之之英语漫画作文英语漫画作文( ( 议论议论 ) )攻攻略略 2013年高考英语考试说明：年高考英语考试说明：要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇150词左右的短文词左右的短文情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、方位、关系、内容、情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、方位、关系、内容、数据等；提供情景的形式如图表、图画、提纲、信函、短数据等；提供情景的形式如图表、图画、提纲、信函、短文等考生应能：文等考生应能：（（1）根据特定的语境）根据特定的语境准确准确使用英语语法，选用使用英语语法，选用恰当恰当的词的词汇；汇；（（2）使用）使用一定的句型、词汇、清楚、连贯地一定的句型、词汇、清楚、连贯地传递信息和传递信息和表达自己的思想表达自己的思想 说明：说明：看图作文的看图作文的“图图”不局限于某一类型的图，如漫画、不局限于某一类型的图，如漫画、广告画，也包括其他图画、照片等情景材料考生们可根广告画，也包括其他图画、照片等情景材料考生们可根据情景图示的寓意、内容或情节线索，传递信息和表达自据情景图示的寓意、内容或情节线索，传递信息和表达自己的思想。
己的思想作文应覆盖提示的要点，但避免仅根据提示文作文应覆盖提示的要点，但避免仅根据提示文字做简单翻译字做简单翻译 江苏近三年高考命题特点江苏近三年高考命题特点的回顾与分析的回顾与分析——书面表达书面表达年份年份 形式形式20112011 照片照片+ +文字文字20122012 表格表格+ +文字文字20132013 漫画漫画 (2011)下面下面这幅照片展幅照片展现了女儿了女儿为回家回家妈妈拿包的情景拿包的情景请根据你根据你对这幅照片的理解用英幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文写一篇短文你的短文你的短文应包含以下内容：包含以下内容：1.描述照片内容，如情景、人物、描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；作，等等；2.结合自身合自身实际，，谈谈你的感想；你的感想；3.举例例说明你能明你能为家家长减减负做些什么做些什么注意：注意：1.可参照可参照图中文字及下面文章中文字及下面文章开开头所所给提示，作必要的提示，作必要的发挥想象2. 词数数150左右开头已已经写好，写好，不不计入入总词数3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名和本人姓名。
(2012). 生活中冲突时有发生假设你班同学苏华生活中冲突时有发生假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张请导致关系紧张请你结合此事你结合此事,并根据以下提示并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿专栏投稿简要描述事要描述事情的情的经过打打篮球、碰撞、争球、碰撞、争执, ,等等等等分析分析发生冲生冲突的原因突的原因1. 1. 遇事不遇事不够冷静冷静2. ……2. ……谈谈避免冲避免冲突的做法突的做法( (请考生根据自己的考生根据自己的经历或感想或感想, ,提提出至少两种做法出至少两种做法) ) (2013). 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解请根据你对以下两幅图的理解, 以以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题为题, 用英语写一篇作文用英语写一篇作文参考词汇参考词汇: banner (横幅横幅)，，stump (树桩树桩)你的作文应包括以下内容你的作文应包括以下内容:1. 简要描述两幅图的内容简要描述两幅图的内容; 2. 概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解解; 3. 举例说明两幅图对你的启示。
举例说明两幅图对你的启示 How to write an argumentation about cartoons successfully ? 简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的想法就图片的主题谈谈自己的想法 Difficulties?1. 读图读图2. 解意解意3. 谋篇谋篇interpret picture dig implied meaning plan a composition 读图读图1. 漫画的漫画的题目题目 眼睛眼睛2. 漫画的漫画的画面画面 细节细节3. 漫画的漫画的文字文字 观点观点4. 漫画的漫画的夸张夸张 寓意寓意 解意解意注意注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)，， 切记要认真阅读！！！切记要认真阅读！！！简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的想法题谈谈自己的想法 解意解意1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度辨明褒贬，找准角度 夸奖褒扬夸奖褒扬 or 批评讽喻？批评讽喻？ 个体个体描述性语言描述性语言 解意解意２２. 联系生活联系生活3. 3. 发表观点发表观点整体整体概括性语言概括性语言（反映社会现象）（反映社会现象） 带来的后果带来的后果及建议及建议 谋篇谋篇3 parts:1)describe the picture2)interpret its implied meaning (寓意寓意)or point out its implications（暗示）（暗示） in our life3)give your opinions/suggestions Part 1 Describe the pictureThe picture (above) is about/shows…In the picture, there are/is …/…(are) /is doing…In the picture, we can see…As is shown/indicated/seen in the picture, …As we can see in the picture, …with the details and for the theme Part 2 Interpret the pictureIt seems very ridiculous [ri'dikjuləs] that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.The picture shows / indicates an interesting phenomenon. The picture is the exact reflection of…Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that…This is a satirical [sə'tirikəl] (讽刺的讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among… Part 3 Give your opinionsvI think/believe thatvAs far as I’m concerned,vIn my opinion,vFrom my point of view,vshouldvIt is better/advisable to…vI consider it necessary…Only in this way can….vmustvhave tovDo/Don’t… 简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的想法。
就图片的主题谈谈自己的想法 vAs is seen in the picture, a girl is riding a bicycle, with the help of her families. All of her families are so nervous about her while the girl wants to ride on her own . vThe picture is the exact reflection of today’s Chinese families . As many Chinese families have only one child, parents and grandparents can’t help caring about everything in their child’s life. Meanwhile, children are used to depending on their families. vIn my opinion, what parents do will do harm to their children. They needn’t be so nervous in that they can’t help their children all the time. And if they do everything for their children, the young won’t achieve anything in their own life. They might miss success for laziness and lack of courage. So it is important for children to do everything by themselves. To sum up, parents shouldn’t care too much about their children and children shouldn’t depend on their parents for everything. In this picture we can see a girl learning to ride a bike with her parents and even grand-parents running around her, sweating. Obviously, they intend to protect the child, for fear that she might fall off and get hurt. (简述图片，抓住与主题有关的内容简述图片，抓住与主题有关的内容)vNowadays, it is a common phenomenon that due to the one-child policy, the only kids in many families are considered as kings or queens. The parents, consciously or unconsciously, have offered too much help and make too many decisions for the kids themselves, which definitely spoil the children. As a result, children become so dependent and incapable that they may find it hard to survive the fierce competition in future. It is also likely that they will have trouble handling future problems on their own. (此段陈述此图片反映的社会现象，此段陈述此图片反映的社会现象，用词精确，句型多变用词精确，句型多变)vMany measures can be taken to prevent this problem getting more serious, but the following are among the most effective. Firstly, it’s better for parents to provide guidance as well as opportunities for kids to fall and fail, as they are recognized as an inevitable （必然的）（必然的）way to grow up. Secondly, it’s high time that children learned to say no to their parents’ unnecessary protection. At the same time, young as they are, they should make parents believe they are old enough to accumulate practical experience in real life and prepare themselves for the future. （三点建议，句型的变化尤其值得关注）（三点建议，句型的变化尤其值得关注）In conclusion, only when kids depend on themselves rather than their parents can they get mature and face everything with confidence and courage in the future. Polish up your article!1. To use linking words if necessary2. To use complicated structures if possible 1. To use linking words表示平行、对等或选择关系表示平行、对等或选择关系 and, as well as, together with, not only…but also...表示转折关系表示转折关系 but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while表示对比关系表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one hand…on the other hand...表示因果关系表示因果关系 so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to. 表示时间、顺序关系表示时间、顺序关系 first, second …, then, next, finally, for one thing ... for another, in the end, 表示递进、强调关系表示递进、强调关系 besides, what’s more, in addition, above all表示解释、说明关系表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance(例如例如), in other words, and so on表示结论表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion, to sum up1. To use linking words 2. To use complicated structuresPeople suggest that the conference be put off. It is suggested that the conference be put off. She walked out of the room and many students followed her.Followed by many students, she walked out of the room To his surprise, the little girl knew so many things. What surprised him was that the little girl knew so many things. 被动语态被动语态非谓语动词非谓语动词 从句从句 The couple was so curious about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.倒装倒装So curious was the couple about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.强调句强调句It was not until in 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began. Many lives were saved because there were the efforts of firefighters.虚拟语气虚拟语气But for the efforts of firefighters, many lives would not have been saved. 再叮嘱几句：再叮嘱几句：1. 保证三要素－保证三要素－体裁体裁、、时态时态、、人称人称正确正确体裁：议论文时态：一般现在时人称：统一 再叮嘱几句：再叮嘱几句：1. 保证三要素－体裁、时态、人称正确保证三要素－体裁、时态、人称正确２２. 避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误2)2)企图幽默企图幽默 可笑！可笑！4)4)中心不明中心不明 混乱！混乱！ 1)1)误解图意误解图意 大忌！大忌！3)3)不明寓意不明寓意 白写！白写！ 再叮嘱几句：再叮嘱几句：1. 保证三要素－体裁、人称、时态正确保证三要素－体裁、人称、时态正确２２. 避免漫画类作文的一些常见错误避免漫画类作文的一些常见错误３３. 控制字数（没话说控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆）太啰唆）４４.整洁整洁书写书写 请根据你对以下二幅图的理解，以请根据你对以下二幅图的理解，以“Actions speak louder than words”为题，用英语写一篇短文：为题，用英语写一篇短文： People celebrate Earth Day differently . In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps , but in vain , while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.The message conveyed here is clear :“Actions speak louder than words.” Our earth is suffering severe damage . Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it ? The answer is definitely the latter . Immediate actions should be taken ,like stopping cutting down trees to better the environment . Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting empty slogans , it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need . We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams . Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish. 。