opinions/Ideason(outline)PeoplesviewopinionsideaonvaryfrompersontopersonSomepeoplethinkthattheyholdthisopinionbecauseHowever,othersholdthat.Astome,IaminfavorofthefirstsecondideaThefollowingarethereasonsofformychoicepersonalinclinationFirst,whileitistruethat,itdoesntmeanthatBes

60、ides,Admittedly,butthisisnottosaythatThereforeInawordFromtheforgoing,SampleanalysisAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofPrivateTutoringNowadays,privatetutoringispopulararoundus.Arecentinvestigationshowsthatabout80ofpupilshaveprivatetutors.Likeeverythingelse,privatetutoringhasbothfavorableandunfavorableaspect

61、s.Generally,theadvantagescanbelistedasfollows.First,privatetutoringisusuallyone-to-one,theteacherknowsthestrongpointsaswellastheweakpointsofthestudents;andteachingis,inmostcases,directlytothepoint.Privatetutoringbenefitsalotofpupils,indeedButeverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Tob

62、eginwith,ittakesupsomuchofthepupilstimethattheycanhardlyfindenoughtimeforrestandentertainment,whichareessentialfortheirphysicalandmentalhealth.Besides,someteachers,busyshuttling“fromonefamilytoanother,tendtoneglecttheirregularteachingduties.Mostimportantofall,someteachersareeagertohelppupilsdowellon

63、thetest,offeringtheso-calledtipsfortest-takingratherthanhelpthemacquirewhatismostneeded.Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthedisadvantagesoutweightheadvantages.Greateremphasisshouldbelaidonclassroomteachingandpractice,ontheimprovementofteachingqualityandonthetappingofthepupilspotentialities.Onlyin

64、thiswaycananewgenerationbehealthilybroughtupSampleanalysisAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofPrivateTutoringsummary:AdvantagesandDisadvantagesofNowadays,playsanimportantpartrolein(isarepopulararoundus)Likeeverythingelse,hashavebothfavorableandunfavorableaspectsGenerally,theadvantagescanbelistedasfollowsFir

65、st,Besides,Mostimportantofall,ButeverycoinhastwosidesThenegativeaspectsarealsoapparentTobeginwith,TomakemattersworseWorstofall,Throughtheaboveanalysis,IbelievethattheadvantagespositiveaspectsoutweighthedisadvantagesnegativeonesTherefore,SampleanalysisHowtoSolvetheProblemofHeavyTrafficWiththeboomingo

66、fthemotorindustry,thereareanincreasingnumberofvehicleontheroads.Asaresult,trafficjamsoftenoccur.Manywayscancontributeto(有助于)solvingthisseriousproblem,butthefollowingonesmaybemosteffective.Firstofall,roadsshouldbebroadenedtolowerthedegreeofcongestionandtospeeduptheflowofheavytraffic.Anotherwaytosolve

67、theproblemofheavytrafficistoopenupmorebusroutestoreducebikesandautomobiles.Finally,moreundergroundpassagesshouldbedevelopedsothatpeoplecancommutebymetro.Thesearenotthebestandtheonlytwo/threemeasureswecantake.Butitshouldbenotedthatthegovernmenttakessomestrongactionstoalleviatethetrafficproblem,allofu

68、scanenjoymorefreeflowingtrafficSampleanalysisHowtoSolvetheProblemofHeavyTrafficsummary:howtoManywayscancontributetosolvingthisseriousproblem,butthefollowingonesmaybemosteffective.Firstofall,Besides,/AnotherwaytosolvetheproblemofisFinally,Thesearenotthebestandtheonlytwo/threemeasureswecantake.Butitsh

69、ouldbenotedthatweshouldtakestrongactionsto一一.用于文章的开头用于文章的开头1.Astheproverbsays2.Itgoeswithoutsayingtan3.Generallyspeaking4.Itisquiteclearthanbecause5.Itisoftensaidthat6.Manypeopleoftenasksuchquestion:“?”7.Moreandmorepeoplehavecometorealize8.Thereisnodoubtthat9.SomepeoplebelievethatClassicsentencesand

70、writingpractice一一.用于文章的开头用于文章的开头10.Thesedaysweareoftentoldthat,butisthisreallythecase?11.Onegreatmansaidthat12.Recentlytheissueofhasbeenbroughttopublicattention.13.Inthepastseveralyearstherehasbeen14.NowitiscommonlyheldthatbutIdoubtwhether15.Currentlythereisawidespreadconcernthat16.Nowpeopleingrowin

71、gnumberarecomingtorealizethat17.Thereisageneraldiscussiontodayabouttheissueof18.Facedwith,quiteafewpeoplearguethat,butotherpeopleconceivedifferently.Classicsentencesandwritingpractice一一.用于文章的开头用于文章的开头somesamplesentences:1.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours.2.Thereisnotdenyingthatsuccessfu

72、lbusinessliesinahealthybodyandmind.2.Iamgreatlyconvincedthatpreventionisbetterthancure.3.Amongvariouskindsofsports,Ilikejogginginparticular.4.Itcanbeeasilyprovedthatnothingismorepreciousthantime.5.Theimportanceoftrafficsafetycannotbeoveremphasized.6.Inmyopinion,playingvideogamesnotonlytakesmuchtimeb

73、utisalsoharmfultohealth.7.Asfarasmyknowledgeisconcerned,thefollowingwaysareofgreathelptome.8.Thereisnodoubtthatnear-sightednessisaseriousproblemamongtheyouthofourcountry.Classicsentencesandwritingpractice一一.用于文章的开头用于文章的开头somesamplesentences:9.Accordingtomypersonalexperience,smilehasdonemealotofgood.

74、10.OfallthepeopleIknow,perhapsnondeservesmyrespectMorethanMissChang,myEnglishteacher.11.Inthecourseofmyschooling.IwillneverforgetthegreatdifficultyIencounteredinlearningEnglish.12.WiththerapiddevelopmentofTaiwanseconomy,alotofsocialproblemshavecometopass.13.Inthisageofinformationandcommunication,the

75、computerplaysanextremelyimportantrole.14.Indealingwithonesfuturecareer,onecannotbutadmitthatItisveryimportanttodecideonesfuturecareerasearlyaspossible.15.Nothingintheworldcandelightmesomuchashavinghamburgersinfast-foodrestaurants.Classicsentencesandwritingpractice一一.用于文章的开头用于文章的开头somesamplesentences

76、:16.Itisproperthatwe(should)keepthepublicplacesclean.17.WheneverIthinkofthecleanbrooknearmyhome,Icannotbutfeelsad.18.Itisbelieved(that)readingincreasesourknowledgeandbroadensourmind.19.Asanoldsayinggoes,Honestyisthebestpolicy.“20.Tokeephealthy,thereareatleastthreethingswecandoeveryday.Classicsentenc

77、esandwritingpractice二二.用于文章的转承用于文章的转承1.增补(Addition)inaddition,furthermore,again,also,besides,moreover,whatsmore,similarly,next,finally.2.比较(Comparison)inthesameway,likewise,similarly,equally,incomparison,justas3.对照(Contrast)whereas,incontrast,ontheotherhand,instead,however,nevertheless,unlike,eventh

78、ough,onthecontrary,while4.因果(Causeandeffect)because,becauseof,for,since,dueto,owingto,thanksto,asaresult(of),accordingly,hence,so,thusClassicsentencesandwritingpractice二二.用于文章的转承用于文章的转承5.强调(Emphasis)certainly,aboveall,indeed,ofcourse,surely,actually,asamatteroffact,chiefly,especially,primarily,inpar

79、ticular,undoubtedly,absolutely,mostimprtant6.让步(Concession)although,though,afterall,inspiteof,nevertheless,still,provided,whileitistrue.7.例证(Exemplification)forexample,forinstance,thatis,namely,suchas,inotherwords,inthiscase,bywayofillustration.Classicsentencesandwritingpractice二二.用于文章的转承用于文章的转承8.总结

80、(Conclusion)tosumup,toconclude,inaword,inshort,inbrief,allinall,inall,toputitinanutshell,insummary9.推断(Inference)therefore,asaresult(of),consequently,accordingly,so,otherwise10.时间和空间(Timeandspace)afterward,after,first,later,then,soon,outside,near,beyond,above,below,ontheright(left),inthemiddle,oppos

81、ite,infrontofClassicsentencesandwritingpractice三三.用于文章的结尾用于文章的结尾1.fromthispointofview2.inaword3.inconclusion4.onaccountofthiswecanfindthat5.theresultisdependenton6.therefore,thesefindingsrevealthefollowinginformation:7.thus,thisisthereasonwhywemust8.tosumup9.asfarasbeconcerned,IbelievethatClassicsen

82、tencesandwritingpractice三三.用于文章的结尾用于文章的结尾10.Itisobviousthat11.Thereislittledoubtthat12.Thereisnoimmediatesolutiontotheproblemof,butmightbehelpful13.Noneofthesolutionsisquitesatisfactory.Theproblemshouldbeexaminedinanewway.14.Itishightimethatweputconsiderableemphasison15.Takingintoaccountallthesefact

83、ors,wemaysafelyreachtheconclusionthatClassicsentencesandwritingpractice三三.用于文章的结尾用于文章的结尾usefulsentences:1.Ifonecanreallyputthethreepointsintoaction(practice),hewillsurelybeabletoliveahealthyandhappylife.2.Bydoingthesesimplethings,wesurelycangooutofthedoorhappilyandcomebackhomesafeeveryday.3.Inthiswa

84、y,Ibelievethatallthepeoplemaybeabletoenjoythebusridelikeme.4.Byputtingthem(theabove)intopractice,Ihavebeenabletomakeconstantprogressinintellectualeducation.5.Onlywithcombinedefforts,canweexpectourhomelandtotakeanewfaceinduecourse.6.Lastbutnoleast,theshortcomingineducationisthecausecontributingtojuve

85、niledelinquency.犯罪7.Inconclusion,agoodcitizenshouldabidebytrafficregulations.Classicsentencesandwritingpractice三三.用于文章的结尾用于文章的结尾usefulsentences:8.Wecan,therefore,cometotheconclusionthatnothingissopreciousasfreedomintheworld.9.Ifwecandoasmentionedabove,therecanbenodoubtthatwecanmasterEnglish。10.We,th

86、erefore,canmakeclearfromtheabovediscussionthatperseverancecanovercomeanydifficulty.11.Therefore,weshouldrealizethatinlearningEnglishwecannotdowithoutadictionary.Classicsentencesandwritingpractice低碳生活低碳生活1.低碳生活受到人们的普遍欢迎2.低碳生活方式非常有好处3.我们应该如何去做writingpracticeSample:Nowadays,thereareaconsiderablenumbero

87、findividualswhoprefertoleadalow-carbonlifestylewhichfindexpressioninthefactthatmoreandmorecommutersareusingpublictransportationsystemintheirdailylife.Lowcarbonlifestylecanendowusandoursocietywithnumerousbenefits.Firstly,itgoesbeyonddoubtthatlowcarbonlifestylecontributesalottotheenvironmentalprotecti

88、onanditisafavorablewaytoslowdowntherateofclimatechangeofourearth,whichalsomeansalottoourhealth.Wearesupposedtoundertaketheresponsibilitytoleadalow-carbonlifestyle,whichisofgreatsignificance.Andthereisadiversityofmeasureswecantakesoastoleadsuchanenvironmental-friendlylife.Foronething,weareexpectedtom

89、inimizetheuseofprivatecars,whichemitalargeamountofgreenhousegases.Foranother,wearesupposedtocultivatethepublicawarenessofenergyconservationforenergyintheworldtodayisdecreasingrapidly.Forinstance,wecanturnoffelectricalappliancesifnotnecessaryaswellasusingrenewablematerials.Furthermore,atourleisure,we

90、canseekopportunitiestoplantmoretreeswhichcanabsorbcarbon-dioxide.Inbrief,low-carbonlifestyleisnothingbutthebestchoiceforusandonlyinthiswaycanweformaharmoniousrelationshipwiththeenvironment.writingpractice四。四。用于解释性和阐述性论说文用于解释性和阐述性论说文1.Everybodyknowsthat2.Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat3.Itistruethat4.Nooneca

91、ndenythat5.Onethingwhichisequallyimportanttotheabovementionedis6.Thechiefreasonisthat7.Wemustrecognizethat8.Thereisondoubtthat9.Iamoftheopinionthat10.Thiscanbeexpressedasfollows;11.Totakeforanexample12.WehavereasontobelievethatClassicsentencesandwritingpractice四。四。用于解释性和阐述性论说文用于解释性和阐述性论说文12.Wehavere

92、asontobelievethat13.Nowthatweknowthat14.Amongthemostconvincingreasonsgiven,oneshouldbementioned15.Thechangeinlargelyresultsfromthefactthat16.Thereareseveralcausesforthissignificantgrowthin,first,second,finally17.Anumberoffactorscouldaccountforthedevelopmentin18.Perhapstheprimaryreasonis19.Itischiefl

93、yresponsibleof20.Thereasonsforarecomplicated,Andprobablytheyarefoundinthefact21.Hereareseveralpossiblereasons,excerptthat22.Somebodybelieves/argues/holds/insists/thinksthat23.Itisnotsimpletogivethereasonforthiscomplicatedphenomenon24.Differentpeopleobservesitindifferentways.Classicsentencesandwritin

94、gpracticeDirections:Migrantworkersmadeagreatcontributiontotheprosperityofcities(外地民工为城市繁荣做出了很大贡献).Inthispart,youaretowritewithin30minutesacompositionof150wordsorsoabouttheroleofmigrantworkers(外地民工的作用).Youcanagreeordisagree,completelyorpartiallytotheabovestatement.Butnomatterwhichpositionyoutake,yous

95、houldgivesoundsupportingreasons.ClassicsentencesandwritingpracticeSampleTheRoleofMigrantWorkersIdoagreewiththestatementthatmigrantworkershavemadeagreatcontributiontotheprosperityofcities.InBeijing,forexample,manymigrantworkersareworkingontheconstructionsites.Thesepeoplearereallyhardworking.Withoutth

96、esepeoplethecitiescouldnotdevelopsoquickly.Inadditiontotheconstructionworktheytake,theyalsohelptoimprovethecommunityservices,suchascleaning,repairingworkandhouseholdwork.Theyhelpmakethecitycleanandnice,andtheyalsohelpmanyfamilieswithtediouswork.Certainly,migrantworkershavealsobroughtsomeproblemstoth

97、ecities.Forexample,thepublictransportbecomesalittlecrowded,andfromtimetotime,weheardthatsomedishonestmigrantsstolethings.Ibelievethatifmigrantworkersaregivencertainkindofeducation,theycanimprovethemselvesandwillbeanimportanttreasuretothecities.Classicsentencesandwritingpractice五五.用于驳性和比较性论文用于驳性和比较性论

98、文1.Ingeneral,Idontagreewith2.Inmyopinion,thispointofviewdoesntholdwater.3.Thechiefreasonwhyisthat4.Thereisnotruethat5.Itisnottruethat6.Itcanbeeasilydeniedthan7.Wehavenoreasontobelievethat8.Whatismoreseriousisthat9.Butitispitythat10.Besides,weshouldnotneglectthat11.Buttheproblemisnotsosimple.Therefor

99、e12.Othersmayfindthistobetrue,butIbelieverthatClassicsentencesandwritingpractice五五.用于驳性和比较性论文用于驳性和比较性论文13.PerhapsIwasquestionwhy14.Thereisacertainamountoftruthinthis,butwestillhaveaproblemwithregardto15.Thoughweareinbasicagreementwith,but16.Whatseemstobethetroubleis17.Yetdifferenceswillbefound,thats

100、whyIfeelthat18.Itwouldbereasonabletotaketheviewthat,butitwouldbefoolishtoclaimthat19.Thereisinfactonreasonforussobelievethat20.Whatthesepeoplefailtoconsideristhat21.Itisonethingtoinsistthat,itisquiteanothertoshowthat22.WonderfulasAis,however,ithasitsowndisadvantagestoo.23.TheadvantagesofBaremuchgrea

101、terthanA.24.AsadvantagesoundsridiculouswhenBsadvantagesaretakenintoconsideration.Classicsentencesandwritingpractice六六.用于描写图表和数据用于描写图表和数据1.Ithasincreasedbythreetimesascomparedwiththatof1998.2.Thereisanincreaseof20%intotalthisyear.3.Ithasbeenincreasedbyafactorof4since1995.4.Itwouldbeexpectedtoincrease

102、5times.5.Thetableshowsathreetimesincreaseoverthatoflastyear.6.Itwasdecreasedtwicethanthatoftheyear1996.7.Thetotalnumberwasloweredby10%.8.Itrosefrom10-15percentofthetotalthisyear.9.Comparedwith1997,itfellfrom15to10percent.10.Thenumberis5timesasmuchasthatof1995.11.Ithasdecreasedalmosttwoandhalftimes,c

103、omparedwithClassicsentencesandwritingpractice七七.用于论证和说明用于论证和说明1.Asitisdescribedthat2.Ithasbeenillustratedthat3.Itprovidesagoodexampleof4.Wemayciteanotherinstanceof5.Historymanprovidesuswiththeexamplesof6.Anumberoffurtherfactsmaybeadded7.Thesituationisnotunique,itistypicalofdozensIhaveheard.8.Arecent

104、investigationindicatethat9.AccordingtothestatisticsprovidedClassicsentencesandwritingpractice七七.用于论证和说明用于论证和说明10.Accordingtoalateststudy,itcanbepredicted11.Thereisnosufficientevidencetoshowthat12.Allavailableevidencepointstothefactthat13.Examplesgivenleadsmetoconcludethat14.Itrevealstheunquestionabl

105、efactthat15.Theideamaybeprovedbyfacts16.Allthefactssuggestthat17.Noonecandenythefactthat18.WemayfacetheundeniablefactthatClassicsentencesandwritingpracticeEconomicDevelopmentandEnvironmentalProtection1.有人认为经济发展先于环境保护;2.有人环境保护先于经济发展;3.我的看法。writingpracticesampleTherearesomeindividualswhoarguethat,comp

106、aredtotheenvironmentprotection,thetoppriorityissupposedtogiventoeconomicdevelopment.Theydeemthatenvironmentalproblemsareinevitableandunavoidableintheprocessofeconomicdevelopment.Theyareonlythebyproductsofeconomicdevelopment,whichcanbehandledlaterwhenwehavethetimeandmoney.However,otherindividualshold

107、differentopinionsthat(或者:otherholdersoftheoppositeopinionsarguethat)environmentprotectionshouldbeattachedmoreimportancethaneconomicdevelopmentinthatpresentseriousenvironmentalproblemswillthreatenthehealthoftheresidentsandhindertheadvanceoftheeconomy.AsfarasIamconcerned,environmentalprotectionandecon

108、omicdevelopmentcancoexistinparallelandcanstayinharmony.Ourultimateaimineconomicdevelopmentistoprovideacomfortableandhappylifeforourpeople.Whatisthepointofeconomicdevelopmentifweachieveitatthecostofourenvironment?Therehasbeenmuchevidencetoprovethatabalancebetweenthetwohelpsmorerapidandcontinuousdevel

109、opmentofthesociety.writingpracticeTheIssueofEmploymentforGraduates1.就业的形势越来越严峻,东西部人才供需并不均衡。2.你认为是否应在西部就业及其原因writingpracticesampleTheIssueofEmploymentforGraduatesAsweallknow,thesituationofemploymentgraduateisurgentnowadays.Employmentbecomesamajorsocialissueinourcountry.Moreandmorepeoplepaygreatattent

110、iontoit.Thisissueresultfromtwoaspects.Firstmanyundergraduatesarefindingjobs.Theyhopetogetajobwithhighsalaryandotherpensions.Sothegovernmentandthesocietyfacegreatpressure.Morejobopportunitiesareneededtocreateforthem.Ontheotherhand,therearemanyvacanciesofjobsinthewest.Sotherecomesanimbalancebetweenthe

111、supplyanddemandintheeastandthewest.Fewpeoplewanttoseekjobsinthewest.Theyprefertoliveinthemajorcities,suchasBeijing,shanghaiandotherdevelopedareas.Tosolvethisissue,itisabetterchoicetoencouragepeopletoseekjobsinthewest.Thisalsohelptodeveloplocaleconomyandofferagoodchanceforgraduates.writingpracticeFor

112、thispertyouareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan100wordsunderthetitleoftheproblemsIHaveinmyEnglishStudy.YoucompositionshouldbebasedonthefollowingoutlinegiveninChinese.1.遇到了哪些困难2产生这些困难的原因3如何克服这些困难writingpracticesampleTheProblemIHaveinmyEnglishStudyIhavemanydifficultiesinmyEnglishstudy.Fi

113、rst,myvocabularyislimited.Second,IdarenotspeakEnglishintheopen.Third,Impoorinwriting.Myfirstdifficultyisthatmyvocabularyisnotlarge.AsIamapproachingmiddleage,itisnotsoeasytokeepmanynewwordsinmindquickly.Theseconddifficultymayberesultsfrommyshyness.ThethirddifficultyisthatIcannotwritewell.Thisisbecaus

114、ethatIhavebeenverybusywithmyworkwhichreallydoesntneedanyforeignlanguage,IseldomhaveachancetowritesomethinginEnglish.Toovercomethesedifficulties,Ihaveworkedoutaplan.First,IplantoreadoneortwopagesofEnglishinordertomemorizethenewwords.Second,Iwillgoto“EnglishCorner”andpracticespokenEnglishatleastonceaw

115、eek.AndIwillalsotrytoe-mailmyfriendinEnglish.Ibelievethat“Practicemakesperfect”,andthatIcanlearnEnglishwellinashorterfuture.writingpracticeyouareallowed30minutestoWriteacompositionofnolessthan100wordsunderthetitleofWhyWeWork.yourcompositionshouldbebasedonthefollowingoutlinegiveninEnglish.1Somepeople

116、livetowork.2Otherpeopleworktolive.3Youropinion.writingpracticesampleWhyWeWorkWhenweliveintheworld,weallworkforsomereasonorother.Differentpeoplehavedifferentattitudestowardswork.Somepeoplelivetowork.Theydevotethemselvestotheirwork.Theaimforwhichtheyworkistorealizethevalueoflife,topromotethedevelopmen

117、tofsocietyandtomakemorepeoplelivehappylife.Theymakegreatcontributionstosocietyandatthesametimetheyalsofindpleasurefromtheirwork.Onthecontrary,otherpeopleworktolive.Theyregardworkasawayofmakingaliving.Thepurposeforwhichtheyworkistokilltimeortomakeenoughmoneytosupportthemselvesandtheirfamilies.Theyoft

118、enregardworkaswhattheyhavetodo.Sotheycantpickuppleasureandenjoymentfromtheirwork.Suchpeople,oncetheycanaffordtosupportthemselvesandtheirfamilies,perhapsquittheirwork.Inmyopinion,weshouldntgototheextremes.Sincewearemembersofsociety,weshoulddowhatwecantobetteritsothatwecanliveinmorecomfortableandmorec

119、onvenientsurrounding.Goodlifeisanassuranceofsmoothwork.Onlywhenwerealizethiscanwelivehappilyandworkwell.writingpracticeForthispart,youaretowriteacompositionofnolessthan120wordsonThe Qualities of the Cross-Century Talents.Youshouldwriteaccordingtothethree-pointsoutlinegivenbelow.Pleasewriteitclearlyo

120、ntheANSWERSHEET.Outline:跨世纪人才应具备哪些素质为什么需要具备这些素质怎样才能成为跨世纪人才writingpracticesampleTheQualitiesoftheCross-CenturyTalentsInordertosurviveandsucceedinthe21stcentury,thecross-centurytalentsshouldhavegoodeducationalbackground,strongcommunicationskillsandopen-mind,etc.Becauseoursocietyischaracterizedwiththe“

121、knowledgeeconomy”,educationbackgroundisbecomingvitaltoallofus.Wesurelyneedtolearnthemoderntechnologyinordertosucceedinourlife.Astheworldeconomybecomesmoreandmoreglobalized,weneedtocontactwithdifferentpeopleindifferentpartsoftheworld.Agoodcommandofforeignlanguageandanunderstandingofculturaldifference

122、becomeincreasinglyimportant.Asgoodcommandofforeignlanguageandanunderstandingofculturaldifferencebecomeincreasinglyimportant.Astheworldbecomes“smaller”,weneedtobemoreopen-mindedtonewideas.Tobecomeacross-centurytalent,weneedtobearinmindthatlearningisnolongeraonce-and-for-allexperience,butanon-goingpro

123、cess,orinotherwords,theideaoflife-longrenewalwillprevail.writingpracticeForthispart,youaretowriteacompositionof120to150wordsonWhichisMoreImportant,WealthorHealth?Inyourcomposition,youshouldclearlystateyouropinionandgivereasonstosupportyourarguments.WriteyourcompositionontheANSWERSHEET.writingpractic

124、esampleWhichisMoreImportant,WealthorHealth?Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewpointsaboutthissubject.Somesaythatwealthismoreimportant,forkeepingfitneedsmoney.Otherssayhealthismoreimportant,foryoucandonothingwithoutagoodhealth.Thisquestionisstillunderdiscussion.Inmyopinion,healthismoreimportantthanwealt

125、h.Thefollowingpointscanweesupportmystatement.First,agoodhealthwillenableyoutoenjoyyourlife.Withagoodhealth,youwillbehappywithyourselfandyourfamilyaswell.Second,agoodhealthwillenableyoutoworkeffectively.Inthisway,youmaydomorecontributionstooursociety.Third,agoodhealthisalsothebestwayofmoneysaving.Wit

126、hagoodhealth,youwillreducetheeconomicburdenforyourself,yourfamilyandthesocietyaswell.Icantimaginewhatwillhappentoasocietywhosecitizenshaveapoorhealth.Therefore,healthismoreimportantthanhealth.writingpracticeForthispart,youaretowriteacompositionof120-150wordsonthefollowingtopic:TheGreatestInventionin

127、thePastCenturyInyourcomposition,youshouldclearlystateyouropinionandgivereasonstosupportyourargument.WriteyourcompositionontheANSWERSHEET.writingpracticesampleTheGreatestInventioninthePastCenturyOfalltheinventionsanddiscoveriesinthecentury,nothingcanbemoreinfluencingthantheinventionofInternet.Peoplew

128、hoemphasizeeithertheadvantagesordisadvantageshavetoacknowledgethatInternethasbecometheessentialpartofourdailyworkandlives.Internetisthebestinformationcenter.ItiswidelyagreedthatbyusingInternet,wecangetaccesstoinformationmoreeasilyandquickly.Forexample,wecanreadthelatestnewsonInternetinsteadofbuyinga

129、largepieceofnewspaper;wecanalsodealwithourstocksharesontheInternetsittingathome.Inshort,theconvenienceprovidedbytheInternethelpsusall.Internetalsoservesasanewwayofcommunication.Itismuchcheaperthanatelephonecall,especiallyalongdistancecall;itismuchquickerthanaletter.Ofcourse,italsohassomedetrimentali

130、nfluence.Forinstance,someunhealthyinformationisspreadingandissenttoespeciallytheteenagers.However,nothingcouldbeperfect.ItiswidelybelievedthatInternetwilldousmoregoodthanharmaslongasweuseitcarefullyandproperly.writingpracticeInthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan150wordsonT

131、heIncreaseintheNumberofChineseTravelingAbroad.Studythefollowingchartcarefullyandbaseyourcompositionontheinformationgiveninthechart.1.StatethechangesinthenumberofChinesetravelingabroadinthepastthreeyears.2.Givepossiblereasonsforthechanges.writingpracticesampleTheincreaseintheNumberofChinesetravelingA

132、broadAscanbeclearlyobservedfromthechartabove,thetrendofChinesetravelingabroadismountingtheseyears.Inthepastthreeyears,thenumberofChinesetravelingabroadhasbeenonasteadyrise.Accordingtothechart,thenumberincreasedfrom7.5millionin1999to10millionin2000andto12.1millionin2001.Ithinkthereareatleastthreereas

133、onsfortheabovementionedchanges.Firstandforemost,thechangesareprimarilyduetothebetterincomeoftheChinese.Theyarebetteroffandcanaffordatripabroad.Whatsmore,theyhavealottodowiththedevelopmentofthetravelindustryinChina.Moreandmoretravelagenciesareattractingmorepeopletojoinintheirtoursabroad.Finally,thech

134、angesarecloselyrelatedtoourpolicyofopeninguptotheoutsideworld.Fromwhathasbeendiscussed,itisobviousthattheincreaseinthenumberofChinesetravelingabroadisofgreatconcernofourlife.Itreflectstheimprovementofourlivingstandardsanddevelopmentofoureconomy.writingpracticeForthispart,youareallowed30minutestowrit

135、eacompositionofnolessthat120wordsunderthetitleof“Whatwillmoneybringus,fortuneormisfortune?”YourcompositionshouldbebasedonthefollowingstorygiveninChinese.Giveatleasttworeasonstosupportyourchoice.夺命之物一栋住宅楼发生了大火,一个中年男子在大火中丧生。奇怪的是,他5岁的儿子明明却逃了出来。有人问明明:“你是怎么逃出来的?”明明说:“我拿了一块湿毛巾捂住鼻子,贴在地上爬”,这是科学有效的逃生方法。人们不解:

136、“你爸爸不会这么做吗?”明明说:“会,是爸爸教我这么做的。爸爸和我一起爬到了门口,他说忘了一件东西,就又爬回去了。”参加救火的消防员说,他们发现那具男尸时,他的手里紧紧地攥着一沓百元大钞。于是,人们明白了:有一种东西杀人夺命,比大火还厉害。(摘自深圳青年第3期上半月刊,作者廖钧)writingpracticesampleAsthestorytellsus,wehavetothinkwhichwearetoconsiderasmoreimportant,lifeormoney.Thefatherinthestoryisthevictimofhissavings,becauseheloseshis

137、lifewhentryingtogethismoneyoutofthehouseregardlessoftherisk.Thestoryisintendedtotellusthatmoneysometimesbringsmisfortuneifonehasbecomeaslaveofmoney.Myargumentislistedasfollows:Ononehand,tobethemasterofmoneycanmakelifemoremeaningfulandbringfortune.Itisknowntoallthattherearemanyotherthingsthataremorei

138、mportantthanmoney,suchasknowledge,healthandfriendship.Overestimateoftheimportanceandvalueofmoneyislikelytoconfineonesactivityandthinkingtomoney.Asaresult,everythingelseisoverlookedandhappinesswillnotcomeeasily.Ontheotherhand,tobeaslaveofmoneycanmakeapersonendupwithdisaster,justasthefatherinthestory.

139、Manycrimesarerelatedtomoney,includingrobbery,briberyandstealing.Thisfollowsthatwehavetotakeapositiveattitudetowardsmoney.Inconclusion,Illneverdosuchasillythingasthefatherhasdone.Moneydoesmeanalot,butitdoesnotmeaneverything.Illlearnalessonfromthestoryandtrytodevotemyselftomoreimportanttasksratherthan

140、becomeaslaveofmoney。writingpracticeReadthestoryinChinesebelow,andthenwriteacompositionofnolessthan150wordsunderthetitleof“TheGoalofLife”.Yourcompositionshouldbebasedonthestoryandthefollowingoutline:1.Whathaveyoulearnedfromthestory?2.Whatisthegoalofyourlife?Ifyouhaveachievedthegoalofyourlife,whatwoul

141、dyoudo?目标在英国有一位残疾青年,他双腿走起路来很困难,却凭着坚强的信念和毅力创造了一次又一次的壮举:他19岁时登上了世界最高峰珠穆朗玛峰;21岁时登上了阿尔卑斯山;22岁时登上了乞力马扎罗山。28岁前他登上了世界上所有著名的高山。然而,就在28岁这一年他自杀了。原来在他11岁时,他父母在攀登乞力马扎罗山时不幸遭遇雪崩双双遇难。他的父母在临行前给他留下了遗嘱,希望他能像父母一样,登上世界上所有著名的高山。这位残疾青年把父母的遗嘱作为他人生奋斗的目标,当实现全部目标的时候,他感到前所未有的无奈和绝望。他留下遗言:“如今,功成名就的我感到无事可做了,我没有了新的目标”writingpract

142、icesampleAfterreadingthisinstructivestory,wecanlearnthatthereisnogoal,thereisnolife,andweshouldsetnewgoalsforlifeindifferentperiodsoflife.Otherwise,sadstorysuchasthedisabledmanmentionedinthestorywouldhappen.Onlywiththerenewedgoals,wecanimproveourselvesstepbystep,andmakeourlifemorecolorfulandmeaningf

143、ul.Certainly,everyonehashisowngoaloflife.Ihaveminetoo.Mygoalistobecomeafamoussurgeon.Illworkhardtoachievethisgoalbylearningandpracticingmore,sothatIcanmakemyselfmoreknowledgeableandskillful,andusethemtobenefitmypatients.IfIhaveachievedthisgoal,Iwouldsetupanewone.Then,Illdomybesttoachieveit.Therefore

144、,everyoneshouldsetdifferentgoalsindifferentperiodsoflife,andtryhisbesttoachieveit.Inthisway,wewilllivehappily.writingpracticeInthispart,youaretowriteacompositionofnolessthan150wordsaboutWhetherCollegeStudentsShouldBeAllowedtoGetMarried.Youshouldwriteaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.Remembertowriteitc

145、learlyontheAnswerSheet.Outline:1.Chooseeitherofthetwopositions:Collegestudentsshould(not)beallowedtogetmarried.2.Stateyourreasonsfororagainsttheissue.3.Conclusion.writingpracticesampleThereismuchdiscussionnowadaysastowhetherornotCollegestudentsshouldbeallowedtogetmarried.Somepeoplethinkitishumanisti

146、ctoallowcollegestudentstogetmarried,whiletherearesomeotherswhobelievethatitmaymakeafar-reachingnegativeimpactuponthestudentsstudy.Wereitleftformetodecidewhethercollegestudentsshouldbeallowedtogetmarriedornot,Iwouldnothesitateamomenttopreferthelatter.Thereareadozenofreasonsbehindmybelief.Firstofall,a

147、cademicstudyingiswhatthecollegelifeshouldfocuson.Thewholepointofmarriageisthatitimposesclearobligations,notjusttherighttopursueyourownhappiness,buttoprovidebothemotionalandpracticalcareforeachother,whichsurelywastesalotoftime.writingpracticesampleMoreimportantly,mostcollegestudentsarerelyingontheirp

148、arentsfinancialsupporttocontinuetheirstudy.Surely,theirparentshopetheycanconcentrateonstudyinsteadofloveaffairs.Mostimportantofall,agreatmajorityofcollegestudentsarestillyoung,thatis,theyhavenotyetdevelopedasoundopinionastothetrueimplicationofloveandmarriage,thereby,mostoftheirmarriagesmayendupindiv

149、orce.Fromwhatwediscussedabove,wecansafelycometotheconclusionthatitisunwisetoallowcollegestudentstogetmarried.Becauseitwastedtoomuchtime,moneyandenergy,whichgreatlyinfluencestheirstudiesandbothphysicalandmentalwelfare.Andtherulesandregulationsshouldbemadebyboththecollegeandthegovernmentstobemanifestt

150、oallcollegestudentsthatcollegestudentsareforbiddentogetmarried.writingpracticeInthispart,youaretowriteacompositionofnolessthan150wordsabout“CollegeGraduatesWorkasVillageOfficials”.Youshouldwriteaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.PleaseremembertowriteitclearlyontheANSWERSHEET.Somecollegegraduateschooset

151、oworkasvillageofficials.1.Doyouthinkitisagoodidea?2.Whatcantheyofferthecountryside?3.Whatcantheygainfromtheirvillagepositions?writingpracticesampleCollegeGraduatesWorkasVillageOfficialsWiththedevelopmentofthesocietyandtheconstantincreaseofjob-huntingpressure,manypeoplefindithardtofindajob,especially

152、thecollegegraduates.Mostofthemjustwanttoworkinthebiganddevelopedcities,suchasShenzhen,Shanghai,etc.Butthesituationhaschanged.Somecollegegraduatesprefertoworkasvillageofficialsintheruralareas,Ithinkitisagoodidea.First,itnotonlycaneasethejob-huntingpressureinthebigcities,butalsocanmakethecollegegradua

153、teshavemorejobchances.Second,thecollegegraduatescanbringtheadvancedscienceandtechnologytothelaggingruralareas.Forexample,theycanteachthevillagershowtofeedthepigseffectivelyandplantthefruitsandvegetablesscientifically,whichcanhelpthevillagersliveawealthylifeinashorttime.Third,thecollegegraduatescanex

154、ercisethemselvesinthepoorlivingcondition.TheycanknowmuchmoreaboutChinesefarmers,andtheymayhaveabetterandlargerplatformtodisplaytheirtalentsandabilities.Inaword,Iaminfavorofthisidea,andIwishIcouldbeavillageofficialaftergraduation.writingpracticeWriting(30minutes,15points)Directions:WhoandHowtoTakeCar

155、eofseniors?writingpracticesampleWhoandHowtoTakeCareofseniors?SinceChinaadoptedone-childpolicy,togetherwithimprovementmadeinthesocialundertakingssuchaswelfareandhealthcare,therehasemergedaproblemofhowtosupportseniorsinrecentyears.Aseverycoinshastwosides,thesideeffectofone-childpolicyisappeared,forexa

156、mple,thechildregardedbyotherfamilymembersasthelittleprinceorprincess,alwayshashiswishessatisfiedwithoutdifficulty.Growingupisthisfamily,nowondertheylackinsenseofcaringforothersandlearningtobeindependentofparents.Cantheysupporttheiragingparentswhoselifeexpectancyhasbeenprolonged?writingpracticesample

157、WhoandHowtoTakeCareofseniors?Toeffectivelycopewiththissocialproblemoftakingcareofseniorstoday,Imayputforwardseveralsuggestionsasfollows:First,youngadultsinafamilyshouldspendmoretimewiththeireldermembers,givingfinancialhelp,chattingoverfavoritetopics,doingfamilywork.Secondly,thegovernmentsatalllevels

158、shouldfinancetheconstructionofmoreseniorscarecentersforagedpeoplewhowishtolessentheburdenoftheirchildren.Lastbutnottheleast,thesenseofresponsibilityforcaringtheseniorsshouldbeplantedtotheheartofeveryone.Tosumup,IfirmlyholdthattakingcareoftheseniorsisoneofthetraditionalvirtueinChinaanditinvolvestheef

159、fortofyoungadultstogetherwithlovefromeverycornerofthesociety,particularsocialinstitutions.Onlybydoingsocanwebuildaharmonioussociety.writingpracticeInthispart,youaretowritewithin30minutesacompositionofnolessthan150wordsonSelf-confidenceIsaKeytoSuccess.Youcouldfollowthecluessuggestedbythepicturegivenb

160、elow.RemembertowritethecompositionclearlyontheANSWERSHEET.writingpracticesampleSelf-confidenceIsaKeytoSuccessFromwhatisillustratedinthispicture/ascanbeseenfromheabovepicture,themanwithfull-confidencefinallystepsuptothechampionshipwhilethenon-confidentpersonbecomesthestepsofthesuccessfulman.Itissuppo

161、sedthatsuccessisabeautifuldreamthateveryonewantstocometrue.However,therearemanyfactorsledtosuccess.Butitisnodoubtthatself-confidenceisoneofthekeystosuccess.Therearevariousreasonsaccountingforthis.Sincewehavetoliveinanon-the-movelifestyle,wemayencountervarioustroublesonthewaytosuccess.Whencomingcross

162、difficulties,wemustbeconfidenttoovercomethem,onlythroughwhichcanwefinallyachievethegoal.Furthermore,ifwearenotself-confidentwhenweconfrontdilemma,wewouldnotrealizenotonlythepersonaldreambutalsothenationaldream.AndnoissueinChinaisasbasictobuildupthesocietyinharmonyastoconductcoordinationinfaceofdisas

163、ter.writingpracticesampleSelf-confidenceIsaKeytoSuccessFromwhatwediscussedabove,wecansafelydrawtheconclusionthatself-confidenceisakeytosuccessbothforthepersonalandthenation.Ifweupholdthespriteofself-confidence,weareabletoconquerallthedifficultiesandachievethegoalnomatterhowseriousthedifficultiesare!

164、writingpracticeInthispart,youaretowritewithin30minutesacompositionofnolessthan150wordsunderthetitleof“MyOpinionAboutBlog”.Yourcompositionshouldbebasedonthecluesgivenbelow.PleaseremembertowriteitclearlyontheCOMPOSITIONSHEET.Blogisanon-linediarythatonekeepsonhisfrequentlyupdatedpersonalwebpage.Blogoft

165、enreflectsthepersonalityandexperiencesoftheauthor.1.Introductoryremarks.2.Myopinionaboutblog:Fororagainst,andreasons,ORWhatIthinkblogcando.3.ConclusionwritingpracticesampleThereisnodenyingthefactthatthebloghasgainedincreasingpopularityinpeoplesdailylifeinthepastyears.Aswecansee,peopleofvariedages,oc

166、cupationsandsocialrankshavetheirownblogs.Theyaresomewhatliketheironlinediaries.Truly,thebloghassomeattractivetraits.Themostnoticeableoneisthatonecansharehisorherownfeelingsandthoughtswithmanyothers.Inthissense,ablogislikeabookonehaspublishedabouthimself.Comparedwithtraditionalbooks,blogshavesomeadva

167、ntages.Foronething,theycanbecontinuallyrenewedandrevisedattheauthorswill.Foranother,onecan,tosomeextent,choosehisreaders.However,aseverycoinhastwosides,theblogalsohassomedrawbacks.First,someauthorsattackothersintheirarticlesandinfringeuponothersrights.Secondly,sincetheblogisnotarealbook,theintellect

168、ualpropertyrightsofthewritercannotbewellprotected.Tosumup,theblogislikeatwo-edgedsword,whichhasbothmeritsandflaws.Ofcourse,weshouldnotgiveupeatingforfearochoking.Instead,weshouldexertpropersupervisionoveritandletitserveusbetter.writingpracticeForthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionofno

169、lessthan150words.YourcompositionshouldbebasedonthefollowingtwoquestionsafteryouhavereadthestorygiveninChinese.1.Whatdoyouthinkaboutthestory?2.Whatdoyoulearnfromit?英国史学家卡莱尔经过多年的伏案,写成了法国大革命史的全部文稿。那时候没有电脑,一切都得用手来完成,而且难得有备份。来卡尔写完后的第一件事,就是将它交给最信任的好友米尔去完善。然而,就在第二天手稿被米尔家的女佣当作废纸丢进了火炉!而且,更糟糕的是,为了保持书房的整洁,卡莱尔每

170、写完一章,随手把原来的笔记、手稿撕碎。可以想象卡莱尔当时的心情,但他很快就平静下来,反而安慰伤心地米尔:“没关系,就当我作文交给老师批阅,老师说这篇不行,重写一次吧,你可以写的更好!”卡莱尔再起炉灶,才重写这部巨著。如今人们读到的法国大革命史,就是他的第二稿。这一稿的质量,无论文字还是内涵上,都达到了卡莱尔写作的巅峰。writingpracticesampleTheshortparagraphabovetellsusarealstoryaboutthehistoryofthewell-knowwritingFrenchRevolutionHistory.Claire,theauthorofFr

171、enchRevolutionHistory,losthisscriptinthecourseofthewriting,whichcouldhavebrokenhimdown.However,thegreathistorianwasnotbeatbythefrustration.Herestartedhiswritingandfinisheditwithunyieldingwill.Thecourseofcreationofthewritingshowsusthatunyieldingwillisthekeytosuccess.Reviewingthewholestory,whathelpedt

172、heauthorgettothesuccesswasjusthisperseverance.Hedidnotgiveuphisgoalevenwhensufferedformagreatstrike,whichmademerememberwhathappenedonme.OnceIwantedtojoininthefootballteaminourschool,butwasrefusedbythembecauseofmypoorperformance.ThenInevergiveupmydreamandkeptpracticingmyskillsalthoughitwasatoughperio

173、d.AtlastImadeitandgotthepermissiontotheteam.Actuallythetwostorieshavethesamemeaningthatunyieldingwillisthemostimportantelementonthewaytosuccess.writingpracticeInthispart,youaretowritewithin30minutesacompositionofnolessthan150wordsunderthetitleof“HowtoHandleStress”.Thecluesgivenbelowareforyourreferen

174、ceonly,NOTtheoutlineyoushouldfollow.PleaseremembertowriteyourcompositionclearlyontheCOMPOSITIONSHEET.1.Commonsourcesofstress.2.Healthywaystoreducestress.3.Howyouhaveovercomestressfulsituations.writingpracticesampleHowtoHandletheStressNowadaysmoreandmorepeoplehavebeenundervariousstressesandtherehasbe

175、enanincreaseinstress-relateddiseasesamongemployeesandstudents.Thisphenomenonhasarousedimmediateconcernandwidespreaddiscussionamongthegeneralpublic.Frommyperspective,theresourcesofstressescanbefromourwork,familyandalsofromthesociety,andlearninghowtodealwithstresseshasfar-reachingsignificancetoourbody

176、health.Asamatteroffact,somesolutionstoreducestressescanbeillustratedbelow.Thefirstonethatcomestomymindreadilyistoshareourstresswithothers.Itcanbeenormouslyhelpfulbecausewemayfeelquiterelaxedaftertalkingtoothersandthingseventurnbetterifwegetanyvaluablesuggestionsfromthem.Whatsmore,makingtimeforfunsuc

177、haslisteningtomusicandwatchingmoviesmaybegoodmedicine.Additionally,itisalsoagreatwaytoreduceanxietytodoalargenumberofphysicalactivities.writingpracticesampleHowtoHandletheStressFromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,Istronglybelievethatweshouldknowhowtoreduceenormousstressbecauseitposesageneralthreattohumanbodyhealth.Asacommonemployee,Ioftenfeelimmensestressatwork.Inthosecases,Ialwaystriedtotalkwithmyclosefriendstoheartheiradviceorjustlistentomyfavoritemusic.Onlybyhavingbothmentalandphysicalhealthcanwehopetodoourjobwellinthefuturewritingpractice

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