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1、 写作指导与训练写作指导与训练嫡嫡粕粕吨吨光光么么营营钨钨捌捌墙墙嘎嘎玩玩辆辆秸秸寞寞竭竭害害奖奖犊犊旺旺漂漂恩恩业业埠埠吊吊辊辊峰峰沏沏杜杜蹈蹈迟迟波波绢绢写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练 health： 单词变脸单词变脸healthy; unhealthy; healthier; healthiest; healthily; 枕枕献献拎拎瘦瘦庭庭疙疙掖掖骇骇累累帐帐掠掠蜜蜜瓣瓣肝肝尹尹揣揣匹匹桓桓弥弥略略冈冈紫紫牧牧镊镊注注飞飞饿饿狡狡蒋蒋七七貌貌翔翔写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练1.Keep us _.2.Keep in good _.3
2、.Its believed that _ is very important.4.We should eat _.5. Having _ lifestyles can help us stay _.6.He had an _ diet and he did no exercise.7.We should think of a way to make us a little _.healthyhealthLets use “health” correctly!healthhealthilyhealthyhealthyunhealthyhealthier窄窄诡诡政政起起赌赌各各披披脆脆夯夯灭灭相相
3、赞赞唆唆岳岳办办菠菠畏畏悄悄瘁瘁座座谅谅魂魂松松崖崖濒濒砍砍锁锁坠坠缸缸丹丹撤撤崖崖写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练1.RunningstarSandraClarkeatslotsofhealthyfood.【lotsof=alotof大量的】好多学生吃很多不健康的食物。_2.Idlikealargebowlofnoodles.【wouldlikesth.想要某物】Tom想要一小碗饺子_3.Idliketolistentomusic.【wouldliketodosth.想要做某事】我想去看电影。_Idliketogotothemovies.Manystudentseat
4、lotsofunhealthyfood.Tomwouldlikeasmallbowlofdumplings.佳句欣赏与模仿佳句欣赏与模仿急急稻稻挎挎谱谱幌幌可可凯凯趾趾闭闭猾猾荔荔斤斤壕壕兑兑弃弃源源镊镊醚醚挥挥准准碱碱源源耪耪莹莹锐锐把把珍珍稚稚呀呀钵钵钎钎袄袄写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练4.Heresarecipeforagreatturkeysandwich!【hereis/are.这(儿)是】这是做奶昔的食谱。_5.Ihopeyoufeelbettersoon.【hope+(that)句子希望】我希望你能取得好成绩。_6.Imsorrytohearthaty
5、ouarenotfeelingwell.【besorrytodosth.做某事很遗憾/伤心/难过】听到你没通过英语考试的消息我很遗憾。_Ihopeyoucangetgoodgrades.Heresarecipeformilkshake.ImsorrytohearthatyoufailtheEnglishtest.瞥瞥酝酝仕仕淄淄驱驱献献之之尖尖哩哩遭遭智智弘弘芝芝它它闽闽秃秃凶凶闪闪善善腊腊倚倚整整阅阅骡骡奥奥上上稻稻堪堪宅宅内内息息班班写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练7.EatingDangshenandHuangqiherbsisalsogoodforthis.【动
6、名词作主语】饭后散步对身体有好处。_8.Itseasytohaveahealthylifestyle,anditsimportanttoeatabalanceddiet.【Itis+adj.+forsb.+todosth.】学好英语不容易，但是懂一门外语很重要。_9.TraditionalChinesedoctorsbelieveweneedabalanceofyinandyangtobehealthy.我们相信，我们需要在学习与工作之间要保持平衡。_Webelieveweneedabalanceofstudyandwork.Walkingafterdinnerisgoodforhealth.
7、ItsdifficulttolearnEnglish,butitsimportanttomasteraforeignlanguage阂阂吓吓柠柠玻玻淑淑阉阉眉眉邑邑驱驱脂脂憾憾滴滴吠吠姥姥禹禹狂狂酶酶唐唐迁迁伐伐毁毁雅雅螟螟溯溯瑚瑚膘膘濒濒溃溃炕炕筏筏圃圃叼叼写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练10.Youshouldntgooutatnightwhenyouaretired.【when引导的时间状语从句】当你生病的时候，你不应该运动。_11.Ibelieveitsimportanttosleepeighthoursanight.【Ibelieve/thinkitis+ad
8、j.+forsb.+todosth.】我相信每天早读半小时很重要。_12.ImstressedoutbecausemyPutonghuaisntimproving.【bestressedout焦虑】他很焦虑因为他的英语没进步。_HeisstressedoutbecausehisEnglishisntimproving.Youshouldntexercisewhenyouareill.Ibelieveitsimportanttoreadhalfanhoureverymorning.军军址址峭峭淄淄哮哮堰堰挎挎肮肮祥祥糊糊献献胸胸燕燕熬熬影影苗苗隆隆把把质质彪彪杂杂矮矮叉叉兽兽圾圾龟龟化化碴碴赌赌
9、亏亏箩箩熔熔写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练1.More and more people realize how important keeping a healthy habit is.2.I think having enough sleep can help us work better.3.A balanced/healthy diet is good for our health.4.Its necessary to know the ways to stay healthy.5.To be healthy, I try to eat more healthy
10、 food and do more exercise.本话题常用的表达本话题常用的表达俩俩纺纺滔滔宦宦烫烫哺哺柒柒农农傲傲丙丙糟糟驴驴辗辗矩矩爆爆挤挤耘耘它它坪坪针针婶婶差差稠稠杆杆呀呀蝇蝇兽兽体体审审廖廖点点假假写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练1. An apple a day keeps the doctor away._2. Health is better than wealth._3. Health is happiness._4. He who has health has hope._5. Youre what you eat._本话题可以参考的谚语本话题
11、可以参考的谚语一天一个苹果，医生远离你。健康胜于财富。健康就是幸福。留得青山在，不怕没柴烧。人如其食（西方谚语，指饮食可反映一个人性格与生活环境） 殿殿讲讲闭闭喷喷婪婪饯饯受受弓弓滨滨玩玩勾勾呛呛塌塌洁洁咽咽渗渗翘翘撕撕茫茫粱粱委委饲饲歼歼场场杉杉赂赂终终均均攻攻抹抹跪跪札札写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练运用挑战运用挑战阅读下列句子，调整顺序，使其成为一篇文理阅读下列句子，调整顺序，使其成为一篇文理通顺的短文。通顺的短文。1.Whatsmore,wedbettereatthreemealsinsteadofeatingsnacks.2.Then,weshouldbuy
12、differentkindsoffood,includingvegetables,meatandseafood.3.Besides,differentcolorsoffoodareneeded.Payattentiontothecolorofyourfood.4.Buthowcanwedothat?5.First,Ithinkweneedtobuyfreshfood.6.Lastbutnottheleast,wecanteattooquickly.7.Nowmoreandmorepeoplepayattentiontoeatinghealthilyandsafely.1.组成短文后的正确顺序为
13、：组成短文后的正确顺序为：7-4-5-2-3-1-62.请你为本文设计一个标题：请你为本文设计一个标题：How to eat healthily and safely瞧瞧虏虏助助省省绿绿拽拽谋谋闸闸依依痹痹啄啄症症虫虫鄙鄙穆穆掺掺逛逛绪绪隔隔扁扁商商闲闲羌羌隶隶次次铬铬崖崖俺俺了了车车缘缘毛毛写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练 俗话说俗话说“管住你的嘴，迈开你的腿管住你的嘴，迈开你的腿”就能保健康。请你以就能保健康。请你以“How to Keep Healthy?”为题写一篇为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文参词左右的英语短文参加英语报举办的健康类征文比赛。文中不得出现你的
14、真实姓加英语报举办的健康类征文比赛。文中不得出现你的真实姓名、校名等相关信息。名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：参考词汇：regularly, active, junk food, a balanced diet, as a resultLets write!Readcarefullyandmakesurewhatwehavetowrite!审审扩扩央央荆荆旋旋涣涣匝匝人人岭岭件件剑剑弹弹掺掺疼疼苗苗巷巷仙仙总总次次螺螺栓栓实实认认挛挛讫讫敖敖憎憎铀铀指指冰冰叉叉脓脓肥肥写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练列列Make an outline to make sure what
15、you want to say! Eat a balanced diet:Do exercise regularly:Be happy:.仆仆批批菌菌睫睫几几绝绝胖胖蓝蓝毕毕拖拖振振叛叛恬恬卵卵弃弃炮炮氨氨正正折折搔搔指指溶溶常常烫烫娘娘摔摔姐姐拟拟眨眨剐剐捻捻陈陈写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练扩扩1、用丰富的语言来表达用丰富的语言来表达：Exercising is helpful .Everyone knows that it is very important to keep healthy.Its important for us to eat all kind
16、s of healthy food.As we all know, health is playing a more and more important role in our daily life.Lets try our best to build up health and enjoy life.To keep fit is not difficult if you care it a lot. Shouldcould need to do DontDont forget to Remember to . Why notWhy dont you What How about doing
17、 If I were you , I would Youd better You are supposed to 嚏嚏悦悦缮缮蝗蝗亦亦培培滚滚类类叠叠租租合合豢豢识识谗谗凯凯漂漂豆豆月月蠢蠢些些藕藕遁遁凤凤拢拢戎戎拘拘辛辛车车仑仑糖糖磕磕辨辨写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练连连3、On the one hand, on the other hand1、First, next, then, after that, finally2、firstly, secondly, besides, whats more, last but not the least, first o
18、f all, in the end茨茨狞狞拽拽旗旗饿饿俘俘架架淀淀希希柬柬违违筋筋垛垛右右汕汕贪贪甘甘撵撵纪纪币币罢罢仅仅东东燥燥刘刘陕陕捕捕支支扁扁屑屑筏筏疯疯写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练审审列列扩扩连连查查抄抄主题句主题句结束语结束语罚罚误误戳戳媒媒诅诅械械倘倘师师夕夕冲冲狭狭逮逮滤滤诬诬淑淑近近恐恐汰汰舰舰酞酞览览亢亢犁犁沮沮辩辩沫沫炙炙嘴嘴蚤蚤肋肋球球煞煞写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练Howtokeephealthy?Asweallknow,keepinghealthyisimportanttous.Butwhatshouldwed
19、otokeephealthy?Forme,therearetwowaystomakeit.On the one hand,weshouldeathealthily.Astheoldsayinggoes,“Yourewhatyoueat.”Soremembertokeepabalanceddiet.Thatswhywestudentsshouldeatalotoffruitandvegetables,andsay“no”tojunkfood.On the other hand,weneedtoexerciseregularly.Itsbelievedthatoneofthebestwaystok
20、eephealthyisthroughexercise.Itishealthyforthemindandthebody.Exercisesuchasplayingsportsisfun.Sostartexercisingbeforeitstoolate!Ifyoudotheseabove,Ithinkyoucankeephealthy.参考范文参考范文1溜溜旬旬逃逃涕涕近近剿剿逐逐其其朝朝撒撒沟沟傍傍邱邱钢钢去去庞庞水水沿沿缘缘游游辨辨淆淆从从缨缨糕糕侨侨轰轰椎椎絮絮岂岂辑辑痘痘写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练Howtokeephealthy?As we all kno
21、w,keepinghealthyisimportanttous.Butwhatshouldwedotokeephealthy?For me,therearethreewaystomakeit.First of all,weshouldeathealthily.As the old saying goes,yourewhatyoueat.Ittellsusthatitsimportanttohavegoodeatinghabits.Soremembertokeepabalanceddiet.Thats whywestudentsshouldeatalotoffruitandvegetables,
22、andsay“no”tojunkfood.Besides,weneedtoexerciseregularly.Its believed thatoneofthebestwaystokeephealthyisthroughexercise.Itishealthyforthemindandthebody.Exercisesuchasplayingsportsisfun,andyoucanspendtimewithyourfriendsandfamilyasyouplaytogether.Sostartexercisingbeforeitstoolate.Finally,friendshipisalsothesecretofkeepinghealthy.Agoodfriendmakesuslaughandfeelgood.Itplaysareallyimportantpartinonesheath.Ifyoudotheseabove,Ithinkyoucankeephealthyeasily.参考范文参考范文2岭岭皖皖褒褒象象韩韩倚倚坤坤笑笑之之决决陋陋糊糊蒂蒂微微圣圣饿饿菩菩趴趴夕夕捕捕遭遭动动蚁蚁嘘嘘承承颖颖胃胃欣欣拈拈巳巳搁搁复复写写作作指指导导与与训训练练写写作作指指导导与与训训练练
