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1、纠错:拼写/语法/搭配/用词/逻辑1.give you / have some advices2.join in/ take part in us3.take part in /join enchrichment classes4.We are pleasure to have your suggestions5.We will offer you neccessary help and advice if you plan to have an amateur work.6.if you would like to gain/ acquire a part-time job.7.If you
2、 ever think of joining the student union, call us imediatly.8.contact with us right away8.Welcome you to join us.9.If you want to find a part-time job, we will happy to help.10.We will answer you back one by one.11.But she couldnt refuse her mother.12.I think students attend enrichment classes on su
3、mmer vocation is benefitial.13.To my opinion, parents should allow your children to decide whether to attend enrichment classes or.14.I feel exhausted for lacking time for sleep in last summer holiday.15. If you force your child to , they wont have interest of study.16.Li Hua , a senior-one student,
4、 had to .17.It is no benefit to students attend such classes.18.Senior students atten enrichment classes during the summer vacation has its advantages.19.Because after attending such classes, they will have large progresses in study in next term.20.I suggest parents that please ask for your children
5、s opinion.21.I think students attend enrichment classes is a good way.22.Give your children more time, maybe they will learn better than ever before.23.whether it makes a difference?24.If you cant focus your mind on these classes, if,if., please not attend the enrichment classes.基础写作基础写作一、基础写作评分标准一、
6、基础写作评分标准 2.5.82-衔接衔接5-内容要点内容要点8-语法语法基础写作的目的是考查考生最基本的基础写作的目的是考查考生最基本的语言表达能力语言表达能力,如如用词用词的准确性的准确性,句子结构的句子结构的复杂度复杂度,语法语法运用的正确运用的正确性性,信息信息内容的完整内容的完整性和句子之间的性和句子之间的连贯连贯性性.基础写作题的题材会基本贴近现实生活和学生的实际基础写作题的题材会基本贴近现实生活和学生的实际情况情况,并趋向社会热点问题并趋向社会热点问题.基础写作的内容属于基础写作的内容属于控制性情景作文控制性情景作文.其控制性包括其控制性包括:一是必须用一是必须用5个句子个句子来写
7、来写,但词数不限但词数不限.二是必须描述二是必须描述全部内容全部内容.三不要增添不必要的多余信息三不要增添不必要的多余信息。常考题材：常考题材：人物简介；人物简介；地点简介；地点简介；环境保护；环境保护；锻炼、健康、饮食、习惯；锻炼、健康、饮食、习惯；业余生活、兴趣爱好、节假日旅游；业余生活、兴趣爱好、节假日旅游；和谐社会；和谐社会；校园生活；校园生活；灾难性事件；灾难性事件；活动介绍；活动介绍；今昔对比；今昔对比；（11）表达意见、正反观点；）表达意见、正反观点；（12）表达原因、利与弊、结论；）表达原因、利与弊、结论；（13）图画类；）图画类；（14）图表类；）图表类；（15）表格类）表格
8、类二二 基础写作题的新要求基础写作题的新要求1.1.信息组织能力信息组织能力：信息：信息归类归类、信息、信息排列排列和信息和信息表达表达三个环节。三个环节。1 1）考生首先需要将信息进行归类，将哪些信息放）考生首先需要将信息进行归类，将哪些信息放到同一个句子中；（建议采用与中文同序来进行）到同一个句子中；（建议采用与中文同序来进行）2 2）其次是将信息进行合理的排列，如时间顺序、）其次是将信息进行合理的排列，如时间顺序、空间顺序、因果关系、递进关系等；空间顺序、因果关系、递进关系等；3 3）选择信息表达的秩序，确定句子之间的先后关）选择信息表达的秩序，确定句子之间的先后关系，这既要考虑系，这既
9、要考虑语法上能否衔接语法上能否衔接，还要考虑，还要考虑语意是语意是否连贯。否连贯。2.2.运用复杂句子的能力。运用复杂句子的能力。1 1）复合句，包括含有名词性从句）复合句，包括含有名词性从句, ,定语从句定语从句, ,状语状语从句的复合句。从句的复合句。2）并列句，）并列句， a)递进并列句：由递进并列句：由and，besides，in addition, furthermore，moreover, whats more等连接，等连接，b) 转折并列句转折并列句,由由but，however，on the contrary, after all等连接的并列句，等连接的并列句，c)平行选择关系的
10、并列句，由平行选择关系的并列句，由bothand，as well as，as well，neithernor, or，eitheror，not onlybut also等连接等连接3）特殊句型，如）特殊句型，如强调句、倒装句、含有强调句、倒装句、含有with复合复合结构的句子、结构的句子、there be开头的句子、以形式主语开头的句子、以形式主语it开头的句子开头的句子等。等。基础写作评分标准：基础写作评分标准：语言：语言：0-8 分分用词的准确性用词的准确性,句子结构的句子结构的复杂度复杂度,语法运用的正确性语法运用的正确性内容：内容：0-5分分信息内容的完整性信息内容的完整性连贯：连贯：
11、0-2分分句子之间的连贯性句子之间的连贯性.实战演练实战演练 1：假如你是大学生，假如你是大学生， 还是学生会的一名成员，新学还是学生会的一名成员，新学期伊始，你要在学校网站上写一个简短的告示，期伊始，你要在学校网站上写一个简短的告示，请同学们与学生会保持联系。你列举了同学们可能请同学们与学生会保持联系。你列举了同学们可能存在的需要和学生会将要做的工作：存在的需要和学生会将要做的工作：1. 欲加入学生会欲加入学生会,即刻联络我们即刻联络我们2. 欲获得业余工作欲获得业余工作,学生会将提供帮助和建议学生会将提供帮助和建议3. 欲为学生会提意见欲为学生会提意见,学生会非常重视并一一回复学生会非常重
12、视并一一回复.学生会的电子邮箱是学生会的电子邮箱是: 基础写作注意事项：基础写作注意事项：1. 只用只用5句表达全文句表达全文.2. 句子的完整句子的完整3. 时态时态4. 主谓一致主谓一致5. 人称人称6. 不许用标号来注明每个句子不许用标号来注明每个句子也不许一个句子分为一个段落也不许一个句子分为一个段落7. 一般不要添加没必要的内容一般不要添加没必要的内容这次的作文常见错误：这次的作文常见错误：1.不宜用不宜用firstly,secondly, last but not least 等表达观点的词、短语等表达观点的词、短语2. 避免口语化的表达：避免口语化的表达：wanna, cause
13、3. 超出超出5个句子，扣个句子，扣1-2分分4. 写错位置写错位置5. 用词错误用词错误:helps/ suggest/ advices/ contact (中心词中心词可参考原题的用法）可参考原题的用法）/ join 加入学生会加入学生会注意下列词组的表达注意下列词组的表达联络我们联络我们业余工作业余工作提供帮助和建议提供帮助和建议提意见提意见重视重视对对.作出回复作出回复join the Student Unioncontact uspart-time joboffer help and suggestions/ advicegive advice tovalue/ attach gre
14、at importance to/ think highly of/take sth seriously reply to sb/ sth Contact Us! 范文范文 New term begins and please stay in contact with the Students Union. If you would like to join our Students Union, please do not hesitate to contact us. If you have interest in part-time jobs and would like some he
15、lp and advice, we would be happy to assist. We take your comments and suggestions seriously, and will reply to all your emails. Please write to us whenever you have a need. Our email address is . 优秀作文：优秀作文： As the biggest student association in the college, we do a lot of things for students in many
16、 aspects. For example, if someone wantsto find a part-time job, we will offer help to himand give him advice. In addition, as for the suggestions which students give us we will take them seriously and try our best to give them the best answer. If you want to be a member of us, please contact us imme
17、diatelyand our e-mail address is . We are willing to help you and we are looking forward to working with you. 读写任务1.三行半2.要点3.文章结构4.分段5.总-分-总6.自圆其说7.要点8.有话可说9.写满不超10.页面和书写概括大意 记叙文Who Li huaWhat enrichment classes and homeworkResult unhappy三个要点3 分语言运用-2分发表观点三段论第一段：明确表明观点和态度-支持？反对？第二段：证明观点 （论据举例 ）第三段：给
18、家长建议（结论）字数：写满格子，但不超格不能标：1、（概括大意） 2、 The student complained in her diary that, instead of having fun in the summer vacation, she was occupied by enrichment classes and piles of homework, which were arranged by the parent and teachers. (Though she followed the arrangement, she seemed to be fed up.) In
19、 my opinion, its not a good idea to attend enrichment classes during the summer vacation. Summer vacation is supposed to be a time for students to have a break between terms of hard work. Without a thorough rest, how can we refresh ourselves? Besides, surfing the Internet, visiting museums or readin
20、g novels are also ways of learning, which are more interesting to us. (范文范文 part 1) My own experience is a good example. At the beginning of this summer vacation, I, together with some of my friends, designed a trip Expo 2010 in Shanghai. We booked the airline tickets and the hotel on the Internet,
21、which saved us a lot of money. It was really great fun to see the whole world in front of you, and in the pavilions the various experiences of building cities impressed us a lot. I learned more about the world, human civilization and the environment, which is not sufficient or that vivid in our text
22、books. I dont think parents should arrange the vacation for the children themselves. Instead, parents should care more about the childrens feelings, try to understand and believe in them. Above all, parents have to understand that scores only cant guarantee childrens future. 难以辨认的书写难以辨认的书写2+165+154+154+15例子例子部分部分欠缺欠缺
