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1、HowtowriteasummaryandanendingofapassageA father came home from work late, tired and exhausted. He worked day and night, hoping to earn more money for his only child. His 5-year-old daughter was waiting for him at the door.“Dad, how much do you earn an hour?” asked the daughter.“Why do you ask that?”
2、“I just want to know. Please tell me how much you earn an hour.”“If you really want to know . I earn $20 an hour.”“Oh,” the little girl replied with her head down. Looking up, she said, “Dad, may I borrow $10?” The father became angry. “Go to bed right now! Think about how selfish you are. I work ha
3、rd every day, but you just want to buy your silly toy!” The little girl quietly went to her bedroom, feeling sad. After an hour or so, the father calmed down and started to feel sorry because she really didnt ask for money very often. So he went to his daughters room and gave her $10.The little girl
4、 jumped from the bed. “Oh, thank you, Dad!” She was really happy indeed.Then she took out her own savings and said, “Dad, I have $20 now. Can I buy an hour of your time? Please come home earlier tomorrow. I would like to have dinner with you.” 1、以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2、以约120个词就“家长的陪伴”的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：（1）阅读上
5、文之后的感想；（2）叙述你在家长陪伴下的一次难忘的经历；（3）家长的陪伴对孩子成长的影响。Styles of Writingnarration 1argumentation2exposition3The six elements of a narrative passage who whenwhere what how whyNarration Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment. I we
6、nt to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I need to know some basic life skills, such as balancing a check-book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was real
7、ly tough for me at first and I got badly homesick. Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I love itgood facilities, helpful instructors, and a good library. The students Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Satu
8、rday nights in pubs and clubs. One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on dance team in college and met a ton of people that wayit was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground. the six elements of a narrative passage who when/where /what how (proc
9、ess)at first: then: at last: why Mikehis first year of collegetoughestadjustmentgot used to itloved the college lifegot himself active in thingsA suggested sample Mike shared with us his first year of college life.At first he _, but aftergetting active in things for one semester,he _ and_.didnt adju
10、st himself welladapted to itenjoyed himselfA boy found an eagles egg and he put it in the nest of a hen. The eagle hatched and thought he was a chicken. He grew up doing what chickens doscratching for food and flying short distances. It was a dull life. Gradually the eagle grew older and bitter. One
11、 day he and his chicken friends saw a beautiful bird soaring on the currents of air, high above the mountains.“Oh, I wish I could fly like that!” said the eagle. The chicken replied, “Dont give it another thought. Thats the mighty(强大的) eagle, the king of all birdsyou could never be like him!” And th
12、e eagle didnt give it another thought. He went on cackling and complaining about life. He died thinking he was a chicken.My friends, you too were born an eagle. The Creator intended you to be an eagle, so dont listen to the chickens!【写作内容】1、以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2、以约120个词谈谈你对“自信”的看法，内容包括：(1) 鹰成为鸡的原因；(2) 这
13、则故事的启示。南京市南京市2014届高三第二次模拟考试届高三第二次模拟考试 Consolidation 1. Why did the eagle live like a chicken?2. What was his wish when he saw an eagle soaring high?3. How did other chickens react to his wish?4. What was his fate like in the end?Main Points: 南京市南京市2014届高三第二次模拟考试届高三第二次模拟考试 Consolidation Suggested Sam
14、ple： Hatched by a hen, an eagle lived like a chicken. He wanted to fly like an eagle but was discouraged by his fellow. Eventually he died bitterly without knowing he himself was an eagle. (34 words)The elements of an argumentationArgumentationa strong statement of opinion support for the opinion co
15、nclusion/suggestions topic sentencessupporting sentencesthe purpose of the passage Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. So, getting up early is of gre
16、at importance to us all. In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day. If w
17、e do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything i
18、n a great hurry. Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will certainly benefit a lot from it.The article highlights the importance of getting up early in the morning in that it enables us to have a better memory, he
19、althier body and better preparation for the day.The essay argues we should get up early in the morning so that we couldThe passage says we should get up early if we want toThe topicwhatThe reasonswhyThe effectshowThe solutionsThe conclusionKoalas are unhappy and complaining.Tourists take photos.Koal
20、as are repeatedly awaken.Government ban the practice.Be more kind to animals.The passage narrates that koalas that are repeatedly awaken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos. The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals.The topicwhatThe reasonswhyThe ef
21、fectshowThe solutionsThe conclusionExpositionHave a try!A father came home from work late, tired and exhausted. He worked day and night, hoping to earn more money for his only child. His 5-year-old daughter was waiting for him at the door.“Dad, how much do you earn an hour?” asked the daughter.“Why
22、do you ask that?”“I just want to know. Please tell me how much you earn an hour.”“If you really want to know . I earn $20 an hour.”“Oh,” the little girl replied with her head down. Looking up, she said, “Dad, may I borrow $10?” The father became angry. “Go to bed right now! Think about how selfish y
23、ou are. I work hard every day, but you just want to buy your silly toy!” The little girl quietly went to her bedroom, feeling sad. After an hour or so, the father calmed down and started to feel sorry because she really didnt ask for money very often. So he went to his daughters room and gave her $1
24、0.The little girl jumped from the bed. “Oh, thank you, Dad!” She was really happy indeed.Then she took out her own savings and said, “Dad, I have $20 now. Can I buy an hour of your time? Please come home earlier tomorrow. I would like to have dinner with you.” 1、以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2、以约120个词就“家长的陪伴”的话题谈
25、谈你的想法，内容包括：（1）阅读上文之后的感想；（2）叙述你在家长陪伴下的一次难忘的经历；（3）家长的陪伴对孩子成长的影响。 Consolidation Summary 1 What the passage tells us is that a little girl borrow $ ten from her father so as to make her father accompany her for just an hour.tense（who always came home from hard work late ）main pointsed 记叙文记叙文 一般过去时一般过去时议
26、论文议论文 一般现在时一般现在时说明文说明文 一般现在时一般现在时定时态：定时态： Summary 2 A little girl wanted to borrow $10 from her father who was tired. At the beginning the father was angry and refused the request. But he decided to gave her $10 finally. Then he know the reason why the girl want to borrow the money is to buy his tim
27、e to have dinner together. (50 words)Include too many specific details.An Improved Version of Summary 2 A little girl wanted to borrow $10 from her father who came home from hard work late, because she hoped to buy an hour of his company.No examples or detailsMain ideas onlyAbout 30 words The father
28、 who was always so busy with work that he even did not have time to accompany his little daughter in the article was a typical example of parents in modern society today, whose behavior set us thinking. Express opinions too earlySummary 3 The passage tells us that a father who worked day and night c
29、ame home from work tired and exhausted and his daughters question “how much do you earn an hour?” made him very angry at first. But later he knew the only reason she asked this question was that she wanted to have a dinner together with him.Rely on quotations from the original passage.Summary 4 A li
30、ttle girl was eager to spend more time with her father who was occupied with his work. So she asked her father to sell one hour of his time to accompany her.Sample of Summary 1. Start with a clear identification of the style of the passage. 2. Use your own words. 3. Employ the proper tense. 4. Focus
31、 on main points and leave out examples or details. Conclusion How to write a summary?第二讲 读后续写1.阅读材料虽然是一篇不完整的文章，但是它有趣，内容能延伸。要求考生续写的部分多是故事发展的高潮或结局2.在规定时间内展开合理的想象，考生所续写的部分要有创新性和想象力，还要带有原文色彩(必须使用原文5处以上的关键词语即：文中划线的词语-有9-10个，顺序没有要求)。3.3.续写时要尽可能与原材料的中心思想和语言风格上保持一致续写时要尽可能与原材料的中心思想和语言风格上保持一致。写作步骤写作步骤审题：速读阅读材
32、料和写作要求，明确写作任务。读文：细读阅读材料，确定文章体裁和题材(话题)。注意文中的关键词，也就是故事中的时间、地点、人物和事件，特别要标记能描述事件发展过程的词和短语。谋段：先仔细阅读续写部分所给出的两段段首文字，所给出的两段段首文字，再构思这两段要写的段落大意。再构思这两段要写的段落大意。根据确定好的段落大意，选出每一段可能要用到的原文中带下划线的关键词。结合这些关键词，确定每一段的写作要点。这两段加起来要能写出10到15个句子，以满足续写词数要求。初写：按照第三步谋段时确定好的写作要点进行初写。写作时要注意所用的人称和时态要与原材料一致：另外，还要注意尽可能地减少表达上的语法错误。如果
33、遇到语言上的表述困难，可多参考原阅读材料中的有关语句。定稿：写好初稿后，考生要结合原材料中故事线索读一读自己续写的内容。既要确保不出现与原材料相矛盾的地方，又要做到内容上前后连贯，语句通顺。最后规范誊写并标出使用过的原材料中下划线的关键词语。【典例示法】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。A young man was getting ready to graduate from college. For many months he had admired a beautiful sports car in a dealers showroom, and knowin
34、g his father could well afford it, he told him that was all he wanted. As Graduation Day approached, the young man awaited signs that his father had purchased the car. Finally, on the morning of his graduation, his father called him into his private study. His father told him how proud he was to hav
35、e such a fine son, and told him how much he loved him. He handed his son a beautiful wrapped gift box. Curious, but somewhat disappointed, the young man opened the box and found a lovely, leather-bound Bible, with the young mans name embossed in gold. Angrily, he raised his voice to his father and s
36、aid, With all your money you give me a Bible? He then stormed out of the house, leaving the Bible. Many years passed and the young man was very successful in business. He had a beautiful home and a wonderful family, but realizing his father was very old, he thought perhaps he should go to see him. H
37、e had not seen him since that graduation day. Before he could make the arrangements, he received a telegram telling him his father had passed away, and willed all of his possessions to his son. He needed to come home immediately and take care of things. When he arrived at his fathers house, sudden s
38、adness and regret filled his heart. He began to search through his fathers important papers and saw the still new Bible, just as he had left it years ago.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 With tears, he opened the Bible and beg
39、an to turn the pages. _Paragraph 2 How many times do we miss blessings because they are not packaged as we expected?_在草稿中，写上短文中已划出的词语，用来帮助自己构思段落1-2.（要求打草稿） sports car dealers afford his graduation father loved the Bible realizing possession regret参考答案：With tears, he opened the Bible and began to tur
40、n the pages. As he was reading, a car key dropped from the back of the Bible. It had a tag with the dealers name, the same dealer who had the sports car he had desired. On the tag was the date of his graduation, and the words PAID IN FULL. How great the love a father gave to his son! But its too lat
41、e for him to feel that packaged love from his father. How many times do we miss blessings because they are not packaged as we expected? Do not regret until you realize what you did is wrong. Do not spoil what you have by desiring what you have not, but remember that what you now have was once among the things you only hoped for. Sometimes we dont realize the good fortune we have or we could have because we expect the packaging to be different. What may appear as bad fortune may in fact be the door that is justwaiting to be opened.结束！结束！
