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1、 台台州州市市20202020年年4 4月月高高三三年年级级教教学学质质量量评评估估试试题题英英语语续续写写评评讲讲课课件件以以及范文及范文 -by Lance ( -by Lance (兰银清兰银清) )读后续写：读后续写： Freddie Freddie woke woke up up to to see see it it was was snowing snowing again. again. The The world world outside outside was was white. white. Snow Snow covered covered the the road
2、s, roads, the the cars, cars, the the houses, houses, and and even even the the drivewaydriveway FreddieFreddie had just had just shoveledshoveled the day before. the day before. “Ugh,” “Ugh,” said said Freddie. Freddie. “Not “Not more more snow!” snow!” He He got got out out of of bed bed and and h
3、eadedheaded to to the the bathroom bathroom for for his his regular regular morning morning shower. shower. As As he he reached for reached for the taps, his the taps, his mothermother appeared in the doorway. appeared in the doorway. “Ive “Ive got got news,” news,” she she said. said. “Theres “Ther
4、es been been so so much much snow snow overnightovernight that that the the roads roads are are slipperyslippery and and dangerous. dangerous. I I just just heard heard on on the the radio radio that that they they canceledcanceled the school buses for the day.” the school buses for the day.” His Hi
5、s father father smiled. smiled. “Since “Since we we are are all all staying staying home home today, today, I I thought wed have a nice hot breakfast together.”thought wed have a nice hot breakfast together.” Freddie Freddie nodded nodded in in agreementagreement. . Normally, Normally, the the famil
6、y family was was rushingrushing to to get get out out on on time, time, so so he he usually usually just just ate ate some some cerealcereal and and a a banana banana on on school school days. days. He He sat sat at at the the table table and and watched watched his his father father flipflip the th
7、e eggs eggs over over in in the the pan. pan. His His mother mother poured poured juice juice and coffee and joined them. It was and coffee and joined them. It was relaxingrelaxing, thought Freddie., thought Freddie. After After breakfast breakfast his his mother mother suggested suggested he he go
8、go out out and and build build a a snowmansnowman. . Freddie Freddie wasnt wasnt too too sure. sure. He He didnt didnt really really like like the the cold cold and the snow. Hed rather stay inside and and the snow. Hed rather stay inside and play video gamesplay video games. . “You “You can can pla
9、yplay after, after, but but how how about about you you go go outside outside for for a a little little bit? bit? Its Its good good to to get get some some fresh fresh airair, , and and who who knows, knows, you you might might even even enjoy enjoy yourself.” yourself.” His His mother mother handed
10、 handed him him a a scarf, scarf, hat, hat, and and mitts. mitts. Freddie Freddie reluctantlyreluctantly put on the warm clothes and headed put on the warm clothes and headed outsideoutside. . Standing Standing alone alone in in the the front front yardyard, , with with the the cold cold wind wind b
11、lowing, blowing, was was not not Freddies Freddies idea idea of of a a good good timetime. . Knowing Knowing his his mom mom meant meant what what she she said, said, the the boy boy sighedsighed, , thinking thinking the the quicker quicker he he completed completed his his snowmansnowman, , the the
12、 faster faster he he could could go go back back inside inside to to his his video video games. games. He He set set to to work work packing packing up up some snow into a large ballsome snow into a large ball. . Moments Moments later, later, he he saw saw one one of of his his friends friends emerg
13、ing emerging fromfrom his his house house up up the the street. street. DionDion waddled waddled out out in in his his snow snow pants pants and and heavy overcoat. He heavy overcoat. He waved to waved to Freddie.Freddie.二）思要处理的问题二）思要处理的问题1. 1.文章的主题：文章的主题：lifelife2. 2.划线词归类划线词归类characters: Debbie, m
14、om, Dion(classmate)characters: Debbie, mom, Dion(classmate)time/place: outsidetime/place: outsideactions: realized playactions: realized playemotions: relaxing, a good timeemotions: relaxing, a good timeothers: snowmanothers: snowman，companycompany3. 3.根根据据已已知知人人物物关关系系，故故事事发发展展情情节节，所所给给两两段段落落的的首首句句，
15、划线词预测故事情节的发展。划线词预测故事情节的发展。 可以通过提问的方式预测故事情节的发展可以通过提问的方式预测故事情节的发展Freddie was surprised but happy to see his classmate.Freddie was surprised but happy to see his classmate.1. Did Debbie ask Dion to help him build the snowman?1. Did Debbie ask Dion to help him build the snowman?2. How did they build the
16、 snowman? How did they feel?2. How did they build the snowman? How did they feel?3. What was the idea? Whose idea?3. What was the idea? Whose idea?Delighted at the idea , Freddie ran into his house.Delighted at the idea , Freddie ran into his house.1. Why did Freddie run into his house?1. Why did Fr
17、eddie run into his house?2. What did Freddie do next?2. What did Freddie do next?3. 3. Did Did Freddie Freddie change change his his idea idea of of a a good good time time ? ? How How did did his mother feel?his mother feel?4. 4.叙述和描写的方式叙述和描写的方式A: A: 叙述：顺序，倒叙，插叙，补叙叙述：顺序，倒叙，插叙，补叙此续写是顺序（一般都是顺序哈）此续写是顺
18、序（一般都是顺序哈）B: B: 需要心理描写吗？需要对话吗？需要心理描写吗？需要对话吗？此此续续写写可可以以有有心心理理描描写写，也也可可以以没没有有。此此续续写写对对话话可可以以有有，但是要少而精（一般来说续写的对话要少而精）。但是要少而精（一般来说续写的对话要少而精）。5. 5.思考一个恰当的结尾思考一个恰当的结尾记记叙叙文文或或者者小小说说的的结结尾尾方方式式很很多多。根根据据具具体体文文章章以以及及自自己己写写作作最最擅擅长长的的方方式式，可可以以采采用用余余味味悠悠长长，回回味味无无穷穷的的方方式式结结尾尾；也也可可以以采采用用升升华华主主题题的的方方式式结结尾尾；还还可可以以采采用
19、用寄寄情情于于景景，定定格画面的方式结尾等等。格画面的方式结尾等等。此续写可以考虑余味悠长、回味无穷的方式结尾此续写可以考虑余味悠长、回味无穷的方式结尾三）写作过程中处理的问题三）写作过程中处理的问题写是在写是在“ “读和思读和思” ”有效进行后，具体写作的一个综合的过程。有效进行后，具体写作的一个综合的过程。1. 1.续续写写的的第第一一段段要要和和前前文文要要有有效效衔衔接接，第第二二段段要要和和第第一一段段有有效效衔衔接接。尤尤其其要要注注意意续续写写的的第第一一段段不不能能和和原原文文脱脱节节，也也不不能能重重复复原原文文内内容容。第第二二段段不不能能和和第第一一段段脱脱节节，也也不不
20、能能第第二二段段重重复复续写第一段的内容。续写第一段的内容。2 2续续写写的的段段落落要要和和续续写写首首句句有有效效衔衔接接，衔衔接接的的方方式式有有主主要要有有三种：三种：1) 1) 与首句主语衔接与首句主语衔接2) 2) 与首句宾语衔接与首句宾语衔接3 3）与首句逻辑衔接）与首句逻辑衔接范文：范文： 台州台州20202020年年4 4月续写范文（月续写范文（-by Lance -by Lance 兰银清）兰银清） Freddie Freddie was was surprised surprised but but happy happy to to see see his his cl
21、assmate. classmate. “Yeah, “Yeah, sure. sure. Help Help me me make make this this snowman, snowman, would would you?” you?” Dion Dion noddednodded, , and and they they got got to to work, work, building building the the snowman snowman a a solid solid base base and and lifting lifting a a heavy heav
22、y snowball snowball on on top top of of it. it. Dion Dion found found some some stones stones for for buttons, buttons, and and Freddie Freddie stuckstuck a a couple couple of of broken broken branches branches into into the the body body to to make make arms. arms. Finally, Finally, the the snowman
23、 snowman was was finished! finished! ThenThen，they they stood stood back back to to admire admire their their workwork, , exhausted exhausted and and red-red-cheeked cheeked but but excited excited and and happyhappy. . Suddenly, Suddenly, Dion Dion said, said, “Hey, “Hey, I I know know what what we
24、 we can can do do next!” next!” He He told told Freddie Freddie his his idea idea and and Freddie grinned.Freddie grinned. Freddie Freddie ran ran into into the the house. house. His His mom mom met met him him at at the the door. door. Seeing Seeing snow snow full full of of Debbies Debbies face fa
25、ce and and overcoatovercoat，she she couldnt couldnt help help laughinglaughing. . “Are “Are you you ready ready to to come come in in ?” ?” she she asked. asked. “Not “Not yet, yet, Mom!” Mom!” Freddie Freddie said. said. Still Still excitedexcited, , he he asked asked his his mother mother if if he
26、 he could could go go to to the the park park with with Dion Dion and and go go sledding sledding down down the the hill. hill. Knowing Knowing Debbie Debbie would would rather rather enjoy enjoy himself himself outside outside than than play play video video games games at at home, home, his his mo
27、ther mother agreed agreed without without hesitation hesitation , , with with her her face face shining shining like like a a diamonddiamond. . “Snow “Snow days days are are the the best!” best!” Freddie Freddie yelledyelled as as he he ran ran off to play with his friend- Dion.off to play with his friend- Dion.
