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1、 CET Writing 校园生活类作文 Campus life 社会热点话题 Social Focuses 评分标准 四六级作文和托福作文的评分标准是整体式的评分(global scoring）给出奖励分（reward scores)，雅思考试的评分标准是分项式评分（analytical scoring）。因而，四、六级阅卷员会找出一篇作文中的shining sentences/points而不是寻找错误点。Word Processing评分标准评分标准 2分一塌糊涂5分糊里糊涂8分马马虎虎11分清清楚楚14分漂漂亮亮The Perfect Triple-DeckerParagraph 破题
2、破题 自己观点自己观点 正反对比正反对比Opposing Views 对立观点型作文通常在提纲中给出两个对立的事物或同一事物的两个对立面，要求考生进行分析和评论7注意事项注意事项1.扣住中心词2.进行好坏、优劣、正反对比3.最后一部分表达自己观点OVERALL STRUCTURE Introduce the topic Introduce the topic Opposing views Opposing views Put forward Put forward personal opinions .personal opinions .Answer SheetAnswer SheetSam
3、ple Writing q dsadWho Should Take Care of the Old There is no defying the fact that it is a hotly debated topic today that whether the aged should be taken care of by individuals or by government. To this, peoples attitudes differ sharply. some insist that the government should take the responsibili
4、ty by building more homes for the elderly. They think that the old have been working for the country development and deserve peoples care and respect. Many others, however, hold that it is the familys duty to look after its senior members. They point out that after a lifetime toil of raising childre
5、n, the advanced people should be well looked after by their children. personally, I think both sides have something right. On the one hand, the gray-haired should be supported by their family. Anyone who tries to escape the duty should be blamed. On the other hand, the government should also give it
6、s support by promoting traditional values and funding more programs for the well-beings of its senior people. 高分模板It has been a hot topic for a long time whether T. Some people take it for granted that V1.However, others think that V2Those who hold the former opinion believe that R1. In addition, R2
7、However, there are still others who advocate the latter opinion because they hold R1. And R2. Whats more,R3.So, (Summarizing V2). As for me, my favor goes to V1/V2. For one thing PO1. For another PO2. And I hope 高分模板With the development of ( introduce the topic). Some people think that V1. In their
8、opinion, R1.However, others hold that V2. They maintain that R1. To their minds, R2.As far as I am concerned, what really matters is PO. When it comes to I think PO. In a word 作业1Should Parents Send their Children to Art classes?2Should College Students Hire Cleaners?3Should College Students Get Mar
9、ried?4Certificate Craze5My View on University Ranking6On the Importance of a Name7On Credit Cards 作业8 Should Mathematic Olympic Contest be Canceled ?9 Should Organ Donation be Compulsory?10 Should the University Campus be Open to the Tourist?11 Salary or Interest12 Cell Phone, Friend or Foe13Spring
10、Festival Gala on CCTV 作业14 Is Criticism a Bad Thing?15On Household Registration 16 Should College Students Keep Pets17Should Western Festivals be Observed in China?18Should Parents Send Their Children Study Abroad?19My View on Premarital Agreement Sample It has been a hot topic for a long time wheth
11、er the CCTV spring festival Gala should be cancelled or not. Many people take it for granted that spring festival Gala, the traditional entertainment should be maintained. However, others reckon that spring festival Gala should be cancelled.Sample Those people who hold the former opinion believe tha
12、t spring festival Gala offers a wonderful opportunity to celebrate this traditional festival, for Chinese all over the world can share the same happiness and excitement brought by the TV program. In addition, many performances are very impressive and some can even positively affect our life value.Sa
13、mpleHowever, there are still others who advocate the latter opinion because they hold this form of celebration forces people to spend the eve more passively. And the preparation for the Gala consumes excessive time and money. Whats more , a great proportion of the programs are not attractive enough.
14、 So it is advisable to cancel it.Sample As for me, my favor goes to the former opinion. For one thing, CCTV spring festival Gala gives us an option to celebrate this important moment. For another ,it offer a good chance for a family to have a rest happily. But it is really essential to improve the q
15、uality of the programs. And I hope some better forms of celebration will be created in the near future.第一段第一段-引导文章开头的常用句型引导文章开头的常用句型1,recently the issue of _has been brought into public focus.近来，。问题引起了社会广泛关注近来，。问题引起了社会广泛关注2,recentely the issue of whether or not _has been in the limelight and has aro
16、used wide concern in the public.近来是否。的问题已经非常明确，而且近来是否。的问题已经非常明确，而且引起了社会关注。引起了社会关注。3,now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in peoples attitudes towards some traditional practices.如今我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭如今我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代，很多人对某些传统的看
17、法也发生新时代，很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。了很大改变。the controversial issue is often brought into public focus, people from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.这种极具争议的话题往往很受社会的关注，这种极具争议的话题往往很受社会的关注，不同背景的人对他的看法也不尽相同。不同背景的人对他的看法也不尽相同。5,when it comes to _,most people believe that _;but other
18、 people regard _as_.提到提到问题，很多人认为问题，很多人认为；不过一些人；不过一些人则认为则认为.第二段：承第二段：承 常用句型常用句型some people are of the opinion that_有些人认为有些人认为they hold that _他们认为他们认为people, who advocate that _have their sound reasons坚持认为坚持认为的人也有其依据。的人也有其依据。people who support _give some or all of the following reasons.那些支持那些支持观点的人列出来
19、如下原因：观点的人列出来如下原因：第三段第三段 转转 的常用句型的常用句型but on the other hand, there are also quite a few people who strongly advocate that_however there are a large number of people who hold a different view concerning this case.On the other hand, there are also many opponents who strongly_最后一段最后一段 合合 常用句型常用句型accordi
20、ng to my personality and fondness, I would prefer _rather than_根据我的个性以及兴趣，我选择根据我的个性以及兴趣，我选择 Personally, /as far as Im concerned, I side with the former/latter opinion就我个人而言，我支持。就我个人而言，我支持。 Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.就我个人而言，我支持就我个人而言，我支持To my mind,/in my opinion, the advant
21、ages far overweigh the drawbacks/disadvantages.我认为优点胜过缺点我认为优点胜过缺点Taking into consideration both sides of the issue, I tend to favor the latter view that ._两种观点进行综合考虑，我同意后者两种观点进行综合考虑，我同意后者单一问题解决型作文 Problems and Solutions 这类作文包括what ,why, solution 三个要素。从文章结构上来说，即是问题（problems),原因（Causes and Reasons) 以及
22、方案（solutions) 29文章结构 提出问题：概括性地引出评论的事物或观 点。分析产生问题的原因，提出如何解决现象或问题的建议。针对上文的讨论，总结全文得出结论真题示例真题示例How to Succeed in a Job Interview1 面试在求职中的作用2 取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止、谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是。 How to Improve Students Mental Health1 心理健康很重要2 因此，学校可以3 我们应当写作过程审题审题打腹稿、写出提纲打腹稿、写出提纲简述面试的普遍性和重要性（提出问题）简述面试的普遍性和重要性（提出问题）分析取得面试
23、成功的诸多因素（分析原因分析取得面试成功的诸多因素（分析原因)提供面试成功的方法提供面试成功的方法(提出解决问题的方案）提出解决问题的方案）总结全文总结全文Sample Writing 1 Nowadays, it is universally acknowledged that a job interview is indispensable in the process of job hunting. Obviously, a job interview offers you an opportunity to display your capability. Additionally,
24、doing well in a job interview means you stand more chance of being employed. Therefore , the job interview is very important for a job hunter. But how can you succeed in it ? (提出问题）Sample Writing1 There are many factors involved in a successful interview. First of all , you should take care to wear
25、clean and suitable clothes, the right clothes worn on the right occasion would give a good feeling of you in the interview and help win the interviewers favorite judgment of you . Sample Writing1 In addition, you should pay particular attention to your manner of speaking and to the quality of your s
26、peech. Your self confidence can be demonstrated by a clear voice and vigorous speaking style. whats more, you should show your aptitudes and skills for the job and your knowledge about the job-related areas. last but not least, you ought to be honest about your academic background , for honesty is t
27、he best policy (分析问题， 提出建议) Simple Writing1 To sum up, the job interview is indeed important , but there is no need to be nervous . Once you have the ability for the job and are willing to achieve what is mentioned above, the new job will be within your reach.(总结)Simple Writing 2 With the intense co
28、mpetition in job hunting market, employment has become a big concern to college graduates. knowing how to succeed in a job interview plays a significant part in getting a good job. There are many ways for college graduates to deal with job interview successfully. To begin with, when interviewed , yo
29、u should wear clean and suitable clothes. Making a good impression is half done. Secondly, the interviewee should pay attention to the rate of speech, pitch and tone of voice, gestures ,expression through the eyes and the ability to hold the interest of others .The interviewer form an impression abo
30、ut him/her based on these. Besides ,being confidence can makeSimple Writing 2 you a successful interviewee. The secret is to be consistently you, at your best. Whats more, you should demonstrate your aptitude and skills for the job and your professional knowledge. Last but not least, you ought to be
31、 honest about your academic background, for honesty is the best policy. As for as Im concerned, the job interview is critical. On the one hand, one should prepare well and seize the opportunity. On the other hand, one should be relaxed and confident . All in all, the man who knows better how to succ
32、eed in a job interview stands a better opportunity to be favored. 写作模板It is generally accepted thatNowadays, it is universally acknowledged that Today, How to has become a matter of concern.Now people are increasingly aware /conscious of Recently the problem of has been in the limelight 写作模板There ar
33、e many ways to In the first place ,.; In the second place ,.; whats more,;Why do many people ? One reason is that _ . Another one is _.The phenomenon is mainly/partly attributed to _. Measures must be taken to solve the problem of _.Both government and ordinary citizens should join hands to make thi
34、s world a better place to live in , not only for ourselves but also for future generation.写作模板Taking into account all these factors , we may safely draw the conclusion that _.it is time we put considerable emphasis on the development of _.Tips: Dos and DontsThings to Check For:Correct spelling, gram
35、mar, complete sentences and punctuation.Did you repeat words and/or phrases?Were you clear?Has your essay been proofread?Assignment Directions: you should write a composition on the topic of How I Finance My College Education you should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outli
36、ne given below:上大学的费用(tuition and fees)可以通过多种渠道解决；那种渠道适合我（说明理由） 细化提纲目前大学生缴纳的学费越来越高，如何支目前大学生缴纳的学费越来越高，如何支付学费成了大学生们关注的焦点。付学费成了大学生们关注的焦点。现实生活中存在多种支付学费的途径，如现实生活中存在多种支付学费的途径，如父母支付，自己打工，银行贷款等。父母支付，自己打工，银行贷款等。陈述个人的观点，陈述个人的观点，尤其要详细说明原因尤其要详细说明原因。范文 With the rapid development of higher education in china, uni
37、versities are no longer financed exclusively by the government and students must pay at least part for their schooling. Then how to finance their college education is becoming a big concern to students and the society. 范文 There are various ways for a students to pay his tuition and fees .if a studen
38、t is quite excellent in his studies , he can apply for scholarships . If a student was born in a wealthy family, he can depend on his parents to complete his college life, which is totallly accepted in Chinese culture. However, many other choices are available, a student , whether rich or poor , can
39、 turn to bank for a loan ,which he or she can repay after graduation. 范文 As for as I am concerned, doing a part time job is a wise choice, on the one hand , I can make money to cut down on the financial burden of my family, on the other hand it can help me to understand the value of hard work and ac
40、cumulate working experiences, both of which are essential for my whole life journey. In sum , we , college students ,should choose a suitable way to finance our education so that we can finish our education smoothly.作业 Job hunting 1大学生找工作难大学生找工作难2原因很多原因很多3解决的办法解决的办法How to keep psychologically health
41、1心里问题往往是导致疾病的原因之一心里问题往往是导致疾病的原因之一2分析人们产生心理问题的原因（失业，压力过大。分析人们产生心理问题的原因（失业，压力过大。缺少支持，缺乏人际交往能力缺少支持，缺乏人际交往能力3你认为如何保持心理健康你认为如何保持心理健康第一段 Nowadays more and more people begin to realize/be aware of/notice the importance/significance/seriousness of the problem of _ .现在越来越多的人 There is no denying that special
42、attention must be paid to the problem of _. If we ignore to the problem ,it is very likely that _. 开始注意到.问题的严重性。第二段 There are many/several/a variety of causes/reasons for this _ in _ The phenomenon is mainly/partly attributed to _. 造成.的原因有很多。第三段There supposed to be two effective measures, on the one
43、 hand, we,on the other hand, we通常认为有两种有效的措施，其一是其二是Measures must be taken to solve the problem of_ 必须采取措施来解决.的问题现象解释类 如果提纲要求对一种现象产生的原因或带来的影响进行解释，则归为现象解释类 作文。现象解释类 Digital Age 1数字化产品得到广泛使用2对人类工作、学习和生活产生的影响 Will E-books Replace Traditional Book?1电子图书越来越多2取代传统图书，原因是3我的看法现象解释类Due Attention Should be Give
44、n to Spelling Due Attention Should be Given to The Study of Chinese 1忽视学习中文的现象2出现这种现象的原因和后果3为了改变这种现象，我认为现象解释类The Impact Of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication(2012.6)漫画、图表what electives to choose1各大学开设各种各样的选修课2学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课3以你为例现象解释类Traditional Operas are Gaining Revival on Campus今年来由越来越
45、多的大学生对传统戏剧感兴趣分析产生这一现象的原因你对此的看法Free Admission to Museums Students Use of Computers 2002On Students Selecting Lectures现象解释类要求学生从试题的提示性文字，图表或图画入手描述它们反映的现象，并对该现象进行解释说明，分析其原因，影响前景等并加以评述。 结构：首先描述现象并说明其现状；然后分析这种现象的原因呢，相关因素带来的影响；然后对现象做出品论或提出建议.现象解释类 Sample1E-learning1)近年来网络学习越来越流行2）产生这种现象现象的原因3）分析其带来的好处现象解释
46、类 Sample1 In recent years, many people have chosen e-learning as a way to further their study. With the rapid development of technology and peoples increasing demand for education ,e-learning or on-line learning has led a new trend of education. In addition ,in some areas, e-learning has played a ro
47、le that traditional education cannot compare. The reasons for this phenomenon are varied.(现象描述)现象解释类 Sample1Among all this reasons, the quick development of the internet plays a critical role. It makes all our dreams of attending classes in the distance possible. Moreover, e-learning breaks down the
48、 barriers of time schedule. Besides, compared with traditional ways of teaching and learning, it is far more costeffective for students.(说明原因)现象解释类 Sample1In my opinion, on-line learning ,as a new form of education, will benefit both the individual and the society. On the other hand, it offers peopl
49、e a convenient and flexible way to improve themselves. On the other hand, the overall qualities of people can be promoted, and hence impolite and critical behaviors can be greatly decreased. To conclude, e-learning does have a lot of advantages.现象解释类模板一第一段Nowadays/At present,.（概述现象）.The phenomenon h
50、as become a heated topic among the people around us.The phenomenon has been brought into focus./.(某现象),which has around great concern.(阐述现象表现).现象解释类模板一第二段There are many factors that may account for it, and the fallowing are the most conspicuous aspects.There are many reasons accounting for this phen
51、omenon.The reasons (factors ) that contribute to .(现象)are varied.First of all/To start with ,.(原因一).In addition/Furthermore /What is more /Moreover ,.(原因二).Finally ,.(原因三).On the whole ,.(总结原因). 现象解释类模板一第三段As far as I am concerned ,I am inclined to .(我的看法).(总结观点).现象解释类Sample2On the popularity of Mic
52、roblog With the improvement of microblog service and the influence of some “star microbloggers”, most of whom are celebrities, microblog is becoming an important and convenient way for people to express their opinions and to communicate with others. Now ,more and more people start to use microblog s
53、ervices provided by different websites.现象解释类Sample2现象解释类Sample2 However, microblog might give rise to some problems as well. Some microbloggers are so addicted to microblogs that they express all their thoughts and feelings in the microblog rather than communicate with their family members or friend
54、s. Day by day, microblog draw people away from their real life. whats worse, lack of face-to-face communication with others might isolate microbloggers from the society, which would do harm to their mental health.现象解释类Sample2In my view, microblog is a good platform for people to share their personal
55、 experiences and communicate with others. Still, people should have a rational attitude toward microblog and avoid spending too much time on it. After all, sitting in front of the cold screen for a long period of time does no good to peoples health.现象解释类 Sample3The Rush for Postgraduate Students请根据上
56、述图简要描述近几年请根据上述图简要描述近几年x省的研究生报考省的研究生报考情况的变化情况的变化说明产生这种变化的原因说明产生这种变化的原因我对考研热的看法我对考研热的看法现象解释类 Sample3YearNumber of candidates in X province (hundred)200218200330200470200515020062802007292现象解释类 Sample3 According to the table, it is clear that there was a sharp increase in the number of postgraduate can
57、didates in X province from 2002 to 2007. As early as in 2002, there were only 1800 candidates participating in the exam. Then 5 years later, the candidates increased greatly to a total number of 29200.(描述表格)现象解释类 Sample3 There are many reasons accounting for the increase of postgraduate candidates.
58、Firstly, the tough competition in the job market is the key point. The enrollment expansion of universities places a great pressure on the job market, which makes many college graduates turn to further education. Secondly many students with equivalent education background to college graduates are al
59、lowed to apply for postgraduate study due to the change of the government policy. Finally the society has great demand for the postgraduates with the economic development of China.(说明原因)现象解释类 Sample3 As far as I am concerned, college students should think twice before taking postgraduate education.
60、For one thing, postgraduate study does not necessarily ensure students a bright future. For another, its a tough process to prepare for the entrance examination and not everyone can stick it out. In brief college students should not rush for postgraduate study blindly.(阐述观点) 现象解释类图表、漫画模板第一段From the
61、chart/graph/table/picture ,we learn that nowadays/at present ,.(总述社会现象/事实现象),which has received considerable publicity/which has aroused great concern。.What impress us most is that (现象的突出表现). 现象解释类图表、漫画模板The chart图,图表;曲线图/graph图表;图解/table表格，图表picture describes that the figure declines/falls smoothly
62、/markedly .It indicates that_.图表/图片显示数字下滑平缓/明显，这表明-From the data we gathered from the graph above, we can conclude that_.根据上图收集的数据，我们可以得出结论现象解释类图表、漫画模板第二段There are many reasons accounting for (现象或变化)./There are many reasons behind the enormous changes reflected in the chart/graph/table/picture .Firs
63、t of all/In the first place,.(原因一).Second/In the second place/Whats more ,(原因二).In addition/Additionally,.(原因三).现象解释类图表、漫画模板第三段As far as I am concerned/As for me/In my opinion ,.(我的观点).One problem is (问题一).Another is that .(?2).In view of the problems mentioned above, it is suggested that .(提出建议).观点
64、论证型观点论证型此类适用的提纲一般是先提出某个受到普此类适用的提纲一般是先提出某个受到普遍认同的观点，然后可能会直接要求论证遍认同的观点，然后可能会直接要求论证该观点的正确性或重要性，也可能不会直该观点的正确性或重要性，也可能不会直接要求论证观点，而是要求指出该观点的接要求论证观点，而是要求指出该观点的重要性和必要性。重要性和必要性。 观点论证型观点论证型The Way to Success 2011,12Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axePracti
65、ce makes Perfect Work is Necessary No Pain No GainTomorrow Never Comes观点论证型观点论证型It Pays to be Honest1当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象。当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象。2 诚实利人利己诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实。做人应该诚实。Wealth does not Mean Happiness1很多人认为财富就意味着幸福，其实不然很多人认为财富就意味着幸福，其实不然2世界上很多东西是财富换不来的，试论证该世界上很多东西是财富换不来的，试论证该观点观点Sample Work is a necessity1在
66、现代社会，工作对于一个人来说意义重大在现代社会，工作对于一个人来说意义重大2论证工作的必要性论证工作的必要性第一段：提出论点，工作对一个人来说意义重大，第一段：提出论点，工作对一个人来说意义重大，指出其正确性，称为提出观点段。指出其正确性，称为提出观点段。第二段：阐述工作对于一个人的必要性，论述观第二段：阐述工作对于一个人的必要性，论述观点的正确性，称为论证观点段。点的正确性，称为论证观点段。第三段：重申工作的重要意义，总结全文，称为第三段：重申工作的重要意义，总结全文，称为总结观点段。总结观点段。Sample Work is becoming more and more indispensa
67、ble to mans existence. For modern people, whether men or women, work is not only a means to make a living, but also a pursuit. No doubt, without work, one will feel empty and senseless.(提出观点段提出观点段). Sample Many remarkable reasons account for this argument. First of all, for many people, work is the
68、source of happiness and satisfaction. They apply their talents and knowledge to wok, in which they realize their personal values. Whats more, many facts prove that the more one use their brain, the more active and efficient he is in thinking. For example, scientists always have sharper minds than or
69、dinary people. Besides, work also offers ambitious people chance to realize their dreams.( 论证观点段论证观点段)Sample All mentioned above tells us that work is a necessity. Those without work for along time will find life boring and miss many wonderful things in the society. Therefore, there is no defying th
70、at everyone should work to realize his personal value.(总结观点段总结观点段)观点论证模板提出观点段：提出观点段：Its fairly well known that plays an important part inis becoming more and more indispensable to., For modern people, whether men or women, is not only a means to , but also a .without it will. 观点论证模板论证观点段论证观点段：Many r
71、emarkable reasons account for this argument. First of allWhats more, .many examples can be listed to prove.we have good reasons to believe that .观点论证模板总结观点段总结观点段: All mentioned above tells us that. Considering the above-mentioned, we can reasonably come to the conclusion that观点论证谚语警句Practice Makes P
72、erfect1怎样理解熟能生巧怎样理解熟能生巧2例如在英语学习中例如在英语学习中3又如又如观点论证谚语警句第一段：提出观点。谚语第一段：提出观点。谚语has been generally accepted. It tells us 论点的含义。论点的含义。The truth of it is deep profound.第二段：论证观点。第二段：论证观点。there are numerous examples supporting this argument/proverb. A case in point is 例证一，例证一，For another example, 例证二。例证二。Mor
73、eover,./或或 Lets take 相关例子相关例子as an example. If 不坚持该观点，将会产生的影响不坚持该观点，将会产生的影响. Besides, 例子二例子二 观点论证谚语警句第三段：总结观点。第三段：总结观点。Considering the above-mentioned, we can reasonably come to the conclusion that 重申论点。重申论点。Although it is an old saying, 谚语谚语 remains its profound and realistic significance in .应用文写作
74、应用文写作 应用文是指人们在工作，学习，生活中传递信息，已达到交际目的的一种文体。这种文章要求言简意赅，条理清楚，一般不需要过多修饰。应用文最大的特点是具有固定的格式和常用的语句，考生必须遵循一定的书写格式和行文方法。在四六级考试中出现的应用文主要包括导游导游辞辞和信件信件。1.导游辞导游辞Word Processing真题示例真题示例Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief introduction to a Tourist Attraction.
75、 You should write at least 120 words according to the following guideline: your role: a tourist guide your audience: a group of foreign tourists your introduction should include: *some welcoming words *the schedule for the day *a description of the place the tourists will be visiting (e.g. a scenic
76、spot or a historical site, etc.) you should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody2004年年6月四级作月四级作文文高分模板Ladies and gentlemen/Dear friends,Welcome to (地点). Its my pleasure to serve as your tour guide. I hope you will have a good time during the trip.First
77、, I want to introduce the schedule to you(介绍活动日程）（某时间）is the end of the whole days tour.Shining Sentences1.It is my honor to be your tour guide2.It is always a pleasure to greet friends from afar/Im very pleased to meet friends fromon the other side of the pacific. My current feeling can be expresse
78、d by an ancient Chinese remark: “ How delightful I am to have friends from afar!”3.Now I will share the schedule with youShining Sentences4. The most attractive scenery is no other than_5. The scenery of _ is so charming that one will find difficult to turn away from it6.Strolling around it, you (to
79、urists) may then find yourselves truly enjoy a moment of peace and relaxation in this paradise from the turmoil of the world. Shining SentencesI hope you will enjoy your whole time with my companyIf you have any questions ,please dont hesitate to ask me at any time.If you get lost or separate from t
80、he group, please meet us at_.I do hope all of you will like my guiding and enjoy yourselves today.Shining SentencesI hope you will enjoy your whole time with my companyIf you have any questions ,please dont hesitate to ask me at any time.If you get lost or separate from the group, please meet us at_
81、.I do hope all of you will like my guiding and enjoy yourselves today.信件2002年1月：假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。 A Letter to the President about the Canteen Service on Campus January 20th ,2002Dear Mr. president, I am a sophomore from this university and I am wri
82、ting to you about the food and service in the canteen on campus. To be frank, I am rather disappointed at the food quality, price and service in the canteen. First , the dishes are scarcely well cooked and most of them taste the same .A Letter to the President about the Canteen Service on CampusSeco
83、ndly, most of the dishes there are priced so high that some students cant even afford them. Thirdly, the service in the canteen is far from satisfying and the inside of the canteen always seem untidy. To solve the problem, I suggest that another canteen be built and a mechanism of competition be int
84、roduced between the old and the new. Besides, both the canteens should be subjected to the students supervision. A Letter to the President about the Canteen Service on Campus Dining is an everyday issue for students .It may affect their academic performance .Therefore, I sincerely hope this letter c
85、an draw your attention to the matter and I hope the problems mentioned above can be solved as soon as possible . Best regards . Yours sincerely. Li Ming 写作思路简要说明事由自己的身份；事情经过或原因。说明具体理由 先总后分，环环相扣，论据得当。再次申明目的 提出建议或回应主题常用联接词以及表达“认为”、“强调”的词汇常用的英语连接词（connective words)次序、列举：firstly, first of all, secondly,
86、 last but not least递进：besides, in addition to, whats more, furthermore, moreover, in other words, plus, additionally, more important, most important, namely 等。转折：instead， however, nevertheless, but, yet, after all, conversely 等。强调：actually, indeed, especially, particularly, in particular, obviously,
87、 undoubtedly 等。结果：so, thus , hence, therefore, consequently, as a result, as a consequence让步 ： in spite of , despite, regardless of , admittedly, although原因： because, as, since, because of , owing to , due to, on account of , as a result of ,thanks to总结：in conclusion, in short, in brief , in summary
88、, on the whole, to sum up, to conclude表示“认为”，“意识到”的英文表达： become aware of /that be conscious of /that hold the idea/view that come to know that deem, believe, view, hold, argue ,claim, assert, assume, suppose, maintain, think表示 “强调” 的英文表达： lay/put emphasis on emphasize (vt) stress stress the importan
89、ce of lay great importance on 高分作文特点高分作文特点总结： 14分段作文的特点1. 动词短语2. 学术词3. 句式变化、句子连贯4. 模板合理5. 连词、代词6. 避免重复7.立意深刻几点建议关心时事：教育、人文、时尚、科技等善于思考：what ,why, how ,dis/advantage benefits/dangers, strengths /weakness, merits /drawbacks, positive/negative深挖主题：透过现象看本质展开联想： 横向思维 纵向思维疯狂背诵： 历年四、六级作文范文勇于练笔：一星期两篇真题作文笑傲考场：充满自信，挑战自我 祝大家 考试成功！
